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Prologue
Once upon a time, there was a beautiful princess that lived in a castle of gold. She was not born a princess, but when her Prince first beheld her he exclaimed that such beauty did not belong to the common people and so bought away their treasure with words of love. He lifted her from the cinders at which she slept and made her his diamond. The jewel of the land. She was the most precious thing he had and he made sure that she was well taken care of in his golden castle; her every whim and desire fulfilled. And so life was beautiful to the princess, who now knew that there was such a thing as a happily ever after. Yet the princess never thought to ask what happens After That. She thought she was blessed by the Fates because her life had turned out to be a true fairytale and Story had plucked her out of nothingness and created her a princess. Ahhh… but once Story had released its hold on her mortal life in slipped What Happened After.
After, there was a war, and desire for blood and death and glory stirred in the heart of her prince. She begged her prince to stay for was not his Happily Ever After with her. But he did not listen for a blood-lust stronger than that for his princess' beauty called to him. War wrapped the prince in her black wings and flew off into the night, never to return.
The Princess was alone. The dream of Love had made her life a fairytale, but with love gone it became a nightmare. This was Ever After…
And so the Princess left her golden castle and went away to the end of the world. The Princess, betrayed by Story and a Dream, slowly turned into a Witch. But that is not the end of the story… There is an After That…