^_^
Did I just get the hurry up?
Me?
Heh
Funniest thing that happened all day
Yet again I apologise for the lateness of my updates, and for the next ten weeks I won't have time again 'cos school's just started it's fourth term and I got to do well, but on weekends I'll try to get the chapters done.
Oh and whoever asked for Goten to be in the story more, I forgot who wrote that.. This is for you.
Anyway, I'm not that good at writing fight scenes, but I shall try.
Disclaimer: DOES ANY1 REALLY THINK I OWN THIS DRAGONBALLZ?! FOR THOSE OF YOU WHO DO, I DON'T
Chapter 24 The fight, the loss, and the little demi-saiyan who looks like him
The air was thick with tension.
It was almost visible.
Gohan was standing in the air, his battle glow alight.
The humans on the ground were confused, wondering who this glowing being was, and if he was good or evil.
Even though Gohan's thoughts were mainly fixed on his 'ex-father' the thought of humans being absolutely pathetic and dependent on lies.
The thought made his smirk grow, and he cursed the fact that he was half- human.
**On the ground**
Chaos was everywhere.
All around the globe, people were demanding answers, panicking, praying, and the like.
Most faces would look towards the saviour of Earth, the man who defeated the awful Cell monster, Hercule.
But it appeared that he to had disappeared of the face of the planet to.
Everyone feared that something had killed him, perhaps the reason that the angels were here had disposed of him.
And this just added to the turmoil.
But there was one person at least who wouldn't take this sitting down.
She was young.
She was female.
She was Hercule's daughter.
She was Videl.
As soon as she had heard that her father could not be found for unexplained reasons, she had immediately set off to the scene where the small army had been seen, and where the angels currently floated.
**Capsule Corporation**
"Trunks where's Veggie?"
"I thought he told you not to call him that."
"Well he's not here to hit me on the head, so I think I can get away with it."
"You're evil Goten."
"I am not, you take that back." The three-year-old launched himself at the purple haired youth.
The two rolled on the ground for a while, eventually Goten with all his rage pinned Trunks beneath him. "TAKE IT BACK TRUNKS!" Goten yelled.
"Fine, just get off me." Goten inched off.
"You're not evil Goten, I'm sorry I said that."
"Good, 'cos evil's not good."
Trunks looked at Goten with his 'what and idiot look' "Goten, that's exactly the point, evil is the opposite of good."
Goten smiled.
"Where's Dad anyway?" Trunks asked, he knew his mother was in her laboratory, but where his father was, was a complete mystery to him.
"Well why don't we go find him?"
"How are we going to do that?"
"I don't know, don't you know how to track energy?"
Trunks blinked in amazement, miracles could happen, so Goten could have a good idea.
"I'm just going to write a note to tell Mum that we've gone to find Dad, and that we'll be back." Trunks said matter-of-factly, as he scribbled down on a piece of paper in his messy four-year-old-genius handwriting.
Goten jumped from foot to foot, "Come on Trunks."
"Finished, lets go."
Goten and Trunks powered up as much as they were able and blasted out the wall literally.
**Wherever Krillin is at** (* * Equals thoughts)
*Aw man can why can't someone else sense energy other then me, that's huge, I mean Vegeta's there.and GOKU!
What's Goku doing here?!
And who's the bad guy?
And is that Goten and Trunks racing towards them?!
Man this is not my day
I just know I'm going to get my butt kicked, I just know it.*
**Back to Gohan, Goku and Vegeta**
"You won't hurt us, you don't have it in you." Goku said to Gohan.
"I have more in me than you'll ever now, because as of now your lives are officially forfeit, and you won't know much more after that."
With this Gohan flew forward both arms outstretched like a birds wings.
Both Goku and Vegeta were caught offguard and the force of Gohan's forearms colliding with their necks sent them plummeting to the ground.
Their bodies created large craters in the concrete of the street.
Puny earth creatures.a.k.a humans screamed and ran; though some stood transfixed.
It was now obvious that this glowing being was not on their side.
The man with the halo and Vegeta stood up not hurt at all.
Their energy flared up around them and they launched back into the sky.
Videl had landed on the scene, and to most people this was a relief.
It meant that some order of sanity was going to be restored to their existence.
She clambered out of her bright yellow ugly plane thing, and was greeted by many individuals.
She looked towards the sky, there three flame covered people floated.
Suddenly the blue flamed and the Red flame suddenly turned gold.
All Videl could say was "The gold fighters."
She immediately got back into her plane, and took to the air; she wanted a closer look at these fighters and their tricks.
