Chapter five:
Face it girl!!!!
^^^^^ one Saturday after noon ^^^^^
ruriko was waiting at the park for shun coz they have a date that afternoon coz shun doesn't have to accompany miyu coz it's a weekend. So ruriko was waiting, and waiting, and waiting until she saw someone coming whom she thought was shun but it was actually kaoru.
"konichiwa!!! Ikusawa-sempai!!!!" kaoru said
"konichiwa! Kaoru-chan"
"what are you doing here all alone??"
"oh!! I'm just waiting for shun again but I think he stood me up again so could I go with you"
"really??? I can't believe him!!! Now I can't count how many times he stood you up!!! Anyway I'm going to the mall are you sure you want to go with me??"
"hai!! I loved to go with you anyway I need to buy shun a gift for our 3rd month anniversary"
"when is it???"
"at the 18th .."
"that's next Saturday why buy a gift so early?"
"well I think I will forget it or something"
"oh well come on!!! We should go now!!!!!"
^^^^^ at the mall ^^^^^
"hey what you think about this ring??" ruriko said while pointing at a silver ring with s on the middle and horizontal lines for design.
"that would be just perfect!!"
"you think he'll like it?"
"why not it's pretty and expensive and it comes straight from your heart"
"ok then I'll buy it" ruriko said why buying the ring
"hey!! How about eating before we roam again please ikusawa-sempai!! I'm hungry"
"okay.. Where?"
"I know!!!" kaoru said excitedly while pulling ruriko
^^^^^at a restaurant^^^^^
Ruriko and kaoru was talking when kaoru saw shun with miyu....
"don't look now! Please don't!!!" kaoru pleaded
"doishite?? Kaoru-chan??" ruriko said then she looked out the window and saw shun with miyu. She was shocked and not only shocked she was hurt coz shun did not make It on their date coz of he was with miyu. So she ran out of the restaurant with kaoru following her and asking her to be patient. Then as fast as lightning ruriko was in front of shun and miyu who had stopped from laughing about something.
"BAKERU!!!!! UKIYA, SHUN!!! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME!!!" ruriko said with tears flowing down from her eyes
"Ikusawa-sempai!!! Calm down please."kaoru beg
"gomenasai!! ruri-chan I didn't mean to ..." shun explained
"what you didn't mean to stood me up and go out with another girl is that it!! Tell me shun how many times have you stood me up!! And how many times you've promise me that you will spend a day with me!!!!"
"let me explain.."
"I don't need your explanation shun!! Just don't you talk to me anymore!! And I don't want to see you anymore!! Don't you dare call me or come to my house!!! I don't need you anymore!!!"
"please. ruri-chan doesn't say that.. Let me explain"
"you have nothing more to explain shun!! And don't call me ruri-chan from now on.. The only time I'll be with you is when we have a mission or something!!! That have something to do with defending Japan from invaders or something!!" ruriko said throwing the ring that she bought at shun and walked out.
"looked at what you have done ukiya-sempai!!! Did you know that ikusawa- sempai just bought this for your 3rd month anniversary!! How could you do this to her!!! You know what you are really baka good thing I didn't become your girlfriend or else I'll be heart broken like ikusawa-sempai!!" kaoru said angrily
"kaoru let me explain."
"don't explain to me!! Explain it to ikusawa-sempai!!! And don't you tell me that I didn't warn you about this!!!"
then shun ran after ruriko.
"shun-kun.. wait up!!" miyu called
"don't you dare move another step!! You've done enough to break a good relationship!!!" kaoru said while stopping her
"what do you mean"
"can't you see their relationship was so good till you came here!!!"
"but I didn't mean to. I just want to spend my days here with shun coz I love him so much and I am going back to England next Tuesday. And I don't want to give my love up that easily specially to a sniveler!!"
"why did you think I liked giving up my love for him too"
"you loved him too??"
" yes and I was willing to give it up for his happiness coz I know that if he becomes mine and he doesn't love me he would not be happy like when his with ikusawa-sempai!! Coz he loves her too much"
" maybe you are right?? But what can I do to make it up??"
