Here is the second part of the story, with a third soon to follow. Please
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JUST WATCHING, NOT HELPING Part Two
Keliza
Alex Bradley turned in his sleep, and, as his subconscious mind had forgotten where he was, he fell out of the wooden cot. He landed with a thump on the dirt floor of the tent, with a pair of large black boots digging sharply between his ribs. But he did not wake up. He had only been asleep for 2 hours. What awoke him was a tall groggy surgeon gently pulling his boots from under the body of the young man. BJ Hunnicutt had had just over three hours of blessed slumber when Radar had fetched him to see a patient taking a turn for the worst. He stopped for a moment to consider Alex. He had to admit to being surprised at how well the boy, that was all he was really, had conducted himself in the 40-plus hours in surgery. He was free to leave whenever he wanted but stood with the surgeons. He grabbed his jacket and left the tent.
Alex opened his eyes slowly, anticipating the bright morning sunshine glaring off the dazzling white walls of his room. The darkness and its dingy green tinge reminding him of everything all at once. He had seen so much in the past couple few days, his head ached almost as much as his heart when he tried to process it. He closed his eyes, blanking out his surroundings, only to see flashes of images of the days before in front of his eyes, and sounds that seemed to jump out at him.
There had been a push up at the front, fighting for a small Korean town. The wounded came slowly at first. He followed the doctors up to the helicopters, as he did always, trying to be as unobtrusive as possible. He wanted to see what they were doing, his curiosity about their work grew the more he saw of it. They brought the casualties down to Pre-Op and BJ stated to talk through his work. Alex had been too self-conscious to ask questions; he didn't know where to start, but Dr. Hunnicutt sensed his curiosity and took to narrating. "See, Alex, this fellow here can wait. He's got a leg wound but once we stop the bleeding he'll be just fine, won't you soldier?"
"If you say so, Doctor!" said the Private, appearing reassured. He moved on to the next guy, greeting him casually. A superficial glance revealed nothing to be wrong, until you looked underneath the guy's jacket. There was blood oozing and bubbling through his shirt.
"Well, I think this gentleman should go to the front of the queue. Deserves special service, I think. How about that, Lieutenant? The army putting you first." The Lieutenant tried to chuckle but all that came from him was a rasping gurgle. Alex smiled a look of reassurance at him. He was learning quickly that that was the extent of his powers here. "How do you do that, doctor?" Alex asked.
"What do you mean?" BJ answered
"Make people think that it's a good thing, whether they're going first or last."
"It's a knack. And it's called triage. If you need help the most you get it first - that's good, right?"
He followed BJ around, suddenly becoming very conscious of the screaming. There were screams, shouts and cries coming from all around him. Suddenly he felt a tug on his arm. He turned around to see the manly corporal in a dress that had first greeted him at the 4077th. "Hey, kid. Grab the other end of the would ya?" Alex obeyed silently, carried the stretcher through. He wanted to ignore the crying and focus on something else. He noticed that the corporal was wearing a long blue cotton dress with a daisy belt, with a red splash across one shoulder. He looked again and noticed that there was now a second dash of red on the hip, and another that trailed off the sleeve and onto the hairy arm and he walked briskly away.
He bumped into Dr. Pierce, Hawkeye. Alex had been surprised by his broad smile and ever-present laughter, but his features were now set determinedly. Alex apologised, Hawkeye ignored it. "You coming into theatre, kid?"
"I don't know, doctor. Am I allowed?"
"Sure, you wanna see the war. This is a must." Alex nodded uncertainly, following Hawkeye's brisk pace.
"You'll find scrubs in there. Be quick, we're starting in a sec. There are more on the way."
"Thank you, doctor," he said steadily, trying to conceal his apprehension.
"OK", said Hawkeye, as he went in. "One thing," he said, poking his head back around the door, "you're not squeamish, are you?"
