A/N. thank you to all the people who reviewed the last chapter. And a
special thanks to stanley T. I agree. It is going in a million directions.
But, they'll all end up in the same place. I can't go in to much detail,
but I can tell you that the robot is connected to the story and it will be
harder to defeat then Gohan says. And as the story goes on, Gohan will warm
up to Videl and become a little more Gohan-like and less Vegeta-like. He'll
be nicer to everyone sort of naïve, but not dorky. And this chapter will
explain the truth about Norialc, at the end of the chapter, there will be a
surprise that NOBODY (with the exception of me) will have ever seen. So
this chapter won't have Gohan or Videl in it ok, and because I don't know
that years and stuff, I'm just not going to tell you the dates and stuff.
At first the story will be used in a present tense, but the flash back
thing will be pasted tense of course. Ok, now onto the chapter.
Chapter 8 Noino; part one
On top of Hujari's Peak (not a true place), stands a lone figure wearing strange clothes. At first you would think that he's a vampire with his cloak, but he is also wearing some strange armour. His name is Norialc. He was born a saiyan, but he 'died' a vampire. At the minute he was in deep thought. 'Soon Gohan. You will learn the truth about my father and myself'.
(Now, this is where the chapter really begins)
~*~Flashback~*~
"Yes King Vegeta, I will tell my son as well," said the beefy saiyan. He had a hard sort of face with a small scar from his bottom lip to his chin. His hair was sticking up in most directions
"Good General Tomiarto, and also give my congratulations to your son for the birth of his first son," said King Vegeta.
Tomiarto growled. 'Why is everyone so excited about Noino's son. They didn't make this much fuss when Dandileo was born' thought Tomiarto. "Yes I will tell him that also," said Tomiarto.
"Good. You may go now," said King Vegeta.
Tomiarto walked off, making sure that the king couldn't hear him growling. 'Stupid boy. He's the one that is supposed to be walking in my footsteps. I'm the one who saved the royal family when we were attack by Gargoyles, yet my son gets all the credit for being the strongest on Vegeta. Ha. I could wipe him easily. He doesn't even act like a saiyan'. The hard faced and muscular General Tomiarto, father of the warrior Noino, was a saiyan that you would not want to make mad. He believed that the saiyans should wipe out life on all other planets, take no prisoners and show no mercy and that sort of thing. Some people believed that he commanded warriors that were only loyal to him, and that he would rise against the king. While Tomiarto was growling in his head, he didn't see the young and beautiful saiyan female, Apela (I decided to use fruit and veg for the saiyan names). So of course they bumped into each other. "Oh sorry, Tomiarto, I didn't see you there," said Apela.
"Whatever," spat Tomiarto.
Apela frowned. "Why are you so aggressive towards me Tomiarto. Your mate likes me and so does your son. If they didn't, then I wouldn't be the mother of both of your grandchildren," she said.
Tomiarto pushed her so she fell on her ass. "You listen here. You are lucky that my mate and son like you or you would be mince meet. As for YOUR children, I want nothing to do with them. They are just a bunch of scum that I have to deal with. If you think I will put up with them for one minute then I will have them slaughtered."
"Why are you like that? You give saiyans a bad name, you know. We may kill off other races, but we are kind to our kin and so should you. And besides, the king wouldn't dare let you kill our children," she argued back to the older saiyan.
Tomiarto just growled and flew off to his home. Apela went back to guarding the palace.
~*~A few hours later when Apela gets off work~*~
From one room in the house of Noino, the strongest warrior since the Super Saiyans, and Apela, bravest guard of Vegeta's Palace, came happy giggles. In the room, Noino and his wife Apela were playing around, kissing, chasing each other and other sorts of playing (nothing sexual). Finally Noino pinned Apela on the bed and kissed her passionately. "You're a funny saiyan, my love," said Noino.
"So are you," giggled Apela.
Noino got of her and lay down beside her wrapping his arms around his love. He noticed that his normally happy wife seemed bothered by something. "What's wrong my love," he said.
"It's just your father. Why is he so fowl to everyone? It's like he wants everyone dead," frowned Apela.
"He probably does. When I was young and I got hurt, he just said, deal with it. My mother however always looked after me. He believes that saiyans should act like other people think we act. Like the barbarians that killed the Tuffles," said Noino.
Apela smiled. "I'm glad that I'm your mate. Any other female would kill for you, so would I," she said in a whisper.
