I wanted to say thank you to all the regular reviewers (you know who you
are, a million hugs to you) and to the new reviewers. That would be Saiyan
Safire and Anchor.
Now as for you Anchor, all I have to say is;
THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!
I GOT MY FIRST FLAME!!!
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HE/SHE SAID I WRITE LIKE A NINE YEAR OLD!!!!!!
Oh yeah! I write like a nine-year old, uhha, uhha! (Does happy dance)
I GOT MY FIRST FLAME!!! MUHAHAHAHA-
Vegeta's Diary
Chapter 11
Chicken: Hey, I'm not done yet!!! Now, as I was saying. MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Okay, I'm going to stop now.
Last time: Vegeta is beaten by Freeza, healed by a new friend, who walks in similar shoes as our hero (not size five, I don't mean it literally). He (Vegeta) was then chased home by the thought of an angry Nappa and some also angry men. Now, on to the chapter! //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
I willed myself to go faster. The vision of Freeza scared me to no end.
I would never admit that to anyone, but inside I knew, that my fear of him was greater than my anger for him.
I felt like I was a deer, hunted, chased through the forest endlessly.
Suddenly, I bumped into something, and I sat back from the impact.
I looked up.
Why me? Why, oh why me?
Zarbon smirked down at me.
I heard the men stop.
"Excuse us sir we have a little thing to settle with the brat."
" I'll settle it for you."
He leaned down, only a few centis (yeah, I think that's what you use) from my face.
"With pleasure." He whispered.
The footsteps of the men could be heard.
Zarbon looked like the Onda himself.
"Whoa, who the heck is this Onda?" Bra looked at the others confused.
They shrugged in answer.
"Don't you know anything about this, Mr. Expert?" Goten turned to Trunks.
Trunks just shook his head.
"Wait, it says something here about it." Gohan said as he read ahead.
The others listened.
Oh, you don't know about the (quote Palana) mythical world of our ancestor's beliefs and spiritual world. Rolls eyes
Let, moi, explain then. Onda was the guardian of hell, where all those who led dishonorable life, go.
He was a frightening monster, with three heads, and a whip that could beat the mightiest of saiyans. Of course, I can't quite explain it, but if you would have seen one of the pictures in my myth book, or heard one of Raddits' stories you would have scared you tailless.
Back to the story.
I was shacking like a leaf.
My walls had crumbled.
I was breaking down again.
I closed my eyes.
Images filled my mind.
My family zipped past me.
Father's face lingered before me. His voice echoed.
"I'm proud of you Vegeta. I love you my son."
I opened my eyes.
No!
I will not fall.
I glared at Zarbon.
He won't beat me.
"Well, well, looks like the monkey prince got in trouble again."
"Yeah, well he will be on his way, as well." I stated sarcastically as I got up and I emphasize this word, tried to go past him.
He stepped in my way.
I stepped to the right.
He stepped to the right.
I stepped to the left.
He stepped to the left.
I tried the right again.
Left.
Right.
Left.
Right.
"WOULD YOU JUST LET ME GO?!?!?"
"Ah-ah."
I growled at him. I wanted to get 'home' as fast as possible.
"Look."
He grabbed me by the neck.
"Sorry, kid, but no one messes with the boss, and get's away with it from him or me."
His eyes flashed daggers at me.
"What, are you in love with him or something?"
He growled at me.
Oops. I just said my death sentence.
There you have it! Phew! I'm done! I'm sorry people, but, but I have to announce this. Since it's going to be the end of the year the big, high mark tests are coming up. That means I won't be able to update everyday. But I promise I will update every second or third day at least! Let my nickname not be Andi Killer Very Funny Purple American Fried Chicken if I don't even try to keep my word!
Now as for you Anchor, all I have to say is;
THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!
I GOT MY FIRST FLAME!!!
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HE/SHE SAID I WRITE LIKE A NINE YEAR OLD!!!!!!
Oh yeah! I write like a nine-year old, uhha, uhha! (Does happy dance)
I GOT MY FIRST FLAME!!! MUHAHAHAHA-
Vegeta's Diary
Chapter 11
Chicken: Hey, I'm not done yet!!! Now, as I was saying. MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Okay, I'm going to stop now.
Last time: Vegeta is beaten by Freeza, healed by a new friend, who walks in similar shoes as our hero (not size five, I don't mean it literally). He (Vegeta) was then chased home by the thought of an angry Nappa and some also angry men. Now, on to the chapter! //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
I willed myself to go faster. The vision of Freeza scared me to no end.
I would never admit that to anyone, but inside I knew, that my fear of him was greater than my anger for him.
I felt like I was a deer, hunted, chased through the forest endlessly.
Suddenly, I bumped into something, and I sat back from the impact.
I looked up.
Why me? Why, oh why me?
Zarbon smirked down at me.
I heard the men stop.
"Excuse us sir we have a little thing to settle with the brat."
" I'll settle it for you."
He leaned down, only a few centis (yeah, I think that's what you use) from my face.
"With pleasure." He whispered.
The footsteps of the men could be heard.
Zarbon looked like the Onda himself.
"Whoa, who the heck is this Onda?" Bra looked at the others confused.
They shrugged in answer.
"Don't you know anything about this, Mr. Expert?" Goten turned to Trunks.
Trunks just shook his head.
"Wait, it says something here about it." Gohan said as he read ahead.
The others listened.
Oh, you don't know about the (quote Palana) mythical world of our ancestor's beliefs and spiritual world. Rolls eyes
Let, moi, explain then. Onda was the guardian of hell, where all those who led dishonorable life, go.
He was a frightening monster, with three heads, and a whip that could beat the mightiest of saiyans. Of course, I can't quite explain it, but if you would have seen one of the pictures in my myth book, or heard one of Raddits' stories you would have scared you tailless.
Back to the story.
I was shacking like a leaf.
My walls had crumbled.
I was breaking down again.
I closed my eyes.
Images filled my mind.
My family zipped past me.
Father's face lingered before me. His voice echoed.
"I'm proud of you Vegeta. I love you my son."
I opened my eyes.
No!
I will not fall.
I glared at Zarbon.
He won't beat me.
"Well, well, looks like the monkey prince got in trouble again."
"Yeah, well he will be on his way, as well." I stated sarcastically as I got up and I emphasize this word, tried to go past him.
He stepped in my way.
I stepped to the right.
He stepped to the right.
I stepped to the left.
He stepped to the left.
I tried the right again.
Left.
Right.
Left.
Right.
"WOULD YOU JUST LET ME GO?!?!?"
"Ah-ah."
I growled at him. I wanted to get 'home' as fast as possible.
"Look."
He grabbed me by the neck.
"Sorry, kid, but no one messes with the boss, and get's away with it from him or me."
His eyes flashed daggers at me.
"What, are you in love with him or something?"
He growled at me.
Oops. I just said my death sentence.
There you have it! Phew! I'm done! I'm sorry people, but, but I have to announce this. Since it's going to be the end of the year the big, high mark tests are coming up. That means I won't be able to update everyday. But I promise I will update every second or third day at least! Let my nickname not be Andi Killer Very Funny Purple American Fried Chicken if I don't even try to keep my word!