Hate, hate and hate plus how about more hate?
Disclaimer: If you're thick enough to still not know that it's JK Rowling who owns this but not me, then I suggest this story isn't suitable for you to read in the first place.
Chapter 1: Later On-
The Fat Lady's Portrait slammed open and crashed shut again.
The three Marauders sitting on the Gryffindor Common Room couches looked up to see a fuming red-faced James standing there with looks ready to kill.
"Hey buddy," drawled Sirius in a lazy bored voice, "We thought Lily finally murdered you or somethin', where have you been all this time?"
"EVANS-FUCKINGLY-TURNED-MY-SKIN-TO-BOILS!!!" James could barely talk from anger, "SHES-GOING-TO-GET-IT-FROM-ME-THIS-TIME!!"
"Wait, wait," Remus ordered "Just take a few breaths, calm down, and then talk. We can't get a thing you're saying if you're in that rage."
He was the sensible one of the group.
James's face softened into sense. Remus usually had that affect on him. He sat down and explained, calm as clear-water "Our argument boiled up so Lily cursed my skin into growing boils all over. Before I could get back at her, she ran off to god knows where. I tried chasing after her but she was nowhere to be found so I went to the hospital wing. Madam Promfrey fixed my skin up for me and now here I am wanting to see Lily suffer infront of me. Know where she is?"
"We haven't seen her all day James." Sirius assured him.
"And while you were traveling around the corridors with those boils I bet for the first time girls didn't come trying to suck up to you." Peter piped in, Sirius laughed at this.
James nodded miserably.
Just that moment, two girls came running down the staircase seeming worried. Diana and Dana (AN: Yeah, I know I've used their names before in one of my other stories) were Lily's twin best friends.
"Have you seen Lily?" Diana demanded of James.
"Yeah, she's been unusually gone for quite a while now." Dana added, "You've done something to her haven't you?!"
"No," said all the Marauders at the same time.
Remus spoke up "She cursed James's skin who cured it at the hospital wing after she ran off."
Diana and Dana exchanged meaningingful-questioning glances with each other that the Marauders couldn't read.
"Well," Dana said uneasily, "We're not suppose to tell you this. but-um,"
"Yeah?!" James said impatiently.
"What she's trying to say here is," Diana took over, "is that we know about your magnificent Marauder's Map."
All of the guy's jaws dropped open at this.
"Forget how, when, where, who, were, which and all, we really need to use it right now to find out where Lily is." Dana pleaded.
Oblivious to the other three Marauder's looks, Sirius seemed quite taken by her request "OK, we don't mind."
The other 3 turned to look at him with raised eyebrows. James had on a smirk as well. Did his friend like her? Sure he likes every pretty girl that existed in the planet, and even dates them and dumps them in a week- but only because he's perverted. This seems different.
"What else do you know that you're not suppose to?" Remus asked fearfully. (He was of course referring to his werewolfness).
The twins gave him a puzzled look.
"What do you mean?" Diana moaned, "Look Lily could be in trouble here! All we know else about you that we shouldn't is that you Sirius sleep with a stuffed T-Rex."
Everyone laughed. Remus's face relaxed, though Sirius's face unsurprisingly resembled a tomato all of a sudden.
"Did you girls try searching for her in person?" Remus asked.
"Well, yeah, only in the main places. the library, great-hall, quidditch pitch. Ya know. We were unsuccessful." Dana said.
"Fine," James gave in. "We'll let you check out the map. Although I'm getting adapted to the unknown presence of Evans. Just promise us one thing, make sure no one finds out about it."
"And also about Sasha- I mean, the T-Rex." Sirius muttered, keeping his eyes on the ground and cheeks still flushed.
Dana giggled, "You even gave it a name?"
He didn't know why, but Sirius felt even more embarrassed about Dana knowing this secret more than Diana and maybe even Lily too.
"It's a deal. Thanks guys. Now hurry up and get it." Diana argued.
"Ok," said James. "Remus, you get it."
"No," shrugged Remus, "why should I? I'm reading after all. You're not doing anything. So you go up to our 'valuable-possession' trunk and get it."
"Nope, I'm too lazy to." James said, lying with his feet up on the couch.
"I'm not your slave!" Remus snapped.
"You're not doing this for me; it's for the chicks." James protested.
"What difference does it make?!" Remus huffed.
"QUIT IT GUYS!" Sirius yelled, the girls were looking murderous at them all. "I have the best solution: Peter gets it!"
"NOT ME YOU SIRIUS!" the chubby boy yelled.
