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He let his feet step forward to the empty air, which didn't seem to be able to hold him.

Then he saw Lian and landed straight in to her car. Blood spurted everywhere, screams aroused everywhere and everyone started to panic.

But the only person to be calm and still was Lian.

She stood there.

Frozen.

Every movement of Keith's drop seemed to replay itself in her mind.

Keith's soul moved towards her and whispered a word.

A word which didn't exist anymore.

The word.

The word, love.

All of a sudden everything seemed to freeze. Not a single word could be heard. Not a single movement was made.

Suddenly, the silence seemed to shatter into a million pieces with Lian's scream.

An endless scream.

Then Keith's soul once moved towards her and whispered four words.

"Only if you knew."
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