Heres a little scene to go along with my authors note just to show you how
me and my sister get along... and how she fits the part of Gabrielle quite
well I might add. She helped me come up with the authors note too.
AUTHORS NOTE: Sorry for not updating in a while, I've been busy... really I have! I swear! After all I've got school, friends, games, and my sisters basketball games to go to. So I've just been really busy! I swear!
**little sister walks up and reads authors note, then says, "Ummm Cha..."
** I cover her mouth** "Shhhhh, im Luna remember!? Do not use my real name..." **I uncover her mouth** now what do you want?!"
**Points to authors note** "Thats not true Cha... I mean Luna..."** She roles her eyes** the computer froze as you were saving the chapter last time, remember. Then you went into a cursing spree, and vowed to never use the stupid computer again since it was the third time you had tried to type out the chapter... you have been sitting on your lazy butt since like, two Saturdays ago complaining about the computer. You never left the couch and watched Cowboy Bebop and DBZ continuously. You only left for school..."
** I stare at her evily, **"Gabrielle, I was trying to come up with a "good" excuse and you ruined it."
**Gabrielle looks at me blankly,** Oh. Um... Can I get on the computer now?"
**I continue to stare evilly** "NO!" **Shoves sister away** Go away..."
**She gets mad at me** BRAT! **Looks at all you reviewers** HEY ALL OF MY SISTERS REVIEWERS, WANNA KNOW HER REAL NAME!?"
** I Hit Gabrielle** Shut up already!"
**Gabrielle looks terribly hurt.**
**I look at her and feel bad** "Im sorry Gabby..."
** She gets tears in her eyes as she begins to turn and walk away... she pauses as she reaches the door that leads outside. She suddenly turns her head to face me, a look of menacing evil crosses her young, 11 year old face** "FINE THEN............ CHANTEL!"
**I throw a book at her head as she escapes outside** @_@ "Stupid sister..."
Anyways, that's my excuse... and to my reviewers...
Himeko: You can call me anything you want! '^_^'
Thanks Angel for the correction. I wasn't sure as how to spell it so I just guessed '^_^'
Oh yeah, my friend Glitch just posted a really neat story that has allot of cool RPG characters, both good and bad, so check it out. It's called Dark Planet 1: Revival. It's got a clever plot that has allot of potential.
Anywho... onwards to chapter 4!
CHAPTER 4
Time began to pass rather quickly as the entire group awaited the battle. As the time of the fight drew near, the two teams began to prepare their zoids. The Blitz team had gone into their Hover Cargo, while the Sky Raiders prepared in the hanger of the waterfall base. Koh and Cloud continued to look for the spider, until it was time to get their zoids ready.
"Good Luck Rain." Hiro wished upon his wife. He hugged her tight and then turned to his two children, "You two better fight hard. I'll be rooting for you!"
"Thanks dad." Nadia said as she climbed into the cockpit of her Konig wolf. She gave him a thumbs up as the roof closed, concealing her inside. She began to leave the hanger.
"Don't worry dad. Im sure I can kick these guys' a..." Koh began, but caught himself just as he heard his father say, "Watch your mouth Koh."
Koh ran over to his Iron Kong and climbed up, closing the cockpit behind him. He then proceeded to follow his sister out.
"Soooo," Hiro looked up to face Rain, who was now sitting inside her cockpit, amused by the situation of Koh almost saying a relatively bad word right in front of his father, "Do you think Koh and Nadia will make it through?"
"I don't know," Rain shrugged, "The Blitz team is an amazing team... who knows how their new members fight... plus they are the kids of Bit, Leena, Jemie and Orihime.."
Just then Cloud in his newly rebuilt silver Blade Ligar trotted up besides Rain, "I take it your going to hitch a ride with one of the others...?"
Hiro nodded, "Yeah, I want to watch the fight up close and Rei said I can hitch a ride with him. Good luck on the battle field."