Alex thought back over events in his childhood where he had cut his knee or when his brother had cracked his head on Miss Cartwright's doorstep, and, remembering that he hadn't fainted then, shook his head confidently at Hawkeye. What would he have done if I had said yes? he wondered, as he put on the pyjama-type garments. In the corner of the changing room he saw the bag of dirty linen, and caught a glimpse of the blood spattered clothing. Then he took a deep breath and walked in to the OR.
There was a real commotion. People everywhere, bustling to and fro, in and out, all of them with designated tasks, all knowing exactly what their function in the room was. Alex stood at the door for a moment, unsure of himself. Then he nearly tripped up a nurse carrying bottles of blood and decided he should move. He wondered how he could manage to feel so lost in such a small room. He noticed a large piece of machinery he guessed was for the gas and occupied himself staring at that, trying not to look so out of place as he felt. Then, to Alex's relief, BJ came into the room, although it took him a second to recognise the man with is mask and surgical cap on. He was surprised that BJ noticed him, standing quietly in the corner. "Hey, Alex. Come over here. Nurse, could you get this young man a stool? Come on, kid, you can get closer than that."
The nurse looked around here for the stool. There was something in her demeanour that Alex could recognise; she too felt alien and self-conscious in this environment. He coughed politely, "Uh, nurse? I think I see it under that trolley." She brought it over, then retired to a corner of the room where she was least conspicuous. Alex smiled over at her but saw no response, then again her mask did cover most of her face. While the patient was carried into the room and onto the table, Alex once again retreated out of the way, this time to the corner occupied by the inconspicuous nurse. This time, Alex noticed that her eyes smiled at him, shyly.
"Hi" he said in a quiet voice. Wasn't it amazing how an unfamiliar situation causes everybody to regress to the shy little thing they were on their first day of school, not matter how confident they had become since?
"Just tell me if I get in the way," he said.
"I'm new. I don't really know what I'm doing," said the nurse, giving a small self-conscious laugh. Alex could certainly sympathise with that feeling. At least she had a decent excuse for her presence, she was a nurse and this was here job. "I wouldn't notice. You seem to know what you are doing to me," Alex reassured. "For all my opinion's worth," he added. She laughed again.
"Alex, we're almost ready over here!" BJ shouted. Alex walked tentatively over to the table, noticing the nurse following him. "Just don't touch the instrument tray or the surgeon" he heard her whisper in his ear.
"And don't sneeze right?" The laugh again, this time sounding more amused than nervy. Alex stood just out of the field, just out of germ distance. He watched the first incision, all the time wondering if an undiscovered phobia of gore would surface. To his great relief, he felt fine. "OK, Alex. I'm just opening up this guy's chest. He has a collapsed lung, probably caused by this piece of metal here," he indicated one of the lumps of shrapnel embedded in the skin. Alex swallowed. "Nurse, scissors. If we're lucky, the damage will be local and fairly easy to repair. Alex, if at any time you feel faint or dizzy, get down off the stool, ok? Don't want you falling again cracking your head , or worse falling into the patient. Retractor, nurse."
Well, that was something he didn't expect to hear: a way he could wreck the surgery he hadn't already gone over in his mind a hundred times. He saw BJ's eyes focused intently on what he was doing and he marvelled at how quickly his hands worked. Alex watched from his position, fascinated by the work going on before him. It crossed his mind that the inside of a human being actually looks a lot like a piece of raw meat, when its sprawled open by a retractor. Gee, that was something to make you think. Us humans may think we're all high and mighty but if you look at our insides we are really very like an animal. Then they got the saw. Alex had looked away at that moment and heard the rasping of its teeth on the bone before he realised what it was. This was the point where he would expect himself to faint, but he felt strangely fine. He glanced across at the nurse and she swallowed hard. They made eye contact again.
