Thank you to everybody who reviewed!!
BunnyTeddy-lover: oO **Hugs Damien** I'M SO SORRY I MADE YOU CRY!!! ;_; Everything will be okay, Isis and Zyta are making the potion to cure Yami!! ^_^ I just hope they make it in time. **Hugs Damien again** SORRY SORRY SORRY!!! Oh, and about the review you gave me for chapter 10, OUR DUELS DO SO LAST LONGER THEN THAT!!! Meanie.
Evee: Yami can't breathe because of Mariku's damn poisonous fox demons. Stupid fox demons.
Yami Hiei The Chaos Mage: Don't worry, I didn't take it the wrong way!! I just have a small amount of writers block.
Dark Magician Girl Kinko: Well, maybe I can persuade you into liking yaoi! ^_^ Me glad you likeies!!
Renee Fay: I knew that, really. I take Spanish at school, one would think I would know. I feel dumb now, but thanks!! ^_^ Glad you like!! ^_^
Silverdragon: I know, it is, isn't it? =)
Darkdragon: Don't worry, Yami won't die-----yet. =)
Rox: Yea, evil cliffies= more reviewers!! ^_^ happyfulness for me!! ^_^
Mistykasumi: Yea, of course they reconciled!! This is a Y/YY fic!! ^_^ **Huggles her Yugi and Yami Yugi plushies**
Werefox: I'm so glad!! ^_^
Here's chapter 14, Poison Can Kill
"ISIS!! ZYTA!! HELP!" Yugi screamed, crying and jumping up and down. "Calm down Yugi, we're working on the antidote." Zyta said. "We need to help him NOW!! He'll die!!" Yugi said. Yami's eyes had gotten big, and his throat was swollen. His face was such a dark red it was almost purple. His hands were around his neck, and he was struggling to breathe. Yugi's face was covered in tears. "Please, help him." He whispered. "Yugi, we're doing all we can." Zyta said. "Is there any way I can help?" Yugi asked. "Yes, lay him on his back. Try and keep him calm we're doing all that we can." Zyta said. If you looked close enough, you could see tears in her eyes.
When Yugi had returned to Yami's side, he had discovered a message on the ground. It read. 'Yugi, I love you and I'm sorry. Goodbye my angel.' "No. NO!!" Yugi screamed. Yami was already lying on the ground, his eyes closed and his breathing was very shallow. "Isis." Yugi said, walking back over to the two Elvin women. "Yami is going to die, isn't he? He is breathing very little, and he's unconscious." Yugi said. Isis looked away, but at that time the rain started again. "Why does the rain always start when you are sad, Isis?" Yugi questioned. "That is Isis' way of crying. She can't do it by herself." Zyta said, calmly. "Come on Isis, concentrate on the spell!!" Zyta said. Isis nodded. Yugi could see the pain in her eyes. The idea of Yami dying seemed to be hurting her more then the draining effect of the spell.
Yugi could do nothing. He felt so worthless. He could not cry, his eyes were all out of tears. So, he sat on the ground and watched Yami dying. His breaths were getting shallower and shallower, and it did not help that he was breathing rain. When Yugi looked at him, he realized that Yami's message had been washed away in the rain. Yugi looked up to the sky. He screamed in his mind at whatever gods would hear him. 'WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME? WHAT DID I DO TO DESERVE THIS? WHY ARE YOU TAKING AWAY EVERYONE THAT I HAVE EVER LOVED? Why can't you just let me be happy?' His mind screamed. He had lost his parents, his grandmother, and now his lover? Why couldn't the gods just let him be happy? Why did they have to take everything away from him? Yugi couldn't stand it anymore, and he made a vow then and there. "If Yami dies, I will die with him." He said, his words lost in the booming of thunder.
Isis was so drained; she felt that she was going to fall over. 'I have to stay strong! For Yami.' She thought. She gathered up all the magic she had left, said the spell, and put it into the vial. She passed out soon after. Zyta was on her own, making the huge spell that usually needed 4 or more spellcasters to make. Luckily for her, the spell was almost done. She got al the magical power she would need, and forced it into the vial. It glowed a light red. She smiled. "It's done. YUGI! IT'S DONE!!" She crawled over to Yugi, being too tired to walk. "Yugi. Pour this into his mouth. He'll wake up once you do." Zyta said, collapsing from exhaustion as soon as Yugi took the vial.
Yugi, being tired from crying and mentally screaming, crawled over to Yami, followed by Zyta and Isis, who had woken up. Yugi sat on the ground and pulled Yami closer to him. His breathing was almost gone. Yugi pulled the stopper out. The rain had stopped, and Isis was happy. 'We will save him! He will live!!' She thought happily. Yugi poured the contents of the vial into Yami's mouth. 5 seconds went by, then 15, and then 30. Nothing happened. Yugi turned to Zyta, tears in his eyes. It had been 2 minutes. She sucked in a shaky breath. "We were too late." Isis was so sad; something happened that never happened in Egypt. It began to snow.
