Black Storm: this isn't going to be like 'Smooth Criminal' I just
thought that if it was going to be a sequel it would probably suck-
me and fuzzy angel have created a sequel to 'Smooth Criminal'
anyway it is called 'Case of the EX'. What I'd really like are
some ideas and suggestions because I'm in writers block mode at
the moment! I can't think of anything to do for the third chapter!
Keira Kingsley: yeah Johnston is a cool character I reckon they should have someone like him on the show! Maybe it would make things a bit interesting *shrugs* well that's just my suggestions anyway for the Criminal Intent show.
Authors Note: if there are any spelling mistakes please email or review me so that I can change what I have mucked up!!
***Johnston will play a big role in this story- so you all will see more of him***
Authors Second Note: This * means that like a character in the story is thinking to himself however this /is italics/ and you get the drift *smiles*
Warning: Might be swearing. so if you're under 13 this might not be suitable for ya! *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* ~*~
Goren walked into a pub, knowing that the female suspect would be in here drinking and who knows smoking. He took off his trench coat as it was way to hot for him to wear. His eyes gazed around the room and the bar-he spotted a young attractive woman and a few inches away beside her were some guys intimidating and flirting around with her. Goren knew only one thing to do; he walked casually up to the woman and sat down in a spare chair next to her. She turned her head sideways to look at Goren and sweetly smiled, she checked him out from top to bottom-
"Hi" Goren said starting a conversation. He knew all to well that this lady was the suspect that he had to get close to.
"Hello" she replied back and took a quick sip of her cocktail drink.
Goren took a deep breath, "Alex-Alex Mathews." He introduced his fake name to her and held out his hand.
"Nicole-Nicole Bond." She added with a wink.
The two shook hands and started to converse with each other.
Nicole's shoulder length- black hair swayed as she was sitting underneath the air con vent-her blue eyes focused on the gentlemen behind Goren, she was tired enough of listening to them talking about her secretly and trying to get up close.
Nicole leaned forward and whispered into Goren's ear, "Can you do me a favour?"
The whisper made Goren shiver as her breath of words came out cold. He moved back a bit and nodded slightly, "like what?" he asked with a raised eyebrow.
Nicole's blue eyes gazed passed Goren's shoulder, "kiss me." She answered, she flicked her hair behind her back, "well what are you waiting for? Christmas?"
Goren shook his head sideways, "I can't."
"Do you have a girlfriend?" Nicole asked curiously and with a questionable look.
Goren shook his head again, "no." he lied.
"Well then what's the problem?"
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Deakin's walked out of his office and stroded up to Detective Damian Johnston. The young Detective felt a hand being placed on his shoulders as he was working on his reports and notes.
Johnston turned his chair in a twenty degree angle and stared up at his Captain with an insubordinate smile, "yes Captain?"
Deakin's smiled he had to bring Johnston into this case as this would be brilliant!
"I need a word with you confidentially Detective Johnston." Deakin's spoke.
Johnston raised an eyebrow, his heart pounded; he hoped that this wasn't going to be bad news or worse getting fired! He looked at everyone who was around him, they seemed to be busy with their work but this caught Eames attention as she was the only one who was watching the two whispering to each other quietly under their breaths. Eames growled through clenched teeth and her back was suddenly facing them-now this was the time to ignore the guys! Why wouldn't they tell her anything?
Eames mumbled, "Fine I know when I'm not wanted!"
Deakin's glanced over his shoulders, a slight grin appeared across his face- he then paid his attention to Johnston, "in my office now!" he said.
Johnston almost fell over his chair, "uh-yes Captain-right away."
Some of the staff members of the NYPD laughed as they saw the expression on Johnston's face. Somehow they know something that he doesn't know that he will soon find out as soon as he enters the Captains office. Of course most of the female cops in the NYPD had crushes on Johnston; he was always the cool dude-and multi talented!
Deakin's walked back into his office; he stood aside allowing Johnston to enter. Johnston closed the door shut behind him and took a seat in a spare chair and waited for the Captain to start the private conversation.
"I've been hearing-"Deakin's spoke trying to keep a straight face.
Johnston cocked an eyebrow, "hearing what?"
Deakin's coughed but this sounded more like a cackle to Johnston, "that you can sing."
Johnston's face flourished red, "yeah." He said gradually, "who told you that?"
Deakin's took a deep breath and pulled himself together, "well- Goren and Eames said that you can sing and well the rest of the female staff-now when I was away, did you by any chance sing in front of the female officers?" Johnston coughed, "what!?"
"It's a simple question all I need is a yes or no Detective." Deakin's spoke in a rough voice.
"I did-yes-what is this about?" Johnston inquired.
Deakin's decided to explain, "Someone-in whom I'm not mentioning any name recorded your singing, I found the tape on my desk, and I think he placed it there on purpose-"
"And" Johnston cut in.
