I wanted to say thanks to all those who reviewed my last chapter :o)
Angeleyes-Im really glad that you are enjoying this fic. When the idea first came to me I wasn't sure that I should write it. I'm so glad that I have tho :o) hope you like this chapter
Lorelai Anastasia- I'm really glad that you like it and I love this fic too. Writing it gives me loads of possibilities and out comes. Just so many stuff I could include into this fic. I love it :o)
Tariq- I am going to include all the other characters in it. There will be no Fred cos she hasn't entered it yet. But there will be Angel, Wesley, Cordy, Gunn and a bit of Lorne. You don't have to worry though there will be no Angel/Cordelia in this fic.
Pyro Bear-Thanks a lot for your review, I greatly appreciate it. Don't worry I'm not going to rush any of the chapters cos I don't want to spoil it. Unfortunately there are only two siblings. Wesley and Elizabeth. Wesley will become Elizabeth's guardian in the story but it'll be hard to include a younger kid. There are going to be a lot of more original characters in it and a trip to England too.
Anyway onto the story . . .
CHAPTER 5
The journey to the hospital was quick and silent and as Angel drove his car towards the emergency doors, Wesley began to stir.
"Were almost there Elizabeth, everything's going to be alright now " he spoke as he tenderly ran his fingers through her mattered hair.
Pulling up in front of the hospital, Angel quickly switched of the engine and went to help Wesley with his sister. Opening the back door, he reached over to pick up Elizabeth only to be halted by Wesley.
"I've got her Angel, but thanks for the consideration" The watcher spoke as he began to life his sibling out of the car.
Angel sighed and held the door open for him, making sure to keep a careful eye on his friend.
Wesley was still shaking as he walked through the electric doors. Elizabeth weight was heavy in his arms, but sheer determination kept him walking. His muscles started to tremble in fatigue, but he didn't care, there was no way he was going to let go of her.
He was only partly aware of Angel calling for assistance and a couple of seconds later doctors and emergency staff were rushing towards him. In a trace-like state he placed Elizabeth on the hospital stretcher.
Immediately he was bombarded with questions and Wesley, with the help of Angel, tried his best to answer.
The leading nurse took charge straight away and began to wheel Elizabeth down the hospital corridor and towards an emergency room.
Wesley, holding tightly to his sister's hand followed silently, only speaking to answer questions.
As they neared the room, one of the male doctors stood in front of Wesley and informed him that he had to wait outside. He was about to object, when he felt Angel's hand on his shoulder.
"They know what their doing Wes. Your sisters in good hands" Angel spoke calmly and softly.
"Thank you Angel" Wesley spoke in gratitude as he stared through the glass window and watched the doctors and nurses working.
Angel offered a small smile and remained at his side.
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Nurse Elsie had seen a lot in her years of working in Los Angeles General Hospital. She had seen people shot, stabbed, hit by cars and badly mutilated. But the sight of this young child broke her heart. At a guess Elsie would say she was only nineteen years old and whoever had done this to her was an animal.
When they had brought the girl into the room, her jumper had immediately been removed, so that they could attach a heart monitor to her. it was then that Elsie had gasped at the extent of the damage. There were large and small bruises all over her torso as well as deep infected scratches. That wasn't what horrified her though. What made her heart ache was the extent of them. Her skin was like one big bruise and what stood out the most was the shape of most of them.
They were hand shaped ones around her neck, shoulders, hips and wrists.
Swallowing a lump in her throat, Elsie looked up through the window and gazed into the wide eyes of Wesley Price. He let out a loud choked sob and would have collapsed if it had not been for his friend supporting him.
The emergency team rushed around her, waiting for her orders and Elsie forced her self to concentrate on her job.
"Elizabeth can you hear me?" She asked as she leant over her as she shined a small light in her patient's right eye. There was no response and Elsie clucked her tongue at the result. The pupil was slow in reacting to the light which indicated a lot of problems, but Elsie had a feeling that she knew exactly what it was. Checking the soft tissue at the under side of the eye, she noted that it was very pale, repeating the test on the left eye she found the same results.
Barking out orders, the team around her quickly reacted. "Patient is severely anaemic and dehydrated. I want her put on a drip immediately as well as a blood transfusion" Gesturing to Elizabeth's body, she spoke again. "I want a full body examination and x-rays and I want them Now!" She ordered loudly to the team, turning to Dr Neilson she spoke softly. "She's been badly assaulted. The bruises" She paused trying to think of the right words "Some look very old, while others are fresh. Carl, I want a female examination tem set up"
"You think she was raped?" He asked quietly, his voice was carefully controlled, while his eyes flashed in anger. There was nothing the staff hated more then cases like this.
"I think theres a possibility that she was raped repeatedly" Elsie answered truthfully, her voice cracked slightly with emotion as she glanced through the window and looked directly at her patients distraught brother. "I just hope I'm wrong"
Little did Elsie know, a dark hared vampire had heard everything.
