Hello itz me again!!
I have some points to make here..
#1 if u don't like my story save some time and DON'T flame it.
#2 think what you want but sakura isn't a mary-sue
#3 I have a spell checker
#4 important THIS STORY WILL BE MOVING UP TO THE "R" RATINGS DURING CHAPTER
6 or 7 AND 8 FOR SUGESTIVE LANAGUE AND NAKEDNESS.
UM...ALSO THIS CHAPTER IS DEACAITED TO MISS SWEETFURAMMIE TO SHOW THAT SOME
RELATIONSHIPS COME OUT GOOD
Thank you,
Hieis girl will continue with her story now..
~~~ chapter 4 its really you!!
"Sakura I am not dead." He said as he handed her the necklace, she took it and put it back on. "W-what do you mean?" she asked nervously. * this cant be him!! It just cant be* he sighed and told her his tale of what happened and the others listened as well. "But Hiei I thought you were dead and if you weren't by now." she stopped her thought. " I just cant believe its you..." she looked at him. " just think of all the years we spent thinking the other was dead.all those countless years spent training." She finished. He got up from his chair and went to her and whispered in her ear.." lets talk later.I think you have work and we have explaining to do." She sighed." Guess so." " Well hiei you little player! You had us all clueless no one knew you had a capability of loving..and for that matter loving a girl!" yuske said to hiei. Hiei narrowed his eyes and sakura blushed. "Well guys it looks like you have a new member to the gang! Koenima said out of no where. Sakura smiled. Koenima continued. " you'd all better be getting home we'll get you in case of a emergency see ya chow!" he disappeared. They humans and kurama left. Sakura sat still not knowing what to do until she felt a hand on her shoulder..hieis hand. "come on follow me we'll find a good place to sleep for the night." He softly spoke to her. They went this way and that she was by his side for the whole time. Then they just stopped. Looking around they saw a beautiful place covered with cherry blossoms from the trees and a hot spring. They sat down, keeping their distance from each other.not knowing what to do they stared at each other admiring the look they haven't seen for years. She wanted to make a move but was too afraid of what he might think of her. Same with him. Finally, after waiting 20 min. Sakura got up and sat next to hiei. " Do you still love me am I still yours? She asked the mind busting question. " I--- of course I still love you sakura..even if you really did die..I would still love you...forever." he finished with a nice color of scarlet starting to cover his cheeks. * of course he does.I shouldn't have been so stupid as to doubt his claim to me.the one we had made so long ago* He was still looking away from her. She put one of her hands on his face and turned his head so she could look into his blood-lust ruby red eyes. She ran he hands over his cheek.it was so cold...and she thought fire demons were sopposto be warm. She got up and sat on his lap. He gasped and she sighed. She went and kissed him that was sopposto be a short kiss but had turned into a passionate one in a short matter of seconds. When the kiss broke they were a little bit blushing but not much. Sakura spoke up," so are you warm now?" he just smiled and hugged her. If some one would of seen the two in that beautiful place, they would've seen a demon and a demoness two demon lovers, snuggled up against another the males arms protectively / possively around the females waist. Their expressions calm and happy. Peaceful.
Ok end of chapter next one is really short. Ch 5- good mornings and new missions. Bye-bye Hieis girl
"Sakura I am not dead." He said as he handed her the necklace, she took it and put it back on. "W-what do you mean?" she asked nervously. * this cant be him!! It just cant be* he sighed and told her his tale of what happened and the others listened as well. "But Hiei I thought you were dead and if you weren't by now." she stopped her thought. " I just cant believe its you..." she looked at him. " just think of all the years we spent thinking the other was dead.all those countless years spent training." She finished. He got up from his chair and went to her and whispered in her ear.." lets talk later.I think you have work and we have explaining to do." She sighed." Guess so." " Well hiei you little player! You had us all clueless no one knew you had a capability of loving..and for that matter loving a girl!" yuske said to hiei. Hiei narrowed his eyes and sakura blushed. "Well guys it looks like you have a new member to the gang! Koenima said out of no where. Sakura smiled. Koenima continued. " you'd all better be getting home we'll get you in case of a emergency see ya chow!" he disappeared. They humans and kurama left. Sakura sat still not knowing what to do until she felt a hand on her shoulder..hieis hand. "come on follow me we'll find a good place to sleep for the night." He softly spoke to her. They went this way and that she was by his side for the whole time. Then they just stopped. Looking around they saw a beautiful place covered with cherry blossoms from the trees and a hot spring. They sat down, keeping their distance from each other.not knowing what to do they stared at each other admiring the look they haven't seen for years. She wanted to make a move but was too afraid of what he might think of her. Same with him. Finally, after waiting 20 min. Sakura got up and sat next to hiei. " Do you still love me am I still yours? She asked the mind busting question. " I--- of course I still love you sakura..even if you really did die..I would still love you...forever." he finished with a nice color of scarlet starting to cover his cheeks. * of course he does.I shouldn't have been so stupid as to doubt his claim to me.the one we had made so long ago* He was still looking away from her. She put one of her hands on his face and turned his head so she could look into his blood-lust ruby red eyes. She ran he hands over his cheek.it was so cold...and she thought fire demons were sopposto be warm. She got up and sat on his lap. He gasped and she sighed. She went and kissed him that was sopposto be a short kiss but had turned into a passionate one in a short matter of seconds. When the kiss broke they were a little bit blushing but not much. Sakura spoke up," so are you warm now?" he just smiled and hugged her. If some one would of seen the two in that beautiful place, they would've seen a demon and a demoness two demon lovers, snuggled up against another the males arms protectively / possively around the females waist. Their expressions calm and happy. Peaceful.
Ok end of chapter next one is really short. Ch 5- good mornings and new missions. Bye-bye Hieis girl