This is my very first lotr fanfic. Yay! I never thought that I'd write anything, but this is what I came up with while I was "writing" my paper on globalization. Please read and tell me what you think. I'm desperate for feedback! I'm planning on writing multiple chapters. But this is what I have so far.
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This is a Lord of the Rings fanfiction story. I do not own any of the characters or settings in this story. They all belong to Tolkien.
Now, on to the story!
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Adventures in Lindon: An Elrond and Elros Story
I made Elrond and Elros twins (about 8 years old). It's more fun that way!
Chapter 1: Burried in Sand
Elven giggles could be heard on the beach as the High King Gil Galad was being burried in the sand by his twin sons, Elrond and Elros. The twins weren't always his sons, though. He had agreed to foster them as his own when no one else was left to care for them. They were family, after all, and his young heirs. but how could he say no to those adorable twin faces?
"Ada, don't move! We have to pack you in nice and tight!" Elrond explained excitedly while piling sand onto the king.
"Elrond, Elrond, Elrond!" Elros called running up the beach, "I have more water!" But in his excitement, most of the water slopped over the sides of the two pails he carried.
"Elros," Elrond sighed, "Where did it all go?" he looked at his twin confusedly.
"Where did what go?" Elros asked while spilling some of the water onto the sand mound that was the king.
"The water."
"I brought it! Here." Elros handed his twin the other pail.
"But Elros," Elrond looked into the pail, "it's only half full."
"Oh. I'll just get more then!" Elros said happily, packing more sand onto the king.
"Boys," Gil Galad lifted his head a bit to look at the twins (it was all that wasn't burried), "why don't I get more water for you."
"No!" Both twins answered.
"We'd have to start all over if you moved!" Elrond whined.
"Don't you want us to finish?" Elros put on his best pouty face.
"Well, yes, but there are honeycakes waiting for us in the kitchens and..." Gil Galad started, but couldn't finish.
"Honeycakes?" Elrond's eyes grew wide at the thought of his favorite treat. "OOoooo."
"Cm'on 'Rond! Race you!"
The twins took off up the beach and towards the palace, forgetting about the king who was still burried in the sand.
"Boys!" Gil Galad called, "Boys! Wait!" But the twins never came back.
TBC
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Whew, I hope you all liked it, and thanks for reading!
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This is a Lord of the Rings fanfiction story. I do not own any of the characters or settings in this story. They all belong to Tolkien.
Now, on to the story!
:
Adventures in Lindon: An Elrond and Elros Story
I made Elrond and Elros twins (about 8 years old). It's more fun that way!
Chapter 1: Burried in Sand
Elven giggles could be heard on the beach as the High King Gil Galad was being burried in the sand by his twin sons, Elrond and Elros. The twins weren't always his sons, though. He had agreed to foster them as his own when no one else was left to care for them. They were family, after all, and his young heirs. but how could he say no to those adorable twin faces?
"Ada, don't move! We have to pack you in nice and tight!" Elrond explained excitedly while piling sand onto the king.
"Elrond, Elrond, Elrond!" Elros called running up the beach, "I have more water!" But in his excitement, most of the water slopped over the sides of the two pails he carried.
"Elros," Elrond sighed, "Where did it all go?" he looked at his twin confusedly.
"Where did what go?" Elros asked while spilling some of the water onto the sand mound that was the king.
"The water."
"I brought it! Here." Elros handed his twin the other pail.
"But Elros," Elrond looked into the pail, "it's only half full."
"Oh. I'll just get more then!" Elros said happily, packing more sand onto the king.
"Boys," Gil Galad lifted his head a bit to look at the twins (it was all that wasn't burried), "why don't I get more water for you."
"No!" Both twins answered.
"We'd have to start all over if you moved!" Elrond whined.
"Don't you want us to finish?" Elros put on his best pouty face.
"Well, yes, but there are honeycakes waiting for us in the kitchens and..." Gil Galad started, but couldn't finish.
"Honeycakes?" Elrond's eyes grew wide at the thought of his favorite treat. "OOoooo."
"Cm'on 'Rond! Race you!"
The twins took off up the beach and towards the palace, forgetting about the king who was still burried in the sand.
"Boys!" Gil Galad called, "Boys! Wait!" But the twins never came back.
TBC
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Whew, I hope you all liked it, and thanks for reading!