"Put yourself to use man." Sirius stubbornly said, crossing his arms.
"Auuurggghhhhhhh" Diana shrieked impatiently, "Have you forgotten you're wizards?! Use the 'accio' charm we learnt in fourth-year for god's sake."
"I wasn't paying attention to it in class. I was staring at Lizzy McGruff's head that time. It was the day I asked her out." James said.
Dana's eyes looked hopeful and sad, "Guys, Lily really could be in trouble. Please, please someone just say the spell and get the map."
Sirius didn't know why, but what she just said made him feel guilty, he pulled his wand out of his pocket. Dana had her eyes on him. He couldn't let her down for some reason.
Clearing his throat, he yelled "ACCIO MARAUDER'S MAP."
Immediately, the map went flying into his hand. He caught it, everyone applauded briefly and looked onto it anxiously.
"I solmly swear I'm up to no good," Sirius uttered, taping his wand on to it.
Immediately, dots came all over the Hogwart's diagrams with labels like 'Margaret Bones' (At the Astronomy Tower), 'Mrs. Norris' (patrolling the corridors as usual), 'Prof. Dumbledore' (in his office; 'Deep Thinking' was marked above him).
"Oh wow wowweee!" Diana said with amazement, scanning the thing that was 'just a parchment' with wide eyes. "This is just so cool, but where's Lils?!"
Dana just looked on, lost for words. Then she suddenly gasped and pointed, "Lily Evans', 'Lucius Malfoy'" She whispered with alarm.
Everyone looked with shock.
James was stuttering, seeming mixed up at what to say "E-evans and M- malfoy, w-when, WHAT? Hee hee, they're two of a kind and perfect for each other?! No, Malfoy's worse, nope, no one's worse than Evan- Oh I mean th-"
Diana raised an eyebrow, "SHUT UP James! Their dots are practically overlapping each other you guys!! Did any of you know about this?"
"Them secretly dating, no!" Peter chipped. "And at the 4th deserted Gym Corridor, where no one'd find them. Clever."
"Diana," Dana said, ushering her way to the Portrait, "I dunno about you but I'm going to see what this is all about."
"Me too! Wait for me!!" Diana said, running after her.
James gave Sirius a look that said with urgency 'lets-follow-'em' Sirius nodded and gave him a smirk that clearly said 'since-when-did-you-care- about-what-lily-was-up-to'.
Sneaking out from under the invisibility cloak, they both creeped to their destination, Dana and Diana were quite ahead of them. Remus and Peter stayed at the Common Room playing chess wanting to just later 'hear' about what was happening.
Dana and Diana took the final turn into the dim corridor and gasped at the sight that was going on before them; Lily was in a blooded mess on the floor with her undergarments all over around her; there were tear-stains marked across her cheek and her naked body was red all over, with bruises here and there. She had her eyes shut. Lucius was nowhere to be found.
James immediately knocked the cloak off him and Sirius. All four rushed up to her.
"LILY! LILY! Diana yelled, "Oh my god, is she breathing? What had Malfoy done to her?!"
Dana got her wand out, eyes shinning with stears at the state of her friend, she pointed it at her and whispered "Enervate".
Lily blinked and sat up with deep gasps like she just came back from under- water diving. Sirius and James turned away their faces. The naked Lily immediately began sobbing non-stop.
The girls did nothing except drap their cloaks around her body and lead-off the still sobbing girl to the Hospital Wing in silence.
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WOW! 7 reviews in only one chapter! Thanks for the encouragement guys; you all rule and I really love y'all. Sorry for the delay; it was my exam week after all. Well I hope you liked this chapter, it was sort of an introduction to the main characters and all. I'm still not sure on whether or not I should continue it. read the 'to come' and tell me! Hint: These events don't happen in order of the way they're written.
To come: What'll Lucius do to Lily next, How will Lily deal with her messed- up conscience and scary flashbacks, Her friends notice Lily isn't getting her periods on time, Someone surprising takes temporary replacement to Lily as head-girl, Two people plan on sneaking out to meet for a late night stroll, Lily is also enable to co-operate in classes and gets bad marks- her parents will do something about it, The Marauders try and get back at Lucius, Someone betrays someone and that someone finds someone else that's surprising to confide into, How do Lily and James react to one another?, Snape helps his friend Lucius to stay out of trouble, Sirius's fanclub deal with Dana seriously- Lily is involved, Narcrissa comes up with a plot that involves James, Someone plans out a surprise party for someone in the great hall- will it be successful or mess things up? Petunia (Lily's sister) has interesting news, Hagrid tells Dumbledore something juicy.