"Thanks. Lets go Rain, LightStrike," Cloud closed his cockpit and turned toward the exit, his silver organoid partner walking just besides his Blade Ligar.
"See ya after the fight!" Rain smiled, closing her cockpit and catching up with Cloud.
Everyone made their way to the not so far away battlefield. Rain did some double checking that all of her controls were working correctly, then she contacted both Koh and Nadia.
"I want you two to be careful... the Blitz team is an amazing team." Rain told her two 16 year olds, "and they have both Jemie and Orihime coming up with battle plans."
"Alright mom. I'll be careful." Nadia waved and closed the com-link.
"Don't worry mom. Im gonna chew them up and spit 'em out. You'll see." With that Koh's face disappeared from the small screen, and Rain sighed. Koh had an amazing knack for being cocky when it came to zoid battles.
Clouds face appeared where Koh's used to be, "Hey sis."
"Yeah?"
"You do know we're at a disadvantage... right?" He sighed, "It's 5 vs. 4."
"Your point?"
"Just making sure you knew..." Cloud said, then jokingly added, "After all, your the one who so hastily accepted this match against the legendary Blitz team..."
"So... you don't think we can win?" Rain asked, a slight smile crept into her features.
Cloud grinned, "No... I know we can win."
"Good." Rain closed the com-link and looked ahead. They were closing in on the battlefield, and the hover cargo was waiting.
The Sky Raiders team all came to a stop, now awaiting the judge. Everyone who wasn't in the fight stood on top of a cliff, looking down at the two teams. The five Blitz team zoids exited the Hover cargo, and stood quite a distance away from their opponents.
"All right everyone." Doctor Tauros' voice filled everyone's intercoms, "Here comes the judge capsule."
The warriors all looked up and saw that he was right, a small glowing speck appeared in the atmosphere, and grew larger and larger as it approached the earth. It crashed into the ground, and rose out of it's crater, reveling the judge.
"The area within a 15 mile radius is a designated zoid battlefield. All unauthorized personnel must evacuate the area." The judge stated," I repeat, the area within a 15 mile radius is a designated zoid battlefield. All unauthorized personnel must evacuate the area."
The warriors stood face to face, except for the two Raynos' who were circling above head. They all listened their hands gripping the controls tightly, their bodies tensed. All they needed was the judge to give the go- ahead then they would charge at each other in full force. The adults all knew that it was going to be a tough fight... and the kids just wanted to start fighting.
"Blitz team vs. Sky Raiders team..." The judge called.
Rain gripped her controls, ready to leap to Clouds aid and give LightStrike time to fuse with the core of the Blade Ligar.
"Ready..." The judge rose his arms, one blue and one red.
Each warrior held their breath, and tensed slightly, their hands tightly gripping their controls, all of them ready to tear into their opponents. On the sidelines the others sat eagerly awaiting and watching.
"FIGHT" The zoids were moving even before he had brought his arms down.
Bit rushed at Cloud, wanting to get to him before the organoid had a chance to fuse. He was only five, maybe ten meters away when a large black zoid came out of nowhere and tackled him from the side. The Ligar 0 roared ferociously as it tried to tear itself free from the grasp of none other than Kaiser. Bit cursed as he was pinned down by the dragon, it's large claws holding his Ligar by the side and leg, "Damn it."
Kaiser dug its claws deeper into the Ligar 0's sides, roaring harshly as it did so. Rain opened a com-link with her brother, "Hurry up Cloud, LightStrike! I can't hold him forev... ahhhhh." She was cut off suddenly when a white Blade Ligar headbutted Kaiser in the side, sending it off it's opponent and into a large cliff face.
"Thanks Rion." Bit said to his son, bringing the Ligar to its feet, "But be careful because now Rain's gonna want to go for you." The Ligar 0 turned to face Cloud, only to find him gone. Bit looked around quickly, not seeing his target anywhere, "Damn where did he go!?"