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So what do you think? A little more was reviled this time. I have serious plans for whats happened to her and I need to introduce loads of new characters but I don't know how im going to do it. I know what happened and how, but I don't know whether to write it as a flash back, a remembering dream or write it as she tells them what happened. Ugh! Never mind I guess I'll write when inspiration strikes me :o)
PLEASE REVIEW :O)
Angeleyes-Im really glad that you are enjoying this fic. When the idea first came to me I wasn't sure that I should write it. I'm so glad that I have tho :o) hope you like this chapter
Lorelai Anastasia- I'm really glad that you like it and I love this fic too. Writing it gives me loads of possibilities and out comes. Just so many stuff I could include into this fic. I love it :o)
Tariq- I am going to include all the other characters in it. There will be no Fred cos she hasn't entered it yet. But there will be Angel, Wesley, Cordy, Gunn and a bit of Lorne. You don't have to worry though there will be no Angel/Cordelia in this fic.
Pyro Bear-Thanks a lot for your review, I greatly appreciate it. Don't worry I'm not going to rush any of the chapters cos I don't want to spoil it. Unfortunately there are only two siblings. Wesley and Elizabeth. Wesley will become Elizabeth's guardian in the story but it'll be hard to include a younger kid. There are going to be a lot of more original characters in it and a trip to England too.
Anyway onto the story . . .
CHAPTER 5
The journey to the hospital was quick and silent and as Angel drove his car towards the emergency doors, Wesley began to stir.
"Were almost there Elizabeth, everything's going to be alright now " he spoke as he tenderly ran his fingers through her mattered hair.
Pulling up in front of the hospital, Angel quickly switched of the engine and went to help Wesley with his sister. Opening the back door, he reached over to pick up Elizabeth only to be halted by Wesley.
"I've got her Angel, but thanks for the consideration" The watcher spoke as he began to life his sibling out of the car.
Angel sighed and held the door open for him, making sure to keep a careful eye on his friend.
Wesley was still shaking as he walked through the electric doors. Elizabeth weight was heavy in his arms, but sheer determination kept him walking. His muscles started to tremble in fatigue, but he didn't care, there was no way he was going to let go of her.
He was only partly aware of Angel calling for assistance and a couple of seconds later doctors and emergency staff were rushing towards him. In a trace-like state he placed Elizabeth on the hospital stretcher.
Immediately he was bombarded with questions and Wesley, with the help of Angel, tried his best to answer.
The leading nurse took charge straight away and began to wheel Elizabeth down the hospital corridor and towards an emergency room.
Wesley, holding tightly to his sister's hand followed silently, only speaking to answer questions.
As they neared the room, one of the male doctors stood in front of Wesley and informed him that he had to wait outside. He was about to object, when he felt Angel's hand on his shoulder.
"They know what their doing Wes. Your sisters in good hands" Angel spoke calmly and softly.
"Thank you Angel" Wesley spoke in gratitude as he stared through the glass window and watched the doctors and nurses working.
Angel offered a small smile and remained at his side.
*
Nurse Elsie had seen a lot in her years of working in Los Angeles General Hospital. She had seen people shot, stabbed, hit by cars and badly mutilated. But the sight of this young child broke her heart. At a guess Elsie would say she was only nineteen years old and whoever had done this to her was an animal.
When they had brought the girl into the room, her jumper had immediately been removed, so that they could attach a heart monitor to her. it was then that Elsie had gasped at the extent of the damage. There were large and small bruises all over her torso as well as deep infected scratches. That wasn't what horrified her though. What made her heart ache was the extent of them. Her skin was like one big bruise and what stood out the most was the shape of most of them.
They were hand shaped ones around her neck, shoulders, hips and wrists.
Swallowing a lump in her throat, Elsie looked up through the window and gazed into the wide eyes of Wesley Price. He let out a loud choked sob and would have collapsed if it had not been for his friend supporting him.
The emergency team rushed around her, waiting for her orders and Elsie forced her self to concentrate on her job.
"Elizabeth can you hear me?" She asked as she leant over her as she shined a small light in her patient's right eye. There was no response and Elsie clucked her tongue at the result. The pupil was slow in reacting to the light which indicated a lot of problems, but Elsie had a feeling that she knew exactly what it was. Checking the soft tissue at the under side of the eye, she noted that it was very pale, repeating the test on the left eye she found the same results.
Barking out orders, the team around her quickly reacted. "Patient is severely anaemic and dehydrated. I want her put on a drip immediately as well as a blood transfusion" Gesturing to Elizabeth's body, she spoke again. "I want a full body examination and x-rays and I want them Now!" She ordered loudly to the team, turning to Dr Neilson she spoke softly. "She's been badly assaulted. The bruises" She paused trying to think of the right words "Some look very old, while others are fresh. Carl, I want a female examination tem set up"
"You think she was raped?" He asked quietly, his voice was carefully controlled, while his eyes flashed in anger. There was nothing the staff hated more then cases like this.
"I think theres a possibility that she was raped repeatedly" Elsie answered truthfully, her voice cracked slightly with emotion as she glanced through the window and looked directly at her patients distraught brother. "I just hope I'm wrong"
Little did Elsie know, a dark hared vampire had heard everything.
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So what do you think? A little more was reviled this time. I have serious plans for whats happened to her and I need to introduce loads of new characters but I don't know how im going to do it. I know what happened and how, but I don't know whether to write it as a flash back, a remembering dream or write it as she tells them what happened. Ugh! Never mind I guess I'll write when inspiration strikes me :o)
PLEASE REVIEW :O)
