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NOTE: it has come to my attention that people LIKE Hiei/OC fics. Good. I want to make this one. You don't like it, get over it. It's my fic and I can change my mind if I want to. TAKE THAT!
PS: Dark of Sky . . . if you flame me again please know that I will be genuinely pissed at you. You never told me what I did wrong. You just said "Mary-Sue." My question - where is all this Mary-Sueness coming from? Can you copy/paste me a paragraph or two of Mary-Sueness so that I can figure out what you hate so much and I can fix it? Thanks.
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The Dragon Chapter 7: name the chappie? ~*~*~*~*~
"Mom?" Yusuke poked his head around the corner, watching as his mother flipped through the channels on the TV. He stood still a minute, halfway afraid she wouldn't answer. He turned and started to leave.
"What is it, Yusuke?" she spoke up, startling him.
He walked all the way into the room, hands jammed down into his pockets. He stared at the floor nervously. He started, "Uh, Mom I . . ."
"Is it about girls?" Atsuko blindly guessed at his problem. Yusuke's eyes lit up. She'd obviously hit it dead-on.
"Yeah, it is, actually," he grinned at her, hoping she'd get the message.
Never having been married herself, she didn't seem to. Yusuke gave a heavy sigh, pulling a small black box from his pocket for her to see. Her eyes sparkled with pleasure and she took it from him, opening it. Inside the black velvet box was a gold ring, with a simple diamond on it. Atsuko stared at it for a bit, tears swelling in her eyes.
"Yusuke, it's for Keiko, isn't it?" she smiled happily, hugging the velvet box to her chest.
Yusuke paused, "No, someone else."
Atsuko's jaw dropped, the small black box tumbling to the floor. The room was dead silent, and if someone would just so happen to drop a pin, it would have been audible. Yusuke's booming laughter startled his mother out of her trance.
"I'm only kidding, mom. It's for Keiko, duh," he laughed at her.
She smiled proudly at her son. "Yusuke, I'm glad you've decided to tell her. Make me proud," she said.
"I'll try," he grinned at her as he walked out the door, leaving on a good note. That was unusual for him, but he wasn't concerned. It was a nice change of pace for his mother to be sober and happy at the same time.
He whistled happily, fingering the black velvet box in the pocket of his green jumpsuit. Anyone else in the world would have been thinking about how to pop the question, but Yusuke's cool demeanor wouldn't allow for that. He was too busy thinking about other things, as though nothing about today was different. Marching up to her door, he knocked boldly. The sound of someone running to answer the door made his heart skip a beat, and as the door slid open he felt a lump in his throat.
"Hi, Yusuke!" Keiko threw her arms around his neck in a hug, pleased to see him. He stood still, choking on his words.
"Keiko, want to go to the park?" he asked eventually. She smiled and nodded, and they walked to the park arm-in-arm. Keiko seemed oblivious to his scheme, and she directed the conversation towards the usual topics, such as how Keiko's family's business was going, and light topics like that.
"I have a serious question," Yusuke blurted out of nowhere.
"Okay, shoot." Keiko grinned at him.
He reached down into his pocket and held out the black velvet box. "Keiko, will you marry me?"
She stepped back suddenly, gasping, "Yusuke . . ."
Yusuke blushed nervously as she took the case from him, opening it and peering inside. Tears rolled down her cheeks as she realized that he wasn't kidding. He grinned at her, waiting for the answer.
"I will," she said simply, holding him in her warm embrace.
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Yusuke sat straight up in bed, drenched in a cold sweat. He panted and put a hand do his chest, his heart pounding.
"Damn, I knew it was too good to be true," he thought aloud, resting his head back on his pillow. He found he was unable to sleep, too busy thinking. Thinking about Keiko.
~*~*~*(Makai)
"Shut up! SHUT UP! SHUT UP!!!" Amori screamed at herself, as BD cackled insanely inside her head.
"You shut up! You're the one scaring people, not me", BD teased.
(A/N: I had to use quotes for BD because italics doesn't work on ff.net. KUSO!!)
"I'm getting you a body and you're going far, FAR away," Amori threatened, becoming angrier.
"I think not. I think we should find YOU a body," BD cackled insanely again, driving Amori out of her mind.
"I can't take this anymore!!!" Amori reached up and pressed her forehead, hard, causing it to glow.
"Heh heh, now you get to be the voice inside MY head," BD walked around in a mini circle, glad to have a body again.
"Oh, leave me alone," Amori whined.
"Now, where do I get a body?" BD mused. "Aha! Spirit World! That's where!" she bounded off, using the body to the best of it's ability and running fast.
"Slow down!! That's my body too you know! WATCH OUT FOR THE TREE!" Amori yelled. BD, of course, missed the tree.
