Hey everybody! Thanks again for reviewing. Luv ya lots! ^.^
Here's the alternate ending I was talking about! It starts with chapter 18 and ends at 20. Originally, chapter 16 was a filter and had nothing to do with Goten's confusion and chapter 17 ended with Marron sleeping with Trunks (but not a lemon) instead of that 'we need to talk' stuff. Also, in the real one, Marron went home. In this one...she sleep with him (no lemon).
LET'S BEGIN! MIDNIGHT SUMMER'S ALTERNATE ENDING...S!!!
(Chapter 17: ???) (!---Enter Chapter 17 Here---!(
(Chapter 18: Thinks We Forgot To Mention)
***The Next Day***
I walked down the open road alone. I remember the stormy day I was heading towards West City. Now I'm taking that same road away from it. I looked at the calm park as I slowly passed it. I would have been walking faster if it weren't for these suitcases. I stopped in front of the parks main entrance. I remember the day that Goten warned me...why didn't I listen? I continued to walk down the road watching as cars flew by. I guess they were on their way to work.
The winds changed its direction to my favor then slowed to a stop. I could soon fill the sun's rays blazing against my back. But I couldn't bring myself to care. The dried tears on my face made my face hurt and made we wanna cry some more.
Why me? Out of all the people there is to hurt...why me? What did I ever do to make him lie to me? Why did he lie to me? Most importantly...why did he say he loved me?
I tried to forget about earlier this morning. But I couldn't. It was only an hour ago. How could I ever forget something like that? It pierced it's self into my mind, my heart...my life. I could tell from that moment on...I would never be the same again.
I continued to walk down the road, but in a faster pace then before. Now I was really anxious to get away...to run away. From him...from Pan...from everyone...except Goten. He tried to help me...I should have listened...I should have listened!!!
My pace soon quickened when I heard a car coming from behind me. I moved into the grass and off the road, so the car would pass without hitting me. But the car didn't pass...it pulled over beside me. I stop walking at looked at the car. It was a black...Mercedes Benz.
A smile slowly formed on my face as the windows rolled down. I nearly screamed with joy when I realized who it was. Figures he'd be back. He saved me once from a pouring storm...and now from a lost walk.
"You going my way?" he asked with a sweet smile.
I smirked and answered, "It depends on where you're going, Gohan."
He looked out his window at the direction West City was in and then at me.
"Far, far way from there." He said still smiling.
"Yep. That's where I'm going." I said softly. I opened the passenger's door, tossed my bags into the back seat and got in. He looked back at the bags.
"Why are you running away from West City?" he asked curiously.
I looked at him then at the road ahead.
"I loved and learned...again."
(Chapter 19: What We Leave Behead Us)
***REMINISING: Earlier That Day***
The sunlight shined through the windows of the Capsule House, brightening it immediately and waking Marron.
Marron slowly opened her eyes. Still wrapped in the satin covers, she sat up. She yawned and looked over at the sleeping boy beside her.
She leaned over and softly kissed him on his forehead. 'Goodbye, Goten.' She whispered into his ear. Marron slowly ran her hands through his soft lilac hair, then turned and climbed out of the bed.
(A/N: O.o)
***//***LATER THAT DAY AT MARRON'S HOUSE***///***
Pan walked into the living room and grabbed her bag.
"Ok.where is my phone?!" she asked out loud to know one in particular. She opened her bag and began searching threw it. She was about to throw her purse down, when the door opened.
"Hey Marron." said Pan with a smile. Marron smiled back as she closed the door behind her.
"Have a good night?" joked Pan.
"Shut up." laughed Marron as she walked over to the couch and sat down.
"I know this is a stupid question...but...have you seen my cell phone?" asked Pan.
Marron turned on the TV.
"Nope." She said as she grabbed the remote.
"Darn. Oh well. I'll see you later, Marron. I've gotta go to work." said Pan as she ran out of the door.
"Um...bye." Said Marron.
