Ok I have gotten some suggestions about the quotation marks.I'm sorry I've
written stories before about BSB and I never used them so I'm just not used
to using them. In the future I'll try to so I'm sorry about the difficulty
of reading the story
Ch5
After we changed into our clothes we sat down on a bench to make a plan. I said when we go see Dad, do you think I should tell him I'm his daughter? I don't know. Don't you think that will cause a paradox? I know I was thinking about that but I was also thinking about something else. Whats that? If I tell him I'm his daughter, maybe we can both figure out a way to get back to the future together. Anyway when we go back and we try to prevent that tragedy from happening, don't you think he is going to remember seeing me in 1955? True. I couldn't help it. I started to cry again. He took me in his arms and gently started to rock me.
I wiped my eyes and said I'll be ok. Outside Daddys house though I'll go by a different name so nobody gets suspicious. You should too just in case we run into your parents. He smiled and said you are definitely Docs daughter. I smiled and said I love him very much Marty. I know you do. He said you know we have to be careful not to run into Biff Tannen too. Whose Biff? My father George told me all about him. He used to bully Dad practically his whole life to do his homework and stuff. He still does it now in the 80's to get Dad to do his reports. I'm just gonna warn you about him he might try to try something with you. I said you wont let that happen right? Damn right I wont let that happen. Well lookie what we have here. Oh groan.
Martys Point Of View
I knew that voice anywhere. I slowly turned around. Oh shit. It was Biff with his gang: Match, Skinhead, and 3-D. This is just what we needed. He said I don't remember seeing you two in Hill Valley before. Whats your name Butthead he asked me. I thought quickly. I took the name from my favorite band. Huey Lewis. What kind of stupid name is that? Well it cant be as stupid as yours BIFF. How the hell do you know who I am? I may be new here but I already know who you are. He turned to Gina and said and whats your name pretty lady? She thought fast. She took a characters name from her favorite movie. I'm Jennifer Parker. He turned back to me and said why don't you make like a tree, and get out of here? I would like to get to know this fine lady better. I stood up and said like hell you will. He pushed me out of the way and I lost my balance. I fell and hit my head hard on the cement. The last thing I heard was Gina screaming, then I blacked out.
Ch5
After we changed into our clothes we sat down on a bench to make a plan. I said when we go see Dad, do you think I should tell him I'm his daughter? I don't know. Don't you think that will cause a paradox? I know I was thinking about that but I was also thinking about something else. Whats that? If I tell him I'm his daughter, maybe we can both figure out a way to get back to the future together. Anyway when we go back and we try to prevent that tragedy from happening, don't you think he is going to remember seeing me in 1955? True. I couldn't help it. I started to cry again. He took me in his arms and gently started to rock me.
I wiped my eyes and said I'll be ok. Outside Daddys house though I'll go by a different name so nobody gets suspicious. You should too just in case we run into your parents. He smiled and said you are definitely Docs daughter. I smiled and said I love him very much Marty. I know you do. He said you know we have to be careful not to run into Biff Tannen too. Whose Biff? My father George told me all about him. He used to bully Dad practically his whole life to do his homework and stuff. He still does it now in the 80's to get Dad to do his reports. I'm just gonna warn you about him he might try to try something with you. I said you wont let that happen right? Damn right I wont let that happen. Well lookie what we have here. Oh groan.
Martys Point Of View
I knew that voice anywhere. I slowly turned around. Oh shit. It was Biff with his gang: Match, Skinhead, and 3-D. This is just what we needed. He said I don't remember seeing you two in Hill Valley before. Whats your name Butthead he asked me. I thought quickly. I took the name from my favorite band. Huey Lewis. What kind of stupid name is that? Well it cant be as stupid as yours BIFF. How the hell do you know who I am? I may be new here but I already know who you are. He turned to Gina and said and whats your name pretty lady? She thought fast. She took a characters name from her favorite movie. I'm Jennifer Parker. He turned back to me and said why don't you make like a tree, and get out of here? I would like to get to know this fine lady better. I stood up and said like hell you will. He pushed me out of the way and I lost my balance. I fell and hit my head hard on the cement. The last thing I heard was Gina screaming, then I blacked out.