" you can do nothing it's already done for them I know my ikusawa-sempai when she said she's done , she's really done!! And nothing can change her decision except for ukiya-sempai whom she just broke up with "
ruriko went home and cried while shun tried to talk to her and tried to call her at the phone but no one answered then finally he gave up and went to his room. He cried and shout for almost all evening ruriko could hear him but she was badly hurt she could hear him say "oh ruri-chan please understand I didn't mean to go out with miyu and stood you up I love you.I love you. aishiteru...aishiteru...a..ishi...te...ru...... please ruri-chan please forgive me. please.." shun was still pleading till he fell asleep..
^^^^^ the next day Sunday ^^^^^
Phone rings..
"shun I told you not to call me again didn't I!!!" ruriko answered the phone
"ohayou ikusawa-sempai!! It's me kaoru did I woke you up??"
"oh!! Kaoru chan I'm sorry I thought you were shun why did you call??"
"oh nothing I was just worried about you?? Daijobu ikusawa-sempai??"
"I'm fine thank you for being there for me kaoru-chan and for bringing me to the mall yesterday if not for you I would never found out about it."
"about that, well you see after you and shun walked out miyu was supposed to ran after ukiya-sempai but I managed to keep her there with me and tell you she was doing all of it on purpose and she is going to go back to England at Tuesday. And she likes ukiya-sempai so I think you don't need to be angry to ukiya-sempai coz it's not really his fault you know, it was all miyu' s fault."
"but kaoru if shun didn't really want to go with her then he could have done it. Anyway past is past nothing can change my decision now"
"if that's so well I also called to tell you that the commander wants us to go to the headquarters at 3 pm sharp. So I got to get ready ja!!"
"ja!!"
after that kaoru called shun to tell him about the meeting coz she knows that ruriko will not talk to him after what happened. Ruriko got ready to go and her eyes was still swollen coz she almost cried her heart out last night when she was walking towards a sidewalk that can sink to the headquarters shun ran towards her so they went to the headquarters together shun started to talk to her but it was like he was talking to nothing coz she never said a word to her so they went to the commander's office.
"ikusawa-sempai!!" kaoru ran towards her
"have you and ukiya-sempai you know.?"
"nope!! He just ran towards me and he joined me going here" ruriko said
"okay since all of you are here bancho and the others are here too they just arrived yesterday night. And I have received and information that the last invaders are going to attack tomorrow so I want you to be alert of urgent meeting ok that's all you may go now!" the commander told them
"so how's your relationship with princess ruriko?? Shun???" bancho asked
"well I wouldn't say that it's okay coz we just broke up yesterday"
"doishite??"
"coz of the new girl miyu"
" you broke princess ruriko' s heart?????"
"iie!!! demo I think I did, demo I did not mean to"
"well you just ruined a very lucky relationship"
"yah I know!!"
"well I got to go"
"ja!!"
"ja!!"
shun went home and thought about all that just happened. Ruriko was home getting herself busy so that she will not think of shun what ever but she really could think of shun every time she do something she could help of think of shun so she decided to listen to the radio instead so she was lying at her sofa, listening to her radio....
radio: my shattered dreams and broken heart are mending on a shelf I saw you holding hands Standing close to some one else Now I sit all alone wishing all my feelings was gone I give my best to you Nothing for me to do
*But a one last cry, one last cry Before I leave it all behind I got to put you out of my mind This time Stop living a lie I guessed I'm down to my last cry
I was here you were there Guessed we never could agreed while the sun shines on you I need some love to rain on me Still I sit All alone wishing all my feelings Was gone Got to get over you Nothing for me to do
(Repeat *)
I know I got to be strong Coz life goes on and on and on I'm gonna dry my eyes right after I give my (repeat*)
I guessed I'm down to my last cry
Ruriko was crying at the songs she hears she remembers all that happy and sad times of shun and her. So listening to her radio she fell asleep and she even forgot to eat her dinner.
^^^^^ at school^^^^^
ruriko was looking at her table instead of the window she usually looked on. Shun was stealing glances at her even the teacher notice shun being so silent miyu was just looking at shun and ruriko' s sad faces. then a woman entered their class room ruriko recognized it as the commander's secretary then called shun and ruriko at the principals office. Miyu was nervous that it was going to call her too. So ruriko and shun ran to the principal's office where everybody was there already and then the whole office floor sank and they were at the commander's office at the head quarter's
"gatekeepers I called you coz of an invader at the Tokyo tower go now and vanish it!!!!"