Noino chuckled. "Yes. I can't help being incredible handsome as well as strong," smirked Noino.
"Not only are you handsome and strong, but you are also great in bed," she said also smirking.
They were about to kiss again before Tomiarto barged in, where they quickly separated. "Noino," he growled.
"Yes father," said Noino.
"We are going on a mission in four hours, hurry and say good bye to your mate and mother," he said.
Noino and Apela were shocked. "FOUR HOURS," yelled Noino. "Are you nuts. I want to spend time with my new son and the rest of my family, not go on some bloody mission."
"To bad," he said walking off.
Noino looked to his mate sitting up. "Why on earth do I have to go on the stupid mission? I know I'm the strongest, but that doesn't mean that everyone else are weaklings," he complained.
Apela just looked sad. "I guess your going to have to go on the mission then," she said kissing him on the cheek.
Noino just growled as Apela left.
~*~
Noino walked onto the ship that was taking them to planet Earth, the planet they were going to destroy. He could see his mother, Oranga, his daughter, Dandileo and his mate holding there son that was born a few days ago. "Take care my son," said Oranga.
"Come home soon daddy," said Dandileo.
"And don't be to much like your father," whispered Apela into his ear.
Noino smiled and walked onto the ship. As the ship took off, he could see his family waving to him. Tomiarto also saw them and smirked.
~*~
"Where are we father," asked Noino.
"We're about half an hour from Earth's Solar System. Why," sneered Tomiarto.
"Because we're out of fuel."
"WHAT."
Noino chuckled. "WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINK IS SO FUNNY. WE'RE OUT FUEL."
"At least we still have communications," said Noino smiling.
Tomiarto just growled. Just then the ship started to get all bumpy. It was out of control and they were heading for dark planet. "Noino, what's that planet there," asked Tomiarto.
"Don't know," said Noino simply.
"What do you mean don't know," yelled Tomiarto.
"Exactly what I said, and before you ask, the computer doesn't know either. The only information it has on this planet is that some people call it the Dark Gate. Whatever the hell that means."
"Well, we're going to have to land there no matter what," yelled Tomiarto.
~*~
"I wonder why it's called the Dark Gate anyway," asked Noino.
They had crashed onto the planet and had got out. Only 5 minutes had passed and the father and son had already starting to get on each other's nerves.
"I don't know, now go look for something," growled Tomiarto.
"What do I look for," said Noino.
"Anything," said Tomiarto.
With that Noino walked off.
~*~
Noino was walking through the darkness of the planet. 'Bloody planet. Nothing but darkness' thought Noino. He started to remember something's that were really important to him. First he remembered when he was six. By six he was already capable of defeating warriors twice his age. At age 14 he had won the Tournament of Vegeta (same thing as the WMAT). At age of 19 he was strong enough to defeat anyone in Vegeta's army and at 21 he was the strongest saiyan after the king. But no matter what he did his father would always put him down, make him think that his achievements meant nothing. But unfortunately for Tomiarto he was the only one who thought so. Suddenly 'Go back' said a voice in his head. Noino jumped with a start. 'Go back to the ship' it said again. So deciding it couldn't do any harm he went back to the ship.
~*~
When Noino got back he found that his father was talking to someone on Vegeta (through communications). It was Eguplan, the captain of Tomiarto's army. Noino listened to the conversation. "So how goes the mission," asked Tomiarto.
"It's going fine. We have killed many saiyans," said Eguplan. 'Killed many saiyans? What does he mean by that' thought Noino
"What about the guards," said Tomiarto?
"Slaughtered most of them. One of them wouldn't give up," reported Eguplan.
"Which one," asked Tomiarto?
"Apela."
Noino's eye widened to double their normal size. His Apela dead? Noino continued to listen to what they were saying.
"And what of my family," asked Tomiarto?
"Your mate and granddaughter are dead. We could not find your grandson however," said Eguplan.
Again Noino's eyes widened in shock. His mother, mate and daughter were dead. At least his son was a live but it didn't matter because he would never see his son again. Ever. Suddenly the great rage came over him. His power was raising with incredible force. His hair was. changing (guess what). So were his eyes. With his all his rage backing him up he let out a tremendous scream. His raw energy alone blew Tomiarto back and totalled every machine. "What is that?" stated the general.
"Sir what is your final order," came the voice of Eguplan (Tomiarto is using a communications watch thing which hasn't being destroyed yet).
"Kill the-" but he didn't get to finish as someone blasted the watch.