She began to flip threw the channels, but stopped when she reached channel 4 again.
"Nothing's on...oh well...I'll just watch the news." Marron said as she sat the remote down.
"Today's story is about Capsule Corporation's newest product. And the secret relation between the President of CC and his mysterious girlfriend."
Marron rolled her eyes.
"Oh great. I hate those stupid stories. Why don't they just stay out of his personal life? Losers." Marron said as she turned the channel.
"Mr. Briefs talked to us about the new product from CC. Here's what he had to say." Said the news reporter on TV.
Marron's jaw-drooped as she saw Goten on the TV talking to the reporter.
"So...Mr. Brief. What is it about this..."
Marron turned of the TV and jumped off of the couch.
'Goten...is Trunks Brief? No...that can't be true. It's impossible. I've got to find out.'
Marron grabbed her coat and ran out of the house.
She slowly approached CC.
'It can't be true. There had to be some kind of mistake. Something is not right...' she thought as she entered the building.
She stopped in the doorway and looked around at the inside of the building. It was beautiful. She walked up to the front desk and smiled at the secretary. The sectary stopped typing and looked at her.
"Can I help you?"
"Um.can I speak to Mr. Brief...please." She asked. The sectary just looked at her.
"Do you have an appointment?"
"No."
"Does he expect you in any kinda way?"
"No."
"Then no!" she went back to typing on her computer.
"But...you don't understand...I really need to see him."
"No."
Marron looked around at the building.
"Look. I'm Marron Chestnut...I"
"You're Marron Chestnut?"
"Yes."
The secretary jumped up.
"I am so sorry Ms. Chestnut. I'll take you to his office right away."
"Wait...how do you know about me?"
"He's always talking about you...Ms. Chestnut."
Marron felt sick.
'So...it's true.' She thought as she walked down the hall with the secretary.
They stopped in front of his office.
"Just let your self in...I'm sure he'll be more than happy to see you." said the secretary before she turned and walked away.
Marron gripped the doorknob tightly.
'Here's goes nothing.' She said softly.
Remember when we held on in the rain
The night we almost lost it
Once again we can take the night into tomorrow
***///**In Trunks' Office**///***
Trunks glared at Goten.
"You did WHAT?!" he yelled.
"You heard me!" yelled Goten.
"No...what I heard couldn't possibly be right. Cause what I heard you say was that you told Marron to say away from me. And since I know that you know better, that can't be right." yelled Trunks as he stood up.
"Trunks...you've gone to far with this. I'm gon'na end it. Now!" said Goten as he continued to glare at his friend.
"Goten...I..." Trunks stopped in mid-sentence as his office door slowly opened.
"Marron!" cried Goten as Marron walked into the room.
Living on feelings
Touching you I feel it all again
"So...it's true. You name is Trunks...not Goten." She said softly.
"Marron...I can explain..."
"Don't bother...the whole situation speaks for it's self." Said Marron as she glared at Trunks.
Didn't we almost have it all
When love was all we had worth giving?
"Marron...look..."
"Trunks...why did you lie to me?" she asked.
"I...I..." Trunks stopped and looked over at Goten, "I don't know."
Marron also looked at Goten.
"I'm sorry Goten. I should have listen to you." She said as she turned to leave.
The ride with you was worth the fall my friend
Loving you makes life worth living
"Marron wait!" cried Trunks. Marron looked at him.
"Marron, I wasn't lying to you when I told you I loved you. I swear! I was a fool for lying to you and I'm sorry...but I could tell you who I was...because I feel in love with you and you feel in love with me...I didn't want you to hate me."
Didn't we almost have it all
The night we held on till the morning
Marron turned around and glared at him.
"No! I didn't fall in love with you. I fell in love with Goten. I don't even know who the hell you are. You lied to me about everything...you can't be in love with me. No one could hurt someone they loved this much. When were you planning on tell me the truth Trunks?" cried Marron.