Cloud had rushed to his right, now that he had his organoid partner with him, strait towards a set of cliffs that Bit was standing right next to. He jumped, just as the Ligar 0 looked around for him, and pushed off the wall of the cliffs, bringing him slightly to the side and above the Ligar 0.
Jemie instantly saw what was going on and said, "Bit above you!" But it was too late. Bit looked up just as Cloud came down with his claws, completely knocking the Ligar 0 off it's feet and into the sands. The silver Blade ligar was on him in an instant, and within a few seconds the two Ligars were wrestling each other, one tumbling over the other while both bit and scratched at each other, like two lions. Except these two lions were extremely big lions that wouldn't give up until it had brought it's opponent down.
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Koh cursed as another barrage of missiles were dropped on him from the sky. He tried to shoot at them, but the two Raynos' were far to fast and were circling back and forth, not following any sort of pattern.
He fired a shot at Jemie, missed, then cursed again as he was covered in another set of missiles.
Jemie smiled. He had pretty much accepted the Wild Eagle that was inside of him now, and no longer hesitated to bring him out. He went into a dive, shattering the sound barrier and summoning the ace aerial pilot, the Wild Eagle. Just before hitting the ground the Wild Eagle pulled up on the controls, now flying only feet above the scorching desert sands. He rushed at Koh at amazing speed, the sonic boom that was created defining to the ear.
Koh didn't have time to even think as the Raynos approached. He felt the full blast of the speed just as he reached out one of his iron Kong's hands, grabbing the tip of the Raynos's wing just as it passed. Both zoids were sent violently to the ground and the Iron Kong's cockpit shattered. Jemie's zoid tumbled along the ground, hitting hard. Jemie's head slammed against the control panel, and he was rendered completely unconscious.
Koh opened his eyes, cursing as a surge of pain shot through his left arm. He reached over with his right hand and touched it, feeling hot, sticky, crimson red blood gush out of a large cut on his strong upper arm. He looked at it and immediately wished he hadn't. Even though he could tell it looked worse than it really was, it was still a sickening sight. Suddenly his thoughts trailed to the battle. Looking at his screen he saw, the words "Command System Freeze" flash in light blue letters.
"Damn!" Koh cursed then thought, 'Well that was a pretty stupid move though... why the hell did I grab onto the Raynos' wing?' He looked around, trying to see what he had cut his arm on, he noticed that part of the shattered cockpit glass was jutting inward, and had blood stained on it. "Figures." He said to himself.
Will looked down at his father and called, "Dad, Dad are you ok?" He didn't receive an answer and cursed, opening a com-link with the other Raynos. He saw that his Jemie was unconscious, and a large cut was gushing blood on his head, "Damn." He looked around and noticed Leena was having trouble with a Konig wolf. Deciding he couldn't help his father anymore he flew toward the Gun Sniper, ready to come to its aid.
Leena cursed. No matter how hard she tried she couldn't hit the Black Konig wolf with with her total weasel unit assault. It was just to fast.
Nadia smiled as she approached the Gun Sniper, and continued to dodge various shells from the heavily armed zoid. So far Leena had gone back to the hover cargo 3 times to reload, and Nadia wasn't going to let her do it again.
Leena's eyes widened as Nadia rushed her, ready to deliver the final blow. She shut her eyes tightly, and braced herself... only, nothing happened. She cringed when she heard Will's voice over the intercom, "What the heck are you waiting for Leena! Open fire!"
Leena opened her eyes and saw that Nadia was stuck inside the falling shelling that the Raynos was releasing, keeping it almost perfectly still. The red head smiled as she yelled, "Got ya now little wolf! Total Weasel Unit Assault!"
Nadia cursed inwardly as she saw the Gun Sniper let loose its missiles, "Only one chance left to take her out!" She said to herself. The Konig Wolf opened its mouth wide, baring it's EC cannon. Hot light-blue electrical energy gathered in the Wolfs mouth, sparking various directions. The center of the energy turned a pale white, and shot outward at the Gun Sniper just before the Konig Wolf buckled under the assault of the Weasel unit.