She circled around the fighters; they weren't too fussed, for they were concentrating on each other, and one more Arial vehicle wasn't going to hurt them.
Videl gazed at these fighters.
Their stance she had to admit was flawless; even she could see that.
But something about them struck her suspicious, especially the younger one, the one with the crown.
Suddenly it hit her.
IT WAS GOHAN!
She'd heard the rumours that gold fighters had turned up at the highschool, and it had been Gohan, and one of these others, but why were they fighting?
Gohan smirked "Your power has grown, both of you, but unfortunately for you, so has mine."
He clenched his hands, and yelled.
Suddenly a whole heap of wind swirled, and light flashed.
No one could see what was happening, and everyone, excluding Vegeta and Goku, on the ground and in the air were being knocked around by the force of the wind.
The helicopters and planes alike were out of control, crashing into each other.
They all hit the ground.
Debris and bodies were everywhere, and Videl was right in the thick of it.
She was motionless a large gash on her head.
As were everyone else, but with differing injuries.
Gohan smirked a cocky grin.
"You all ready?" Goku could only grimace and nod, he hated to do this.
Vegeta crossed his arms and said, "Bring it." (A/N BRING IT ON STRIKES BACK! MUAHAHAHAHA ^_^)
Gohan lunged forward one arm outstretched.
Vegeta grabbed that limb and hurled him threw the air.
Gohan flipped and turned before exerting his energy and making himself stop.
He brought both hands forward and fired an individual blast from each towards each male in front of him.
They both phased out and reappeared behind Gohan.
Gohan turned blocked a hit aimed at him by Goku, and kneed Goku in the stomach.
Vegeta caught him off guard and brought both arms down on his neck, putting a little energy attack into it at the same time.
Gohan plummeted but recovered and flew up, he went straight for Vegeta, phased out right before he hit him, Vegeta turned expecting him to find him there, but all he got was a blast in the back from Gohan behind him
Goku grabbed Gohan's foot and swung him around like a lasso and hurled him into a building, followed shortly by a energy blast.
"Give up son, you can't win against both of us." Goku said.
"You're not my father, and you underestimate me."
Gohan's voice appeared to have come from in the building, but in reality he was throwing his voice.
He was really up in the air, behind Vegeta and Goku.
He formed a powerful energy ball in his hands and fired it, it split into two beams one heading for Goku and one heading for Vegeta.
Goku turned.
He didn't see the beam heading for him, but he saw the one heading for Vegeta.
"Vegeta look out!" He called.
Vegeta saw an instant to late and covered his head with arms in a attempt to protect himself.
The blast crashed into Vegeta hurling him into the pavement.
The impact created a crater, and Vegeta's smoking body could be seen at the bottom of it.
His spandex was shredded, and he had multiple cuts all over him.
He was unconscious, and back in his normal not transformed state.
Goku looked from the building where he presumed his son had been, and looked to the sky where Gohan hovered.
He wondered how his son did that, he was secretly proud of his son for becoming so powerful, but not what he'd become.
Then he caught sight of the bright energy that was heading towards him, and all he could do was attempt to protect himself.
Goku joined Vegeta on the ground in the same state as he.
Gohan smiled at his victory, he was a bit sore, but he'd live.
Suddenly he heard his father's voice in his mind.
'Son, it's time you came back to this dimension, we need to discuss what happened."
Gohan thought back.
"As you command father."
And he vanished.
Krillin arrived on the scene a few minutes after Gohan disappeared.
The site was totalled.
Craters were all around, in the buildings.
Bodies were everywhere.
Krillin held his breath.
There was so much carnage.
He felt for Goku and Vegeta's energy signal.
They were both faint.
He followed it to two craters that were close together.
There his best friend, and ex-enemy lay unconscious.
"Krillin!" A small voice called from behind him.
Krillin turned to find Goten and Trunks flying up to him.
"Hey guys, you want to give me a hand with your father's before the police and cleanup crews get here?"
"Sure.." Trunks said.
Goten looked confused.
"Dads?"
Krillin gave Goten a sympathetic look, he took one of Goten's hands and one of Trunks' and floated down with them into the crater where Goku lay.
He released Goten's hand.
Goten stared at the man in front of him who was on the ground.
"He looks like me." He whispered.
...
and that's it for now.
Next chapter Goten gets to talk to his father for the first time
And I apologise if the fight scene wasn't very good, I don't write them a lot, and it's a lot harder when they're in the air.
Heh ^_^
Anyway review and I'll write more.Deal?
