This story is rather odd isn't it? I mean no one reveiws it let ALONE reads
it. I suppose people are scared to read the content in it. I need to upgrade the rating. To much of the F**k word. Let alone what's coming up
the next chapter. SO this is the LAST PG-13 chapter everyone will read. Next chapter is strictly R. So for people who DO enjoy this aweful peice of crap can now know where to find it. Not like I am expecting people to read
it. Ta.
Acknowledgement: Spider06 - I can't wait to see where this is going also. From my coding that can be called shitwrack shorthand, I would love to see where this leads and does it end great. Knowing me, it wont.
Crazygirlwithmagicwand - I can't update everyday *sniffs* But I updated after when you left that reveiw. Needless to say, I am halfway through the thrid/fourth chapater.
VERY VERY WERID - Yea I know it is, can't blame me, Blame Shmee and Jhonen Vasquez for the insperations. ^_^ Looks like no one else to acknowlegde, so onto STORY!
Lain - Oh! I feel so special! Is that why people are afraid to read this horrible story? In fear of Oringality? I got kind of sick of the whole GORDO/LIZZIE thing, and also of the pregancy ordeal. I enjoy this story, even though I never re-read the chapters. Is it okay? Seriously?
~+~
The Kiko Series
INL
Lizzie sat on her bed and was reading the newest comic she bought. She finally had enough money to buy off the rest of the series. except the newer ones. What she could tell, every three issues are different stories, which explains the titles. So far, the main charater was G. He was the one most crazy guy in the story, rambling on about stupid shit. But she supposed it was part of the whole series. Another question in mind is who is Kiko and why is it called the Kiko series when Kiko died after the fouth book? And Who was this hobo that sat on the corner and ate kids. (Sorry, this is was just an idea after reading A Visit From Grandpa.) Out of the ordianry, everything was mildly disturbing and more down to earth.
COMIC
-You cannot surpress your powers anymore child. I will eat your babies- Some alien guy was saying to G.
-NO! MY BABIES!- And G went running across the ship with aliens behind him with a chicken in hand
LIZZIE
A very confused Lizzie looked over at the comic and started mumbling stuff about reading will never be the same, or chickens for that matter.
COMIC
-We want you to have intercourse with this human female- A chicken is showing in the next panel
-THAT'S NOT A HUMAN FEMALE! THAT'S A CHICKEN! NO ONE FUCKS CHICKEN!- A male started screaming and G looked very sespicious at the wall.
-You lie human.- They handed the chicken to the human. -Fuck her-
LIZZIE
"That's so disturbing." (tell me about it. That's a thank you to Jhonen Vasquez {Ever watched Invader Zim? Well that's the head writer and blah blah blah})
NEXT DAY IN LIZZIE LAND
Lizzie walked throw the hallways of her morbid school, where she thought smelled like piss, vinager and vomit. Needless to say, she found Miranda, and Gordo by her locker.
"Yo Lizzie, Jamie was asking for you. Looked like you might be a tag along with her crew.. and Lizzie, what the fuck are you wearing?" Gordo asked while looking at her. (Yea, I would too. Lizzie is usually decked out in pink or something.) waredrobe. She was decked out in black. Even her hair had some black in it.
Lizzie looked confused and looked down and giggled. (Giggled? Oi!) "Oh THAT? Um.. yeah.. Nevermind."
'You completly changed the subject' a voice in lizzie's head said. 'You are a hypocypt. AND a ditz. Fucking whore.' (Did I say that I will be using the fuck word a lot?)