"Am I THAT annoying?" BD asked.
"Yes."
~*~*~*~*(The Kuwabara Residence)
Ring.
Ring.
Ring.
Ring.
CLICK.
"Not there, huh?" Shizuru asked.
Kuwabara shook his head sadly. "My Yukina! I miss her!"
"It's all right, she's probably just outside or something. You should go see her in person," Shizuru suggested.
"Hey! You're right! I'm going to check Genkai's Temple. See you later!" He ran out the door, completely ecstatic.
Shizuru shook her head in disbelief. "That's my baby brother for you, always forgetting SOMETHING."
(A/N: caps lock = italics. FF.NET WONT LET ME HAVE ITALICS! KUSO!)
~*~*~*~*(Reikai)
"KOENMA!" BD and Amori both yelled at the same time.
"He can't hear YOU, stupid," BD pointed out.
"Uhh, what?" Koenma looked up, his left eye twitching with annoyance.
"We need a body," BD said.
"What do you mean, 'we' need a body?" he asked suspiciously.
"Amori and me," she explained hastily.
"Amori. . . you are Amori!"
"I am not!" she gasped, shocked, "I have NEVER been so insulted!"
Koenma looked quite confused at this point. "Can you explain, please?"
"It's a long story. I'm the embodiment of all the evil in Amori. Amori thusly turned into the good part, not having any evil left." BD said simply. She'd explained her entire life in one sentence. What talent.
"You do realize that you just told me that you are evil. . . right? That means you committed the crime, and not Amori," he pointed out.
"And you do realize that. . . no, closer. . ." she leaned down, as if to whisper a secret. He leaned in to hear. "I SERVED A SENTENCE TOO!"
He rubbed his ears, thoroughly peeved. "All right, then what do you want?"
She tapped her foot impatiently. "Body. Body. BODY. Do I have to say it again?"
"No."
"BODY!"
" . . . Okay, so you want a body. Do you have any clever reasons as to why I'd give you a body?"
"She annoys me." BD pointed at her head.
"Your head annoys you?"
BD tapped her foot on the floor faster, a frustrated mark appearing on her head. "I can hear Amori's voice in my head when I'm in control of the body. I would like my own body."
"I see . . ."
"Good. You're not blind. Now hurry up and get me a body!"
Koenma threw a tantrum at this remark. "BOTAN! Take it away! TAKE IT AWAY! I can't deal with it!!!" he kicked and screamed and made a big mess of things on his desk.
"Yes, sir?" Botan peeped out from her bedroom. "Eep! BD! It's you!"
"Yep, it's me!" BD smiled happily.
"Yay!!"
"Can I have a body?"
Botan sweat dropped. "Uhh, a body?"
"Yes."
"What for . . .?" Botan smiled nervously, wondering why BD wanted a body.
"I can hear Amori in my head! She wants control of her body again. And I want my own. Get me my own!" BD shouted.
"I can find you a body, I think. I ferry souls all day long, there are always some who die with their bodies in tact!" she grinned happily, although not understanding the situation in the least.
"Yay! Thanks Botan!!" BD grinned. She suddenly had a moment of epiphany. "Botan!! I want this body!! Can we make Amori move into the new body?"
"WHAT?!" Amori spoke up inside her head.
Before Botan could answer, BD exploded, "WE DON'T NEED ANY COMMENTS FROM THE PEANUT GALLERY!"
Botan stood there a minute, in shock.
"Sorry, Amori decided to add her own UNWANTED comment," BD explained.
"Riiiiiiiiight . . ." Botan said. "Anyway, I'll find some bodies that are still able to be used, and you can pick. All right?"
"Sounds good to me!" BD turned to go.
"Where are you going?" Botan asked.
BD grinned evilly. "You can reach me at Kuwabara's house."
"WHAT?!?!" Amori shrieked. She went unnoticed, however.
Botan was confused, but she smiled anyway. "All right, I'll call there when I'm done ferrying for the day. Bye!"
Koenma had long since finished his tantrum and was rearranging the things on his desk. "Time to go now, happy hour over," he said.
"Humph, I feel left out," BD answered, but walked away anyway as Botan waved.
"Sorry about him, he hasn't had a nap. Later!" Botan smiled.
"BOTAN!" Koenma shrieked.
BD just laughed at their antics and took off running, headed for Kuwabara's house.
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END CHAPTER
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BD has an idea. GASP. And Amori is pissed. GASP. And I left out Hiei and Kurama again. GASP. But you'll get over it. I'll update sooner or later, you know I will. Review me. If I don't get reviews. . . I'll update anyway, just because I can.