Did I just get the hurry up?
Me?
Heh
Funniest thing that happened all day
Yet again I apologise for the lateness of my updates, and for the next ten weeks I won't have time again 'cos school's just started it's fourth term and I got to do well, but on weekends I'll try to get the chapters done.
Oh and whoever asked for Goten to be in the story more, I forgot who wrote that.. This is for you.
Anyway, I'm not that good at writing fight scenes, but I shall try.
Disclaimer: DOES ANY1 REALLY THINK I OWN THIS DRAGONBALLZ?! FOR THOSE OF YOU WHO DO, I DON'T
Chapter 24 The fight, the loss, and the little demi-saiyan who looks like him
The air was thick with tension.
It was almost visible.
Gohan was standing in the air, his battle glow alight.
The humans on the ground were confused, wondering who this glowing being was, and if he was good or evil.
Even though Gohan's thoughts were mainly fixed on his 'ex-father' the thought of humans being absolutely pathetic and dependent on lies.
The thought made his smirk grow, and he cursed the fact that he was half- human.
**On the ground**
Chaos was everywhere.
All around the globe, people were demanding answers, panicking, praying, and the like.
Most faces would look towards the saviour of Earth, the man who defeated the awful Cell monster, Hercule.
But it appeared that he to had disappeared of the face of the planet to.
Everyone feared that something had killed him, perhaps the reason that the angels were here had disposed of him.
And this just added to the turmoil.
But there was one person at least who wouldn't take this sitting down.
She was young.
She was female.
She was Hercule's daughter.
She was Videl.
As soon as she had heard that her father could not be found for unexplained reasons, she had immediately set off to the scene where the small army had been seen, and where the angels currently floated.
**Capsule Corporation**
"Trunks where's Veggie?"
"I thought he told you not to call him that."
"Well he's not here to hit me on the head, so I think I can get away with it."
"You're evil Goten."
"I am not, you take that back." The three-year-old launched himself at the purple haired youth.
The two rolled on the ground for a while, eventually Goten with all his rage pinned Trunks beneath him. "TAKE IT BACK TRUNKS!" Goten yelled.
"Fine, just get off me." Goten inched off.
"You're not evil Goten, I'm sorry I said that."
"Good, 'cos evil's not good."
Trunks looked at Goten with his 'what and idiot look' "Goten, that's exactly the point, evil is the opposite of good."
Goten smiled.
"Where's Dad anyway?" Trunks asked, he knew his mother was in her laboratory, but where his father was, was a complete mystery to him.
"Well why don't we go find him?"
"How are we going to do that?"
"I don't know, don't you know how to track energy?"
Trunks blinked in amazement, miracles could happen, so Goten could have a good idea.
"I'm just going to write a note to tell Mum that we've gone to find Dad, and that we'll be back." Trunks said matter-of-factly, as he scribbled down on a piece of paper in his messy four-year-old-genius handwriting.
Goten jumped from foot to foot, "Come on Trunks."
"Finished, lets go."
Goten and Trunks powered up as much as they were able and blasted out the wall literally.
**Wherever Krillin is at** (* * Equals thoughts)
*Aw man can why can't someone else sense energy other then me, that's huge, I mean Vegeta's there.and GOKU!
What's Goku doing here?!
And who's the bad guy?
And is that Goten and Trunks racing towards them?!
Man this is not my day
I just know I'm going to get my butt kicked, I just know it.*
**Back to Gohan, Goku and Vegeta**
"You won't hurt us, you don't have it in you." Goku said to Gohan.
"I have more in me than you'll ever now, because as of now your lives are officially forfeit, and you won't know much more after that."
With this Gohan flew forward both arms outstretched like a birds wings.
Both Goku and Vegeta were caught offguard and the force of Gohan's forearms colliding with their necks sent them plummeting to the ground.
Their bodies created large craters in the concrete of the street.
Puny earth creatures.a.k.a humans screamed and ran; though some stood transfixed.
It was now obvious that this glowing being was not on their side.
The man with the halo and Vegeta stood up not hurt at all.
Their energy flared up around them and they launched back into the sky.
Videl had landed on the scene, and to most people this was a relief.
It meant that some order of sanity was going to be restored to their existence.
She clambered out of her bright yellow ugly plane thing, and was greeted by many individuals.
She looked towards the sky, there three flame covered people floated.
Suddenly the blue flamed and the Red flame suddenly turned gold.
All Videl could say was "The gold fighters."
She immediately got back into her plane, and took to the air; she wanted a closer look at these fighters and their tricks.
