Hey everyone! This is my first fic EVER! So I hope you like the first chapter!
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(A.n) = My notes
Chapter one – (chap name)-
Guards dragged the girl down a long cold metal hall. They stopped in front of a large metal door. The guards opened the door and threw the girl in side. When the guards shut the door the girl heard the clinking sound of a door locking. ~ They're locking me in here! No they can't do that! ~ The girl started to cry. An arm wrapped around her shoulders "It's all right, your not alone, " a man's voice said to her. Her long blond hair was matted against her face. She looked up at the man. He had platinum blond hair and had the lightest blue eyes. She looked around the room. She saw a light bulb on the ceiling and four other boys stood there. The man with the platinum blond hair said, "It's okay their my friends. By the way my name is Quatre." "H-Hi Quatre I'm Usagi." "Hello Usagi what's the matter are you hurt? Usagi just started wail again. She touched her knees and she felt that they where sticky. She picked her hands up and looked. She saw blood. Her legs had been scrapped when she was being dragged. The pain hit her hard. "Usagi are you all right?" Usagi began to cry. Quatre rocked and comforted Usagi until she fell asleep. Quatre said to the other guys "Can't she come with us? Usagi deserves to live." The man (A .N If you want to call him a man!) with a painful pony tail snorted. " Take a weak onna with us? It's out of the question!" (A.N He is SO insensitive!) "Well I don't know Quatre," said a guy that is about as tall as the empire state building said. (A.N I know I know he's not THAT tall) "I think we should take her with us. She might know some top secrete news from oz," Said a guy with Prussian blue eyes said. This made every one stare at him.
HA! HA! I'm ending the first chapter there! Review and give lots of flames and email me and give me ideas!! Lots of ideas! I need them bad!