Losing Grip Chapter 3:
A/N: Okay so I'm changing to ages of Grace. Grace is 15, and Evan and Eli are both seniors. Grace is a sophomore. I'm also trying to use another style of writing.tell me which one you like better!
Chapter 3:
And that was the faithful day in which Evan and Eli became pretty good friends. It is now a month later, and the story will be told in their different perspectives. Not just from me you know. Yes I am revealing myself to you now as simply the narrator, the person telling the story. Mind you, it's really Evan's story but hey she never said I couldn't talk about me. So I'm Shane West, an average teenage girl telling you a good story. What I hope is a good story anyways..so on with the story.
Grace's POV:
Evan was over again today. She's always over! I mean isn't she supposed to be my friend? I met her first, maybe I'm not exactly sure about that but....it doesn't mean she has to hang out with Eli all the time. Okay, so what if they're both seniors? And they both happen to like the same music. And they both play instruments. Yes I get the point now. *Sigh* I'm not sure if I really like Eli, I mean he is the most popular guy in school, who wouldn't like him? Of course Evan doesn't like him. She tells me that whenever I ask her. Of course I ask her almost all the time, but she seems to forget that I've asked her ten-thousand times already.
"Hey Grace!" Evan said, settling down on the floor of Grace's room. She took out a new burned CD presenting it to me. "Here are the songs you wanted." She placed the CD in her CD player.
"Thanks Ev." I smiled hesitantly of course. I wanted to ask her, but she would noticed. Evan notices everything, especially people's reactions.
"What's wrong?" She said leaning forward with a worried look on her face.
"Can I ask you something?" I said, slowly hoping she wouldn't be upset. She nodded earnestly. "Do you like Eli?" She shrugged.
"Yea sure why not? We're friends." She said nonchalantly, before handing her headphones to me.
What's that supposed to mean?
Evan's POV:
Grace asked me a funny thing today, again. She's always asking me. I wonder why?
"Do you like Eli?" I wanted to laugh. Me...like Eli? Maybe as a friend but as a boyfriend? I mean who would want to be my boyfriend anyways? I'm not the type, I may be friends with a lot of guys but I'm not girlfriend material. I can tell you that. I mean I practically dress like a guy myself.
I'm not the type of girl who dresses up in dresses and skirts, and can actually tell the difference between them. But I've put that past me, I would much rather be comfortable than be wearing underwear which goes into my butt crack. I mean I see all these girls wearing thongs and high heeled shoes. Is it really worth the trouble? Who's going to look at you anyway? Ehhh just plain black pants and a hoodie are enough for me.
All those girls want Eli, I mean what's so good about him. He drinks, eats, and drinks, and eats. That's pretty much it from what I've seen. Okay so he's one of my best friend's here in Chicago now but still. He's very lazy from what I can tell. Yea, yea I'm lazy too, I never said I wasn't. I guess to them Eli's another hot popular guy to chase. All he dates are the bimbos with their "stylist" barely-there clothes and it-takes- hours-to-get-perfect-hair. They never talk on their dates, of what I'm aware of anyway, all they do is make-out. Ugh, spare me the details please Eli. That's one thing about being friends with guys. They always want to tell you details.
But enough talking about things I don't wanna know. Today was a pretty good day, besides that whole weird Grace asking me thing. In Pys Ed, we won our volleyball game, again. Third in a row. We'll be going onto the championships again, I know it's not the school team but hey, I get points for winning! Spraining my thumb was worth it.
I turned the corner to meet Eli, where I met him everyday. My favorite part of the day actually, not having to see his friends and other skinny giggly girls he was always there alone.
"Hey." I said grinning. He knew what had happened he always knew.
"Lemme guess. You won your game?" Eli said, his eyes sparkling. I nodded.
"Of course. I sprained my thumb though. You know what happened? I wasn't even paying attention and the ball flew right at me and I just hit it, and it hit the girl in front of me in the face! I knocked her glasses right off." I felt bad but it was just hilarious. I didn't laugh of course, I think I was more hurt than her. Eli laughed.
"Is your thumb okay?" He said looking at my hand. I nodded, moving my thumb a little even though it was painful. Ehh..just another dent in my banged-up body. Who cares?
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A/N: So what did you think? I used a whole different style this time, because i'm thinking the other ones are pretty boring. I put a lot of sarcastic thoughts into it. Mostly my own thoughts but that's okay.
A new character, Shane West. No it's not Eli. No it's not a guy. It's a girl! HEHE she's the narrator. Got the idea from my friend Sara who's also writing a OAA fanfic. Shane is her main character. So our characters are different but they have the same first name! :-) Please review and tell me what you think!
