Rogue felt the mind of Mary Sue intruding on her own thoughts as she
touched the embodiment of perfection. But Rogue was not alone. As she
gained Mary Sue's powers, she could feel the minds of Professor Xavier,
Jean and everyone else, all supporting her in this terrible task.
Mary Sue was screeching, her voice no longer seemed as charming as it had before. Her reaction was akin to the time back in Alkali Lake when every mutant in the world had been also wiped out. Rogue felt sorry for the girl, knowing what she must be going through.
"Do not feel any empathy towards Mary Sue, young Rogue." Professor X whispered in her thoughts. "For she feels nothing."
"Nothing?"
"Yes. Mary Sue has no soul."
Professor X could see clearly now, no barriers within Mary Sue's mind could prevent him from taking advantage of this opportunity to delve into the perfect mind.
He was amazed by what he saw and made sure, with Jean's help, that every other mutant in the facility could see too.
Up until a few weeks ago, Mary Sue had never existed. Mary Sue had never been born. Mary Sue was from a different reality and even there, she was not real. Just a figment of her creator's limited imagination. He could see a world parallel to this one, where the idea of mutants was something of comic book material.
Mary Sue wasn't even a character in a comic. Just a figment. An embodiment of one immature girl's desire to be something more than what she was, a girl who's selfish desires to be a part of something better and to enforce her reality upon them and make it real.
He wasn't sure how this Mary Sue had come to this world. What he was sure of, was that there was millions of them. Perhaps there had been so many stupid little girls writing stories about themselves, that eventually time, reality itself had ruptured and that was how this Mary Sue had became real.
He had seen enough.
"I can't do this for much longer, Professor! I don't want her thoughts in my head permanently!" Rogue screamed.
Jean looked at the professor. Then nodded to Storm.
"Lets end this."
Mary Sue was battered from all directions from every mutant she had manipulated. Scott eyeblasted her, Logan slashed her once pretty face. The assault went on, until there was nothing left to destroy.
There was no trace of Mary Sue left. It was like she had never existed.
The last coherent thought the Professor sensed from Mary Sue, was from the creator of Mary Sue herself. "I'm sorry."
It would never be enough. But the professor knew, they all knew, that as long as there was people writing good fan fiction in every reality, the Mary Sue authors would never gain the respect they sought. Those authors, whose sense of decency, would counter the onslaught of those writers who had yet to mature into something truly better.
Rogue and Jean also contemplated. In their reality, they had Mary Sue authors too, writing about taking centre stage in popular books such as Harry Potter and Lord of the Rings. There were probably students amongst them who perhaps went online to write Mary Sues. They wouldn't any more.
Professor X was also sure, positively sure, that perhaps one other writer would join the ranks of those people who write good stories without trying to make themselves out to be the all wonderful heroine. Mary Sue had learnt her lesson and the X-men would be more than ready to deal with another.
The end.
--
Well shit. I wrote this entire crappy story in just an hour. One measly hour! If other Mary Sue writers can write this fast, imagine how good a Mary Sue author could be if she could write a fic that didn't revolve around her!
This little piece of fiction was originally under parody/humor. But I've changed it to parody/horror. Because Mary Sue is a little horror..
Anyway, I will NEVER write a Mary Sue. I will NEVER even write an anti Mary Sue fic again. I don't even know WHY I wrote this one, it just came to me, seemed to flow and I just had to write it down.
Plus I was angry. I used to read only the Lord of the Rings fiction at this site. I don't even go there anymore because it is just so damn hard to find a good fic that isn't a Mary Sue or a slash fic there, the good authors are not updated regularly enough and that is why I am writing X-men fics instead.
Next time I feel like writing, I'll update my more read worthy story. That's a promise.
Mary Sue was screeching, her voice no longer seemed as charming as it had before. Her reaction was akin to the time back in Alkali Lake when every mutant in the world had been also wiped out. Rogue felt sorry for the girl, knowing what she must be going through.
"Do not feel any empathy towards Mary Sue, young Rogue." Professor X whispered in her thoughts. "For she feels nothing."
"Nothing?"
"Yes. Mary Sue has no soul."
Professor X could see clearly now, no barriers within Mary Sue's mind could prevent him from taking advantage of this opportunity to delve into the perfect mind.
He was amazed by what he saw and made sure, with Jean's help, that every other mutant in the facility could see too.
Up until a few weeks ago, Mary Sue had never existed. Mary Sue had never been born. Mary Sue was from a different reality and even there, she was not real. Just a figment of her creator's limited imagination. He could see a world parallel to this one, where the idea of mutants was something of comic book material.
Mary Sue wasn't even a character in a comic. Just a figment. An embodiment of one immature girl's desire to be something more than what she was, a girl who's selfish desires to be a part of something better and to enforce her reality upon them and make it real.
He wasn't sure how this Mary Sue had come to this world. What he was sure of, was that there was millions of them. Perhaps there had been so many stupid little girls writing stories about themselves, that eventually time, reality itself had ruptured and that was how this Mary Sue had became real.
He had seen enough.
"I can't do this for much longer, Professor! I don't want her thoughts in my head permanently!" Rogue screamed.
Jean looked at the professor. Then nodded to Storm.
"Lets end this."
Mary Sue was battered from all directions from every mutant she had manipulated. Scott eyeblasted her, Logan slashed her once pretty face. The assault went on, until there was nothing left to destroy.
There was no trace of Mary Sue left. It was like she had never existed.
The last coherent thought the Professor sensed from Mary Sue, was from the creator of Mary Sue herself. "I'm sorry."
It would never be enough. But the professor knew, they all knew, that as long as there was people writing good fan fiction in every reality, the Mary Sue authors would never gain the respect they sought. Those authors, whose sense of decency, would counter the onslaught of those writers who had yet to mature into something truly better.
Rogue and Jean also contemplated. In their reality, they had Mary Sue authors too, writing about taking centre stage in popular books such as Harry Potter and Lord of the Rings. There were probably students amongst them who perhaps went online to write Mary Sues. They wouldn't any more.
Professor X was also sure, positively sure, that perhaps one other writer would join the ranks of those people who write good stories without trying to make themselves out to be the all wonderful heroine. Mary Sue had learnt her lesson and the X-men would be more than ready to deal with another.
The end.
--
Well shit. I wrote this entire crappy story in just an hour. One measly hour! If other Mary Sue writers can write this fast, imagine how good a Mary Sue author could be if she could write a fic that didn't revolve around her!
This little piece of fiction was originally under parody/humor. But I've changed it to parody/horror. Because Mary Sue is a little horror..
Anyway, I will NEVER write a Mary Sue. I will NEVER even write an anti Mary Sue fic again. I don't even know WHY I wrote this one, it just came to me, seemed to flow and I just had to write it down.
Plus I was angry. I used to read only the Lord of the Rings fiction at this site. I don't even go there anymore because it is just so damn hard to find a good fic that isn't a Mary Sue or a slash fic there, the good authors are not updated regularly enough and that is why I am writing X-men fics instead.
Next time I feel like writing, I'll update my more read worthy story. That's a promise.