Flames and Torches,
~Black Dragon~
NOTE: it has come to my attention that people LIKE Hiei/OC fics. Good. I want to make this one. You don't like it, get over it. It's my fic and I can change my mind if I want to. TAKE THAT!
PS: Dark of Sky . . . if you flame me again please know that I will be genuinely pissed at you. You never told me what I did wrong. You just said "Mary-Sue." My question - where is all this Mary-Sueness coming from? Can you copy/paste me a paragraph or two of Mary-Sueness so that I can figure out what you hate so much and I can fix it? Thanks.
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The Dragon Chapter 7: name the chappie? ~*~*~*~*~
"Mom?" Yusuke poked his head around the corner, watching as his mother flipped through the channels on the TV. He stood still a minute, halfway afraid she wouldn't answer. He turned and started to leave.
"What is it, Yusuke?" she spoke up, startling him.
He walked all the way into the room, hands jammed down into his pockets. He stared at the floor nervously. He started, "Uh, Mom I . . ."
"Is it about girls?" Atsuko blindly guessed at his problem. Yusuke's eyes lit up. She'd obviously hit it dead-on.
"Yeah, it is, actually," he grinned at her, hoping she'd get the message.
Never having been married herself, she didn't seem to. Yusuke gave a heavy sigh, pulling a small black box from his pocket for her to see. Her eyes sparkled with pleasure and she took it from him, opening it. Inside the black velvet box was a gold ring, with a simple diamond on it. Atsuko stared at it for a bit, tears swelling in her eyes.
"Yusuke, it's for Keiko, isn't it?" she smiled happily, hugging the velvet box to her chest.
Yusuke paused, "No, someone else."
Atsuko's jaw dropped, the small black box tumbling to the floor. The room was dead silent, and if someone would just so happen to drop a pin, it would have been audible. Yusuke's booming laughter startled his mother out of her trance.
"I'm only kidding, mom. It's for Keiko, duh," he laughed at her.
She smiled proudly at her son. "Yusuke, I'm glad you've decided to tell her. Make me proud," she said.
"I'll try," he grinned at her as he walked out the door, leaving on a good note. That was unusual for him, but he wasn't concerned. It was a nice change of pace for his mother to be sober and happy at the same time.
He whistled happily, fingering the black velvet box in the pocket of his green jumpsuit. Anyone else in the world would have been thinking about how to pop the question, but Yusuke's cool demeanor wouldn't allow for that. He was too busy thinking about other things, as though nothing about today was different. Marching up to her door, he knocked boldly. The sound of someone running to answer the door made his heart skip a beat, and as the door slid open he felt a lump in his throat.
"Hi, Yusuke!" Keiko threw her arms around his neck in a hug, pleased to see him. He stood still, choking on his words.
"Keiko, want to go to the park?" he asked eventually. She smiled and nodded, and they walked to the park arm-in-arm. Keiko seemed oblivious to his scheme, and she directed the conversation towards the usual topics, such as how Keiko's family's business was going, and light topics like that.
"I have a serious question," Yusuke blurted out of nowhere.
"Okay, shoot." Keiko grinned at him.
He reached down into his pocket and held out the black velvet box. "Keiko, will you marry me?"
She stepped back suddenly, gasping, "Yusuke . . ."
Yusuke blushed nervously as she took the case from him, opening it and peering inside. Tears rolled down her cheeks as she realized that he wasn't kidding. He grinned at her, waiting for the answer.
"I will," she said simply, holding him in her warm embrace.
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Yusuke sat straight up in bed, drenched in a cold sweat. He panted and put a hand do his chest, his heart pounding.
"Damn, I knew it was too good to be true," he thought aloud, resting his head back on his pillow. He found he was unable to sleep, too busy thinking. Thinking about Keiko.
~*~*~*(Makai)
"Shut up! SHUT UP! SHUT UP!!!" Amori screamed at herself, as BD cackled insanely inside her head.
"You shut up! You're the one scaring people, not me", BD teased.
(A/N: I had to use quotes for BD because italics doesn't work on ff.net. KUSO!!)
"I'm getting you a body and you're going far, FAR away," Amori threatened, becoming angrier.
"I think not. I think we should find YOU a body," BD cackled insanely again, driving Amori out of her mind.
"I can't take this anymore!!!" Amori reached up and pressed her forehead, hard, causing it to glow.
"Heh heh, now you get to be the voice inside MY head," BD walked around in a mini circle, glad to have a body again.
"Oh, leave me alone," Amori whined.
"Now, where do I get a body?" BD mused. "Aha! Spirit World! That's where!" she bounded off, using the body to the best of it's ability and running fast.
"Slow down!! That's my body too you know! WATCH OUT FOR THE TREE!" Amori yelled. BD, of course, missed the tree.