BJ went on with his description of what he was doing. "Well, here we have the lungs, you see how this one has a different texture to that one? And under here we have the heart." Alex leaned in as much as he dared to get a closer look. Amazing to think he looked the same under his own skin. BJ delved his hands into the body, surprising Alex by going up to his elbows in the man's thorax. Admiration, an increasingly familiar feeling, swept over him again. He was just finishing up, about to close, when he asked Alex if he had any questions. Although he didn't anticipated any, as so far the boy had mostly just studiously taken in what was going on, Alex surprised him by asking something.
"Uh, BJ? What's that there?"
"Which bit?"
"There, behind the.., windpipe is it?, there's a pink thing. No, not the lung, yeah, round there?"
"A swab! Nurse, didn't you count them in?!" BJ said angrily. Alex saw the poor nurse's eyes begin to well up, and was surprised to see the surgeon pull out some material as big as a bath towel from the man's body. He hadn't noticed them put THAT in. "Thanks, kid. That was important! I just can't have eyes that can see every angle of the cavity," BJ said looking carefully at the nurse. She took a steadying breath and walked slowly out, while another took her place at the table. Alex wanted to go talk to her, apologise for getting her in trouble. But he didn't.
As soon as they had finished with the patient, another was quickly rolled in. He had a simple belly wound. Then there was another, with a bullet in his shoulder. Then another and another. Alex was starting to feel tired, but BJ was working as quickly and rigorously as ever. He looked around the room to see that the other surgeons had the same determined concentrated expression on their faces.
"Hey, everybody! I got an interesting one here" Hawkeye's clear voice, cut through the low monosyllabic exchanges of surgeons and nurses. "Oh, it's a beauty, perfect candidate for an arterial transplant. Oh, Beej, you want this?"
"I'm ok over here thanks. This spleen keeps bleeding. Hey, Alex, you wanna go and watch something really interesting?" he said, nodding in Hawkeye's direction. Alex walked carefully across the room trying not to trip over anything vital. "Hey, Alex, how you doing?" Hawkeye enquired.
"I'm ok, doctor. Not fainted yet."
"Good sign. This is operation is a bit more interesting than most of the meatball stuff you'll see round here. This is my able, and always willing, assistant Major Houlihan."
"Watch it, Pierce. Who is our visitor anyway? I don't think we have been introduced. I'm Major Margaret Houlihan, Head Nurse." Alex prayed that his smile did not show from under his mask. He had already heard a number of stories about 'Hotlips', and was already suspecting that at least some of them were true. Before he could be sure he could trust his mouth to open, Hawkeye introduced him. "Margaret, dear, Alex is a visitor, he's writing an article about this loony bin. I want you to be nice to him." He said winking. "Don't scare the boy" he whispered in her ear. She looked indignant but said nothing more.
The operation was fascinating, and looked to Alex's untrained eye pretty complex. Considering the fact they were constantly bantering, he also noticed the slick routine of the surgeon and his nurse. The flow of casualties through the doors seemed to have slowed after heaven-knows-how- long that they were in the OR. He had taken to watching the surgeon as much as the patient, and Hawkeye had an intriguing attitude. He would laugh and joke with all the nurses, even the major who was of higher rank than he was, he joked about the war, about death but at the same time Alex noticed that his eyes never lost their determined and focused view of the wound.
His remarks shocked Alex initially. He was quickly realising why the nice nurse in Post-Op had warned Alex about him; he was certainly a bit unorthodox. But as much as they protested at his lewd suggestions, Alex noticed the glint in the eyes of the nurses as they turned away tutting, and the extra wiggle in their step. It was his flippancy that most unsettled Alex. He would make little throwaway remarks about the wounded, not that they were cruel, maybe it was just gallows humour that Alex was quite accustomed to. It wasn't until he had finished with the soldier on the table and the nurses had turned away that Alex heard him talking to the patient.
"Now, kid, you just go on and get better. You'll be back to kissing rose- cheeked little ladies in the parking lot before you know it. Get better and go back to your childhood." His face was still, and the mirth in his eyes had faded for a second. It was then that Alex got it. Being Hawkeye was just Dr. Pierce's way of dealing.