"Yeah! Take that! Hell yeah!" Leena cheered, watching as the sand and smoke engulfed her opponent. She suddenly cursed when the smoke parted, and a bright blue and white light rushed at her, completely engulfing her Gun Sniper. Electrical Charges flowed through the zoid, shorting out all its joints and controls. "Damn!" She looked down at her screen and saw that everything had frozen, bright blue letters saying, "Command System Freeze."
Will sighed. At least they had managed to take out the Konig wolf too. He opened a com-link with Leena, "You ok?"
"Yeah kid, im fine. Go help Rion and Bit." Leena answered, a bit bummed out about loosing.
Will gave her a thumbs up and sped off towards the other warriors.
Each person on the sidelines was completely enticed by the battle, nobody noticed anything approaching on their radar's...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~End of chapter 4~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I decided to leave it there just cuz I felt like it... don't hate me! Im going to try and post the next chapter *very* soon, maybe even later today. So don't worry about the cliffy. Oh and I never did catch my sister... she's one hell of a runner.
**Gabrielle pokes her head in the door** "Um Chantel?"
**I look at her evilly,** "What?"
**She gulps** "Im really sorry... can I get on the computer now?"
**Yells* NO!
My sister is a complete computer hog, and Im sure some of you know what I mean if you have brothers or sisters. It's also part of the reason I can't update as much as I want. That's why I had her help me come up with the authors note at the start of the chapter. Anyways, I really hope you have enjoyed the battle so far.
I love writing battle scenes I think they are so fun to write... anyways, please review!
(I went and saw Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets last night and I loved it! I just hated the people behind me cuz they kept pulling back and kicking my seat on purpose... then they wouldn't shut up so my sister turned around and yelled at them... yes my 11 year old sister turned and yelled at a bunch of bitchy 16 year olds.... they stopped for a while then kept doing it again...)
AUTHORS NOTE: Sorry for not updating in a while, I've been busy... really I have! I swear! After all I've got school, friends, games, and my sisters basketball games to go to. So I've just been really busy! I swear!
**little sister walks up and reads authors note, then says, "Ummm Cha..."
** I cover her mouth** "Shhhhh, im Luna remember!? Do not use my real name..." **I uncover her mouth** now what do you want?!"
**Points to authors note** "Thats not true Cha... I mean Luna..."** She roles her eyes** the computer froze as you were saving the chapter last time, remember. Then you went into a cursing spree, and vowed to never use the stupid computer again since it was the third time you had tried to type out the chapter... you have been sitting on your lazy butt since like, two Saturdays ago complaining about the computer. You never left the couch and watched Cowboy Bebop and DBZ continuously. You only left for school..."
** I stare at her evily, **"Gabrielle, I was trying to come up with a "good" excuse and you ruined it."
**Gabrielle looks at me blankly,** Oh. Um... Can I get on the computer now?"
**I continue to stare evilly** "NO!" **Shoves sister away** Go away..."
**She gets mad at me** BRAT! **Looks at all you reviewers** HEY ALL OF MY SISTERS REVIEWERS, WANNA KNOW HER REAL NAME!?"
** I Hit Gabrielle** Shut up already!"
**Gabrielle looks terribly hurt.**
**I look at her and feel bad** "Im sorry Gabby..."
** She gets tears in her eyes as she begins to turn and walk away... she pauses as she reaches the door that leads outside. She suddenly turns her head to face me, a look of menacing evil crosses her young, 11 year old face** "FINE THEN............ CHANTEL!"
**I throw a book at her head as she escapes outside** @_@ "Stupid sister..."
Anyways, that's my excuse... and to my reviewers...
