Hmm....I'm not really sure if this is a good poem. Can you tell me if I should change anything? I would really appreciate it. Also 0_0 this isn't another poem that I found buried somewhere in my now empthy room =can you believe they're giving my room a new look. They even got rid of my old carpet. Luckily they let me pick out my own furniture or who knows what I would have ended up with.= though I may have gotten a little ahead of myself in this one, but uh well. Please r+r, and tell me if I need to fix anything. Hope you enjoy!
Chapter 8 – My departed one
My lost one
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Alone I walk.
The night closing in.
My breaths shallow,
My face pale.
The wind blows
Shards of ice.
Flinching from the pain
I continue to walk.
I couldn't stand
Being in that empthy room anymore.
I had to get out.
Staggering I walk
My fears and pains
Never leaving.
What if they knew?
What would I do?
It hurts.
My life is nothing without them.
It's because of them
That I continue to fight
The darkness that is my soul.
Without them.....
I am nothing.
Stumbling I fall
On the cold hard ground.
What was the point?
Nothing matters
Without them,
But they're gone now.
Closing my syes
I feel myself fall.
Fall into the darkness
Of my soul,
My existance.
That's when I saw it.
This blinding light.
Openibg my eyes
I feel the pain go away.
Looking up I see
Someone.
She was standing
At the end of the street
Her body was glowing.
Her face blurry.
I feel myself falling again.
Only this time
I feel as if
I'm finally going home.
I call out a name
As I fall.
The name of my dear one
The name of.....my departed one
My lost one.
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an: for those who are wondering Rath is not dead! Its just that the girl reminds him of the one in the first chpt so much he thinks she is her. Now that thats cleared up...is this really depressing? I mean really. Maybe i just can't tell since i wrote this. Then again who knows. Hoped you liked it. *heart*