TO BE CONTINUED
JUST WATCHING, NOT HELPING Part Two
Keliza
Alex Bradley turned in his sleep, and, as his subconscious mind had forgotten where he was, he fell out of the wooden cot. He landed with a thump on the dirt floor of the tent, with a pair of large black boots digging sharply between his ribs. But he did not wake up. He had only been asleep for 2 hours. What awoke him was a tall groggy surgeon gently pulling his boots from under the body of the young man. BJ Hunnicutt had had just over three hours of blessed slumber when Radar had fetched him to see a patient taking a turn for the worst. He stopped for a moment to consider Alex. He had to admit to being surprised at how well the boy, that was all he was really, had conducted himself in the 40-plus hours in surgery. He was free to leave whenever he wanted but stood with the surgeons. He grabbed his jacket and left the tent.
Alex opened his eyes slowly, anticipating the bright morning sunshine glaring off the dazzling white walls of his room. The darkness and its dingy green tinge reminding him of everything all at once. He had seen so much in the past couple few days, his head ached almost as much as his heart when he tried to process it. He closed his eyes, blanking out his surroundings, only to see flashes of images of the days before in front of his eyes, and sounds that seemed to jump out at him.
There had been a push up at the front, fighting for a small Korean town. The wounded came slowly at first. He followed the doctors up to the helicopters, as he did always, trying to be as unobtrusive as possible. He wanted to see what they were doing, his curiosity about their work grew the more he saw of it. They brought the casualties down to Pre-Op and BJ stated to talk through his work. Alex had been too self-conscious to ask questions; he didn't know where to start, but Dr. Hunnicutt sensed his curiosity and took to narrating. "See, Alex, this fellow here can wait. He's got a leg wound but once we stop the bleeding he'll be just fine, won't you soldier?"
"If you say so, Doctor!" said the Private, appearing reassured. He moved on to the next guy, greeting him casually. A superficial glance revealed nothing to be wrong, until you looked underneath the guy's jacket. There was blood oozing and bubbling through his shirt.
"Well, I think this gentleman should go to the front of the queue. Deserves special service, I think. How about that, Lieutenant? The army putting you first." The Lieutenant tried to chuckle but all that came from him was a rasping gurgle. Alex smiled a look of reassurance at him. He was learning quickly that that was the extent of his powers here. "How do you do that, doctor?" Alex asked.
"What do you mean?" BJ answered
"Make people think that it's a good thing, whether they're going first or last."
"It's a knack. And it's called triage. If you need help the most you get it first - that's good, right?"
He followed BJ around, suddenly becoming very conscious of the screaming. There were screams, shouts and cries coming from all around him. Suddenly he felt a tug on his arm. He turned around to see the manly corporal in a dress that had first greeted him at the 4077th. "Hey, kid. Grab the other end of the would ya?" Alex obeyed silently, carried the stretcher through. He wanted to ignore the crying and focus on something else. He noticed that the corporal was wearing a long blue cotton dress with a daisy belt, with a red splash across one shoulder. He looked again and noticed that there was now a second dash of red on the hip, and another that trailed off the sleeve and onto the hairy arm and he walked briskly away.
He bumped into Dr. Pierce, Hawkeye. Alex had been surprised by his broad smile and ever-present laughter, but his features were now set determinedly. Alex apologised, Hawkeye ignored it. "You coming into theatre, kid?"
"I don't know, doctor. Am I allowed?"
"Sure, you wanna see the war. This is a must." Alex nodded uncertainly, following Hawkeye's brisk pace.
"You'll find scrubs in there. Be quick, we're starting in a sec. There are more on the way."
"Thank you, doctor," he said steadily, trying to conceal his apprehension.
"OK", said Hawkeye, as he went in. "One thing," he said, poking his head back around the door, "you're not squeamish, are you?"