"ryokai!! A.e.g.i.s!!!"
when they got to the tower they saw the invader in a form of a big ball with spikes so fei ran in front of in attacked it with her fire panda
"reiko play it!!!" ukiya shouted
then reiko was playing her dazzling melody then the ground was shaking then the invaders was scattered in the human from with sunglasses but Instead of machine guns they were carrying bazookas
"ayayayayaya!!! When did they started to use bazookas??" fei asked
"arrow of light!!!" ruriko attacked then an invader shot her with it's bazooka
"daijobu ruri-chan??" shun called worried
ruriko wasn't hurt that much she can still stand up with out saying a word she stood up and shot arrows at the invaders kaoru then attacked it with her kaoru punch and kick then fei' s fire panda kaoru and fei was knocked down by a blow of bazooka towards them but they managed to avoid it. And they weren't' t seriously hurt then shun attacked it with his ultra whirlwind slash then ruriko was aiming at the red invader reiko was still playing her dazzling melody, before ruriko shot her arrow a bazooka hit her at her back and fell at the empty lot near then at shun' s anger he attacked it with his full force like when the time he attacked reiji kagayama. Then the invaders was defeated. Then injured shun ran to the lot where ruriko fell and kneeled
"ruri-chan!! Ruri-chan!!!! Wake up please wake up!!! Don't leave me!!!! Ruri-chan!! Ruri-chan!! Ruri-chan!!" shun called then ruriko opened her eyes
"ukiya-kun??" she said weakly
"ruri-chan please forgive me.."
"ha.hai"
"aishiteru ruri-chan"
"aishiteru my shun-kun" then ruriko fainted shun thought ruriko was dead so he cried and cried. Ruriko was healing herself with her gate of light still fainted shun grabbed a knife near him and stabbed himself. The ruriko woke up and saw the dying shun. Her weak body went towards him and she tried to heal him but her powers only gave him just few more seconds to live. Ruriko cried her whole heart and soul almost went out her body.
"ukiya-kun, don't leave me, I forgave you didn't I??? Please don't"
"ru..ri..chan- I love you very much"
" I love you too" then ruriko saw the knife that shun used and before kaoru could stop her she stab herself and her body lay near shun's dying body. Shun held ruriko' s hands in his .
"ukiya-kun."
"ruri-chan. we'll be. together. for.. whole. eternity "
"ruriko nodded then shun tried to kissed her one more time but his sight darkened and they died at the same time
"aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!" kaoru shouted then the others ran towards her and saw ruriko and shun died in each other's arms
"kaoru-chan are you okay??" fei asked
"iie!!! They killed themselves!!!" kaoru cried
"they what??"
"killed themselves with that knife"
^^^^^ Tuesday^^^^^
"I'm so sorry for them kaoru.."miyu said kaoru did not answer
"I really shouldn't have done that if only I know it would end up killing them both" miyu said she was crying
"good thing you realized that but it's over are you happy now!!!"
"please I was just.."
"just what!!, this is all your fault you know!!!"
"I'm sorry"
"I saw the whole thing you know. They died coz they loved each other so much and they decided to be with each other for eternity "
"then we should not be crying coz they died happy right?"
"I'm just crying coz I will not see that relationship last and I want to see it"
"I'm really sorry"
"I know"
"well I better go now my plane will be leaving at 8 so ja!"
"ja!"
"kaoru-chan I think you should take a rest now" fei said
"no I want to see them until I can"
"well staring at them would not bring them back you know"
"I know fei!! And I'm thinking how am I going to adjust coz from now on no more delicious cakes and no more shun teasing ruriko it will me really silent now.. I will really missed all of that.. Did you know that they were supposed to have their 3rd month anniversary at Friday now they could not celebrate it with us. oh fei I really gonna miss them"
" look at the bright side. At least their relationship will last for eternity"
"but I want to see it last that way!! And I miss their fighting and their sweetness "
"me too. me too.."
^^^^^^^^^owari^^^^^^^^^^
author's notes:
well that's it!!! I hoped you liked it!! And please review!!! Maybe I'll stop making fanfics about gatekeeper and make sailor moons. Anyway after another sailor moon fanfic maybe another gate keepers I hope you review!!! So clicked that go button!!!! And review!!!!
