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Some Unrevealed Past, And A Lot Of Surprises Chapter 8: That Night - Part 2
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"He's changed so much..," Danny thought as she lay on the couch in the living room of Hiei's apartment. She had been trying to go to sleep for hours, but every attempt failed more miserably than the last. "She's awake, I can tell. I wonder what's wrong with." Hiei's thought was cut off right then with a soft knock, a head peeping around the door, and her voice saying, "May I come in, Hiei? I can't sleep." "You know I can't deny you." he said, she could hear him scooting over in his bed. ( by the way, she's in her demon form) She closed the door behind her. Once her eyes adjusted to the darkness of his room, she could see that he had pulled the bedding away enough to where she could get in and lay next to him. "I hope I'm not scaring her." Hiei thought. She slowly laid down beside him and cuddled into his open embrace. "Almost exactly like before," she thought, "just a different setting." She was lying on her back, half way on Hiei's bare chest, and his arm was wrapped around her and held her by her waist. She was wearing panties and a short shirt that barely covered them.
Suddenly, she felt his hand gently make its way under her shirt, taking it off of her. She let out a soft moan and said "Hiei." almost pleadingly. "You don't want me to?" he asked her, her reply was "It's not that, it just surprised me is all." as her right hand slid up and touched his right cheek. He continued. (I think you all can imagine what he continues doing.)
~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~* ~~~*~~ Well? What do you guys think? Should I redo it with more information? I need at least 7 reviews before I will put up very many more chapters. I have plenty more though, I've only gone half-way through 16 pages and I have 45 pages written so far and am still writing. So I've got a ways to go before I'm done. Please R&R!
Some Unrevealed Past, And A Lot Of Surprises Chapter 8: That Night - Part 2
~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~* ~~~*~~
"He's changed so much..," Danny thought as she lay on the couch in the living room of Hiei's apartment. She had been trying to go to sleep for hours, but every attempt failed more miserably than the last. "She's awake, I can tell. I wonder what's wrong with." Hiei's thought was cut off right then with a soft knock, a head peeping around the door, and her voice saying, "May I come in, Hiei? I can't sleep." "You know I can't deny you." he said, she could hear him scooting over in his bed. ( by the way, she's in her demon form) She closed the door behind her. Once her eyes adjusted to the darkness of his room, she could see that he had pulled the bedding away enough to where she could get in and lay next to him. "I hope I'm not scaring her." Hiei thought. She slowly laid down beside him and cuddled into his open embrace. "Almost exactly like before," she thought, "just a different setting." She was lying on her back, half way on Hiei's bare chest, and his arm was wrapped around her and held her by her waist. She was wearing panties and a short shirt that barely covered them.
Suddenly, she felt his hand gently make its way under her shirt, taking it off of her. She let out a soft moan and said "Hiei." almost pleadingly. "You don't want me to?" he asked her, her reply was "It's not that, it just surprised me is all." as her right hand slid up and touched his right cheek. He continued. (I think you all can imagine what he continues doing.)
~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~* ~~~*~~ Well? What do you guys think? Should I redo it with more information? I need at least 7 reviews before I will put up very many more chapters. I have plenty more though, I've only gone half-way through 16 pages and I have 45 pages written so far and am still writing. So I've got a ways to go before I'm done. Please R&R!