She circled around the fighters; they weren't too fussed, for they were concentrating on each other, and one more Arial vehicle wasn't going to hurt them.
Videl gazed at these fighters.
Their stance she had to admit was flawless; even she could see that.
But something about them struck her suspicious, especially the younger one, the one with the crown.
Suddenly it hit her.
IT WAS GOHAN!
She'd heard the rumours that gold fighters had turned up at the highschool, and it had been Gohan, and one of these others, but why were they fighting?
Gohan smirked "Your power has grown, both of you, but unfortunately for you, so has mine."
He clenched his hands, and yelled.
Suddenly a whole heap of wind swirled, and light flashed.
No one could see what was happening, and everyone, excluding Vegeta and Goku, on the ground and in the air were being knocked around by the force of the wind.
The helicopters and planes alike were out of control, crashing into each other.
They all hit the ground.
Debris and bodies were everywhere, and Videl was right in the thick of it.
She was motionless a large gash on her head.
As were everyone else, but with differing injuries.
Gohan smirked a cocky grin.
"You all ready?" Goku could only grimace and nod, he hated to do this.
Vegeta crossed his arms and said, "Bring it." (A/N BRING IT ON STRIKES BACK! MUAHAHAHAHA ^_^)
Gohan lunged forward one arm outstretched.
Vegeta grabbed that limb and hurled him threw the air.
Gohan flipped and turned before exerting his energy and making himself stop.
He brought both hands forward and fired an individual blast from each towards each male in front of him.
They both phased out and reappeared behind Gohan.
Gohan turned blocked a hit aimed at him by Goku, and kneed Goku in the stomach.
Vegeta caught him off guard and brought both arms down on his neck, putting a little energy attack into it at the same time.
Gohan plummeted but recovered and flew up, he went straight for Vegeta, phased out right before he hit him, Vegeta turned expecting him to find him there, but all he got was a blast in the back from Gohan behind him
Goku grabbed Gohan's foot and swung him around like a lasso and hurled him into a building, followed shortly by a energy blast.
"Give up son, you can't win against both of us." Goku said.
"You're not my father, and you underestimate me."
Gohan's voice appeared to have come from in the building, but in reality he was throwing his voice.
He was really up in the air, behind Vegeta and Goku.
He formed a powerful energy ball in his hands and fired it, it split into two beams one heading for Goku and one heading for Vegeta.
Goku turned.
He didn't see the beam heading for him, but he saw the one heading for Vegeta.
"Vegeta look out!" He called.
Vegeta saw an instant to late and covered his head with arms in a attempt to protect himself.
The blast crashed into Vegeta hurling him into the pavement.
The impact created a crater, and Vegeta's smoking body could be seen at the bottom of it.
His spandex was shredded, and he had multiple cuts all over him.
He was unconscious, and back in his normal not transformed state.
Goku looked from the building where he presumed his son had been, and looked to the sky where Gohan hovered.
He wondered how his son did that, he was secretly proud of his son for becoming so powerful, but not what he'd become.
Then he caught sight of the bright energy that was heading towards him, and all he could do was attempt to protect himself.
Goku joined Vegeta on the ground in the same state as he.
Gohan smiled at his victory, he was a bit sore, but he'd live.
Suddenly he heard his father's voice in his mind.
'Son, it's time you came back to this dimension, we need to discuss what happened."
Gohan thought back.
"As you command father."
And he vanished.
Krillin arrived on the scene a few minutes after Gohan disappeared.
The site was totalled.
Craters were all around, in the buildings.
Bodies were everywhere.
Krillin held his breath.
There was so much carnage.
He felt for Goku and Vegeta's energy signal.
They were both faint.
He followed it to two craters that were close together.
There his best friend, and ex-enemy lay unconscious.
"Krillin!" A small voice called from behind him.
Krillin turned to find Goten and Trunks flying up to him.
"Hey guys, you want to give me a hand with your father's before the police and cleanup crews get here?"
"Sure.." Trunks said.
Goten looked confused.
"Dads?"
Krillin gave Goten a sympathetic look, he took one of Goten's hands and one of Trunks' and floated down with them into the crater where Goku lay.
He released Goten's hand.
Goten stared at the man in front of him who was on the ground.
"He looks like me." He whispered.
...
and that's it for now.
Next chapter Goten gets to talk to his father for the first time
And I apologise if the fight scene wasn't very good, I don't write them a lot, and it's a lot harder when they're in the air.
Heh ^_^
Anyway review and I'll write more.Deal?