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Blake: Sorry For the long update. Something called a life got in the way school, friends, etc. You know what I mean. Do me a Favor and review because I like reviews ^^. I want at least 4 more reviews by the next update ok? OK! Can someone tell me what rnrn is oh and by the way Gohan is not going to be writing quite so many entries heh heh.
Gohan's Journal
Chapter 3: Saving Little Goten
By: Blake Develyn
"Who are you?" Krillin asked.
She turned around and looked down, "My name is Crystal," she responded, "I'm sorry for what just happened."
Crystal looked exactly like Crysilio except with longer hair and big silver eyes.
"Uh...Crystal, what just happened?" Goku asked.
"That was Crysilio. He's mad because you're on our planet. We love when visitors come to our peaceful planet. It's just that he doesn't like visitors on our planet anymore."
"Oh that's what his problem was, I would've thought he was crazy at first thought," Krillin commented.
"Yep, that's my bro." Crystal sighed.
"He's your brother?!" Piccolo asked in surprisingly, "so why doesn't he like visitors anymore?"
"Yep, he's my twin brother, for generations we crysilians have been living on ZenZai7 and many different visitors have come and gone. We have enjoyed their presence, although some visitors weren't very friendly. They fought us and tried to take over our planet. We fought hard and used our special ability to turn into our super crystal form to defeat them all, but still we accept visitors with open arms. The ones that fought us were a bit nervous I think because when visitors come they don't know about our secret race of beings. I guess Crysilio got tired of us being so warm,"
"Well your twin brother just flew off with my little brother," Gohan said, "we've got to save him!"
"Yeah, you're right. You'll have a pretty hard time defeating my brother, but I'll help you out," she offered, "decide on the two strongest of your group and I'll see what I can do."
Krillin walked up to Goku, "Well Goku," Krillin said, "It's obviously you and Vegeta."
Gohan walked up to his father, "Yeah dad," he added, "you two are the strongest, after all you did beat Buu."
Goku looked towards Vegeta, "Are you up for it Vegeta?" he asked, "they are right after all."
Vegeta clenched his fist, "All right Kakarot, I'll go with you this time," he said.
"Dad I'll come too, to save Goten," Gohan suggested, "while you two fight Crysilio I'll sneak into his hideout, look for Goten, and get him out!" Gohan said excitedly with a huge smile.
"Great idea son!"
"Well good luck you guys, knock him dead!" Krillin encouraged.
"Yeah we're counting on you guys," Piccolo added.
"Right!" Goku and Vegeta said.
"Well ok, obviously we have our two strongest," Crystal touched both of their foreheads and channeled a powerful energy into their bodies. Goku and Vegeta looked as if in a dazed state. They were just standing there floating into blank space. Crystal finished the energy transfer and Goku, Vegeta, and Gohan said goodbye to their loved ones and Gohan wrote a quick entry into his journal.
Gohan's Journal, Entry #10
Journal,
This weird girl, Crystal, told us a story about her race of people. My dad, Vegeta and I are about to go fight her twin brother and save Gotenhe kidnapped him. This might be my last entry. But if its not, I'll explain when I come back ^_^.
Gohan
"Goku?" Chi Chi cried, "Are you leaving again?" Chi Chi burst into tears.
He looked into her eyes and held her hands "Yeah Chi Chi, but only for a little bit," Goku said in the nicest voice possible, "I'll be back, I promise,"
Chi Chi sniffles, "Ok Goku," she sighed, "I'll trust you this time, but you better come back,"
"Ok Chi Chi," Goku hugged her.
Trunks ran up to his dad, "Good luck dad. Go out there and win!" he yelled.
He winked, "Thanks son,"
Bulma walked to Vegeta and hugged him, "Make me proud and please come back...alive," she whispered into his ear, "I love you Vegeta,"
Vegeta kissed her on the cheek; "I'll come back...promise,"
As Gohan began to say goodbye to Videl she kissed him. "Goodbye Gohan, I'll always love you," she said.
Gohan began to turn red and he hugged her. "I'll always love you too Videl. Here take my journal, hold it for me until I come back."
"Ok," she started to cry.
"Don't worry, I'll be back soon. Don't cry," he kissed her and waved goodbye as he walked toward Goku and Vegeta.
Goku looked back at Vegeta and Gohan, "You guys ready?" he asked, "Which way did he go?"
"That way," Gohan said as he pointed south.
"Ok, lets go," Vegeta said as they took off into the sunny afternoon sky.