;_; THAT WAS THE SADDEST THING I HAVE EVER WRITTEN IN MY LIFE!!! **Cries** Please review. They might help my mood. ;_;
BunnyTeddy-lover: oO **Hugs Damien** I'M SO SORRY I MADE YOU CRY!!! ;_; Everything will be okay, Isis and Zyta are making the potion to cure Yami!! ^_^ I just hope they make it in time. **Hugs Damien again** SORRY SORRY SORRY!!! Oh, and about the review you gave me for chapter 10, OUR DUELS DO SO LAST LONGER THEN THAT!!! Meanie.
Evee: Yami can't breathe because of Mariku's damn poisonous fox demons. Stupid fox demons.
Yami Hiei The Chaos Mage: Don't worry, I didn't take it the wrong way!! I just have a small amount of writers block.
Dark Magician Girl Kinko: Well, maybe I can persuade you into liking yaoi! ^_^ Me glad you likeies!!
Renee Fay: I knew that, really. I take Spanish at school, one would think I would know. I feel dumb now, but thanks!! ^_^ Glad you like!! ^_^
Silverdragon: I know, it is, isn't it? =)
Darkdragon: Don't worry, Yami won't die-----yet. =)
Rox: Yea, evil cliffies= more reviewers!! ^_^ happyfulness for me!! ^_^
Mistykasumi: Yea, of course they reconciled!! This is a Y/YY fic!! ^_^ **Huggles her Yugi and Yami Yugi plushies**
Werefox: I'm so glad!! ^_^
Here's chapter 14, Poison Can Kill
"ISIS!! ZYTA!! HELP!" Yugi screamed, crying and jumping up and down. "Calm down Yugi, we're working on the antidote." Zyta said. "We need to help him NOW!! He'll die!!" Yugi said. Yami's eyes had gotten big, and his throat was swollen. His face was such a dark red it was almost purple. His hands were around his neck, and he was struggling to breathe. Yugi's face was covered in tears. "Please, help him." He whispered. "Yugi, we're doing all we can." Zyta said. "Is there any way I can help?" Yugi asked. "Yes, lay him on his back. Try and keep him calm we're doing all that we can." Zyta said. If you looked close enough, you could see tears in her eyes.
When Yugi had returned to Yami's side, he had discovered a message on the ground. It read. 'Yugi, I love you and I'm sorry. Goodbye my angel.' "No. NO!!" Yugi screamed. Yami was already lying on the ground, his eyes closed and his breathing was very shallow. "Isis." Yugi said, walking back over to the two Elvin women. "Yami is going to die, isn't he? He is breathing very little, and he's unconscious." Yugi said. Isis looked away, but at that time the rain started again. "Why does the rain always start when you are sad, Isis?" Yugi questioned. "That is Isis' way of crying. She can't do it by herself." Zyta said, calmly. "Come on Isis, concentrate on the spell!!" Zyta said. Isis nodded. Yugi could see the pain in her eyes. The idea of Yami dying seemed to be hurting her more then the draining effect of the spell.
Yugi could do nothing. He felt so worthless. He could not cry, his eyes were all out of tears. So, he sat on the ground and watched Yami dying. His breaths were getting shallower and shallower, and it did not help that he was breathing rain. When Yugi looked at him, he realized that Yami's message had been washed away in the rain. Yugi looked up to the sky. He screamed in his mind at whatever gods would hear him. 'WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME? WHAT DID I DO TO DESERVE THIS? WHY ARE YOU TAKING AWAY EVERYONE THAT I HAVE EVER LOVED? Why can't you just let me be happy?' His mind screamed. He had lost his parents, his grandmother, and now his lover? Why couldn't the gods just let him be happy? Why did they have to take everything away from him? Yugi couldn't stand it anymore, and he made a vow then and there. "If Yami dies, I will die with him." He said, his words lost in the booming of thunder.
Isis was so drained; she felt that she was going to fall over. 'I have to stay strong! For Yami.' She thought. She gathered up all the magic she had left, said the spell, and put it into the vial. She passed out soon after. Zyta was on her own, making the huge spell that usually needed 4 or more spellcasters to make. Luckily for her, the spell was almost done. She got al the magical power she would need, and forced it into the vial. It glowed a light red. She smiled. "It's done. YUGI! IT'S DONE!!" She crawled over to Yugi, being too tired to walk. "Yugi. Pour this into his mouth. He'll wake up once you do." Zyta said, collapsing from exhaustion as soon as Yugi took the vial.
Yugi, being tired from crying and mentally screaming, crawled over to Yami, followed by Zyta and Isis, who had woken up. Yugi sat on the ground and pulled Yami closer to him. His breathing was almost gone. Yugi pulled the stopper out. The rain had stopped, and Isis was happy. 'We will save him! He will live!!' She thought happily. Yugi poured the contents of the vial into Yami's mouth. 5 seconds went by, then 15, and then 30. Nothing happened. Yugi turned to Zyta, tears in his eyes. It had been 2 minutes. She sucked in a shaky breath. "We were too late." Isis was so sad; something happened that never happened in Egypt. It began to snow.
;_; THAT WAS THE SADDEST THING I HAVE EVER WRITTEN IN MY LIFE!!! **Cries** Please review. They might help my mood. ;_;