^^^^^ one Saturday after noon ^^^^^
ruriko was waiting at the park for shun coz they have a date that afternoon coz shun doesn't have to accompany miyu coz it's a weekend. So ruriko was waiting, and waiting, and waiting until she saw someone coming whom she thought was shun but it was actually kaoru.
"konichiwa!!! Ikusawa-sempai!!!!" kaoru said
"konichiwa! Kaoru-chan"
"what are you doing here all alone??"
"oh!! I'm just waiting for shun again but I think he stood me up again so could I go with you"
"really??? I can't believe him!!! Now I can't count how many times he stood you up!!! Anyway I'm going to the mall are you sure you want to go with me??"
"hai!! I loved to go with you anyway I need to buy shun a gift for our 3rd month anniversary"
"when is it???"
"at the 18th .."
"that's next Saturday why buy a gift so early?"
"well I think I will forget it or something"
"oh well come on!!! We should go now!!!!!"
^^^^^ at the mall ^^^^^
"hey what you think about this ring??" ruriko said while pointing at a silver ring with s on the middle and horizontal lines for design.
"that would be just perfect!!"
"you think he'll like it?"
"why not it's pretty and expensive and it comes straight from your heart"
"ok then I'll buy it" ruriko said why buying the ring
"hey!! How about eating before we roam again please ikusawa-sempai!! I'm hungry"
"okay.. Where?"
"I know!!!" kaoru said excitedly while pulling ruriko
^^^^^at a restaurant^^^^^
Ruriko and kaoru was talking when kaoru saw shun with miyu....
"don't look now! Please don't!!!" kaoru pleaded
"doishite?? Kaoru-chan??" ruriko said then she looked out the window and saw shun with miyu. She was shocked and not only shocked she was hurt coz shun did not make It on their date coz of he was with miyu. So she ran out of the restaurant with kaoru following her and asking her to be patient. Then as fast as lightning ruriko was in front of shun and miyu who had stopped from laughing about something.
"BAKERU!!!!! UKIYA, SHUN!!! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME!!!" ruriko said with tears flowing down from her eyes
"Ikusawa-sempai!!! Calm down please."kaoru beg
"gomenasai!! ruri-chan I didn't mean to ..." shun explained
"what you didn't mean to stood me up and go out with another girl is that it!! Tell me shun how many times have you stood me up!! And how many times you've promise me that you will spend a day with me!!!!"
"let me explain.."
"I don't need your explanation shun!! Just don't you talk to me anymore!! And I don't want to see you anymore!! Don't you dare call me or come to my house!!! I don't need you anymore!!!"
"please. ruri-chan doesn't say that.. Let me explain"
"you have nothing more to explain shun!! And don't call me ruri-chan from now on.. The only time I'll be with you is when we have a mission or something!!! That have something to do with defending Japan from invaders or something!!" ruriko said throwing the ring that she bought at shun and walked out.
"looked at what you have done ukiya-sempai!!! Did you know that ikusawa- sempai just bought this for your 3rd month anniversary!! How could you do this to her!!! You know what you are really baka good thing I didn't become your girlfriend or else I'll be heart broken like ikusawa-sempai!!" kaoru said angrily
"kaoru let me explain."
"don't explain to me!! Explain it to ikusawa-sempai!!! And don't you tell me that I didn't warn you about this!!!"
then shun ran after ruriko.
"shun-kun.. wait up!!" miyu called
"don't you dare move another step!! You've done enough to break a good relationship!!!" kaoru said while stopping her
"what do you mean"
"can't you see their relationship was so good till you came here!!!"
"but I didn't mean to. I just want to spend my days here with shun coz I love him so much and I am going back to England next Tuesday. And I don't want to give my love up that easily specially to a sniveler!!"
"why did you think I liked giving up my love for him too"
"you loved him too??"
" yes and I was willing to give it up for his happiness coz I know that if he becomes mine and he doesn't love me he would not be happy like when his with ikusawa-sempai!! Coz he loves her too much"
" maybe you are right?? But what can I do to make it up??"