Disclaimer: If you're thick enough to still not know that it's JK Rowling who owns this but not me, then I suggest this story isn't suitable for you to read in the first place.
Chapter 1: Later On-
The Fat Lady's Portrait slammed open and crashed shut again.
The three Marauders sitting on the Gryffindor Common Room couches looked up to see a fuming red-faced James standing there with looks ready to kill.
"Hey buddy," drawled Sirius in a lazy bored voice, "We thought Lily finally murdered you or somethin', where have you been all this time?"
"EVANS-FUCKINGLY-TURNED-MY-SKIN-TO-BOILS!!!" James could barely talk from anger, "SHES-GOING-TO-GET-IT-FROM-ME-THIS-TIME!!"
"Wait, wait," Remus ordered "Just take a few breaths, calm down, and then talk. We can't get a thing you're saying if you're in that rage."
He was the sensible one of the group.
James's face softened into sense. Remus usually had that affect on him. He sat down and explained, calm as clear-water "Our argument boiled up so Lily cursed my skin into growing boils all over. Before I could get back at her, she ran off to god knows where. I tried chasing after her but she was nowhere to be found so I went to the hospital wing. Madam Promfrey fixed my skin up for me and now here I am wanting to see Lily suffer infront of me. Know where she is?"
"We haven't seen her all day James." Sirius assured him.
"And while you were traveling around the corridors with those boils I bet for the first time girls didn't come trying to suck up to you." Peter piped in, Sirius laughed at this.
James nodded miserably.
Just that moment, two girls came running down the staircase seeming worried. Diana and Dana (AN: Yeah, I know I've used their names before in one of my other stories) were Lily's twin best friends.
"Have you seen Lily?" Diana demanded of James.
"Yeah, she's been unusually gone for quite a while now." Dana added, "You've done something to her haven't you?!"
"No," said all the Marauders at the same time.
Remus spoke up "She cursed James's skin who cured it at the hospital wing after she ran off."
Diana and Dana exchanged meaningingful-questioning glances with each other that the Marauders couldn't read.
"Well," Dana said uneasily, "We're not suppose to tell you this. but-um,"
"Yeah?!" James said impatiently.
"What she's trying to say here is," Diana took over, "is that we know about your magnificent Marauder's Map."
All of the guy's jaws dropped open at this.
"Forget how, when, where, who, were, which and all, we really need to use it right now to find out where Lily is." Dana pleaded.
Oblivious to the other three Marauder's looks, Sirius seemed quite taken by her request "OK, we don't mind."
The other 3 turned to look at him with raised eyebrows. James had on a smirk as well. Did his friend like her? Sure he likes every pretty girl that existed in the planet, and even dates them and dumps them in a week- but only because he's perverted. This seems different.
"What else do you know that you're not suppose to?" Remus asked fearfully. (He was of course referring to his werewolfness).
The twins gave him a puzzled look.
"What do you mean?" Diana moaned, "Look Lily could be in trouble here! All we know else about you that we shouldn't is that you Sirius sleep with a stuffed T-Rex."
Everyone laughed. Remus's face relaxed, though Sirius's face unsurprisingly resembled a tomato all of a sudden.
"Did you girls try searching for her in person?" Remus asked.
"Well, yeah, only in the main places. the library, great-hall, quidditch pitch. Ya know. We were unsuccessful." Dana said.
"Fine," James gave in. "We'll let you check out the map. Although I'm getting adapted to the unknown presence of Evans. Just promise us one thing, make sure no one finds out about it."
"And also about Sasha- I mean, the T-Rex." Sirius muttered, keeping his eyes on the ground and cheeks still flushed.
Dana giggled, "You even gave it a name?"
He didn't know why, but Sirius felt even more embarrassed about Dana knowing this secret more than Diana and maybe even Lily too.
"It's a deal. Thanks guys. Now hurry up and get it." Diana argued.
"Ok," said James. "Remus, you get it."
"No," shrugged Remus, "why should I? I'm reading after all. You're not doing anything. So you go up to our 'valuable-possession' trunk and get it."
"Nope, I'm too lazy to." James said, lying with his feet up on the couch.
"I'm not your slave!" Remus snapped.
"You're not doing this for me; it's for the chicks." James protested.
"What difference does it make?!" Remus huffed.
"QUIT IT GUYS!" Sirius yelled, the girls were looking murderous at them all. "I have the best solution: Peter gets it!"
"NOT ME YOU SIRIUS!" the chubby boy yelled.
"Put yourself to use man." Sirius stubbornly said, crossing his arms.
