Just a side note:
Ocular is singular oculars is plural. My abc check said it was fine as did my dictionary.
Also I do not take well to flames as I am currently #$%^$&%^%&%^& #& $^% #&%%#^&#&#%!#%#$ #%&%^%&^%$^%^#$@^%%^$^%*&^(**(%&@%#!$%#%^ $^&%^&%^&#&$@^ $@^$^$&& stupid %#^$%&%^#!!%#$^$&*@$@@%#$^@&^$&!%#!%$#^&&@$#%#% I $#%#@!%!!#$%&%*^*^#%@!#!$ Hey if you hate the story, just don't review. It's that simple. God I know my stories suck, so just frick off! I don't need flamers constantly telling me they do. I've deleted most of the flames so far. I hate it when people just leave anonymous flames. I just hate it when people flame in general. You aren't obligated to review a story you don't like. If you don't have something nice to say, don't say it at all. Stupid son of a #$%#$%# of #$%#%#@!$#%#$$% I'll #$%#%#@%#% beat #$%#%^@$^$$@&@^@$%$ #$%#$%#$$^$^$&%%^&^%@@#$ #$%#%#^&*(* $^ ^#@%!$@$%^%*^*&$%#!$%^%@%!!%#$%!$@!%%&*#%$^$#!#!! %!$#%#$%$^&%^&#@#!$!%$@^@^ #$%!#!!%$#%#$%#$%#
As for some reviewers, I noticed you wanted me to write one from Logan's perspective…I'll try. Eventually. I don't know when I'll post it, or even if I'll write it. I need more positive feedback about that. Maybe some ideas what to do exactly. Hmm Flamers lower my bill and esteem and postiveness increases the love for the nice people out there.