Himeko: You can call me anything you want! '^_^'
Thanks Angel for the correction. I wasn't sure as how to spell it so I just guessed '^_^'
Oh yeah, my friend Glitch just posted a really neat story that has allot of cool RPG characters, both good and bad, so check it out. It's called Dark Planet 1: Revival. It's got a clever plot that has allot of potential.
Anywho... onwards to chapter 4!
CHAPTER 4
Time began to pass rather quickly as the entire group awaited the battle. As the time of the fight drew near, the two teams began to prepare their zoids. The Blitz team had gone into their Hover Cargo, while the Sky Raiders prepared in the hanger of the waterfall base. Koh and Cloud continued to look for the spider, until it was time to get their zoids ready.
"Good Luck Rain." Hiro wished upon his wife. He hugged her tight and then turned to his two children, "You two better fight hard. I'll be rooting for you!"
"Thanks dad." Nadia said as she climbed into the cockpit of her Konig wolf. She gave him a thumbs up as the roof closed, concealing her inside. She began to leave the hanger.
"Don't worry dad. Im sure I can kick these guys' a..." Koh began, but caught himself just as he heard his father say, "Watch your mouth Koh."
Koh ran over to his Iron Kong and climbed up, closing the cockpit behind him. He then proceeded to follow his sister out.
"Soooo," Hiro looked up to face Rain, who was now sitting inside her cockpit, amused by the situation of Koh almost saying a relatively bad word right in front of his father, "Do you think Koh and Nadia will make it through?"
"I don't know," Rain shrugged, "The Blitz team is an amazing team... who knows how their new members fight... plus they are the kids of Bit, Leena, Jemie and Orihime.."
Just then Cloud in his newly rebuilt silver Blade Ligar trotted up besides Rain, "I take it your going to hitch a ride with one of the others...?"
Hiro nodded, "Yeah, I want to watch the fight up close and Rei said I can hitch a ride with him. Good luck on the battle field."
"Thanks. Lets go Rain, LightStrike," Cloud closed his cockpit and turned toward the exit, his silver organoid partner walking just besides his Blade Ligar.
"See ya after the fight!" Rain smiled, closing her cockpit and catching up with Cloud.
Everyone made their way to the not so far away battlefield. Rain did some double checking that all of her controls were working correctly, then she contacted both Koh and Nadia.
"I want you two to be careful... the Blitz team is an amazing team." Rain told her two 16 year olds, "and they have both Jemie and Orihime coming up with battle plans."
"Alright mom. I'll be careful." Nadia waved and closed the com-link.
"Don't worry mom. Im gonna chew them up and spit 'em out. You'll see." With that Koh's face disappeared from the small screen, and Rain sighed. Koh had an amazing knack for being cocky when it came to zoid battles.
Clouds face appeared where Koh's used to be, "Hey sis."
"Yeah?"
"You do know we're at a disadvantage... right?" He sighed, "It's 5 vs. 4."
"Your point?"
"Just making sure you knew..." Cloud said, then jokingly added, "After all, your the one who so hastily accepted this match against the legendary Blitz team..."
"So... you don't think we can win?" Rain asked, a slight smile crept into her features.
Cloud grinned, "No... I know we can win."
"Good." Rain closed the com-link and looked ahead. They were closing in on the battlefield, and the hover cargo was waiting.
The Sky Raiders team all came to a stop, now awaiting the judge. Everyone who wasn't in the fight stood on top of a cliff, looking down at the two teams. The five Blitz team zoids exited the Hover cargo, and stood quite a distance away from their opponents.
"All right everyone." Doctor Tauros' voice filled everyone's intercoms, "Here comes the judge capsule."
The warriors all looked up and saw that he was right, a small glowing speck appeared in the atmosphere, and grew larger and larger as it approached the earth. It crashed into the ground, and rose out of it's crater, reveling the judge.
"The area within a 15 mile radius is a designated zoid battlefield. All unauthorized personnel must evacuate the area." The judge stated," I repeat, the area within a 15 mile radius is a designated zoid battlefield. All unauthorized personnel must evacuate the area."