" you can do nothing it's already done for them I know my ikusawa-sempai when she said she's done , she's really done!! And nothing can change her decision except for ukiya-sempai whom she just broke up with "
ruriko went home and cried while shun tried to talk to her and tried to call her at the phone but no one answered then finally he gave up and went to his room. He cried and shout for almost all evening ruriko could hear him but she was badly hurt she could hear him say "oh ruri-chan please understand I didn't mean to go out with miyu and stood you up I love you.I love you. aishiteru...aishiteru...a..ishi...te...ru...... please ruri-chan please forgive me. please.." shun was still pleading till he fell asleep..
^^^^^ the next day Sunday ^^^^^
Phone rings..
"shun I told you not to call me again didn't I!!!" ruriko answered the phone
"ohayou ikusawa-sempai!! It's me kaoru did I woke you up??"
"oh!! Kaoru chan I'm sorry I thought you were shun why did you call??"
"oh nothing I was just worried about you?? Daijobu ikusawa-sempai??"
"I'm fine thank you for being there for me kaoru-chan and for bringing me to the mall yesterday if not for you I would never found out about it."
"about that, well you see after you and shun walked out miyu was supposed to ran after ukiya-sempai but I managed to keep her there with me and tell you she was doing all of it on purpose and she is going to go back to England at Tuesday. And she likes ukiya-sempai so I think you don't need to be angry to ukiya-sempai coz it's not really his fault you know, it was all miyu' s fault."
"but kaoru if shun didn't really want to go with her then he could have done it. Anyway past is past nothing can change my decision now"
"if that's so well I also called to tell you that the commander wants us to go to the headquarters at 3 pm sharp. So I got to get ready ja!!"
"ja!!"
after that kaoru called shun to tell him about the meeting coz she knows that ruriko will not talk to him after what happened. Ruriko got ready to go and her eyes was still swollen coz she almost cried her heart out last night when she was walking towards a sidewalk that can sink to the headquarters shun ran towards her so they went to the headquarters together shun started to talk to her but it was like he was talking to nothing coz she never said a word to her so they went to the commander's office.
"ikusawa-sempai!!" kaoru ran towards her
"have you and ukiya-sempai you know.?"
"nope!! He just ran towards me and he joined me going here" ruriko said
"okay since all of you are here bancho and the others are here too they just arrived yesterday night. And I have received and information that the last invaders are going to attack tomorrow so I want you to be alert of urgent meeting ok that's all you may go now!" the commander told them
"so how's your relationship with princess ruriko?? Shun???" bancho asked
"well I wouldn't say that it's okay coz we just broke up yesterday"
"doishite??"
"coz of the new girl miyu"
" you broke princess ruriko' s heart?????"
"iie!!! demo I think I did, demo I did not mean to"
"well you just ruined a very lucky relationship"
"yah I know!!"
"well I got to go"
"ja!!"
"ja!!"
shun went home and thought about all that just happened. Ruriko was home getting herself busy so that she will not think of shun what ever but she really could think of shun every time she do something she could help of think of shun so she decided to listen to the radio instead so she was lying at her sofa, listening to her radio....
radio: my shattered dreams and broken heart are mending on a shelf I saw you holding hands Standing close to some one else Now I sit all alone wishing all my feelings was gone I give my best to you Nothing for me to do
*But a one last cry, one last cry Before I leave it all behind I got to put you out of my mind This time Stop living a lie I guessed I'm down to my last cry
I was here you were there Guessed we never could agreed while the sun shines on you I need some love to rain on me Still I sit All alone wishing all my feelings Was gone Got to get over you Nothing for me to do
(Repeat *)
I know I got to be strong Coz life goes on and on and on I'm gonna dry my eyes right after I give my (repeat*)
I guessed I'm down to my last cry
Ruriko was crying at the songs she hears she remembers all that happy and sad times of shun and her. So listening to her radio she fell asleep and she even forgot to eat her dinner.
^^^^^ at school^^^^^
ruriko was looking at her table instead of the window she usually looked on. Shun was stealing glances at her even the teacher notice shun being so silent miyu was just looking at shun and ruriko' s sad faces. then a woman entered their class room ruriko recognized it as the commander's secretary then called shun and ruriko at the principals office. Miyu was nervous that it was going to call her too. So ruriko and shun ran to the principal's office where everybody was there already and then the whole office floor sank and they were at the commander's office at the head quarter's
"gatekeepers I called you coz of an invader at the Tokyo tower go now and vanish it!!!!"
