Revived
By: Moley
Disclaimer: Do you actually believe that I would waste my time writing this if I actually owned Dragonball Z. I think Not!!
Author's Notes: I realize that this is a major plot hole; however, what is one more in a show which is in itself a plot hole.
Part 1
All seven dragonballs had finally been brought together, in seemingly the middle of nowhere. The orange orbs had been placed in this particular spot for one specific purpose. It had been here that the battle had been fought so many years before, and people, who were revived by the powers of the Eternal Dragon, normally were revived at the exact location at which they had perished.
Gokou was very well aware of all the facts of being wished back; he himself had been wished back on several occasions. So he had traveled around the world in search of the Dragonballs, and when they were found, had placed them here.
The Dragonballs began to glow in an odd orange iridescence. The sky began to darken, and lighting shot down from the heavans. The multi-mile long Eternal Dragon, Shenron wound his way through the darkened sky (an impressive display, if you hadn't seen it a million times). Once Shenron occupied the majority of the sky he spoke., "Why have you disturbed my slumber?"
Gokou had thought this particular wish out for a long time, and was ready to reply; however, the Eternal Dragon interrupted his thoughts. "You, again. Why don't you people ever give me a rest? Let me guess, your going to wish for the worlds's most comfortable underwear?" he said with an Earth trembling growl.
"No, not this time," Gokou replied."I want you to..."
*****
The people of Earth were once again in a state of panic. It was lunch time and yet looked like midnight. To add to the horror of darkness and lightning, a giant lizard-like creature had appeared in the afternoon skies.
People were running for cover all over the globe (as if a few walls and a roof would protect them from a giagantic rampaging dragon). Cars were parked all throughout the main streets of the bigger cities, a few were over turned from where their drivers had been watching the show in the skies. All around, spectators were staring toward the green mass overhead.
The civilians weren't alone in their wonderings, Gokou's friends also wondered what the HFIL was going on. Who had found the dragonballs and what wish were they making? This was a cause for concern. However, they didn't see any need for everyone to go skipping of for no reason. After much debate and a few rounds of rock-paper-scissors, they decided Yamcha was the man for the job, at least he didn't have any family ties.
Yamcha was reluctant to leave, and only did so when his life had been threatened. Better to take his chances out there, than to die at the hands of Vegita. He flew toward the center of the "storm", very slowly.
*****
"...revive my brother, Raditz," Gokou finished.
"Are you sure? You had to give your life to defeat him, the first time you fought."
"Yeah, I'm sure. I don't think we gave him a fair chance to become a good-guy. Besides I am much stronger now, and I'm very bored."
*****
Yamcha was nearing his destination, unfortunately. He could even see a figure in the distance. He was afraid that he was going to arrive all too soon.
*****
"Very well. Your wish has been granted."
To Be Continued...
By: Moley
Disclaimer: Do you actually believe that I would waste my time writing this if I actually owned Dragonball Z. I think Not!!
Author's Notes: I realize that this is a major plot hole; however, what is one more in a show which is in itself a plot hole.
Part 1
All seven dragonballs had finally been brought together, in seemingly the middle of nowhere. The orange orbs had been placed in this particular spot for one specific purpose. It had been here that the battle had been fought so many years before, and people, who were revived by the powers of the Eternal Dragon, normally were revived at the exact location at which they had perished.
Gokou was very well aware of all the facts of being wished back; he himself had been wished back on several occasions. So he had traveled around the world in search of the Dragonballs, and when they were found, had placed them here.
The Dragonballs began to glow in an odd orange iridescence. The sky began to darken, and lighting shot down from the heavans. The multi-mile long Eternal Dragon, Shenron wound his way through the darkened sky (an impressive display, if you hadn't seen it a million times). Once Shenron occupied the majority of the sky he spoke., "Why have you disturbed my slumber?"
Gokou had thought this particular wish out for a long time, and was ready to reply; however, the Eternal Dragon interrupted his thoughts. "You, again. Why don't you people ever give me a rest? Let me guess, your going to wish for the worlds's most comfortable underwear?" he said with an Earth trembling growl.
"No, not this time," Gokou replied."I want you to..."
*****
The people of Earth were once again in a state of panic. It was lunch time and yet looked like midnight. To add to the horror of darkness and lightning, a giant lizard-like creature had appeared in the afternoon skies.
People were running for cover all over the globe (as if a few walls and a roof would protect them from a giagantic rampaging dragon). Cars were parked all throughout the main streets of the bigger cities, a few were over turned from where their drivers had been watching the show in the skies. All around, spectators were staring toward the green mass overhead.
The civilians weren't alone in their wonderings, Gokou's friends also wondered what the HFIL was going on. Who had found the dragonballs and what wish were they making? This was a cause for concern. However, they didn't see any need for everyone to go skipping of for no reason. After much debate and a few rounds of rock-paper-scissors, they decided Yamcha was the man for the job, at least he didn't have any family ties.
Yamcha was reluctant to leave, and only did so when his life had been threatened. Better to take his chances out there, than to die at the hands of Vegita. He flew toward the center of the "storm", very slowly.
*****
"...revive my brother, Raditz," Gokou finished.
"Are you sure? You had to give your life to defeat him, the first time you fought."
"Yeah, I'm sure. I don't think we gave him a fair chance to become a good-guy. Besides I am much stronger now, and I'm very bored."
*****
Yamcha was nearing his destination, unfortunately. He could even see a figure in the distance. He was afraid that he was going to arrive all too soon.
*****
"Very well. Your wish has been granted."
To Be Continued...