You know you'll never love that way again
Didn't we almost have it all
"I don't know..."
"Enough said." She said as she turned to leave again.
The way you used to touch me felt so fine
We kept our hearts together down the line
"Marron, I didn't mean to hurt you. And I do love you...I swear I love you." cried Trunks.
A moment in the soul can last forever
Comfort and keep us
"Marron, he's telling the truth." said Goten. Marron turned and looked at him.
"What?"
"He isn't lying...he did fall in love with you. I understand that you are mad about him lying and he was stupid for doing that. Everything he said or may say might be a lie.but when he said he loves you, he was telling the truth." Said Goten as he walked towards the blonde.
"Goten...you're such a sweet person. You were here for me the whole time. You tried to warn me when everyone else lied to me. I'm sorry for doubting you." She hugged Goten. Then turned and looked at Trunks.
Help me bring the feeling back again
"But as for him I couldn't give a damn about his feelings and I don't ever wanna see him again." She cried.
Didn't we almost have it all
When love was all we had worth giving?
She turned and walked out of the building.
"Go after her." said Trunks. Goten watched as she walked down the hall.
"No." he said sofltly.
The ride with you was worth the fall my friend
"What?! Fine, I'll do it." said Trunks as he walked over to the door.
Loving you makes life worth living
Didn't we almost have it all
The night we held on till the morning
Goten blocked his way.
"No! Just stay away from her, Trunks. You did enough damage."
You know you'll never love that way again
Didn't we almost have it all
Trunks watched as she left the building.
***//**AT MARRON'S APARTMENT**//***
Marron cried as the memories came back to her. Everything they had ever done. Everything. Including what happened yesterday. She gave herself to him...someone she didn't even know...a complete stranger. She suddenly felt sick.
"I have to get away from here." She cried. She ran to her closet and pulled out her suitcase.
Didn't we have the beat of times
When love was young and new?
Furiously she threw her clothes into the suitcase. Memories, good and bad, began to fill her head again.
Couldn't we reach inside and find
The world of me and you?
We'll never lose it again
"I'll never...love anyone ever again." She cried.
Cause once you know what love is
You never let it end
Didn't we almost have it all
When love was all we had worth giving?
Marron threw herself on her bed and began crying...harder than ever.
The ride with you was worth the fall my friend
Loving you makes life worth living
Didn't we almost have it all
She then pulled herself to her feet. She took one more look at her room before she ran out of her room and out of the house. Suitcases in her hand, showing that she was serious.
The night we held on till the morning
You know you'll never love that way again
Didn't we almost have it all
(Chapter 20: Midnight Summer)
"So...he lied to you about everything?" asked Gohan curiously.
"Every single thing." said Marron softly.
She looked out the window of the passenger seat and watched the tree as they flew passed them.
"Whoa, I really do need to get you far away from here. Where do you wanna go?" asked Gohan.
Marron looked at Gohan and smiled. "So...he lied to you about everything?" asked Gohan curiously.
"Every single thing." said Marron softly.
She looked out the window of the passenger seat and watched the tree as they flew passed them.
"Whoa, I really do need to get you far away from here. Where do you wanna go?" asked Gohan.
Marron looked at Gohan and smiled.
"Tokyo!" she answered sounding a little too wanting.
Gohan laughed and turned the car around.
"Ok...on to Tokyo." He said sweetly.
Marron smiled and turned towards the window again.
"Thus ending the tale of my life in West City and the beginning of a new one in Tokyo." She said softly.
"And what would you call them?" asked Gohan. Marron looked at him curiously.
"Call what?"
"The tales? The tale that ended and the one that begin...what would you call them?"
Marron thought for a while. Then it hit her.
"I know. In every romance novel I've ever read there was one main event that took place...the event was so big and so meaningful. And that was usually the title of the book. So, the biggest even that took place in my life deserves to be the title of this tale." explained Marron.
"And what would that be?" asked Gohan curiously.
