I'm afraid I have bad news to those who like my story. This story was just
really just a test because I was new to fan fiction. So ive decided to stop
writing this story. I may decide to continue this story later, but if
anyone wishes they can adopt this story for themselves. I have got a new
story planned for you guys anyway. Its called Dragonball V; Dragonball
Victory. It's my own dbz story with tons of original characters. In fact,
the only characters that aren't original are Piccolo, young Kami and
Vegeta. So again I'm sorry to those who liked it but you guys will like
this one, trust me. And here's a part out of the first chapter of my story.
Now enjoy.
Rivals
A cold breeze blew through the trees of the forest surrounding Mt. Porun, but the warriors facing each other didn't seem to notice. The light of the moon shone through the trees allowing you just to see some detail of the warriors. One of the warriors was taller, but looked less human then his opponent. He had green skin and pointy ears that made you think of the aliens that were suppose to live on Mars. He wore a black gi, with pointy shoes, a cape and a turban.
His opponent, however, was very different. He looked only to be about 10 or so and had jet-black hair with piercing navy blue eyes. He was wearing a black gi (like the one Gohan wore in Great Saiyaman Saga), with an orange cloak. Lifting up the bottom of his cloak was a fury brown monkey's tail, which continued to sway from side to side. For about an hour they just stood there glaring at each other. Then the boy spoke. "What are you doing here Piccolo. This is my mountain and your not suppose to be here. After all, you seem to blow up anything you look at with your ugly face."
"You know what I want Ashurii, I want to fight like always. I want to prove to you that I am stronger then you," said his foe.
"Every time we fight you keep saying that and every time I win. When will you give up," asked Ashurii.
"I will never give up, even when I beat you I'll still come back for these heart warming moments," spat Piccolo.
Ashurii rolled his eyes as he threw off his cloak and dropped into a fight stance. Piccolo also took off his cape and turban and dropped into a fighting stance. " Ladies first," Ashurii dared.
Piccolo, ignoring Ashurii's taunt charged forward towards his opponent. He launched a kick to Ashurii's head but the young warrior caught the kick in time and threw Piccolo back a few ft. Just as Piccolo was about to land, he flipped over landing on his feet. Unfortunately his back was turned, which allowed an opening for Ashurii. "Ma. Sen. Ko. HAAAAAAA," yelled Ashurii launching the orange blast.
So how do you like that? Remember look for Dragonball V. and sorry again. Also I can't give you all of the first chapter cause that will be telling.
Rivals
A cold breeze blew through the trees of the forest surrounding Mt. Porun, but the warriors facing each other didn't seem to notice. The light of the moon shone through the trees allowing you just to see some detail of the warriors. One of the warriors was taller, but looked less human then his opponent. He had green skin and pointy ears that made you think of the aliens that were suppose to live on Mars. He wore a black gi, with pointy shoes, a cape and a turban.
His opponent, however, was very different. He looked only to be about 10 or so and had jet-black hair with piercing navy blue eyes. He was wearing a black gi (like the one Gohan wore in Great Saiyaman Saga), with an orange cloak. Lifting up the bottom of his cloak was a fury brown monkey's tail, which continued to sway from side to side. For about an hour they just stood there glaring at each other. Then the boy spoke. "What are you doing here Piccolo. This is my mountain and your not suppose to be here. After all, you seem to blow up anything you look at with your ugly face."
"You know what I want Ashurii, I want to fight like always. I want to prove to you that I am stronger then you," said his foe.
"Every time we fight you keep saying that and every time I win. When will you give up," asked Ashurii.
"I will never give up, even when I beat you I'll still come back for these heart warming moments," spat Piccolo.
Ashurii rolled his eyes as he threw off his cloak and dropped into a fight stance. Piccolo also took off his cape and turban and dropped into a fighting stance. " Ladies first," Ashurii dared.
Piccolo, ignoring Ashurii's taunt charged forward towards his opponent. He launched a kick to Ashurii's head but the young warrior caught the kick in time and threw Piccolo back a few ft. Just as Piccolo was about to land, he flipped over landing on his feet. Unfortunately his back was turned, which allowed an opening for Ashurii. "Ma. Sen. Ko. HAAAAAAA," yelled Ashurii launching the orange blast.
So how do you like that? Remember look for Dragonball V. and sorry again. Also I can't give you all of the first chapter cause that will be telling.