"ryokai!! A.e.g.i.s!!!"
when they got to the tower they saw the invader in a form of a big ball with spikes so fei ran in front of in attacked it with her fire panda
"reiko play it!!!" ukiya shouted
then reiko was playing her dazzling melody then the ground was shaking then the invaders was scattered in the human from with sunglasses but Instead of machine guns they were carrying bazookas
"ayayayayaya!!! When did they started to use bazookas??" fei asked
"arrow of light!!!" ruriko attacked then an invader shot her with it's bazooka
"daijobu ruri-chan??" shun called worried
ruriko wasn't hurt that much she can still stand up with out saying a word she stood up and shot arrows at the invaders kaoru then attacked it with her kaoru punch and kick then fei' s fire panda kaoru and fei was knocked down by a blow of bazooka towards them but they managed to avoid it. And they weren't' t seriously hurt then shun attacked it with his ultra whirlwind slash then ruriko was aiming at the red invader reiko was still playing her dazzling melody, before ruriko shot her arrow a bazooka hit her at her back and fell at the empty lot near then at shun' s anger he attacked it with his full force like when the time he attacked reiji kagayama. Then the invaders was defeated. Then injured shun ran to the lot where ruriko fell and kneeled
"ruri-chan!! Ruri-chan!!!! Wake up please wake up!!! Don't leave me!!!! Ruri-chan!! Ruri-chan!! Ruri-chan!!" shun called then ruriko opened her eyes
"ukiya-kun??" she said weakly
"ruri-chan please forgive me.."
"ha.hai"
"aishiteru ruri-chan"
"aishiteru my shun-kun" then ruriko fainted shun thought ruriko was dead so he cried and cried. Ruriko was healing herself with her gate of light still fainted shun grabbed a knife near him and stabbed himself. The ruriko woke up and saw the dying shun. Her weak body went towards him and she tried to heal him but her powers only gave him just few more seconds to live. Ruriko cried her whole heart and soul almost went out her body.
"ukiya-kun, don't leave me, I forgave you didn't I??? Please don't"
"ru..ri..chan- I love you very much"
" I love you too" then ruriko saw the knife that shun used and before kaoru could stop her she stab herself and her body lay near shun's dying body. Shun held ruriko' s hands in his .
"ukiya-kun."
"ruri-chan. we'll be. together. for.. whole. eternity "
"ruriko nodded then shun tried to kissed her one more time but his sight darkened and they died at the same time
"aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!" kaoru shouted then the others ran towards her and saw ruriko and shun died in each other's arms
"kaoru-chan are you okay??" fei asked
"iie!!! They killed themselves!!!" kaoru cried
"they what??"
"killed themselves with that knife"
^^^^^ Tuesday^^^^^
"I'm so sorry for them kaoru.."miyu said kaoru did not answer
"I really shouldn't have done that if only I know it would end up killing them both" miyu said she was crying
"good thing you realized that but it's over are you happy now!!!"
"please I was just.."
"just what!!, this is all your fault you know!!!"
"I'm sorry"
"I saw the whole thing you know. They died coz they loved each other so much and they decided to be with each other for eternity "
"then we should not be crying coz they died happy right?"
"I'm just crying coz I will not see that relationship last and I want to see it"
"I'm really sorry"
"I know"
"well I better go now my plane will be leaving at 8 so ja!"
"ja!"
"kaoru-chan I think you should take a rest now" fei said
"no I want to see them until I can"
"well staring at them would not bring them back you know"
"I know fei!! And I'm thinking how am I going to adjust coz from now on no more delicious cakes and no more shun teasing ruriko it will me really silent now.. I will really missed all of that.. Did you know that they were supposed to have their 3rd month anniversary at Friday now they could not celebrate it with us. oh fei I really gonna miss them"
" look at the bright side. At least their relationship will last for eternity"
"but I want to see it last that way!! And I miss their fighting and their sweetness "
"me too. me too.."
^^^^^^^^^owari^^^^^^^^^^
author's notes:
well that's it!!! I hoped you liked it!! And please review!!! Maybe I'll stop making fanfics about gatekeeper and make sailor moons. Anyway after another sailor moon fanfic maybe another gate keepers I hope you review!!! So clicked that go button!!!! And review!!!!