Alex thought back over events in his childhood where he had cut his knee or when his brother had cracked his head on Miss Cartwright's doorstep, and, remembering that he hadn't fainted then, shook his head confidently at Hawkeye. What would he have done if I had said yes? he wondered, as he put on the pyjama-type garments. In the corner of the changing room he saw the bag of dirty linen, and caught a glimpse of the blood spattered clothing. Then he took a deep breath and walked in to the OR.
There was a real commotion. People everywhere, bustling to and fro, in and out, all of them with designated tasks, all knowing exactly what their function in the room was. Alex stood at the door for a moment, unsure of himself. Then he nearly tripped up a nurse carrying bottles of blood and decided he should move. He wondered how he could manage to feel so lost in such a small room. He noticed a large piece of machinery he guessed was for the gas and occupied himself staring at that, trying not to look so out of place as he felt. Then, to Alex's relief, BJ came into the room, although it took him a second to recognise the man with is mask and surgical cap on. He was surprised that BJ noticed him, standing quietly in the corner. "Hey, Alex. Come over here. Nurse, could you get this young man a stool? Come on, kid, you can get closer than that."
The nurse looked around here for the stool. There was something in her demeanour that Alex could recognise; she too felt alien and self-conscious in this environment. He coughed politely, "Uh, nurse? I think I see it under that trolley." She brought it over, then retired to a corner of the room where she was least conspicuous. Alex smiled over at her but saw no response, then again her mask did cover most of her face. While the patient was carried into the room and onto the table, Alex once again retreated out of the way, this time to the corner occupied by the inconspicuous nurse. This time, Alex noticed that her eyes smiled at him, shyly.
"Hi" he said in a quiet voice. Wasn't it amazing how an unfamiliar situation causes everybody to regress to the shy little thing they were on their first day of school, not matter how confident they had become since?
"Just tell me if I get in the way," he said.
"I'm new. I don't really know what I'm doing," said the nurse, giving a small self-conscious laugh. Alex could certainly sympathise with that feeling. At least she had a decent excuse for her presence, she was a nurse and this was here job. "I wouldn't notice. You seem to know what you are doing to me," Alex reassured. "For all my opinion's worth," he added. She laughed again.
"Alex, we're almost ready over here!" BJ shouted. Alex walked tentatively over to the table, noticing the nurse following him. "Just don't touch the instrument tray or the surgeon" he heard her whisper in his ear.
"And don't sneeze right?" The laugh again, this time sounding more amused than nervy. Alex stood just out of the field, just out of germ distance. He watched the first incision, all the time wondering if an undiscovered phobia of gore would surface. To his great relief, he felt fine. "OK, Alex. I'm just opening up this guy's chest. He has a collapsed lung, probably caused by this piece of metal here," he indicated one of the lumps of shrapnel embedded in the skin. Alex swallowed. "Nurse, scissors. If we're lucky, the damage will be local and fairly easy to repair. Alex, if at any time you feel faint or dizzy, get down off the stool, ok? Don't want you falling again cracking your head , or worse falling into the patient. Retractor, nurse."
Well, that was something he didn't expect to hear: a way he could wreck the surgery he hadn't already gone over in his mind a hundred times. He saw BJ's eyes focused intently on what he was doing and he marvelled at how quickly his hands worked. Alex watched from his position, fascinated by the work going on before him. It crossed his mind that the inside of a human being actually looks a lot like a piece of raw meat, when its sprawled open by a retractor. Gee, that was something to make you think. Us humans may think we're all high and mighty but if you look at our insides we are really very like an animal. Then they got the saw. Alex had looked away at that moment and heard the rasping of its teeth on the bone before he realised what it was. This was the point where he would expect himself to faint, but he felt strangely fine. He glanced across at the nurse and she swallowed hard. They made eye contact again.
