Summer Fling
Since No one reviewed it, I decided to give it a major rewrite.
Please review, 'cause there's no point in writing if no1 is going to read it.
*Flashback*
"I'm going to the beach." Hermione said carelessly, inching out of the door.
Viktor Krum, her boyfriend, smiled "Why not I go with you, Herm-own-ninny?"
For a moment, she panicked. What am I going to tell Dom? She wondered.
Hermione Granger was in Bulgaria, visiting her boyfriend, Viktor Krum, whom she had met the previous year at the Triwizard tournament.
After 1 week, she had made a conclusion.
Krum had NO TIME to date.
4 dates out of 5, Krum had had fans swamping all over him, begging for his autograph.
On the 5th date, Krum had received a message from the Bulgarian Quiddtich Association that an urgent meeting was on.
Hermione remembered stumbling out of the restaurant by herself, then driving aimlessly to the beach.
Then, she had met Dom.
She had been gazing out at the crashing waves from her car, reflecting her relationship with Viktor Krum.
Then a car revved up beside her.
"Hey, what are you doing? Don't you know that the beach is closed?" Asked a blonde headed boy, who drove a flashy red convertible.
"I wasn't thinking of going out." Hermione replied acidly.
The boy gave a mock gasp. "Touchy!"
Hermione whirled around to glare at him. "Look, I'm having a bad day, can't you just drive off somewhere else?"
The boy gave her an appraising look, and then said in a husky voice. "I'd MUCH rather stay with you." She smiled at the memory.
Then she realised Krum was still looking at her, with a puzzled smile on his face. "Why are you smiling, Herm-own-ninny?"
"Nothing." Hermione said. "OK. You can come. Why not you go an pack some stuff?" Her eyes sparkled, "it could be the first PROPER date we'll have."
It worked.
Krum instantly bolted.
Hermione quickly pulled out her cell phone, then opened up a new message
Dom:
Can't see you. Boyfriend decided 2 come!
Sorry.
Mione.
Quickly, she sent it, just as Krum walked in.
"I've prepared, lets go!" Krum carried a swimming bag and a picnic basket.
~#*#~#*~#~*#~*~#*~#*~#*~#*~#*~#~*~#*~#~**~#*~#~*~#~*~##*~#~*~#~*~#
They spent most of their time on the beach have a passionate pash. (hey, it rhymes!)
Then, Krum decided to go to the toilet.
She shrugged, "go ahead."
Just as Krum disappeared, she spied a very familiar blonde head.
"DOM?" She murmured, stunned.
"Yes." His voice was icy.
Hermione gulped.
He had seen everything.
"Was that your boyfriend?"
"Yes."
"Do you love him?"
Hermione's eyes flashed. "That isn't quite relevant!"
"It is!" Dom cried. "If you truly loved me, as you said you did."
She bowed her head. "But. you know as well as I do that this is only a summer fling, Dom."
Dom clenched his fists, tightening his jaw. "Do you find him more appealing? What can he offer more than I can?" He demanded.
"Dom. Please, be reasonable." Hermione said.
"How can I be reasonable?"
"PLEASE."
He looked away. "I knew I shouldn't have started with you."
Hermione glared. "What do you mean?"
"You, are a MUDBLOOD. I'm a Malfoy. That's what I mean."
"WHAT?"
That had been an update for her.
A very BIG update.
"DRACO?"
"Yes. I thought you would've realized by now." He wore his smirk.
Hermione shook her head. "Oh GOD."
Draco smiled eerily. "Don't worry, Granger, soon you'll forget everything. Since you want it that way."
"What do you mean?"
"OBLIVIATE!"
Hermione sank in a to her feet. Blackness closing around her
Krum found her much later.
"Herm-own-ninny?"
Her lashes fluttered. "Krum, what happened?" She asked, dazed.
~*~*~*~*~*
OK. Review, people!
More to be added.
Since No one reviewed it, I decided to give it a major rewrite.
Please review, 'cause there's no point in writing if no1 is going to read it.
*Flashback*
"I'm going to the beach." Hermione said carelessly, inching out of the door.
Viktor Krum, her boyfriend, smiled "Why not I go with you, Herm-own-ninny?"
For a moment, she panicked. What am I going to tell Dom? She wondered.
Hermione Granger was in Bulgaria, visiting her boyfriend, Viktor Krum, whom she had met the previous year at the Triwizard tournament.
After 1 week, she had made a conclusion.
Krum had NO TIME to date.
4 dates out of 5, Krum had had fans swamping all over him, begging for his autograph.
On the 5th date, Krum had received a message from the Bulgarian Quiddtich Association that an urgent meeting was on.
Hermione remembered stumbling out of the restaurant by herself, then driving aimlessly to the beach.
Then, she had met Dom.
She had been gazing out at the crashing waves from her car, reflecting her relationship with Viktor Krum.
Then a car revved up beside her.
"Hey, what are you doing? Don't you know that the beach is closed?" Asked a blonde headed boy, who drove a flashy red convertible.
"I wasn't thinking of going out." Hermione replied acidly.
The boy gave a mock gasp. "Touchy!"
Hermione whirled around to glare at him. "Look, I'm having a bad day, can't you just drive off somewhere else?"
The boy gave her an appraising look, and then said in a husky voice. "I'd MUCH rather stay with you." She smiled at the memory.
Then she realised Krum was still looking at her, with a puzzled smile on his face. "Why are you smiling, Herm-own-ninny?"
"Nothing." Hermione said. "OK. You can come. Why not you go an pack some stuff?" Her eyes sparkled, "it could be the first PROPER date we'll have."
It worked.
Krum instantly bolted.
Hermione quickly pulled out her cell phone, then opened up a new message
Dom:
Can't see you. Boyfriend decided 2 come!
Sorry.
Mione.
Quickly, she sent it, just as Krum walked in.
"I've prepared, lets go!" Krum carried a swimming bag and a picnic basket.
~#*#~#*~#~*#~*~#*~#*~#*~#*~#*~#~*~#*~#~**~#*~#~*~#~*~##*~#~*~#~*~#
They spent most of their time on the beach have a passionate pash. (hey, it rhymes!)
Then, Krum decided to go to the toilet.
She shrugged, "go ahead."
Just as Krum disappeared, she spied a very familiar blonde head.
"DOM?" She murmured, stunned.
"Yes." His voice was icy.
Hermione gulped.
He had seen everything.
"Was that your boyfriend?"
"Yes."
"Do you love him?"
Hermione's eyes flashed. "That isn't quite relevant!"
"It is!" Dom cried. "If you truly loved me, as you said you did."
She bowed her head. "But. you know as well as I do that this is only a summer fling, Dom."
Dom clenched his fists, tightening his jaw. "Do you find him more appealing? What can he offer more than I can?" He demanded.
"Dom. Please, be reasonable." Hermione said.
"How can I be reasonable?"
"PLEASE."
He looked away. "I knew I shouldn't have started with you."
Hermione glared. "What do you mean?"
"You, are a MUDBLOOD. I'm a Malfoy. That's what I mean."
"WHAT?"
That had been an update for her.
A very BIG update.
"DRACO?"
"Yes. I thought you would've realized by now." He wore his smirk.
Hermione shook her head. "Oh GOD."
Draco smiled eerily. "Don't worry, Granger, soon you'll forget everything. Since you want it that way."
"What do you mean?"
"OBLIVIATE!"
Hermione sank in a to her feet. Blackness closing around her
Krum found her much later.
"Herm-own-ninny?"
Her lashes fluttered. "Krum, what happened?" She asked, dazed.
~*~*~*~*~*
OK. Review, people!
More to be added.