24 Hours
Chapter 4 - 02:05
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Sorry forgot about the disclaimer on the 1st chap...
So, I don't own any of the characters...
A/N I just wanted your opinion about the writing style.. what do you think? It's my first fic ever and I would really appreciate criticism good or bad.. Thanks.
Ah, and here I go trying to write some r/j hot stuff... hope it goes well.
Maybe I should change the rating to R - please tell me what you think
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A Mid Night Encounter
Recap :
So he read to her. And he wished.
Rory's mind was racing with thoughts about past, present and future.
Jess was different. Jess is different
He makes me think and reevaluate my whole being. And my feelings. And desiers.
And as for the future, who knows what the night might bring?
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02:05
Rory looked at the bright moon. It was no longer unbearably hot and there was a light breeze. It was a beautiful night. No doubt here. And after she contemplated for the last hour or so, She now came to a realization that it'll probably be a magical night non the less.
She was frightened and excited at the same time. She felt a rush of anticipation go through her body.
She enjoyed a few more relaxing moments listening to Jess' voice move through the warm air, and then a look of determination spread on her face. She can do it, there is no way she can keep denying her true feelings now.
Rory raised herself into a sitting position and immediately Jess stopped reading and got up as well. He looked at her questioningly but didn't speak. He decided that it's her call now. She turned to look into his eyes, slowly a smile began to spread across her face and consequently a little one started to creep upon his face as well.
There is no need for words.
He made a small gesture with his head as if to say "I know, it's ok "and her smile grew wider.
That's how it always was between them - no need for words.
Rory lifted her hand slowly and stroked his lips again, only this time, he didn't have to restrain himself from returning the favor. Jess took her hand in his own and gently started pulling her towards him. They both could have swear that there was a spark when their lips touched for the first time ever. Yeh, there was an actual spark.
At the first few seconds their lips onlt brushed each others, adjusting to the new overwhelming sensation that went through their bodies, but the need overtook them and soon they began kissing with a passion. The already hot air around them became red hot as Rory felt Jess' tongue demanding permission to enter. She opened her mouth and a battle for control began, both exploring each other and enjoying the sparks flying around them. (did I say red hot?)
Rory's hands reached Jess' hair and Jess' began exploring her back up and down.
But it wasn't enough. Then both needed more in order to discharge sll the pent up emotions and frustrations that the past few months held.
Rory began to lower her hands towards his chest, wanting to feel the tight muscles she always took glances of at the diner when he was working. Jess' hand travelled over the sides of her body, accidentally grazing her breast, then not so accidentally going back to the same place and caressing her over her shirt.
He couls feel her nipples harden through the fabric, and as her back arched he could feel her body move toward him.
Jess looked at her face, her features showing her extreme delight, using one of his hands he gently held her chin signaling her to open her eyes. Rory, so caught up in the moment took a few seconds to realize what he wanted, but finally stared back at him, both with hugh smiles upon their faces and lust in their eyes.
Looking into his eyes, Rory lightly pulled the tip of his shirt, signaling him to take it off. Jess looked at her and seeing her look took it off and kissed her forcefully. She moved her hands over his chest lightly, feeling a current go through her fingertips. They were still sitting but Rory, deeply immersed in her newly found teritory, pushed Jess on his back, while continuing her exploration, now she began kissing and teasing his buds. As she lightly bitten his nipple Jess felt a hit wave rush over him and groaned deeply, making Rory's enthusiasm rise.
She felt his hands everywhere, roaming over her body and finally she felt him pulling her shirt up, but instead of feeling embarrassed about it she only fely happy 'cause she'll be closer to him now. Rory decided to be bold and, moving her hands to her back opened her bra. The piece of cloth fell on his bare chest and she was there in front of him in all her glory..
Jess looked at her in awe. she was amazing.
Rory lowered herslf on Jess, absorbing his heat and kissing him strongly. Jess' last remains of self control began to drift away and he rolled them over so that he was straddeling her. He took his time to look at her for a moment and then lowered his head toward her breasts taking one in his mouth while his hand teased the other exposed nipple.
A low moan rose from Rory's throat as Jess kept sucking and licking her breast. She kept moving her hand over his back and to his hair, amazed by all the appealing possibilities.
Jess was on top of her now, and as he adjusted himself, Rory suddenly felt him between her legs. He stopped his actions abruptly and looked into her beautiful blue eyes asking her permission to continue. Rory's eyes full of lust bore into his browns as she pushed herself against his hips.
The sensation was again, overwhelming.