"My tale of the.'Midnight Summer'."
THE END
"Tokyo!" she answered sounding a little too wanting.
Gohan laughed and turned the car around.
"Ok...on to Tokyo." He said sweetly.
Marron smiled and turned towards the window again.
"Thus ending the tale of my life in West City and the beginning of a new one in Tokyo." She said softly.
"And what would you call them?" asked Gohan. Marron looked at him curiously.
"Call what?"
"The tales? The tale that ended and the one that begin...what would you call them?"
Marron thought for a while. Then it hit her.
"I know. In every romance novel I've ever read there was one main event that took place...the event was so big and so meaningful. And that was usually the title of the book. So, the biggest even that took place in my life deserves to be the title of this tale." explained Marron.
"And what would that be?" asked Gohan curiously.
"My tale of the.'Midnight Summer'."
THE END
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I hope you guys enjoyed reading both endings. I hope I made a smart decision and put the right ending up.
From the beginning, my first idea was that some guy hurt her before and that how she got the way she did (all fairytale-like). But I forgot to add that in the first chapter, so I decided to bring it up later. But when I wrote this ending (the A/E) I forgot to add it. I remember it later and decided I'd have to rewrite the whole ending. While doing so I decided I didn't want her to sleep with him. So I took that out. Later while writing chapter 19, I decided to add a funny little scene to keep you guys glued, because I though that the A/E's chapter 19 sucked. (I was bored when I was rereading it. Now that's sad.) Then I decided, I didn't like the idea of her finding out who he was on TV. Because I didn't like the way I set it up. So I changed it. I added the ultra hot guy named Zin. (I bet none of you can guess why I named him Zin! Lol.) I really don't know why I added him, but it was fun to write his part. Lol! Then I reread A/E's chapter 19 and decided I didn't like the way I made her cry so hard about the situation. If I was her I'd be mad when I found out. VERY MAD. Then I'd cry later. So I made it that way. The Gohan idea was perfect to me. So I only changed a bit of dialogue to go along with the other chapter. The reason I made her leave was because I didn't want this fic to end with her forgiving him so easily. (I mean it happened to her twice. She never forgave the other guy.why would she forgive Trunks?) I thought it would be better if I got her away from him and the others. The reason she didn't leave Pan some kind of note is because she is trying to start a new life and didn't want to have to drag Pan along. I figured that the readers would decide that on their own, but I told you here just incase you didn't get it. ^-^ The reason I added Gohan is because I needed to get her somewhere to end the fic. I didn't want to end it with her walking down the highway to another city and I didn't want to write her going to another city and settling down and doing whatever else she needs to do. Because I thought I'd never finish the fic and you guys would get bored after awhile. So I decided since Gohan "save" her before, it would be nice if he was there to "save" her again. For those who thought it was a little to cliché or too coincidental, sorry. But I've had a lot of coincidental things happen to me. Like, not seeing someone for years, and then talking about them, when I turn around I see them for the first time in YEARS! That was scary! But, anyway that's why I put that in here. Because things like that happen ever day. I hope I explained it all! If you have any question, comments, or anything else. PLEASE put them in your review. Don't be afraid to!
Ok...I love when people tell why they wrote their fic a certain way and stuff like that...so...I decided to write a full description on why I wrote my fic the way I did.
Also, just for the heck of it, can everyone who reads this please try to guess why I named the boy Zin? Even if you can only think of something like "Because you like the name" (*avoids eye contact with everyone*). It's ok! I'll e-mail you the answer if ya want.^.^
Also, please tell me if I made the right decision in putting the final ending up. If you liked the A/E better, please tell me. Because I'm putting this up on my site I wanna know which ending will make more people like this fic.
ALSO, for anyone who was wondering. The girl at the desk (Chapter 13 and 14) was NOT Paris (Paresu). I didn't notice until I reread the story for the third time.
Well! I hope you guys love this fic as much as I do! Thanks again for reviewing.
