Ya! I got a review from let's see..Kyra. it read:
Oh poor, poor Zelda! OK now you realize, you're going to have to have Link
kick
some major butt! Just one suggestion- you keep switching from first-person
to
third-person narration, and it gets a little confusing. You should pick
one
style and stick with it. Great beginning though- I look forward to reading
more.
And yes, Link is going to have to kick butt isn't he? But what happens if Zelda has Zermon's baby? I'm not giving any thing away but what would happen? Let's begin the story. Oh ya the pizza was good, no flames to eat it with, not that I want any.
Mysterious Voice: Here we go. We are with Link right now.
Link finally got to the King.
"Sir, Zelda has been Kidnapped!" Link said.
"What" he said now angered.
"I was talking to her and my old friend came he knocked me out and when I woke up they're were both gone." Link told the king.
"We will search all bordering lands even Cathrlina." The king said.
Link then went to his home in the forest as fast as he could. He grabbed all his items and started the search.
***************Zermon's base later that night***********************
Zelda was still chained to the wall. And also still nude. Then Zermon walked back into the room.
"Before we have sex, I want you to have a bath, you are to dirty!" Zermon said.
He took of the chins and tied her hands together.
"Wouldn't want you to leave would we?" Zermon said.
He carried her through a room and into the bath room.
"Leave me alone Zermon!"
"Princess, come on, why don't you want your lover to give you a bath?" He said smirking.
"I will never be your lover!" Zelda said as she spat in his face.
"That's no way for the princess to act is it?" Zermon said dropping her into the tube.
"Don't touch me!" She yelled.
"I can do what ever I dam well please whore!" He yelled into her face.
He took his hand and dipped it in the water and felt some places he should not have.
"Stop that!" She said as she bit him.
"Oh, you want to be me?" he said as he took of his clothes.
He jumped into the tub with her and he was on top. He weighed to much so she went under water.
"Maybe we should do this somewhere else princess right?" he said as he lifted her out of the tub and over to his bed.
He tied her hands to the bedpost, and her feet to.
"Remember this morning?" He asked.
Thoughts started flooding in to her mind.
"Link will kill you when he finds out what you are doing to me!" She yelled.
"Zelda my dear, you'll be dead by then." Zermon said.
"Time for an encore of this morning." He said.
Then Zelda spat in his face.
"I didn't want to do this but I guess I have to!" He said as he got up and then came back with a whip.
He started to hit Zelda.
"Are you going to be a good little girl?"
All she could do was node yes.
"Good, then let's place suck the snake!" He said.
Zelda knew what this meant. So she moved her mouth down to his manhood and started to suck on it.
Zermon started to yell faster. then she trough her off of him.
"Let's play a different game!" He said. As he started kissing Zelda In inappropriate places."
Then she said something she was surprised to say.
"More, more, oh please Zermon more!" She then noticed what she had said.
Then he took his manhood and thrust it into her well you know.. And he did it repeatedly. Soon it was over.
"Zelda, it seems like you enjoyed that!" Zermon said pleased with him self.
Zelda said nothing.
"Well, see you later, lover!" He said with a smile on his face. He got up and left.
'Do I love this man, why did I want more?' Zelda thought to her self. Now crying.
************Now with Link***********
'Where could Zelda be?' Link thought to himself.
'I hope Zermon doesn't do anything to her!' Link then remembered Zermon's past.
Zermon had been a rapper before Link had helped him with his problems. Zermon had taken girls into the back ally and had forced them into Sex. He just hoped that he would not do this to Zelda, even though he already knew the answer.
***************At Zermon's house***************
'I know what I must do! I have to pretend like I am enjoying this and maybe he will get tired of me. He will try to kill me but the Triforce of wisdom will save me. But what if I love him? No that will have to be a chance that I will have to take.' Zelda thought.
Later Zermon came back later. He had brought food with him.
"Hey lover." Zermon said smirking.
"Hey to you to!" Zelda said.
Zermon was surprised at what she had said. "I have brought food for you." He said.
"Zermon, can I call you Zerin?"
'Zerin, that is a Hyruleian world for eternity.'
"Yes, only if I may call you, Zellie." He said.
'man, he really believes me!' She thought but decided to keep her plan.
"Yes Zerin!" He said.
"The food I got is your favorite, fish!" Zermon said.
"Thank you Zerin!" he said.
Then eat their dinner together.
"Shall we go to the bed room?" He asked.