Tomiarto turned around to see his son. But something was different. His hair was golden and his eyes were teal (think when Gohan went super saiyan 2 for the first time. That is what he looked like). "Noino what happened to you," said the older saiyan.
"This is my anger father. This is the form of a super saiyan," said Noino.
To be continued
So how did you like it. I bet none of you saw that one coming. But that isn't the last surprise. Look out for part two. and I know that the saiyans a bit off character, but its my story so there.
Chapter 8 Noino; part one
On top of Hujari's Peak (not a true place), stands a lone figure wearing strange clothes. At first you would think that he's a vampire with his cloak, but he is also wearing some strange armour. His name is Norialc. He was born a saiyan, but he 'died' a vampire. At the minute he was in deep thought. 'Soon Gohan. You will learn the truth about my father and myself'.
(Now, this is where the chapter really begins)
~*~Flashback~*~
"Yes King Vegeta, I will tell my son as well," said the beefy saiyan. He had a hard sort of face with a small scar from his bottom lip to his chin. His hair was sticking up in most directions
"Good General Tomiarto, and also give my congratulations to your son for the birth of his first son," said King Vegeta.
Tomiarto growled. 'Why is everyone so excited about Noino's son. They didn't make this much fuss when Dandileo was born' thought Tomiarto. "Yes I will tell him that also," said Tomiarto.
"Good. You may go now," said King Vegeta.
Tomiarto walked off, making sure that the king couldn't hear him growling. 'Stupid boy. He's the one that is supposed to be walking in my footsteps. I'm the one who saved the royal family when we were attack by Gargoyles, yet my son gets all the credit for being the strongest on Vegeta. Ha. I could wipe him easily. He doesn't even act like a saiyan'. The hard faced and muscular General Tomiarto, father of the warrior Noino, was a saiyan that you would not want to make mad. He believed that the saiyans should wipe out life on all other planets, take no prisoners and show no mercy and that sort of thing. Some people believed that he commanded warriors that were only loyal to him, and that he would rise against the king. While Tomiarto was growling in his head, he didn't see the young and beautiful saiyan female, Apela (I decided to use fruit and veg for the saiyan names). So of course they bumped into each other. "Oh sorry, Tomiarto, I didn't see you there," said Apela.
"Whatever," spat Tomiarto.
Apela frowned. "Why are you so aggressive towards me Tomiarto. Your mate likes me and so does your son. If they didn't, then I wouldn't be the mother of both of your grandchildren," she said.
Tomiarto pushed her so she fell on her ass. "You listen here. You are lucky that my mate and son like you or you would be mince meet. As for YOUR children, I want nothing to do with them. They are just a bunch of scum that I have to deal with. If you think I will put up with them for one minute then I will have them slaughtered."
"Why are you like that? You give saiyans a bad name, you know. We may kill off other races, but we are kind to our kin and so should you. And besides, the king wouldn't dare let you kill our children," she argued back to the older saiyan.
Tomiarto just growled and flew off to his home. Apela went back to guarding the palace.
~*~A few hours later when Apela gets off work~*~
From one room in the house of Noino, the strongest warrior since the Super Saiyans, and Apela, bravest guard of Vegeta's Palace, came happy giggles. In the room, Noino and his wife Apela were playing around, kissing, chasing each other and other sorts of playing (nothing sexual). Finally Noino pinned Apela on the bed and kissed her passionately. "You're a funny saiyan, my love," said Noino.
"So are you," giggled Apela.
Noino got of her and lay down beside her wrapping his arms around his love. He noticed that his normally happy wife seemed bothered by something. "What's wrong my love," he said.
"It's just your father. Why is he so fowl to everyone? It's like he wants everyone dead," frowned Apela.
"He probably does. When I was young and I got hurt, he just said, deal with it. My mother however always looked after me. He believes that saiyans should act like other people think we act. Like the barbarians that killed the Tuffles," said Noino.
Apela smiled. "I'm glad that I'm your mate. Any other female would kill for you, so would I," she said in a whisper.
Noino chuckled. "Yes. I can't help being incredible handsome as well as strong," smirked Noino.
"Not only are you handsome and strong, but you are also great in bed," she said also smirking.
They were about to kiss again before Tomiarto barged in, where they quickly separated. "Noino," he growled.
"Yes father," said Noino.
"We are going on a mission in four hours, hurry and say good bye to your mate and mother," he said.