A/N: Okay so I'm changing to ages of Grace. Grace is 15, and Evan and Eli are both seniors. Grace is a sophomore. I'm also trying to use another style of writing.tell me which one you like better!
Chapter 3:
And that was the faithful day in which Evan and Eli became pretty good friends. It is now a month later, and the story will be told in their different perspectives. Not just from me you know. Yes I am revealing myself to you now as simply the narrator, the person telling the story. Mind you, it's really Evan's story but hey she never said I couldn't talk about me. So I'm Shane West, an average teenage girl telling you a good story. What I hope is a good story anyways..so on with the story.
Grace's POV:
Evan was over again today. She's always over! I mean isn't she supposed to be my friend? I met her first, maybe I'm not exactly sure about that but....it doesn't mean she has to hang out with Eli all the time. Okay, so what if they're both seniors? And they both happen to like the same music. And they both play instruments. Yes I get the point now. *Sigh* I'm not sure if I really like Eli, I mean he is the most popular guy in school, who wouldn't like him? Of course Evan doesn't like him. She tells me that whenever I ask her. Of course I ask her almost all the time, but she seems to forget that I've asked her ten-thousand times already.
"Hey Grace!" Evan said, settling down on the floor of Grace's room. She took out a new burned CD presenting it to me. "Here are the songs you wanted." She placed the CD in her CD player.
"Thanks Ev." I smiled hesitantly of course. I wanted to ask her, but she would noticed. Evan notices everything, especially people's reactions.
"What's wrong?" She said leaning forward with a worried look on her face.
"Can I ask you something?" I said, slowly hoping she wouldn't be upset. She nodded earnestly. "Do you like Eli?" She shrugged.
"Yea sure why not? We're friends." She said nonchalantly, before handing her headphones to me.
What's that supposed to mean?
Evan's POV:
Grace asked me a funny thing today, again. She's always asking me. I wonder why?
"Do you like Eli?" I wanted to laugh. Me...like Eli? Maybe as a friend but as a boyfriend? I mean who would want to be my boyfriend anyways? I'm not the type, I may be friends with a lot of guys but I'm not girlfriend material. I can tell you that. I mean I practically dress like a guy myself.
I'm not the type of girl who dresses up in dresses and skirts, and can actually tell the difference between them. But I've put that past me, I would much rather be comfortable than be wearing underwear which goes into my butt crack. I mean I see all these girls wearing thongs and high heeled shoes. Is it really worth the trouble? Who's going to look at you anyway? Ehhh just plain black pants and a hoodie are enough for me.
All those girls want Eli, I mean what's so good about him. He drinks, eats, and drinks, and eats. That's pretty much it from what I've seen. Okay so he's one of my best friend's here in Chicago now but still. He's very lazy from what I can tell. Yea, yea I'm lazy too, I never said I wasn't. I guess to them Eli's another hot popular guy to chase. All he dates are the bimbos with their "stylist" barely-there clothes and it-takes- hours-to-get-perfect-hair. They never talk on their dates, of what I'm aware of anyway, all they do is make-out. Ugh, spare me the details please Eli. That's one thing about being friends with guys. They always want to tell you details.
But enough talking about things I don't wanna know. Today was a pretty good day, besides that whole weird Grace asking me thing. In Pys Ed, we won our volleyball game, again. Third in a row. We'll be going onto the championships again, I know it's not the school team but hey, I get points for winning! Spraining my thumb was worth it.
I turned the corner to meet Eli, where I met him everyday. My favorite part of the day actually, not having to see his friends and other skinny giggly girls he was always there alone.
"Hey." I said grinning. He knew what had happened he always knew.
"Lemme guess. You won your game?" Eli said, his eyes sparkling. I nodded.
"Of course. I sprained my thumb though. You know what happened? I wasn't even paying attention and the ball flew right at me and I just hit it, and it hit the girl in front of me in the face! I knocked her glasses right off." I felt bad but it was just hilarious. I didn't laugh of course, I think I was more hurt than her. Eli laughed.
"Is your thumb okay?" He said looking at my hand. I nodded, moving my thumb a little even though it was painful. Ehh..just another dent in my banged-up body. Who cares?
-------------------End of Chapter 3-----------------------
A/N: So what did you think? I used a whole different style this time, because i'm thinking the other ones are pretty boring. I put a lot of sarcastic thoughts into it. Mostly my own thoughts but that's okay.
A new character, Shane West. No it's not Eli. No it's not a guy. It's a girl! HEHE she's the narrator. Got the idea from my friend Sara who's also writing a OAA fanfic. Shane is her main character. So our characters are different but they have the same first name! :-) Please review and tell me what you think!