"All I can say is that why on Earth are you working as a Detective here in the NYPD when you should be a singer?" Deakin's questioned.
Johnston swallowed, "I like my job-I like what I do, I just want to help innocent people from the bad guys /I don't/ want to be treated like I'm so special and all-I just want a normal life that's all."
Deakin's smiled, "good answer-Are you capable of singing in a restaurant?"
"Yes-why?"
Deakin's smile grew wider *this was going to be good* he thought to himself, "Detective Goren rang me an hour ago-he said that he is going on a date tomorrow night with the suspect called Nicole Bond-now" there was a minute pause, Deakin's grabbed a photo out of his draw beside him and gave it to Johnston, "this is what Ms Bond looks like-I want you to go undercover and sing at a restaurant, keep a close eye on the two especially Nicole, also keep an eye on the drinks-God knows what she'll do when Goren leaves her sight.
Afterwards when Goren is alone I want you to tell him that he has back up if anything goes wrong- warn him not to drink anything when he comes back from his table as soon as he leaves Nicole's sight-Try and grab their attention, sing something that the two like fish out some songs, we have some good cop dancers here so they'll be onstage with you."
Johnston nodded- he stared at the photo, "Is she worth to catch Captain?" he spoke in a serious tone.
Deakin's nodded, "absolutely Johnston- but Detective Goren and us can't catch her unless we have a warrant and evidence that she is the killer of the last four guys she went out with."
"What happens if Goren and she go out somewhere alone?" Johnston asked.
Deakin's sighed, "follow them- but make sure that Nicole doesn't catch a glimpse of you because Goren will be in big trouble."
"And when would you like me to do this?" Johnston asked as he stood up on his two feet.
Deakin's too stood up and folded his arms, "tomorrow night Johnston, remember, this is your first case and you are working undercover it's rare of a new Detective going on a dangerous and risky case- be careful and if there is someone who will disturb the case ring me." Johnston nodded, "yes Captain."
Before Detective Johnston went to open the door, Deakin's had one more thing to say-
"Don't let Goren out of your sight." He added.
Johnston took a nervous breath, "I'll do my best Captain."
"You can do this." Deakin's said.
Johnston glanced over his shoulder and smiled, "thank you Captain."
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Wheeee next chapter is going to be exciting peoples! Will Johnston be able to handle his task of being undercover in the third chapter? Nicole Bond finds Johnston suspicious when she sees him-what is it? And what will happen to Goren when he goes somewhere alone with her? Oh the tense is starting to arise now! To find out review me and read the third chapter that will be up ASAP!
Authors Note: Once again sorry about the spelling mistakes!
Keira Kingsley: yeah Johnston is a cool character I reckon they should have someone like him on the show! Maybe it would make things a bit interesting *shrugs* well that's just my suggestions anyway for the Criminal Intent show.
Authors Note: if there are any spelling mistakes please email or review me so that I can change what I have mucked up!!
***Johnston will play a big role in this story- so you all will see more of him***
Authors Second Note: This * means that like a character in the story is thinking to himself however this /is italics/ and you get the drift *smiles*
Warning: Might be swearing. so if you're under 13 this might not be suitable for ya! *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* ~*~
Goren walked into a pub, knowing that the female suspect would be in here drinking and who knows smoking. He took off his trench coat as it was way to hot for him to wear. His eyes gazed around the room and the bar-he spotted a young attractive woman and a few inches away beside her were some guys intimidating and flirting around with her. Goren knew only one thing to do; he walked casually up to the woman and sat down in a spare chair next to her. She turned her head sideways to look at Goren and sweetly smiled, she checked him out from top to bottom-
"Hi" Goren said starting a conversation. He knew all to well that this lady was the suspect that he had to get close to.
"Hello" she replied back and took a quick sip of her cocktail drink.
Goren took a deep breath, "Alex-Alex Mathews." He introduced his fake name to her and held out his hand.
"Nicole-Nicole Bond." She added with a wink.
The two shook hands and started to converse with each other.
Nicole's shoulder length- black hair swayed as she was sitting underneath the air con vent-her blue eyes focused on the gentlemen behind Goren, she was tired enough of listening to them talking about her secretly and trying to get up close.
Nicole leaned forward and whispered into Goren's ear, "Can you do me a favour?"
The whisper made Goren shiver as her breath of words came out cold. He moved back a bit and nodded slightly, "like what?" he asked with a raised eyebrow.
Nicole's blue eyes gazed passed Goren's shoulder, "kiss me." She answered, she flicked her hair behind her back, "well what are you waiting for? Christmas?"
Goren shook his head sideways, "I can't."
"Do you have a girlfriend?" Nicole asked curiously and with a questionable look.
Goren shook his head again, "no." he lied.
"Well then what's the problem?"
^*^*^*^*^
Deakin's walked out of his office and stroded up to Detective Damian Johnston. The young Detective felt a hand being placed on his shoulders as he was working on his reports and notes.