BJ went on with his description of what he was doing. "Well, here we have the lungs, you see how this one has a different texture to that one? And under here we have the heart." Alex leaned in as much as he dared to get a closer look. Amazing to think he looked the same under his own skin. BJ delved his hands into the body, surprising Alex by going up to his elbows in the man's thorax. Admiration, an increasingly familiar feeling, swept over him again. He was just finishing up, about to close, when he asked Alex if he had any questions. Although he didn't anticipated any, as so far the boy had mostly just studiously taken in what was going on, Alex surprised him by asking something.
"Uh, BJ? What's that there?"
"Which bit?"
"There, behind the.., windpipe is it?, there's a pink thing. No, not the lung, yeah, round there?"
"A swab! Nurse, didn't you count them in?!" BJ said angrily. Alex saw the poor nurse's eyes begin to well up, and was surprised to see the surgeon pull out some material as big as a bath towel from the man's body. He hadn't noticed them put THAT in. "Thanks, kid. That was important! I just can't have eyes that can see every angle of the cavity," BJ said looking carefully at the nurse. She took a steadying breath and walked slowly out, while another took her place at the table. Alex wanted to go talk to her, apologise for getting her in trouble. But he didn't.
As soon as they had finished with the patient, another was quickly rolled in. He had a simple belly wound. Then there was another, with a bullet in his shoulder. Then another and another. Alex was starting to feel tired, but BJ was working as quickly and rigorously as ever. He looked around the room to see that the other surgeons had the same determined concentrated expression on their faces.
"Hey, everybody! I got an interesting one here" Hawkeye's clear voice, cut through the low monosyllabic exchanges of surgeons and nurses. "Oh, it's a beauty, perfect candidate for an arterial transplant. Oh, Beej, you want this?"
"I'm ok over here thanks. This spleen keeps bleeding. Hey, Alex, you wanna go and watch something really interesting?" he said, nodding in Hawkeye's direction. Alex walked carefully across the room trying not to trip over anything vital. "Hey, Alex, how you doing?" Hawkeye enquired.
"I'm ok, doctor. Not fainted yet."
"Good sign. This is operation is a bit more interesting than most of the meatball stuff you'll see round here. This is my able, and always willing, assistant Major Houlihan."
"Watch it, Pierce. Who is our visitor anyway? I don't think we have been introduced. I'm Major Margaret Houlihan, Head Nurse." Alex prayed that his smile did not show from under his mask. He had already heard a number of stories about 'Hotlips', and was already suspecting that at least some of them were true. Before he could be sure he could trust his mouth to open, Hawkeye introduced him. "Margaret, dear, Alex is a visitor, he's writing an article about this loony bin. I want you to be nice to him." He said winking. "Don't scare the boy" he whispered in her ear. She looked indignant but said nothing more.
The operation was fascinating, and looked to Alex's untrained eye pretty complex. Considering the fact they were constantly bantering, he also noticed the slick routine of the surgeon and his nurse. The flow of casualties through the doors seemed to have slowed after heaven-knows-how- long that they were in the OR. He had taken to watching the surgeon as much as the patient, and Hawkeye had an intriguing attitude. He would laugh and joke with all the nurses, even the major who was of higher rank than he was, he joked about the war, about death but at the same time Alex noticed that his eyes never lost their determined and focused view of the wound.
His remarks shocked Alex initially. He was quickly realising why the nice nurse in Post-Op had warned Alex about him; he was certainly a bit unorthodox. But as much as they protested at his lewd suggestions, Alex noticed the glint in the eyes of the nurses as they turned away tutting, and the extra wiggle in their step. It was his flippancy that most unsettled Alex. He would make little throwaway remarks about the wounded, not that they were cruel, maybe it was just gallows humour that Alex was quite accustomed to. It wasn't until he had finished with the soldier on the table and the nurses had turned away that Alex heard him talking to the patient.
"Now, kid, you just go on and get better. You'll be back to kissing rose- cheeked little ladies in the parking lot before you know it. Get better and go back to your childhood." His face was still, and the mirth in his eyes had faded for a second. It was then that Alex got it. Being Hawkeye was just Dr. Pierce's way of dealing.
TO BE CONTINUED