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Here's the alternate ending I was talking about! It starts with chapter 18 and ends at 20. Originally, chapter 16 was a filter and had nothing to do with Goten's confusion and chapter 17 ended with Marron sleeping with Trunks (but not a lemon) instead of that 'we need to talk' stuff. Also, in the real one, Marron went home. In this one...she sleep with him (no lemon).
LET'S BEGIN! MIDNIGHT SUMMER'S ALTERNATE ENDING...S!!!
(Chapter 17: ???) (!---Enter Chapter 17 Here---!(
(Chapter 18: Thinks We Forgot To Mention)
***The Next Day***
I walked down the open road alone. I remember the stormy day I was heading towards West City. Now I'm taking that same road away from it. I looked at the calm park as I slowly passed it. I would have been walking faster if it weren't for these suitcases. I stopped in front of the parks main entrance. I remember the day that Goten warned me...why didn't I listen? I continued to walk down the road watching as cars flew by. I guess they were on their way to work.
The winds changed its direction to my favor then slowed to a stop. I could soon fill the sun's rays blazing against my back. But I couldn't bring myself to care. The dried tears on my face made my face hurt and made we wanna cry some more.
Why me? Out of all the people there is to hurt...why me? What did I ever do to make him lie to me? Why did he lie to me? Most importantly...why did he say he loved me?
I tried to forget about earlier this morning. But I couldn't. It was only an hour ago. How could I ever forget something like that? It pierced it's self into my mind, my heart...my life. I could tell from that moment on...I would never be the same again.
I continued to walk down the road, but in a faster pace then before. Now I was really anxious to get away...to run away. From him...from Pan...from everyone...except Goten. He tried to help me...I should have listened...I should have listened!!!
My pace soon quickened when I heard a car coming from behind me. I moved into the grass and off the road, so the car would pass without hitting me. But the car didn't pass...it pulled over beside me. I stop walking at looked at the car. It was a black...Mercedes Benz.
A smile slowly formed on my face as the windows rolled down. I nearly screamed with joy when I realized who it was. Figures he'd be back. He saved me once from a pouring storm...and now from a lost walk.
"You going my way?" he asked with a sweet smile.
I smirked and answered, "It depends on where you're going, Gohan."
He looked out his window at the direction West City was in and then at me.
"Far, far way from there." He said still smiling.
"Yep. That's where I'm going." I said softly. I opened the passenger's door, tossed my bags into the back seat and got in. He looked back at the bags.
"Why are you running away from West City?" he asked curiously.
I looked at him then at the road ahead.
"I loved and learned...again."
(Chapter 19: What We Leave Behead Us)
***REMINISING: Earlier That Day***
The sunlight shined through the windows of the Capsule House, brightening it immediately and waking Marron.
Marron slowly opened her eyes. Still wrapped in the satin covers, she sat up. She yawned and looked over at the sleeping boy beside her.
She leaned over and softly kissed him on his forehead. 'Goodbye, Goten.' She whispered into his ear. Marron slowly ran her hands through his soft lilac hair, then turned and climbed out of the bed.
(A/N: O.o)
***//***LATER THAT DAY AT MARRON'S HOUSE***///***
Pan walked into the living room and grabbed her bag.
"Ok.where is my phone?!" she asked out loud to know one in particular. She opened her bag and began searching threw it. She was about to throw her purse down, when the door opened.
"Hey Marron." said Pan with a smile. Marron smiled back as she closed the door behind her.
"Have a good night?" joked Pan.
"Shut up." laughed Marron as she walked over to the couch and sat down.
"I know this is a stupid question...but...have you seen my cell phone?" asked Pan.
Marron turned on the TV.
"Nope." She said as she grabbed the remote.
"Darn. Oh well. I'll see you later, Marron. I've gotta go to work." said Pan as she ran out of the door.
"Um...bye." Said Marron.
She began to flip threw the channels, but stopped when she reached channel 4 again.
