Alright here is a revised version of 'the way you say my name'. No more run
on sentences. Over all a little different but still good probably better.
Few things: slash, fluff, sort of PWP, but very fun and very good. So have
fun, enjoy, and review.
"Legolas...Legolas..." I hear his sweet voice mutter my name I know
he's dreaming about me and here I am sitting awake watching him sleep. I can't
sleep knowing that he is so close to me yet so far. While we travel with the
fellowship we can't let the rest know of what we have together. Wait what's this
someone's stirring. I pretend to be asleep while I see whose moving around. It's
Merry and Pipin. I wonder where they're going off to at this time of night? Huh, I
thought there was more going on there then just a friendship, if they don't quiet
down they'll wake the others. Aragorn will be the first to wake. He was always a
light sleeper, makes good ranger though. Well we have a long day ahead of us
tomorrow, I guess I should get some sleep. Although with all the racket those foolish
hobbits are making I don't know if that's possible. Before I fall asleep I can see
Sam watching Frodo sleep, just as I had been watching Aragorn. At the sight of it
reassures me that Frodo will always be protected by Sam. I also know that Sam
will always be to afraid to tell Frodo how he feels. This saddens me but reminds me
of my love for Aragorn.
Dream/ memory {Legolas and Aragorn alone in a wooded area}
{all in Elvish} "Legolas, oh I just love the way your name sounds Legolas" he
says as he approaches me. "legolas." he whispers my name as he leans in to kiss
me. Every time he says my name I can hear what he is really saying is 'I love
you'. The way he says my name sends shivers down my spine. I love this feeling
of warmth, of love really. I love the way he says my name. Most of all I love him,
he's mine and he always will be. My Aragorn. "Legolas, what are you thinking about?" " the way you say my name. I love the way you say my name and I love
you" "well I love the way your name sounds, Leogolas" then he leans in to kiss me
again. Oh how I wish this moment could last forever... .
"legolas...." I hear his sweet voice whisper my name in that way. The way
he always has since that night; that night in the woods when he confessed his love
for me. "Legolas..." I hear him again as I start to wake. Now I can fell his lips on
mine, waking me from my slumber. I respond to his touch to tell him I am awake.
Awake from my wonderful dream. I see it is still dark. Middle of the night,
everyone else is still asleep.
"what is the meaning of this Aragorn?" but I think I know the reason.
"come Legolas, my love, follow me" as he leads me into the woods he keeps
saying my name and I am forced to remember what he said to me that night.
'I love the way your name sounds'.
Yippie even better than the first time I wrote it. Yeah I know I just wrote this like a day ago but this one is better, no run ons and just better overall. So now that you have read it review it. I will award the person who writes me the longest review a cake, a good cake. I know you want the cake so write loooonnnnggg reviews. Flames accepted cause I need to bake the cake for the reviewer with the longest review, flamers have a chance of getting that cake as well. Still need more people to review to get me to write a second chapter.
Last blab: if you loved my story feel free to tell me in person. E-mail/ IM me at either uhu1235@hotmail.com or hyperemmiem@aol.com.
he's dreaming about me and here I am sitting awake watching him sleep. I can't
sleep knowing that he is so close to me yet so far. While we travel with the
fellowship we can't let the rest know of what we have together. Wait what's this
someone's stirring. I pretend to be asleep while I see whose moving around. It's
Merry and Pipin. I wonder where they're going off to at this time of night? Huh, I
thought there was more going on there then just a friendship, if they don't quiet
down they'll wake the others. Aragorn will be the first to wake. He was always a
light sleeper, makes good ranger though. Well we have a long day ahead of us
tomorrow, I guess I should get some sleep. Although with all the racket those foolish
hobbits are making I don't know if that's possible. Before I fall asleep I can see
Sam watching Frodo sleep, just as I had been watching Aragorn. At the sight of it
reassures me that Frodo will always be protected by Sam. I also know that Sam
will always be to afraid to tell Frodo how he feels. This saddens me but reminds me
of my love for Aragorn.
Dream/ memory {Legolas and Aragorn alone in a wooded area}
{all in Elvish} "Legolas, oh I just love the way your name sounds Legolas" he
says as he approaches me. "legolas." he whispers my name as he leans in to kiss
me. Every time he says my name I can hear what he is really saying is 'I love
you'. The way he says my name sends shivers down my spine. I love this feeling
of warmth, of love really. I love the way he says my name. Most of all I love him,
he's mine and he always will be. My Aragorn. "Legolas, what are you thinking about?" " the way you say my name. I love the way you say my name and I love
you" "well I love the way your name sounds, Leogolas" then he leans in to kiss me
again. Oh how I wish this moment could last forever... .
"legolas...." I hear his sweet voice whisper my name in that way. The way
he always has since that night; that night in the woods when he confessed his love
for me. "Legolas..." I hear him again as I start to wake. Now I can fell his lips on
mine, waking me from my slumber. I respond to his touch to tell him I am awake.
Awake from my wonderful dream. I see it is still dark. Middle of the night,
everyone else is still asleep.
"what is the meaning of this Aragorn?" but I think I know the reason.
"come Legolas, my love, follow me" as he leads me into the woods he keeps
saying my name and I am forced to remember what he said to me that night.
'I love the way your name sounds'.
Yippie even better than the first time I wrote it. Yeah I know I just wrote this like a day ago but this one is better, no run ons and just better overall. So now that you have read it review it. I will award the person who writes me the longest review a cake, a good cake. I know you want the cake so write loooonnnnggg reviews. Flames accepted cause I need to bake the cake for the reviewer with the longest review, flamers have a chance of getting that cake as well. Still need more people to review to get me to write a second chapter.
Last blab: if you loved my story feel free to tell me in person. E-mail/ IM me at either uhu1235@hotmail.com or hyperemmiem@aol.com.