"Bye Goku, bye Gohan! Goku, watch out for our sons!" Chi Chi cried after them.
Videl ran up closer to where Gohan took off, "I love you Gohan!" she yelled.
Everyone turned their heads in surprise. Videl looked down. //She loves my son? // Everyone stopped staring but was still very surprised. "Aww, Videl loves Gohan," Izuki said to Mizako. He looked sown in deep thought. //I know Izuki, I guess Gohan and Videl really loved each other ::tear:: I'm so proud of my little cousin and I know he'll bring Goten back to us safe and sound.// "What's up Mizako?" Izuki asked in concern.
"Oh its nothing heh heh," he looked up and smiled as Gohan flew off.
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"Let go of me you freak!" Goten demanded furiously.
"Shut up kid," Crysilio said, "You're the bait for the strongest fighters to come so I can defeat them and so you can get off our planet."
"My dad can beat you easily! Don't underestimate him!"
"Oh really? I guess we'll see when they come," he laughed evilly, "if they come."
"Of course they'll come!"
Crysilio landed on totally empty land. All there was to see was dirt and sand as far as the eye could see. He revealed a button, which he pushed. An elevator rose from the dirt and Crysilio and Goten walked in as it took them to down through the hideout. He went down to the lowest floor and threw Goten into an unbreakable crystal cell.
"Ow, you can try to be more gentle while throwing a kid in a cell," Goten suggested, "Now to get out of here, Ka-me-ha-me-HA!!!" Goten unleashed a huge kamehameha wave into the crystal bars. The smoke cleared only to discover that the bars were still intact. //It didn't work?! // Goten had a confused look on his face. He powered up to Super Saiyin and tried it again. "Ka-me-ha-me-HA!!!" Again the bars weren't even scratched. //Not even a scratch // Goten began to panic and sweat as he sat down and held his legs. Crysilio laughed evilly, "I forgot to mention that the bars were unbreakable,"
Goten sighed //I know Dad and Gohan will come for me soon and break me out// Crysilio walked back to the outside and waited for Goku and Vegeta.
Blake: See the thing that says 'Go' ::points down:: click it pweese. This chapter was shorter than usual, maybe that's a bad thing ::shrugs:: The next chapter is probably going to be short as well so don't be surprised. Please Review please please please ::looks down:: REVIEW!!
Blake: Sorry For the long update. Something called a life got in the way school, friends, etc. You know what I mean. Do me a Favor and review because I like reviews ^^. I want at least 4 more reviews by the next update ok? OK! Can someone tell me what rnrn is oh and by the way Gohan is not going to be writing quite so many entries heh heh.
Gohan's Journal
Chapter 3: Saving Little Goten
By: Blake Develyn
"Who are you?" Krillin asked.
She turned around and looked down, "My name is Crystal," she responded, "I'm sorry for what just happened."
Crystal looked exactly like Crysilio except with longer hair and big silver eyes.
"Uh...Crystal, what just happened?" Goku asked.
"That was Crysilio. He's mad because you're on our planet. We love when visitors come to our peaceful planet. It's just that he doesn't like visitors on our planet anymore."
"Oh that's what his problem was, I would've thought he was crazy at first thought," Krillin commented.
"Yep, that's my bro." Crystal sighed.
"He's your brother?!" Piccolo asked in surprisingly, "so why doesn't he like visitors anymore?"
"Yep, he's my twin brother, for generations we crysilians have been living on ZenZai7 and many different visitors have come and gone. We have enjoyed their presence, although some visitors weren't very friendly. They fought us and tried to take over our planet. We fought hard and used our special ability to turn into our super crystal form to defeat them all, but still we accept visitors with open arms. The ones that fought us were a bit nervous I think because when visitors come they don't know about our secret race of beings. I guess Crysilio got tired of us being so warm,"
"Well your twin brother just flew off with my little brother," Gohan said, "we've got to save him!"
"Yeah, you're right. You'll have a pretty hard time defeating my brother, but I'll help you out," she offered, "decide on the two strongest of your group and I'll see what I can do."
Krillin walked up to Goku, "Well Goku," Krillin said, "It's obviously you and Vegeta."
Gohan walked up to his father, "Yeah dad," he added, "you two are the strongest, after all you did beat Buu."
Goku looked towards Vegeta, "Are you up for it Vegeta?" he asked, "they are right after all."
Vegeta clenched his fist, "All right Kakarot, I'll go with you this time," he said.
"Dad I'll come too, to save Goten," Gohan suggested, "while you two fight Crysilio I'll sneak into his hideout, look for Goten, and get him out!" Gohan said excitedly with a huge smile.