"Nothing's on...oh well...I'll just watch the news." Marron said as she sat the remote down.
"Today's story is about Capsule Corporation's newest product. And the secret relation between the President of CC and his mysterious girlfriend."
Marron rolled her eyes.
"Oh great. I hate those stupid stories. Why don't they just stay out of his personal life? Losers." Marron said as she turned the channel.
"Mr. Briefs talked to us about the new product from CC. Here's what he had to say." Said the news reporter on TV.
Marron's jaw-drooped as she saw Goten on the TV talking to the reporter.
"So...Mr. Brief. What is it about this..."
Marron turned of the TV and jumped off of the couch.
'Goten...is Trunks Brief? No...that can't be true. It's impossible. I've got to find out.'
Marron grabbed her coat and ran out of the house.
She slowly approached CC.
'It can't be true. There had to be some kind of mistake. Something is not right...' she thought as she entered the building.
She stopped in the doorway and looked around at the inside of the building. It was beautiful. She walked up to the front desk and smiled at the secretary. The sectary stopped typing and looked at her.
"Can I help you?"
"Um.can I speak to Mr. Brief...please." She asked. The sectary just looked at her.
"Do you have an appointment?"
"No."
"Does he expect you in any kinda way?"
"No."
"Then no!" she went back to typing on her computer.
"But...you don't understand...I really need to see him."
"No."
Marron looked around at the building.
"Look. I'm Marron Chestnut...I"
"You're Marron Chestnut?"
"Yes."
The secretary jumped up.
"I am so sorry Ms. Chestnut. I'll take you to his office right away."
"Wait...how do you know about me?"
"He's always talking about you...Ms. Chestnut."
Marron felt sick.
'So...it's true.' She thought as she walked down the hall with the secretary.
They stopped in front of his office.
"Just let your self in...I'm sure he'll be more than happy to see you." said the secretary before she turned and walked away.
Marron gripped the doorknob tightly.
'Here's goes nothing.' She said softly.
Remember when we held on in the rain
The night we almost lost it
Once again we can take the night into tomorrow
***///**In Trunks' Office**///***
Trunks glared at Goten.
"You did WHAT?!" he yelled.
"You heard me!" yelled Goten.
"No...what I heard couldn't possibly be right. Cause what I heard you say was that you told Marron to say away from me. And since I know that you know better, that can't be right." yelled Trunks as he stood up.
"Trunks...you've gone to far with this. I'm gon'na end it. Now!" said Goten as he continued to glare at his friend.
"Goten...I..." Trunks stopped in mid-sentence as his office door slowly opened.
"Marron!" cried Goten as Marron walked into the room.
Living on feelings
Touching you I feel it all again
"So...it's true. You name is Trunks...not Goten." She said softly.
"Marron...I can explain..."
"Don't bother...the whole situation speaks for it's self." Said Marron as she glared at Trunks.
Didn't we almost have it all
When love was all we had worth giving?
"Marron...look..."
"Trunks...why did you lie to me?" she asked.
"I...I..." Trunks stopped and looked over at Goten, "I don't know."
Marron also looked at Goten.
"I'm sorry Goten. I should have listen to you." She said as she turned to leave.
The ride with you was worth the fall my friend
Loving you makes life worth living
"Marron wait!" cried Trunks. Marron looked at him.
"Marron, I wasn't lying to you when I told you I loved you. I swear! I was a fool for lying to you and I'm sorry...but I could tell you who I was...because I feel in love with you and you feel in love with me...I didn't want you to hate me."
Didn't we almost have it all
The night we held on till the morning
Marron turned around and glared at him.
"No! I didn't fall in love with you. I fell in love with Goten. I don't even know who the hell you are. You lied to me about everything...you can't be in love with me. No one could hurt someone they loved this much. When were you planning on tell me the truth Trunks?" cried Marron.
You know you'll never love that way again
Didn't we almost have it all
"I don't know..."