Johnston turned his chair in a twenty degree angle and stared up at his Captain with an insubordinate smile, "yes Captain?"
Deakin's smiled he had to bring Johnston into this case as this would be brilliant!
"I need a word with you confidentially Detective Johnston." Deakin's spoke.
Johnston raised an eyebrow, his heart pounded; he hoped that this wasn't going to be bad news or worse getting fired! He looked at everyone who was around him, they seemed to be busy with their work but this caught Eames attention as she was the only one who was watching the two whispering to each other quietly under their breaths. Eames growled through clenched teeth and her back was suddenly facing them-now this was the time to ignore the guys! Why wouldn't they tell her anything?
Eames mumbled, "Fine I know when I'm not wanted!"
Deakin's glanced over his shoulders, a slight grin appeared across his face- he then paid his attention to Johnston, "in my office now!" he said.
Johnston almost fell over his chair, "uh-yes Captain-right away."
Some of the staff members of the NYPD laughed as they saw the expression on Johnston's face. Somehow they know something that he doesn't know that he will soon find out as soon as he enters the Captains office. Of course most of the female cops in the NYPD had crushes on Johnston; he was always the cool dude-and multi talented!
Deakin's walked back into his office; he stood aside allowing Johnston to enter. Johnston closed the door shut behind him and took a seat in a spare chair and waited for the Captain to start the private conversation.
"I've been hearing-"Deakin's spoke trying to keep a straight face.
Johnston cocked an eyebrow, "hearing what?"
Deakin's coughed but this sounded more like a cackle to Johnston, "that you can sing."
Johnston's face flourished red, "yeah." He said gradually, "who told you that?"
Deakin's took a deep breath and pulled himself together, "well- Goren and Eames said that you can sing and well the rest of the female staff-now when I was away, did you by any chance sing in front of the female officers?" Johnston coughed, "what!?"
"It's a simple question all I need is a yes or no Detective." Deakin's spoke in a rough voice.
"I did-yes-what is this about?" Johnston inquired.
Deakin's decided to explain, "Someone-in whom I'm not mentioning any name recorded your singing, I found the tape on my desk, and I think he placed it there on purpose-"
"And" Johnston cut in.
"All I can say is that why on Earth are you working as a Detective here in the NYPD when you should be a singer?" Deakin's questioned.
Johnston swallowed, "I like my job-I like what I do, I just want to help innocent people from the bad guys /I don't/ want to be treated like I'm so special and all-I just want a normal life that's all."
Deakin's smiled, "good answer-Are you capable of singing in a restaurant?"
"Yes-why?"
Deakin's smile grew wider *this was going to be good* he thought to himself, "Detective Goren rang me an hour ago-he said that he is going on a date tomorrow night with the suspect called Nicole Bond-now" there was a minute pause, Deakin's grabbed a photo out of his draw beside him and gave it to Johnston, "this is what Ms Bond looks like-I want you to go undercover and sing at a restaurant, keep a close eye on the two especially Nicole, also keep an eye on the drinks-God knows what she'll do when Goren leaves her sight.
Afterwards when Goren is alone I want you to tell him that he has back up if anything goes wrong- warn him not to drink anything when he comes back from his table as soon as he leaves Nicole's sight-Try and grab their attention, sing something that the two like fish out some songs, we have some good cop dancers here so they'll be onstage with you."
Johnston nodded- he stared at the photo, "Is she worth to catch Captain?" he spoke in a serious tone.
Deakin's nodded, "absolutely Johnston- but Detective Goren and us can't catch her unless we have a warrant and evidence that she is the killer of the last four guys she went out with."
"What happens if Goren and she go out somewhere alone?" Johnston asked.
Deakin's sighed, "follow them- but make sure that Nicole doesn't catch a glimpse of you because Goren will be in big trouble."
"And when would you like me to do this?" Johnston asked as he stood up on his two feet.
Deakin's too stood up and folded his arms, "tomorrow night Johnston, remember, this is your first case and you are working undercover it's rare of a new Detective going on a dangerous and risky case- be careful and if there is someone who will disturb the case ring me." Johnston nodded, "yes Captain."
Before Detective Johnston went to open the door, Deakin's had one more thing to say-
"Don't let Goren out of your sight." He added.
Johnston took a nervous breath, "I'll do my best Captain."
"You can do this." Deakin's said.
Johnston glanced over his shoulder and smiled, "thank you Captain."
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Wheeee next chapter is going to be exciting peoples! Will Johnston be able to handle his task of being undercover in the third chapter? Nicole Bond finds Johnston suspicious when she sees him-what is it? And what will happen to Goren when he goes somewhere alone with her? Oh the tense is starting to arise now! To find out review me and read the third chapter that will be up ASAP!
Authors Note: Once again sorry about the spelling mistakes!