"Great idea son!"
"Well good luck you guys, knock him dead!" Krillin encouraged.
"Yeah we're counting on you guys," Piccolo added.
"Right!" Goku and Vegeta said.
"Well ok, obviously we have our two strongest," Crystal touched both of their foreheads and channeled a powerful energy into their bodies. Goku and Vegeta looked as if in a dazed state. They were just standing there floating into blank space. Crystal finished the energy transfer and Goku, Vegeta, and Gohan said goodbye to their loved ones and Gohan wrote a quick entry into his journal.
Gohan's Journal, Entry #10
Journal,
This weird girl, Crystal, told us a story about her race of people. My dad, Vegeta and I are about to go fight her twin brother and save Gotenhe kidnapped him. This might be my last entry. But if its not, I'll explain when I come back ^_^.
Gohan
"Goku?" Chi Chi cried, "Are you leaving again?" Chi Chi burst into tears.
He looked into her eyes and held her hands "Yeah Chi Chi, but only for a little bit," Goku said in the nicest voice possible, "I'll be back, I promise,"
Chi Chi sniffles, "Ok Goku," she sighed, "I'll trust you this time, but you better come back,"
"Ok Chi Chi," Goku hugged her.
Trunks ran up to his dad, "Good luck dad. Go out there and win!" he yelled.
He winked, "Thanks son,"
Bulma walked to Vegeta and hugged him, "Make me proud and please come back...alive," she whispered into his ear, "I love you Vegeta,"
Vegeta kissed her on the cheek; "I'll come back...promise,"
As Gohan began to say goodbye to Videl she kissed him. "Goodbye Gohan, I'll always love you," she said.
Gohan began to turn red and he hugged her. "I'll always love you too Videl. Here take my journal, hold it for me until I come back."
"Ok," she started to cry.
"Don't worry, I'll be back soon. Don't cry," he kissed her and waved goodbye as he walked toward Goku and Vegeta.
Goku looked back at Vegeta and Gohan, "You guys ready?" he asked, "Which way did he go?"
"That way," Gohan said as he pointed south.
"Ok, lets go," Vegeta said as they took off into the sunny afternoon sky.
"Bye Goku, bye Gohan! Goku, watch out for our sons!" Chi Chi cried after them.
Videl ran up closer to where Gohan took off, "I love you Gohan!" she yelled.
Everyone turned their heads in surprise. Videl looked down. //She loves my son? // Everyone stopped staring but was still very surprised. "Aww, Videl loves Gohan," Izuki said to Mizako. He looked sown in deep thought. //I know Izuki, I guess Gohan and Videl really loved each other ::tear:: I'm so proud of my little cousin and I know he'll bring Goten back to us safe and sound.// "What's up Mizako?" Izuki asked in concern.
"Oh its nothing heh heh," he looked up and smiled as Gohan flew off.
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"Let go of me you freak!" Goten demanded furiously.
"Shut up kid," Crysilio said, "You're the bait for the strongest fighters to come so I can defeat them and so you can get off our planet."
"My dad can beat you easily! Don't underestimate him!"
"Oh really? I guess we'll see when they come," he laughed evilly, "if they come."
"Of course they'll come!"
Crysilio landed on totally empty land. All there was to see was dirt and sand as far as the eye could see. He revealed a button, which he pushed. An elevator rose from the dirt and Crysilio and Goten walked in as it took them to down through the hideout. He went down to the lowest floor and threw Goten into an unbreakable crystal cell.
"Ow, you can try to be more gentle while throwing a kid in a cell," Goten suggested, "Now to get out of here, Ka-me-ha-me-HA!!!" Goten unleashed a huge kamehameha wave into the crystal bars. The smoke cleared only to discover that the bars were still intact. //It didn't work?! // Goten had a confused look on his face. He powered up to Super Saiyin and tried it again. "Ka-me-ha-me-HA!!!" Again the bars weren't even scratched. //Not even a scratch // Goten began to panic and sweat as he sat down and held his legs. Crysilio laughed evilly, "I forgot to mention that the bars were unbreakable,"
Goten sighed //I know Dad and Gohan will come for me soon and break me out// Crysilio walked back to the outside and waited for Goku and Vegeta.
Blake: See the thing that says 'Go' ::points down:: click it pweese. This chapter was shorter than usual, maybe that's a bad thing ::shrugs:: The next chapter is probably going to be short as well so don't be surprised. Please Review please please please ::looks down:: REVIEW!!