"Enough said." She said as she turned to leave again.
The way you used to touch me felt so fine
We kept our hearts together down the line
"Marron, I didn't mean to hurt you. And I do love you...I swear I love you." cried Trunks.
A moment in the soul can last forever
Comfort and keep us
"Marron, he's telling the truth." said Goten. Marron turned and looked at him.
"What?"
"He isn't lying...he did fall in love with you. I understand that you are mad about him lying and he was stupid for doing that. Everything he said or may say might be a lie.but when he said he loves you, he was telling the truth." Said Goten as he walked towards the blonde.
"Goten...you're such a sweet person. You were here for me the whole time. You tried to warn me when everyone else lied to me. I'm sorry for doubting you." She hugged Goten. Then turned and looked at Trunks.
Help me bring the feeling back again
"But as for him I couldn't give a damn about his feelings and I don't ever wanna see him again." She cried.
Didn't we almost have it all
When love was all we had worth giving?
She turned and walked out of the building.
"Go after her." said Trunks. Goten watched as she walked down the hall.
"No." he said sofltly.
The ride with you was worth the fall my friend
"What?! Fine, I'll do it." said Trunks as he walked over to the door.
Loving you makes life worth living
Didn't we almost have it all
The night we held on till the morning
Goten blocked his way.
"No! Just stay away from her, Trunks. You did enough damage."
You know you'll never love that way again
Didn't we almost have it all
Trunks watched as she left the building.
***//**AT MARRON'S APARTMENT**//***
Marron cried as the memories came back to her. Everything they had ever done. Everything. Including what happened yesterday. She gave herself to him...someone she didn't even know...a complete stranger. She suddenly felt sick.
"I have to get away from here." She cried. She ran to her closet and pulled out her suitcase.
Didn't we have the beat of times
When love was young and new?
Furiously she threw her clothes into the suitcase. Memories, good and bad, began to fill her head again.
Couldn't we reach inside and find
The world of me and you?
We'll never lose it again
"I'll never...love anyone ever again." She cried.
Cause once you know what love is
You never let it end
Didn't we almost have it all
When love was all we had worth giving?
Marron threw herself on her bed and began crying...harder than ever.
The ride with you was worth the fall my friend
Loving you makes life worth living
Didn't we almost have it all
She then pulled herself to her feet. She took one more look at her room before she ran out of her room and out of the house. Suitcases in her hand, showing that she was serious.
The night we held on till the morning
You know you'll never love that way again
Didn't we almost have it all
(Chapter 20: Midnight Summer)
"So...he lied to you about everything?" asked Gohan curiously.
"Every single thing." said Marron softly.
She looked out the window of the passenger seat and watched the tree as they flew passed them.
"Whoa, I really do need to get you far away from here. Where do you wanna go?" asked Gohan.
Marron looked at Gohan and smiled. "So...he lied to you about everything?" asked Gohan curiously.
"Every single thing." said Marron softly.
She looked out the window of the passenger seat and watched the tree as they flew passed them.
"Whoa, I really do need to get you far away from here. Where do you wanna go?" asked Gohan.
Marron looked at Gohan and smiled.
"Tokyo!" she answered sounding a little too wanting.
Gohan laughed and turned the car around.
"Ok...on to Tokyo." He said sweetly.
Marron smiled and turned towards the window again.
"Thus ending the tale of my life in West City and the beginning of a new one in Tokyo." She said softly.
"And what would you call them?" asked Gohan. Marron looked at him curiously.
"Call what?"
"The tales? The tale that ended and the one that begin...what would you call them?"
Marron thought for a while. Then it hit her.
"I know. In every romance novel I've ever read there was one main event that took place...the event was so big and so meaningful. And that was usually the title of the book. So, the biggest even that took place in my life deserves to be the title of this tale." explained Marron.
"And what would that be?" asked Gohan curiously.
"My tale of the.'Midnight Summer'."