Noino and Apela were shocked. "FOUR HOURS," yelled Noino. "Are you nuts. I want to spend time with my new son and the rest of my family, not go on some bloody mission."
"To bad," he said walking off.
Noino looked to his mate sitting up. "Why on earth do I have to go on the stupid mission? I know I'm the strongest, but that doesn't mean that everyone else are weaklings," he complained.
Apela just looked sad. "I guess your going to have to go on the mission then," she said kissing him on the cheek.
Noino just growled as Apela left.
~*~
Noino walked onto the ship that was taking them to planet Earth, the planet they were going to destroy. He could see his mother, Oranga, his daughter, Dandileo and his mate holding there son that was born a few days ago. "Take care my son," said Oranga.
"Come home soon daddy," said Dandileo.
"And don't be to much like your father," whispered Apela into his ear.
Noino smiled and walked onto the ship. As the ship took off, he could see his family waving to him. Tomiarto also saw them and smirked.
~*~
"Where are we father," asked Noino.
"We're about half an hour from Earth's Solar System. Why," sneered Tomiarto.
"Because we're out of fuel."
"WHAT."
Noino chuckled. "WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINK IS SO FUNNY. WE'RE OUT FUEL."
"At least we still have communications," said Noino smiling.
Tomiarto just growled. Just then the ship started to get all bumpy. It was out of control and they were heading for dark planet. "Noino, what's that planet there," asked Tomiarto.
"Don't know," said Noino simply.
"What do you mean don't know," yelled Tomiarto.
"Exactly what I said, and before you ask, the computer doesn't know either. The only information it has on this planet is that some people call it the Dark Gate. Whatever the hell that means."
"Well, we're going to have to land there no matter what," yelled Tomiarto.
~*~
"I wonder why it's called the Dark Gate anyway," asked Noino.
They had crashed onto the planet and had got out. Only 5 minutes had passed and the father and son had already starting to get on each other's nerves.
"I don't know, now go look for something," growled Tomiarto.
"What do I look for," said Noino.
"Anything," said Tomiarto.
With that Noino walked off.
~*~
Noino was walking through the darkness of the planet. 'Bloody planet. Nothing but darkness' thought Noino. He started to remember something's that were really important to him. First he remembered when he was six. By six he was already capable of defeating warriors twice his age. At age 14 he had won the Tournament of Vegeta (same thing as the WMAT). At age of 19 he was strong enough to defeat anyone in Vegeta's army and at 21 he was the strongest saiyan after the king. But no matter what he did his father would always put him down, make him think that his achievements meant nothing. But unfortunately for Tomiarto he was the only one who thought so. Suddenly 'Go back' said a voice in his head. Noino jumped with a start. 'Go back to the ship' it said again. So deciding it couldn't do any harm he went back to the ship.
~*~
When Noino got back he found that his father was talking to someone on Vegeta (through communications). It was Eguplan, the captain of Tomiarto's army. Noino listened to the conversation. "So how goes the mission," asked Tomiarto.
"It's going fine. We have killed many saiyans," said Eguplan. 'Killed many saiyans? What does he mean by that' thought Noino
"What about the guards," said Tomiarto?
"Slaughtered most of them. One of them wouldn't give up," reported Eguplan.
"Which one," asked Tomiarto?
"Apela."
Noino's eye widened to double their normal size. His Apela dead? Noino continued to listen to what they were saying.
"And what of my family," asked Tomiarto?
"Your mate and granddaughter are dead. We could not find your grandson however," said Eguplan.
Again Noino's eyes widened in shock. His mother, mate and daughter were dead. At least his son was a live but it didn't matter because he would never see his son again. Ever. Suddenly the great rage came over him. His power was raising with incredible force. His hair was. changing (guess what). So were his eyes. With his all his rage backing him up he let out a tremendous scream. His raw energy alone blew Tomiarto back and totalled every machine. "What is that?" stated the general.
"Sir what is your final order," came the voice of Eguplan (Tomiarto is using a communications watch thing which hasn't being destroyed yet).
"Kill the-" but he didn't get to finish as someone blasted the watch.
Tomiarto turned around to see his son. But something was different. His hair was golden and his eyes were teal (think when Gohan went super saiyan 2 for the first time. That is what he looked like). "Noino what happened to you," said the older saiyan.
"This is my anger father. This is the form of a super saiyan," said Noino.
To be continued
So how did you like it. I bet none of you saw that one coming. But that isn't the last surprise. Look out for part two. and I know that the saiyans a bit off character, but its my story so there.