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own the series InuYasha. Nor do I claim to! ^^;
Ack...I stink at writing so any comments at all are appreciated! I would especially love constructive criticisim..or however you spell it! Oh yes..and if you find it necassary to flame me your flames will be read, laughed at, than horsewhipped/publicly humilated! I don't care I much I stink!Also please help me find a TITLE!!!!
Currently Untitled
(An Inu Yasha Fanfic In Progress)
Inu Yasha cursed again. His prey had hidden in the blackest of the shadows. His ears straightened as he listened. He heard a quiet breath.
"There!" he yelled as he swung the Tetsusaiga in a large sideways arc. A shocked gasp escaped as the other tried to get away but not half a second later his life blood was pooling underneath him in a steady although slow flow.
-Did you get him?- a voice asked him in his mind.
"Yeah," Inu Yasha thought back. "I got him"
-Is he bleeding bad?-
"No, the bastard had one hell of a defence."
-Good. Very good. Bring his body back to me quickly before all his life is lost.-
Inu Yasha sheathed the now seemingly ordinary Tetsusaiga after cleaning it on the grass. He then slung the barely alive hanyou over his shoulder and took off into the night.
When he was gone, another figure stepped out from the shadows and grinned. he had heard the mind messages. Hearing them, even if they were not directed at him, was a special talent/gift of his. "Very interesting." the figure whispered to no one in particular. "The Lady, Mistress Kagome, will want to hear about this." And with that, he too vanished into the night.
Ack...I stink at writing so any comments at all are appreciated! I would especially love constructive criticisim..or however you spell it! Oh yes..and if you find it necassary to flame me your flames will be read, laughed at, than horsewhipped/publicly humilated! I don't care I much I stink!Also please help me find a TITLE!!!!
Currently Untitled
(An Inu Yasha Fanfic In Progress)
Inu Yasha cursed again. His prey had hidden in the blackest of the shadows. His ears straightened as he listened. He heard a quiet breath.
"There!" he yelled as he swung the Tetsusaiga in a large sideways arc. A shocked gasp escaped as the other tried to get away but not half a second later his life blood was pooling underneath him in a steady although slow flow.
-Did you get him?- a voice asked him in his mind.
"Yeah," Inu Yasha thought back. "I got him"
-Is he bleeding bad?-
"No, the bastard had one hell of a defence."
-Good. Very good. Bring his body back to me quickly before all his life is lost.-
Inu Yasha sheathed the now seemingly ordinary Tetsusaiga after cleaning it on the grass. He then slung the barely alive hanyou over his shoulder and took off into the night.
When he was gone, another figure stepped out from the shadows and grinned. he had heard the mind messages. Hearing them, even if they were not directed at him, was a special talent/gift of his. "Very interesting." the figure whispered to no one in particular. "The Lady, Mistress Kagome, will want to hear about this." And with that, he too vanished into the night.