Chapter 4 - 02:05
_________________
Sorry forgot about the disclaimer on the 1st chap...
So, I don't own any of the characters...
A/N I just wanted your opinion about the writing style.. what do you think? It's my first fic ever and I would really appreciate criticism good or bad.. Thanks.
Ah, and here I go trying to write some r/j hot stuff... hope it goes well.
Maybe I should change the rating to R - please tell me what you think
_________________________________________________
A Mid Night Encounter
Recap :
So he read to her. And he wished.
Rory's mind was racing with thoughts about past, present and future.
Jess was different. Jess is different
He makes me think and reevaluate my whole being. And my feelings. And desiers.
And as for the future, who knows what the night might bring?
_________________________________________________
02:05
Rory looked at the bright moon. It was no longer unbearably hot and there was a light breeze. It was a beautiful night. No doubt here. And after she contemplated for the last hour or so, She now came to a realization that it'll probably be a magical night non the less.
She was frightened and excited at the same time. She felt a rush of anticipation go through her body.
She enjoyed a few more relaxing moments listening to Jess' voice move through the warm air, and then a look of determination spread on her face. She can do it, there is no way she can keep denying her true feelings now.
Rory raised herself into a sitting position and immediately Jess stopped reading and got up as well. He looked at her questioningly but didn't speak. He decided that it's her call now. She turned to look into his eyes, slowly a smile began to spread across her face and consequently a little one started to creep upon his face as well.
There is no need for words.
He made a small gesture with his head as if to say "I know, it's ok "and her smile grew wider.
That's how it always was between them - no need for words.
Rory lifted her hand slowly and stroked his lips again, only this time, he didn't have to restrain himself from returning the favor. Jess took her hand in his own and gently started pulling her towards him. They both could have swear that there was a spark when their lips touched for the first time ever. Yeh, there was an actual spark.
At the first few seconds their lips onlt brushed each others, adjusting to the new overwhelming sensation that went through their bodies, but the need overtook them and soon they began kissing with a passion. The already hot air around them became red hot as Rory felt Jess' tongue demanding permission to enter. She opened her mouth and a battle for control began, both exploring each other and enjoying the sparks flying around them. (did I say red hot?)
Rory's hands reached Jess' hair and Jess' began exploring her back up and down.
But it wasn't enough. Then both needed more in order to discharge sll the pent up emotions and frustrations that the past few months held.
Rory began to lower her hands towards his chest, wanting to feel the tight muscles she always took glances of at the diner when he was working. Jess' hand travelled over the sides of her body, accidentally grazing her breast, then not so accidentally going back to the same place and caressing her over her shirt.
He couls feel her nipples harden through the fabric, and as her back arched he could feel her body move toward him.
Jess looked at her face, her features showing her extreme delight, using one of his hands he gently held her chin signaling her to open her eyes. Rory, so caught up in the moment took a few seconds to realize what he wanted, but finally stared back at him, both with hugh smiles upon their faces and lust in their eyes.
Looking into his eyes, Rory lightly pulled the tip of his shirt, signaling him to take it off. Jess looked at her and seeing her look took it off and kissed her forcefully. She moved her hands over his chest lightly, feeling a current go through her fingertips. They were still sitting but Rory, deeply immersed in her newly found teritory, pushed Jess on his back, while continuing her exploration, now she began kissing and teasing his buds. As she lightly bitten his nipple Jess felt a hit wave rush over him and groaned deeply, making Rory's enthusiasm rise.
She felt his hands everywhere, roaming over her body and finally she felt him pulling her shirt up, but instead of feeling embarrassed about it she only fely happy 'cause she'll be closer to him now. Rory decided to be bold and, moving her hands to her back opened her bra. The piece of cloth fell on his bare chest and she was there in front of him in all her glory..
Jess looked at her in awe. she was amazing.
Rory lowered herslf on Jess, absorbing his heat and kissing him strongly. Jess' last remains of self control began to drift away and he rolled them over so that he was straddeling her. He took his time to look at her for a moment and then lowered his head toward her breasts taking one in his mouth while his hand teased the other exposed nipple.
A low moan rose from Rory's throat as Jess kept sucking and licking her breast. She kept moving her hand over his back and to his hair, amazed by all the appealing possibilities.
Jess was on top of her now, and as he adjusted himself, Rory suddenly felt him between her legs. He stopped his actions abruptly and looked into her beautiful blue eyes asking her permission to continue. Rory's eyes full of lust bore into his browns as she pushed herself against his hips.
The sensation was again, overwhelming.