'I have to say yes' She thought
Mysterious Voice: Does Zelda love him? No one knows? Well I want 1 more review before the next chapter! Bye.
And yes, Link is going to have to kick butt isn't he? But what happens if Zelda has Zermon's baby? I'm not giving any thing away but what would happen? Let's begin the story. Oh ya the pizza was good, no flames to eat it with, not that I want any.
Mysterious Voice: Here we go. We are with Link right now.
Link finally got to the King.
"Sir, Zelda has been Kidnapped!" Link said.
"What" he said now angered.
"I was talking to her and my old friend came he knocked me out and when I woke up they're were both gone." Link told the king.
"We will search all bordering lands even Cathrlina." The king said.
Link then went to his home in the forest as fast as he could. He grabbed all his items and started the search.
***************Zermon's base later that night***********************
Zelda was still chained to the wall. And also still nude. Then Zermon walked back into the room.
"Before we have sex, I want you to have a bath, you are to dirty!" Zermon said.
He took of the chins and tied her hands together.
"Wouldn't want you to leave would we?" Zermon said.
He carried her through a room and into the bath room.
"Leave me alone Zermon!"
"Princess, come on, why don't you want your lover to give you a bath?" He said smirking.
"I will never be your lover!" Zelda said as she spat in his face.
"That's no way for the princess to act is it?" Zermon said dropping her into the tube.
"Don't touch me!" She yelled.
"I can do what ever I dam well please whore!" He yelled into her face.
He took his hand and dipped it in the water and felt some places he should not have.
"Stop that!" She said as she bit him.
"Oh, you want to be me?" he said as he took of his clothes.
He jumped into the tub with her and he was on top. He weighed to much so she went under water.
"Maybe we should do this somewhere else princess right?" he said as he lifted her out of the tub and over to his bed.
He tied her hands to the bedpost, and her feet to.
"Remember this morning?" He asked.
Thoughts started flooding in to her mind.
"Link will kill you when he finds out what you are doing to me!" She yelled.
"Zelda my dear, you'll be dead by then." Zermon said.
"Time for an encore of this morning." He said.
Then Zelda spat in his face.
"I didn't want to do this but I guess I have to!" He said as he got up and then came back with a whip.
He started to hit Zelda.
"Are you going to be a good little girl?"
All she could do was node yes.
"Good, then let's place suck the snake!" He said.
Zelda knew what this meant. So she moved her mouth down to his manhood and started to suck on it.
Zermon started to yell faster. then she trough her off of him.
"Let's play a different game!" He said. As he started kissing Zelda In inappropriate places."
Then she said something she was surprised to say.
"More, more, oh please Zermon more!" She then noticed what she had said.
Then he took his manhood and thrust it into her well you know.. And he did it repeatedly. Soon it was over.
"Zelda, it seems like you enjoyed that!" Zermon said pleased with him self.
Zelda said nothing.
"Well, see you later, lover!" He said with a smile on his face. He got up and left.
'Do I love this man, why did I want more?' Zelda thought to her self. Now crying.
************Now with Link***********
'Where could Zelda be?' Link thought to himself.
'I hope Zermon doesn't do anything to her!' Link then remembered Zermon's past.
Zermon had been a rapper before Link had helped him with his problems. Zermon had taken girls into the back ally and had forced them into Sex. He just hoped that he would not do this to Zelda, even though he already knew the answer.
***************At Zermon's house***************
'I know what I must do! I have to pretend like I am enjoying this and maybe he will get tired of me. He will try to kill me but the Triforce of wisdom will save me. But what if I love him? No that will have to be a chance that I will have to take.' Zelda thought.
Later Zermon came back later. He had brought food with him.
"Hey lover." Zermon said smirking.
"Hey to you to!" Zelda said.
Zermon was surprised at what she had said. "I have brought food for you." He said.
"Zermon, can I call you Zerin?"
'Zerin, that is a Hyruleian world for eternity.'
"Yes, only if I may call you, Zellie." He said.
'man, he really believes me!' She thought but decided to keep her plan.
"Yes Zerin!" He said.
"The food I got is your favorite, fish!" Zermon said.
"Thank you Zerin!" he said.
Then eat their dinner together.
"Shall we go to the bed room?" He asked.
'I have to say yes' She thought
Mysterious Voice: Does Zelda love him? No one knows? Well I want 1 more review before the next chapter! Bye.