THE END
"Tokyo!" she answered sounding a little too wanting.
Gohan laughed and turned the car around.
"Ok...on to Tokyo." He said sweetly.
Marron smiled and turned towards the window again.
"Thus ending the tale of my life in West City and the beginning of a new one in Tokyo." She said softly.
"And what would you call them?" asked Gohan. Marron looked at him curiously.
"Call what?"
"The tales? The tale that ended and the one that begin...what would you call them?"
Marron thought for a while. Then it hit her.
"I know. In every romance novel I've ever read there was one main event that took place...the event was so big and so meaningful. And that was usually the title of the book. So, the biggest even that took place in my life deserves to be the title of this tale." explained Marron.
"And what would that be?" asked Gohan curiously.
"My tale of the.'Midnight Summer'."
THE END
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I hope you guys enjoyed reading both endings. I hope I made a smart decision and put the right ending up.
From the beginning, my first idea was that some guy hurt her before and that how she got the way she did (all fairytale-like). But I forgot to add that in the first chapter, so I decided to bring it up later. But when I wrote this ending (the A/E) I forgot to add it. I remember it later and decided I'd have to rewrite the whole ending. While doing so I decided I didn't want her to sleep with him. So I took that out. Later while writing chapter 19, I decided to add a funny little scene to keep you guys glued, because I though that the A/E's chapter 19 sucked. (I was bored when I was rereading it. Now that's sad.) Then I decided, I didn't like the idea of her finding out who he was on TV. Because I didn't like the way I set it up. So I changed it. I added the ultra hot guy named Zin. (I bet none of you can guess why I named him Zin! Lol.) I really don't know why I added him, but it was fun to write his part. Lol! Then I reread A/E's chapter 19 and decided I didn't like the way I made her cry so hard about the situation. If I was her I'd be mad when I found out. VERY MAD. Then I'd cry later. So I made it that way. The Gohan idea was perfect to me. So I only changed a bit of dialogue to go along with the other chapter. The reason I made her leave was because I didn't want this fic to end with her forgiving him so easily. (I mean it happened to her twice. She never forgave the other guy.why would she forgive Trunks?) I thought it would be better if I got her away from him and the others. The reason she didn't leave Pan some kind of note is because she is trying to start a new life and didn't want to have to drag Pan along. I figured that the readers would decide that on their own, but I told you here just incase you didn't get it. ^-^ The reason I added Gohan is because I needed to get her somewhere to end the fic. I didn't want to end it with her walking down the highway to another city and I didn't want to write her going to another city and settling down and doing whatever else she needs to do. Because I thought I'd never finish the fic and you guys would get bored after awhile. So I decided since Gohan "save" her before, it would be nice if he was there to "save" her again. For those who thought it was a little to cliché or too coincidental, sorry. But I've had a lot of coincidental things happen to me. Like, not seeing someone for years, and then talking about them, when I turn around I see them for the first time in YEARS! That was scary! But, anyway that's why I put that in here. Because things like that happen ever day. I hope I explained it all! If you have any question, comments, or anything else. PLEASE put them in your review. Don't be afraid to!
Ok...I love when people tell why they wrote their fic a certain way and stuff like that...so...I decided to write a full description on why I wrote my fic the way I did.
Also, just for the heck of it, can everyone who reads this please try to guess why I named the boy Zin? Even if you can only think of something like "Because you like the name" (*avoids eye contact with everyone*). It's ok! I'll e-mail you the answer if ya want.^.^
Also, please tell me if I made the right decision in putting the final ending up. If you liked the A/E better, please tell me. Because I'm putting this up on my site I wanna know which ending will make more people like this fic.
ALSO, for anyone who was wondering. The girl at the desk (Chapter 13 and 14) was NOT Paris (Paresu). I didn't notice until I reread the story for the third time.
Well! I hope you guys love this fic as much as I do! Thanks again for reviewing.
TTFN!
~SSJ Tokya-WCM
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