A/N I'm sorry it so short but one of my love birds died L I'm answering some of your questions so look for yours below thanx!!!
Wow. That's the best story I'v ever read. Write more please.Ern, with sugar on top? Here's a chapter for you and thank you for the sugar
Kel: great story...please finish! Kel I hope you like this chapter
Mikala ah...continue plz:) well I did and here it is
Starlight Oh! Will Harry remember?
Please continue quickly, this story is cool! Well you will
have to read the chapter to find out
Jennyo Turkey owned and operated by Padfoot hey~i luv your idea. I know its been done, but your story seems much more original and interesting somehow. Please continue fast!! I continued as fast as I could
Amy Please hurry and write more! I want to see what happens!!! Read and see what happens
Sasami Black-Tomoee u must write more^_^ did as told
pixy dust (sing61mg@yahoo.com) it's such a cute story!!!! Continue writing!!!! Can't wait for the next part to be out well your waiting is over
Mademoiselle Gabrielle great great great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it!!!!!!!!!excelent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!please hurry and post the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Here it is and thank you
Jayde Jayde needs more!!!!! Here it is
Jessica Black well I think you pay to much attention in English class, but that could be a good thing *presents award* It gets the Jessica Black seal of approval lol thank you but I don't really pay attention in that class but thank you for your seal of approval
Leanne: that was very lovely
plz write more it was very sweet thanx and heres the
next chapter
Lils Awesome, write more please. Here it is and thank you
Tidmag This is sooo sweet and such a gentle tone to the story. Really contrasts when you have a rock like Vernon to make the ripples in the water. Ack, look at me going all poetic. :: silly grin :: I like this a lot. Hope you write more every day. Thank you
Starkitty Cool! I can't wait until you update! Your wait is up
A man stepped in. He wore a loose shirt and denim jeans. (A/N yes I know I'm having him wear muggle clothes. I was not sure if they wear cloaks inside)
The stranger took another step forward, and I quickly took a step backwards. Since I could walk, I had taken that step backwards instinctively, trying to keep a safe distance from that dreadful monster I always had to listen to. I hated having to have to look up at him. I hate that he was stronger than me. I hated that he had control over me. I hated everything about my uncle. I even hated the word "uncle": it was one of those - what does my uncle say all the time? - those curse words. In my thoughts, his name was just like saying a curse word.
For some strange reason, I wanted to run up to this man and hug him but my feet did not move and my arms did not rise. I had never felt this way toward anyone else.
A woman stepped into the room, and the light danced around her. Her red hair shimmered with gold strands. She moved from the door into the firelight. I stood very still as she placed her hands on her knees and she gracefully bent down to bring her face to mine. Her eyes were green, so much like mine! I studied her for a moment, then mumbled "Mom". The name had come out as if I had been speaking it to her my whole life. I turned to look at the man, and mumbled "Dad?".
At that moment, a flash of green light came and swept away the image of the man and woman. In the blinding green, I heard a woman call out, "NO! Not Harry! Please, no not Harry! Take me instead!" The voice stopped and the man and woman came into focus.
This had to be a dream. The two people I had wished for were standing in front of me, smiling.
Silence filled the air…. a ring of the doorbell broke it. "I'll get it," said the man and with out another word he had left. My mom and I stood alone. I wanted to ask her so many questions.
She was the one to break the silence: "Hi Harry, I'm Lilly Potter".
"I know." That's all I managed to get out. It was true: I did know who she was. I had sat in my cupboard so many times and strained my memory to once again hear her sing a tiny bit of a lullaby. She had a very pretty voice. She was my mom. I wanted to feel her arms around me, make sure she was really there. Instead, I stood on my spot waiting to hear her voice again.
She just smiled a very beautiful smile and it made every bad memory disappear.
I sat on the floor and watched her as she did the same.
"Are you the one that reads all these books?" I asked, looking around. I wished I had known them. I wish I could have all the time back. Back the way it was and the way it should have been. I looked at her again. "Or is it…?"
"No, it's me!", she said.
"Oh you must really like reading." I said, and she laughed. Her eyes danced with sparkles. I could feel her eyes following my movements while I looked at the bookcases
all around the room. I noticed that there was a loft above with books surrounding it. My eyes found a spiral staircase. Suddenly, she took my hand and said, "Come on, I'll show you."