"Auuurggghhhhhhh" Diana shrieked impatiently, "Have you forgotten you're wizards?! Use the 'accio' charm we learnt in fourth-year for god's sake."
"I wasn't paying attention to it in class. I was staring at Lizzy McGruff's head that time. It was the day I asked her out." James said.
Dana's eyes looked hopeful and sad, "Guys, Lily really could be in trouble. Please, please someone just say the spell and get the map."
Sirius didn't know why, but what she just said made him feel guilty, he pulled his wand out of his pocket. Dana had her eyes on him. He couldn't let her down for some reason.
Clearing his throat, he yelled "ACCIO MARAUDER'S MAP."
Immediately, the map went flying into his hand. He caught it, everyone applauded briefly and looked onto it anxiously.
"I solmly swear I'm up to no good," Sirius uttered, taping his wand on to it.
Immediately, dots came all over the Hogwart's diagrams with labels like 'Margaret Bones' (At the Astronomy Tower), 'Mrs. Norris' (patrolling the corridors as usual), 'Prof. Dumbledore' (in his office; 'Deep Thinking' was marked above him).
"Oh wow wowweee!" Diana said with amazement, scanning the thing that was 'just a parchment' with wide eyes. "This is just so cool, but where's Lils?!"
Dana just looked on, lost for words. Then she suddenly gasped and pointed, "Lily Evans', 'Lucius Malfoy'" She whispered with alarm.
Everyone looked with shock.
James was stuttering, seeming mixed up at what to say "E-evans and M- malfoy, w-when, WHAT? Hee hee, they're two of a kind and perfect for each other?! No, Malfoy's worse, nope, no one's worse than Evan- Oh I mean th-"
Diana raised an eyebrow, "SHUT UP James! Their dots are practically overlapping each other you guys!! Did any of you know about this?"
"Them secretly dating, no!" Peter chipped. "And at the 4th deserted Gym Corridor, where no one'd find them. Clever."
"Diana," Dana said, ushering her way to the Portrait, "I dunno about you but I'm going to see what this is all about."
"Me too! Wait for me!!" Diana said, running after her.
James gave Sirius a look that said with urgency 'lets-follow-'em' Sirius nodded and gave him a smirk that clearly said 'since-when-did-you-care- about-what-lily-was-up-to'.
Sneaking out from under the invisibility cloak, they both creeped to their destination, Dana and Diana were quite ahead of them. Remus and Peter stayed at the Common Room playing chess wanting to just later 'hear' about what was happening.
Dana and Diana took the final turn into the dim corridor and gasped at the sight that was going on before them; Lily was in a blooded mess on the floor with her undergarments all over around her; there were tear-stains marked across her cheek and her naked body was red all over, with bruises here and there. She had her eyes shut. Lucius was nowhere to be found.
James immediately knocked the cloak off him and Sirius. All four rushed up to her.
"LILY! LILY! Diana yelled, "Oh my god, is she breathing? What had Malfoy done to her?!"
Dana got her wand out, eyes shinning with stears at the state of her friend, she pointed it at her and whispered "Enervate".
Lily blinked and sat up with deep gasps like she just came back from under- water diving. Sirius and James turned away their faces. The naked Lily immediately began sobbing non-stop.
The girls did nothing except drap their cloaks around her body and lead-off the still sobbing girl to the Hospital Wing in silence.
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WOW! 7 reviews in only one chapter! Thanks for the encouragement guys; you all rule and I really love y'all. Sorry for the delay; it was my exam week after all. Well I hope you liked this chapter, it was sort of an introduction to the main characters and all. I'm still not sure on whether or not I should continue it. read the 'to come' and tell me! Hint: These events don't happen in order of the way they're written.
To come: What'll Lucius do to Lily next, How will Lily deal with her messed- up conscience and scary flashbacks, Her friends notice Lily isn't getting her periods on time, Someone surprising takes temporary replacement to Lily as head-girl, Two people plan on sneaking out to meet for a late night stroll, Lily is also enable to co-operate in classes and gets bad marks- her parents will do something about it, The Marauders try and get back at Lucius, Someone betrays someone and that someone finds someone else that's surprising to confide into, How do Lily and James react to one another?, Snape helps his friend Lucius to stay out of trouble, Sirius's fanclub deal with Dana seriously- Lily is involved, Narcrissa comes up with a plot that involves James, Someone plans out a surprise party for someone in the great hall- will it be successful or mess things up? Petunia (Lily's sister) has interesting news, Hagrid tells Dumbledore something juicy.