HI! I'm back! I want to give a special thanx to TripleCrescent who
reviewed my first fic ( on fiction press ) and to ChristyKay who read my
first official ficcy. This one. Anyways, I'm going to try and do this
right. My story so far has no spaces in-between (exept my A/N) and I think
I've figured it out. Soooo. for my loving reader, A Story Retold.
Disclaimer: Hi! My name is Rumiko T. I own and invented Inuyasha. And that is why I need to write this stupid disclaimer. right? Stupid lawyers. Newayz, you'll never get my money! Unless you want.*checks purse* . two quarters, a nickel, and five pennies. Yeah.
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She fell down the dry well, landing on her hands and knees; giving her minor bruises. "Well, that was fun," Kagome said as she looked up. "And no ladder, too! I've got to tell Gramps about this. Souta could get hurt."
Standing up, Kagome realized that she would be way too short to even try and jump up to the sides of the dirty well.
"I wonder how long I'll be stuc-"
She was cut off however, by the swirling purple she suddenly saw. Swirling and changing continuously. And then she couldn't see the well; or anything else, for that matter, but the shifting masses. Soon after though, she found herself in the well again.
Taking a few moments to breathe and adjust, she stood up shakily, putting her dusty hand on the side of the well for comfort. After a few minutes of standing still, she reached a tentative hand out to her dark green skirt and brushed her hand casually over it to no avail. When she realized that no dirt came off with it, she started scrubbing harder and faster.
(A/N: okay I know that sounded hentai, but bear with me. U pervs know what it means. /.^*.)
When still none of the annoying dirt came off, she gave a cry of anguish.
"Aaah! I can't believe I fell into this stupid well! I swear I'm going to Souta when I get out of here! I told mom not to let him take Tech. Ed." Shaking her head, she again looked up, expecting to see the dingy brown roof of the shrine overhead. But what she saw instead, was quite a different veiw.
To Be Continued.
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Okay! Chapter two! I will constantly look over my chapters and edit them, and I hope to make my chaps longer too. Thanx for reading!!!
Tay-chan there's a pretty button down here. just a click away- way-way. *cuu-koo, cuu-koo*
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Disclaimer: Hi! My name is Rumiko T. I own and invented Inuyasha. And that is why I need to write this stupid disclaimer. right? Stupid lawyers. Newayz, you'll never get my money! Unless you want.*checks purse* . two quarters, a nickel, and five pennies. Yeah.
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She fell down the dry well, landing on her hands and knees; giving her minor bruises. "Well, that was fun," Kagome said as she looked up. "And no ladder, too! I've got to tell Gramps about this. Souta could get hurt."
Standing up, Kagome realized that she would be way too short to even try and jump up to the sides of the dirty well.
"I wonder how long I'll be stuc-"
She was cut off however, by the swirling purple she suddenly saw. Swirling and changing continuously. And then she couldn't see the well; or anything else, for that matter, but the shifting masses. Soon after though, she found herself in the well again.
Taking a few moments to breathe and adjust, she stood up shakily, putting her dusty hand on the side of the well for comfort. After a few minutes of standing still, she reached a tentative hand out to her dark green skirt and brushed her hand casually over it to no avail. When she realized that no dirt came off with it, she started scrubbing harder and faster.
(A/N: okay I know that sounded hentai, but bear with me. U pervs know what it means. /.^*.)
When still none of the annoying dirt came off, she gave a cry of anguish.
"Aaah! I can't believe I fell into this stupid well! I swear I'm going to Souta when I get out of here! I told mom not to let him take Tech. Ed." Shaking her head, she again looked up, expecting to see the dingy brown roof of the shrine overhead. But what she saw instead, was quite a different veiw.
To Be Continued.
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Okay! Chapter two! I will constantly look over my chapters and edit them, and I hope to make my chaps longer too. Thanx for reading!!!
Tay-chan there's a pretty button down here. just a click away- way-way. *cuu-koo, cuu-koo*
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