A/n Hey everyone this is my first ever Fanfic that I wrote with my Brother
so please I need feedback ..Tell me its good if it is and if it SUCKED tell
me why and tell me what to work on .well thanks and on to the story .and
the reason I posted it was because Korei-nee-chan told me too.so this story
is dedicated to Korei and our Favorite
Saiyan Vegeta.^_^
Oh and thanks to the Reviewer's I changed some things like a Goku name to Kakarrotto and also to make the story clearer they are Chibi (kids ok) and Freeza never blew up the planet .I hope that clears some things up..
THANKS TO THE REVIEWERS ..really thanks for taking the time to read this story.
Disclaimer: I do NOT own any of the characters of dragonball Z ...
Chapter one: Jawbreaker Battle Z style
"Kids I'm home" said King Vegeta. He had just gotten back form the store with a bag of candy.
"Hey Vegeta! your dads home".
"Otusan!" Vegeta ran to his father with Goku trailing behind him.
"Did you train well my son?"
"Hai"
"Good, do you want a candy as a reward Vegeta?" "No thanks Otusan a Super Elite saiyan doesn't eat candy!"
King Vegeta lifted his eyebrow up with a smirk.
"heh, Kakarrotto!"
"Hai"
"Do you want some candy?" "Hai!!" King Vegeta handed him the small candy ball. Kakarrotto looked at the little funny ball in his hand. 'eh I wonder how you eat this'(thinking to himself ok).
Vegeta gives Kakarrotto a confused look.
"This guy can't possibly be a saiyan, he is too stupid" King Vegeta begins to walk away .
"Make sure you both train harder"
"HAI!!!" both of them said. As soon as King Vegeta left the room Vegeta gave Kakarrotto an angry look.
"KAKARROTTO!!!"
"Nani?!" "Give me that candy" Kakarrotto gives Vegeta a surprised look.
"But you said you didn't want the candy."
"It doesn't matter if I said it, Now hand it over." Kakarrotto started to back away from Vegeta
"NO WAY!"
"Don't you know what your holding? That's not just any candy that's a Jaw Breaker the strongest candy there is" "I don't care" Vegeta lifts his eyebrow up. Vegeta leaps towards Kakarrotto. "Give me that Jaw Breaker!!" Both of them started to fight while covered in a cloud of dust. Vegeta grabs the Jaw Breaker.
"HA, I got it" Kakarrotto leaps and bites onto Vegetas hand.
"Hey, Let go of my hand"
"No way!" vegeta jumps into the air and starts to swing Kakarrotto around.
"My hand isn't a Jaw Breaker you moron" Vegeta grabs Kakarrotto around his neck and tries to pull his hand away.
"Kakarrotto!!!!" Both vegeta and Kakarrotto look down to see his father Bardock.
"Otusan!" "stop fooling around its time to Go!" "but" Bardock glared at Kakarrotto
"Are you arguing with me?!"
"Uh, No" Kakarrotto said with a scard look..
"Heh, too bad Kakarrotto, now the Jaw Breaker belongs to me ." Vegeta looks at the Jaw Breaker and a sweat drop forms on his head..
"eww disgusting, this jaw breaker is covered in drool, now how am I supposed to eat it. Kakarrotto starts to laugh behind vegeta.
"Alright Kakarrotto, I suppose you want it ?"
"Well, if you don't, then I'll take it " Vegeta develops and evil grin on his face.
"ALRIGHT, HERE!!" Vegeta throws the Jaw Breaker into the air towards Kakarrotto and fires a Ki blast.
"What?" the Jaw Breaker gets blasted into little tiny pieces and falls above Kakarrotto.
"My Jaw Breakerrrr" Kakarrotto starts to cry while Vegeta just laughs ..
"That's too bad Kakarrotto..
THE END? So what do you guys think????? My brother helped me out with the fight and other things but remember its our first time ever so .tell us what ya think..^_^.I wanna know if it sucked..
Oh and thanks to the Reviewer's I changed some things like a Goku name to Kakarrotto and also to make the story clearer they are Chibi (kids ok) and Freeza never blew up the planet .I hope that clears some things up..
THANKS TO THE REVIEWERS ..really thanks for taking the time to read this story.
Disclaimer: I do NOT own any of the characters of dragonball Z ...
Chapter one: Jawbreaker Battle Z style
"Kids I'm home" said King Vegeta. He had just gotten back form the store with a bag of candy.
"Hey Vegeta! your dads home".
"Otusan!" Vegeta ran to his father with Goku trailing behind him.
"Did you train well my son?"
"Hai"
"Good, do you want a candy as a reward Vegeta?" "No thanks Otusan a Super Elite saiyan doesn't eat candy!"
King Vegeta lifted his eyebrow up with a smirk.
"heh, Kakarrotto!"
"Hai"
"Do you want some candy?" "Hai!!" King Vegeta handed him the small candy ball. Kakarrotto looked at the little funny ball in his hand. 'eh I wonder how you eat this'(thinking to himself ok).
Vegeta gives Kakarrotto a confused look.
"This guy can't possibly be a saiyan, he is too stupid" King Vegeta begins to walk away .
"Make sure you both train harder"
"HAI!!!" both of them said. As soon as King Vegeta left the room Vegeta gave Kakarrotto an angry look.
"KAKARROTTO!!!"
"Nani?!" "Give me that candy" Kakarrotto gives Vegeta a surprised look.
"But you said you didn't want the candy."
"It doesn't matter if I said it, Now hand it over." Kakarrotto started to back away from Vegeta
"NO WAY!"
"Don't you know what your holding? That's not just any candy that's a Jaw Breaker the strongest candy there is" "I don't care" Vegeta lifts his eyebrow up. Vegeta leaps towards Kakarrotto. "Give me that Jaw Breaker!!" Both of them started to fight while covered in a cloud of dust. Vegeta grabs the Jaw Breaker.
"HA, I got it" Kakarrotto leaps and bites onto Vegetas hand.
"Hey, Let go of my hand"
"No way!" vegeta jumps into the air and starts to swing Kakarrotto around.
"My hand isn't a Jaw Breaker you moron" Vegeta grabs Kakarrotto around his neck and tries to pull his hand away.
"Kakarrotto!!!!" Both vegeta and Kakarrotto look down to see his father Bardock.
"Otusan!" "stop fooling around its time to Go!" "but" Bardock glared at Kakarrotto
"Are you arguing with me?!"
"Uh, No" Kakarrotto said with a scard look..
"Heh, too bad Kakarrotto, now the Jaw Breaker belongs to me ." Vegeta looks at the Jaw Breaker and a sweat drop forms on his head..
"eww disgusting, this jaw breaker is covered in drool, now how am I supposed to eat it. Kakarrotto starts to laugh behind vegeta.
"Alright Kakarrotto, I suppose you want it ?"
"Well, if you don't, then I'll take it " Vegeta develops and evil grin on his face.
"ALRIGHT, HERE!!" Vegeta throws the Jaw Breaker into the air towards Kakarrotto and fires a Ki blast.
"What?" the Jaw Breaker gets blasted into little tiny pieces and falls above Kakarrotto.
"My Jaw Breakerrrr" Kakarrotto starts to cry while Vegeta just laughs ..
"That's too bad Kakarrotto..
THE END? So what do you guys think????? My brother helped me out with the fight and other things but remember its our first time ever so .tell us what ya think..^_^.I wanna know if it sucked..