The warriors stood face to face, except for the two Raynos' who were circling above head. They all listened their hands gripping the controls tightly, their bodies tensed. All they needed was the judge to give the go- ahead then they would charge at each other in full force. The adults all knew that it was going to be a tough fight... and the kids just wanted to start fighting.
"Blitz team vs. Sky Raiders team..." The judge called.
Rain gripped her controls, ready to leap to Clouds aid and give LightStrike time to fuse with the core of the Blade Ligar.
"Ready..." The judge rose his arms, one blue and one red.
Each warrior held their breath, and tensed slightly, their hands tightly gripping their controls, all of them ready to tear into their opponents. On the sidelines the others sat eagerly awaiting and watching.
"FIGHT" The zoids were moving even before he had brought his arms down.
Bit rushed at Cloud, wanting to get to him before the organoid had a chance to fuse. He was only five, maybe ten meters away when a large black zoid came out of nowhere and tackled him from the side. The Ligar 0 roared ferociously as it tried to tear itself free from the grasp of none other than Kaiser. Bit cursed as he was pinned down by the dragon, it's large claws holding his Ligar by the side and leg, "Damn it."
Kaiser dug its claws deeper into the Ligar 0's sides, roaring harshly as it did so. Rain opened a com-link with her brother, "Hurry up Cloud, LightStrike! I can't hold him forev... ahhhhh." She was cut off suddenly when a white Blade Ligar headbutted Kaiser in the side, sending it off it's opponent and into a large cliff face.
"Thanks Rion." Bit said to his son, bringing the Ligar to its feet, "But be careful because now Rain's gonna want to go for you." The Ligar 0 turned to face Cloud, only to find him gone. Bit looked around quickly, not seeing his target anywhere, "Damn where did he go!?"
Cloud had rushed to his right, now that he had his organoid partner with him, strait towards a set of cliffs that Bit was standing right next to. He jumped, just as the Ligar 0 looked around for him, and pushed off the wall of the cliffs, bringing him slightly to the side and above the Ligar 0.
Jemie instantly saw what was going on and said, "Bit above you!" But it was too late. Bit looked up just as Cloud came down with his claws, completely knocking the Ligar 0 off it's feet and into the sands. The silver Blade ligar was on him in an instant, and within a few seconds the two Ligars were wrestling each other, one tumbling over the other while both bit and scratched at each other, like two lions. Except these two lions were extremely big lions that wouldn't give up until it had brought it's opponent down.
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Koh cursed as another barrage of missiles were dropped on him from the sky. He tried to shoot at them, but the two Raynos' were far to fast and were circling back and forth, not following any sort of pattern.
He fired a shot at Jemie, missed, then cursed again as he was covered in another set of missiles.
Jemie smiled. He had pretty much accepted the Wild Eagle that was inside of him now, and no longer hesitated to bring him out. He went into a dive, shattering the sound barrier and summoning the ace aerial pilot, the Wild Eagle. Just before hitting the ground the Wild Eagle pulled up on the controls, now flying only feet above the scorching desert sands. He rushed at Koh at amazing speed, the sonic boom that was created defining to the ear.
Koh didn't have time to even think as the Raynos approached. He felt the full blast of the speed just as he reached out one of his iron Kong's hands, grabbing the tip of the Raynos's wing just as it passed. Both zoids were sent violently to the ground and the Iron Kong's cockpit shattered. Jemie's zoid tumbled along the ground, hitting hard. Jemie's head slammed against the control panel, and he was rendered completely unconscious.
Koh opened his eyes, cursing as a surge of pain shot through his left arm. He reached over with his right hand and touched it, feeling hot, sticky, crimson red blood gush out of a large cut on his strong upper arm. He looked at it and immediately wished he hadn't. Even though he could tell it looked worse than it really was, it was still a sickening sight. Suddenly his thoughts trailed to the battle. Looking at his screen he saw, the words "Command System Freeze" flash in light blue letters.
