Hey everyone! I want to point out some things here that I forgot to put on
the first page. First of all, I want to thank my little sis for giving me
the idea in the first place! Sooooo,
Thanks Carley! ^_^ Second, I want to thank everyone that has reviewed my
story so far. Soooo,
A Great Big Thank You To, (In order of e-mails.)
Rainwood! Thank you for being my first reviewer!
Nandelin!
Radical Edward! (I love Cowboy BeBop!)
Lynns!
Rage Aomori!
ShadowSpinner!
Imagine-That!
Jedi-Iwakura!
Thank you all for reviewing!
This is my little sis's version of the story. (By the way, she's only 7! ^_^) She watches Inu yasha with me sometimes, so she knows the basic story line. She told me the words, and I typed it up. I hope it's ok that I post this on here, 'cause I know you're supposed to be 13 and all. Oh well.whatever happens, happens I guess. Here's Carley's story..
Kagome and Inu yasha are walking along, looking for the Jewel shards.
Inu yasha: Oooo! A Trampoline! *Starts to climb on the Trampoline, and starts to jump*
Kagome: Inu yasha! Get of there!
Inu yasha: No!
Kagome: SIT!
Inu yasha: *Face plants on Trampoline, then sling shots into the air*
*2 hours later...*
Kagome: *Still standing there waiting for Inu yasha to come down* He's not coming back is he?
Later...
Inu yasha: *Finally comes down. After finally getting over the shock, he goes off in search of Kagome. He finds her at Kaede's hut. Knocks on the door. Kagome opens it.*
Kagome: *Stares at Inu yasha because he was covered in birds*
Author: CUT!!!! What was that?!
Kagome: But, it was in the script!
Author: What was in the script, was that Inu yasha goes up on the air, and gets covered in Tree branches! Let's do this one more time... Three, Two, One, Action!
Scene where Inu yasha shows up at the door.
Inu yasha: *Knocks on the door. Kagome opens it*
Kagome: *Stares at Inu yasha, because he was covered in Tree branches*
Inu yasha: *Stomps in the hut*
Kagome: What happened to YOU?!
Inu yasha: You said sit, so I bounced off the Trampoline and into the air, then I got covered in Tree branches!
Kagome: *Smiles* I REALLY like the word sit!
Inu yasha: *Slams to the floor*
Kagome: OOPS! Sorry! That was an accident!
Author: CUT!!!! That was great! ^_^ Coffee break!
Inu yasha: Yummy!
Author: Sit boy.
Inu yasha: *Slams to the ground*
THE END!
Anyway, I think that's about it. Oh, Be sure to watch for my next fic, 'No one else but you' I'm still fixing it up a little, so it might be awhile. Anyway, I gotta go now. (Inu yasha's still tied up in my living room! ^_^ We need him for the next fic!)
BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~¤~ Polishing Stars ~¤~
Rainwood! Thank you for being my first reviewer!
Nandelin!
Radical Edward! (I love Cowboy BeBop!)
Lynns!
Rage Aomori!
ShadowSpinner!
Imagine-That!
Jedi-Iwakura!
Thank you all for reviewing!
This is my little sis's version of the story. (By the way, she's only 7! ^_^) She watches Inu yasha with me sometimes, so she knows the basic story line. She told me the words, and I typed it up. I hope it's ok that I post this on here, 'cause I know you're supposed to be 13 and all. Oh well.whatever happens, happens I guess. Here's Carley's story..
Kagome and Inu yasha are walking along, looking for the Jewel shards.
Inu yasha: Oooo! A Trampoline! *Starts to climb on the Trampoline, and starts to jump*
Kagome: Inu yasha! Get of there!
Inu yasha: No!
Kagome: SIT!
Inu yasha: *Face plants on Trampoline, then sling shots into the air*
*2 hours later...*
Kagome: *Still standing there waiting for Inu yasha to come down* He's not coming back is he?
Later...
Inu yasha: *Finally comes down. After finally getting over the shock, he goes off in search of Kagome. He finds her at Kaede's hut. Knocks on the door. Kagome opens it.*
Kagome: *Stares at Inu yasha because he was covered in birds*
Author: CUT!!!! What was that?!
Kagome: But, it was in the script!
Author: What was in the script, was that Inu yasha goes up on the air, and gets covered in Tree branches! Let's do this one more time... Three, Two, One, Action!
Scene where Inu yasha shows up at the door.
Inu yasha: *Knocks on the door. Kagome opens it*
Kagome: *Stares at Inu yasha, because he was covered in Tree branches*
Inu yasha: *Stomps in the hut*
Kagome: What happened to YOU?!
Inu yasha: You said sit, so I bounced off the Trampoline and into the air, then I got covered in Tree branches!
Kagome: *Smiles* I REALLY like the word sit!
Inu yasha: *Slams to the floor*
Kagome: OOPS! Sorry! That was an accident!
Author: CUT!!!! That was great! ^_^ Coffee break!
Inu yasha: Yummy!
Author: Sit boy.
Inu yasha: *Slams to the ground*
THE END!
Anyway, I think that's about it. Oh, Be sure to watch for my next fic, 'No one else but you' I'm still fixing it up a little, so it might be awhile. Anyway, I gotta go now. (Inu yasha's still tied up in my living room! ^_^ We need him for the next fic!)
BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~¤~ Polishing Stars ~¤~