Nicole could feel the presence behind her; she was cursing herself
for being foolish enough to walk home alone in the middle of the night.
She tried to quicken her pace, but the being behind her kept step. It
didn't help that she had turned a blind corner into a series of alley ways.
"This must be how young women get murdered in alleys in the middle of the
night." Nicole continued to speed up from a jog to a run, but whatever was
following her just kept on following. It wasn't until she reached the dead
end that was the brick building that she really gave up hope. She placed
her hands on the dripping, slimy brick. There was no way out of this one,
not unless she could grow wings and fly.
She didn't even hear him before he grabbed her, his stiff fingers stabbing into her shoulders. He looked relatively normal when he forced her to turn around, a little dirty, but not demonic at all. It wasn't until he pulled her coat off her shoulder and exposed her neck that his true face was shown. Yellow piercing eyes and a raised bumpy forehead. "What is he?" That was all Nicole could think.
"Well, aren't you a cutie? I could just eat you up." At this he chuckled to himself, the joke was lost of Nicole. More confused than scared. "Oh come on, eat you up? You don't think it's funny." The vampire took offense to Nicole's perplexed look. "Do you know what I am?" When she shook her head, he let out a heavy sigh; his breath was not the sweetest smelling. "I'm a vampire. I vant to suck your blood." He said in the classic Dracula accent, then flashing his not so pearly white fangs.
"A vampire? They're real?" Nicole asked, now actually a little frightened. She started to struggle in his tight grip.
"Yes, they are real; and you're about to become one." The vampire pulled Nicole to him and bit into her neck, drinking deeply. She pushed at him, tried to get him off of her; but it was no use he was to strong. She could feel it, the blood being pulled from her veins. It was like everything inside her was drying up, she was dying; and it didn't feel good.
Please review, but be nice this is my first fanfic. Constructive criticism only please.
She didn't even hear him before he grabbed her, his stiff fingers stabbing into her shoulders. He looked relatively normal when he forced her to turn around, a little dirty, but not demonic at all. It wasn't until he pulled her coat off her shoulder and exposed her neck that his true face was shown. Yellow piercing eyes and a raised bumpy forehead. "What is he?" That was all Nicole could think.
"Well, aren't you a cutie? I could just eat you up." At this he chuckled to himself, the joke was lost of Nicole. More confused than scared. "Oh come on, eat you up? You don't think it's funny." The vampire took offense to Nicole's perplexed look. "Do you know what I am?" When she shook her head, he let out a heavy sigh; his breath was not the sweetest smelling. "I'm a vampire. I vant to suck your blood." He said in the classic Dracula accent, then flashing his not so pearly white fangs.
"A vampire? They're real?" Nicole asked, now actually a little frightened. She started to struggle in his tight grip.
"Yes, they are real; and you're about to become one." The vampire pulled Nicole to him and bit into her neck, drinking deeply. She pushed at him, tried to get him off of her; but it was no use he was to strong. She could feel it, the blood being pulled from her veins. It was like everything inside her was drying up, she was dying; and it didn't feel good.
Please review, but be nice this is my first fanfic. Constructive criticism only please.