"Damn!" Koh cursed then thought, 'Well that was a pretty stupid move though... why the hell did I grab onto the Raynos' wing?' He looked around, trying to see what he had cut his arm on, he noticed that part of the shattered cockpit glass was jutting inward, and had blood stained on it. "Figures." He said to himself.
Will looked down at his father and called, "Dad, Dad are you ok?" He didn't receive an answer and cursed, opening a com-link with the other Raynos. He saw that his Jemie was unconscious, and a large cut was gushing blood on his head, "Damn." He looked around and noticed Leena was having trouble with a Konig wolf. Deciding he couldn't help his father anymore he flew toward the Gun Sniper, ready to come to its aid.
Leena cursed. No matter how hard she tried she couldn't hit the Black Konig wolf with with her total weasel unit assault. It was just to fast.
Nadia smiled as she approached the Gun Sniper, and continued to dodge various shells from the heavily armed zoid. So far Leena had gone back to the hover cargo 3 times to reload, and Nadia wasn't going to let her do it again.
Leena's eyes widened as Nadia rushed her, ready to deliver the final blow. She shut her eyes tightly, and braced herself... only, nothing happened. She cringed when she heard Will's voice over the intercom, "What the heck are you waiting for Leena! Open fire!"
Leena opened her eyes and saw that Nadia was stuck inside the falling shelling that the Raynos was releasing, keeping it almost perfectly still. The red head smiled as she yelled, "Got ya now little wolf! Total Weasel Unit Assault!"
Nadia cursed inwardly as she saw the Gun Sniper let loose its missiles, "Only one chance left to take her out!" She said to herself. The Konig Wolf opened its mouth wide, baring it's EC cannon. Hot light-blue electrical energy gathered in the Wolfs mouth, sparking various directions. The center of the energy turned a pale white, and shot outward at the Gun Sniper just before the Konig Wolf buckled under the assault of the Weasel unit.
"Yeah! Take that! Hell yeah!" Leena cheered, watching as the sand and smoke engulfed her opponent. She suddenly cursed when the smoke parted, and a bright blue and white light rushed at her, completely engulfing her Gun Sniper. Electrical Charges flowed through the zoid, shorting out all its joints and controls. "Damn!" She looked down at her screen and saw that everything had frozen, bright blue letters saying, "Command System Freeze."
Will sighed. At least they had managed to take out the Konig wolf too. He opened a com-link with Leena, "You ok?"
"Yeah kid, im fine. Go help Rion and Bit." Leena answered, a bit bummed out about loosing.
Will gave her a thumbs up and sped off towards the other warriors.
Each person on the sidelines was completely enticed by the battle, nobody noticed anything approaching on their radar's...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~End of chapter 4~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I decided to leave it there just cuz I felt like it... don't hate me! Im going to try and post the next chapter *very* soon, maybe even later today. So don't worry about the cliffy. Oh and I never did catch my sister... she's one hell of a runner.
**Gabrielle pokes her head in the door** "Um Chantel?"
**I look at her evilly,** "What?"
**She gulps** "Im really sorry... can I get on the computer now?"
**Yells* NO!
My sister is a complete computer hog, and Im sure some of you know what I mean if you have brothers or sisters. It's also part of the reason I can't update as much as I want. That's why I had her help me come up with the authors note at the start of the chapter. Anyways, I really hope you have enjoyed the battle so far.
I love writing battle scenes I think they are so fun to write... anyways, please review!
(I went and saw Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets last night and I loved it! I just hated the people behind me cuz they kept pulling back and kicking my seat on purpose... then they wouldn't shut up so my sister turned around and yelled at them... yes my 11 year old sister turned and yelled at a bunch of bitchy 16 year olds.... they stopped for a while then kept doing it again...)