"I am not a fucking whore!" She told the voice. "You're the fucking whore, fucknut." (coughs.. I am?) The voice shuddered in mock fear (I agree)
Lizzie looked pissed off at her locker and started punching it, which made Miranda and Gordo worried about her saftey (aww.. Can I have them a friends? Squee: What about me? INL: You're still my friend *glomps Squee*)
Lizzie mental voice snarled at her. 'You're never good enough, that's why you read me, that's why I am with you. Unrealised demons, you see your friends? Kill them!' The voice snapped and snarled like a rapid dog (MY WORD! OI MY WORD! *jumps up and down while Squee and Nny drag INL away*)
Lizzie brow started shaking and tried to fight off the voice, but it was almost impossible. (um.. huh? uh.. keep reading. Skip these things. They're stupid author comments.. just to add in some humor I suppose. Lame isn't it?) Miranda grabbed Lizzie by the shoulder and started shaking her (Is that okay to do during a mental breakdown? Last I checked I punch so person in the stomich.)
"Lizzie! Snap out of it. Lizzie!" Miranda was yelling into Lizzie's ear. (Hello; well someone pick up the phone. It's off the hook and doing a strange BRING sound.)
Gordo ran to get the nurse while Miranda was stuck with a very disturbed lizzie, what kept rambling about monkey's stripping and rapid alien guts after her. (I sense an ending here..) A few minutes later, Lizzie was being shipped to a emergancy room with Gordo and Miranda. Lizzie was still rambling. (hehe)
TBC
YOUR ENDING WILL HAVE TO WAIT! REASONS BEING ARE NOT YET DETAILED. (acually they are, becuase well.. I am not saying.) SO YOU'RE GOING TO HAVE TO WAIT! HINT: (there's a/are suicide(s) so be prepared onto who or WHAT (hehe.. um.. yeah.)
------------------------------------------------ MY FIRST... ...SHAMELESS ADVERTISING! RATED R: Wreathed in Flames by IBIWD911 . : Squee's a pyro maniac who kills people, he's almost content with what he's got, but what happens when Johnny returns? What about this chick Adania? (First chapter is acually pretty damn cool, the rest is odd. Also features JOHNNY (thm) (Isn't he suppose to be dead? HELLO he comminted suicide!) ("TIME FOR SOMETHING NEW! {points the gun to his temple} OVER THE STARS!" (and then Johnny shoots himself.) *sniffs* And he was sooo cool too. Revernd Meat can DIE! *growls*
*looks around and regains posture* REvEiW? Please? *puppy dog face*
it. I suppose people are scared to read the content in it. I need to upgrade the rating. To much of the F**k word. Let alone what's coming up
the next chapter. SO this is the LAST PG-13 chapter everyone will read. Next chapter is strictly R. So for people who DO enjoy this aweful peice of crap can now know where to find it. Not like I am expecting people to read
it. Ta.
Acknowledgement: Spider06 - I can't wait to see where this is going also. From my coding that can be called shitwrack shorthand, I would love to see where this leads and does it end great. Knowing me, it wont.
Crazygirlwithmagicwand - I can't update everyday *sniffs* But I updated after when you left that reveiw. Needless to say, I am halfway through the thrid/fourth chapater.
VERY VERY WERID - Yea I know it is, can't blame me, Blame Shmee and Jhonen Vasquez for the insperations. ^_^ Looks like no one else to acknowlegde, so onto STORY!
Lain - Oh! I feel so special! Is that why people are afraid to read this horrible story? In fear of Oringality? I got kind of sick of the whole GORDO/LIZZIE thing, and also of the pregancy ordeal. I enjoy this story, even though I never re-read the chapters. Is it okay? Seriously?
~+~
The Kiko Series
INL
Lizzie sat on her bed and was reading the newest comic she bought. She finally had enough money to buy off the rest of the series. except the newer ones. What she could tell, every three issues are different stories, which explains the titles. So far, the main charater was G. He was the one most crazy guy in the story, rambling on about stupid shit. But she supposed it was part of the whole series. Another question in mind is who is Kiko and why is it called the Kiko series when Kiko died after the fouth book? And Who was this hobo that sat on the corner and ate kids. (Sorry, this is was just an idea after reading A Visit From Grandpa.) Out of the ordianry, everything was mildly disturbing and more down to earth.
COMIC
-You cannot surpress your powers anymore child. I will eat your babies- Some alien guy was saying to G.