"Am I THAT annoying?" BD asked.
"Yes."
~*~*~*~*(The Kuwabara Residence)
Ring.
Ring.
Ring.
Ring.
CLICK.
"Not there, huh?" Shizuru asked.
Kuwabara shook his head sadly. "My Yukina! I miss her!"
"It's all right, she's probably just outside or something. You should go see her in person," Shizuru suggested.
"Hey! You're right! I'm going to check Genkai's Temple. See you later!" He ran out the door, completely ecstatic.
Shizuru shook her head in disbelief. "That's my baby brother for you, always forgetting SOMETHING."
(A/N: caps lock = italics. FF.NET WONT LET ME HAVE ITALICS! KUSO!)
~*~*~*~*(Reikai)
"KOENMA!" BD and Amori both yelled at the same time.
"He can't hear YOU, stupid," BD pointed out.
"Uhh, what?" Koenma looked up, his left eye twitching with annoyance.
"We need a body," BD said.
"What do you mean, 'we' need a body?" he asked suspiciously.
"Amori and me," she explained hastily.
"Amori. . . you are Amori!"
"I am not!" she gasped, shocked, "I have NEVER been so insulted!"
Koenma looked quite confused at this point. "Can you explain, please?"
"It's a long story. I'm the embodiment of all the evil in Amori. Amori thusly turned into the good part, not having any evil left." BD said simply. She'd explained her entire life in one sentence. What talent.
"You do realize that you just told me that you are evil. . . right? That means you committed the crime, and not Amori," he pointed out.
"And you do realize that. . . no, closer. . ." she leaned down, as if to whisper a secret. He leaned in to hear. "I SERVED A SENTENCE TOO!"
He rubbed his ears, thoroughly peeved. "All right, then what do you want?"
She tapped her foot impatiently. "Body. Body. BODY. Do I have to say it again?"
"No."
"BODY!"
" . . . Okay, so you want a body. Do you have any clever reasons as to why I'd give you a body?"
"She annoys me." BD pointed at her head.
"Your head annoys you?"
BD tapped her foot on the floor faster, a frustrated mark appearing on her head. "I can hear Amori's voice in my head when I'm in control of the body. I would like my own body."
"I see . . ."
"Good. You're not blind. Now hurry up and get me a body!"
Koenma threw a tantrum at this remark. "BOTAN! Take it away! TAKE IT AWAY! I can't deal with it!!!" he kicked and screamed and made a big mess of things on his desk.
"Yes, sir?" Botan peeped out from her bedroom. "Eep! BD! It's you!"
"Yep, it's me!" BD smiled happily.
"Yay!!"
"Can I have a body?"
Botan sweat dropped. "Uhh, a body?"
"Yes."
"What for . . .?" Botan smiled nervously, wondering why BD wanted a body.
"I can hear Amori in my head! She wants control of her body again. And I want my own. Get me my own!" BD shouted.
"I can find you a body, I think. I ferry souls all day long, there are always some who die with their bodies in tact!" she grinned happily, although not understanding the situation in the least.
"Yay! Thanks Botan!!" BD grinned. She suddenly had a moment of epiphany. "Botan!! I want this body!! Can we make Amori move into the new body?"
"WHAT?!" Amori spoke up inside her head.
Before Botan could answer, BD exploded, "WE DON'T NEED ANY COMMENTS FROM THE PEANUT GALLERY!"
Botan stood there a minute, in shock.
"Sorry, Amori decided to add her own UNWANTED comment," BD explained.
"Riiiiiiiiight . . ." Botan said. "Anyway, I'll find some bodies that are still able to be used, and you can pick. All right?"
"Sounds good to me!" BD turned to go.
"Where are you going?" Botan asked.
BD grinned evilly. "You can reach me at Kuwabara's house."
"WHAT?!?!" Amori shrieked. She went unnoticed, however.
Botan was confused, but she smiled anyway. "All right, I'll call there when I'm done ferrying for the day. Bye!"
Koenma had long since finished his tantrum and was rearranging the things on his desk. "Time to go now, happy hour over," he said.
"Humph, I feel left out," BD answered, but walked away anyway as Botan waved.
"Sorry about him, he hasn't had a nap. Later!" Botan smiled.
"BOTAN!" Koenma shrieked.
BD just laughed at their antics and took off running, headed for Kuwabara's house.
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END CHAPTER
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BD has an idea. GASP. And Amori is pissed. GASP. And I left out Hiei and Kurama again. GASP. But you'll get over it. I'll update sooner or later, you know I will. Review me. If I don't get reviews. . . I'll update anyway, just because I can.
Flames and Torches,
~Black Dragon~