-NO! MY BABIES!- And G went running across the ship with aliens behind him with a chicken in hand
LIZZIE
A very confused Lizzie looked over at the comic and started mumbling stuff about reading will never be the same, or chickens for that matter.
COMIC
-We want you to have intercourse with this human female- A chicken is showing in the next panel
-THAT'S NOT A HUMAN FEMALE! THAT'S A CHICKEN! NO ONE FUCKS CHICKEN!- A male started screaming and G looked very sespicious at the wall.
-You lie human.- They handed the chicken to the human. -Fuck her-
LIZZIE
"That's so disturbing." (tell me about it. That's a thank you to Jhonen Vasquez {Ever watched Invader Zim? Well that's the head writer and blah blah blah})
NEXT DAY IN LIZZIE LAND
Lizzie walked throw the hallways of her morbid school, where she thought smelled like piss, vinager and vomit. Needless to say, she found Miranda, and Gordo by her locker.
"Yo Lizzie, Jamie was asking for you. Looked like you might be a tag along with her crew.. and Lizzie, what the fuck are you wearing?" Gordo asked while looking at her. (Yea, I would too. Lizzie is usually decked out in pink or something.) waredrobe. She was decked out in black. Even her hair had some black in it.
Lizzie looked confused and looked down and giggled. (Giggled? Oi!) "Oh THAT? Um.. yeah.. Nevermind."
'You completly changed the subject' a voice in lizzie's head said. 'You are a hypocypt. AND a ditz. Fucking whore.' (Did I say that I will be using the fuck word a lot?)
"I am not a fucking whore!" She told the voice. "You're the fucking whore, fucknut." (coughs.. I am?) The voice shuddered in mock fear (I agree)
Lizzie looked pissed off at her locker and started punching it, which made Miranda and Gordo worried about her saftey (aww.. Can I have them a friends? Squee: What about me? INL: You're still my friend *glomps Squee*)
Lizzie mental voice snarled at her. 'You're never good enough, that's why you read me, that's why I am with you. Unrealised demons, you see your friends? Kill them!' The voice snapped and snarled like a rapid dog (MY WORD! OI MY WORD! *jumps up and down while Squee and Nny drag INL away*)
Lizzie brow started shaking and tried to fight off the voice, but it was almost impossible. (um.. huh? uh.. keep reading. Skip these things. They're stupid author comments.. just to add in some humor I suppose. Lame isn't it?) Miranda grabbed Lizzie by the shoulder and started shaking her (Is that okay to do during a mental breakdown? Last I checked I punch so person in the stomich.)
"Lizzie! Snap out of it. Lizzie!" Miranda was yelling into Lizzie's ear. (Hello; well someone pick up the phone. It's off the hook and doing a strange BRING sound.)
Gordo ran to get the nurse while Miranda was stuck with a very disturbed lizzie, what kept rambling about monkey's stripping and rapid alien guts after her. (I sense an ending here..) A few minutes later, Lizzie was being shipped to a emergancy room with Gordo and Miranda. Lizzie was still rambling. (hehe)
TBC
YOUR ENDING WILL HAVE TO WAIT! REASONS BEING ARE NOT YET DETAILED. (acually they are, becuase well.. I am not saying.) SO YOU'RE GOING TO HAVE TO WAIT! HINT: (there's a/are suicide(s) so be prepared onto who or WHAT (hehe.. um.. yeah.)
------------------------------------------------ MY FIRST... ...SHAMELESS ADVERTISING! RATED R: Wreathed in Flames by IBIWD911 . : Squee's a pyro maniac who kills people, he's almost content with what he's got, but what happens when Johnny returns? What about this chick Adania? (First chapter is acually pretty damn cool, the rest is odd. Also features JOHNNY (thm) (Isn't he suppose to be dead? HELLO he comminted suicide!) ("TIME FOR SOMETHING NEW! {points the gun to his temple} OVER THE STARS!" (and then Johnny shoots himself.) *sniffs* And he was sooo cool too. Revernd Meat can DIE! *growls*
*looks around and regains posture* REvEiW? Please? *puppy dog face*