Back2thechaos - Good to know my writing pissed you off poor excuse of a human. I was working on a Johnny the Homicidal Maniac fic, and guess what! You so earned a spot! SO go and congradulate yourself. Just for your remark on Goths. (I am not Goth though, just a.. um.. *thinks* dunno. I hang out with psychotics.)
Crazygirlwithmagicwand - Yea, I know, but still it's pretty fucking funny. I love to read these hallrious reveiws. Viseik 's going all crazy, and wanting to released by reading some these pathatic reveiws. Oh well. As I said on my Bio. I might not know proper English, but boy is it fun! *crackles like a maniac, stops* yea.
Lain-Xauber- HOLY SHIT YOU CHANGED YOUR NAME! This has to be the most shity story I have ever written, so I thought I would abandon it. Apperntly I still owe a chapter so here. I had to change the ending dramasticly.BYE! (Hear hear on the maggots!)
I desided to go for a first person p-o-v. So deal with my rambles.
The Kiko Series
INL. (plain and simple)
Nothing was at all as it seemed with me. Nothing, no matter what I did, I was locked behind closed doors, banging endlessly on soundproof glass, while this new face, new voice, new thoughts took over. It was like, it wasn't me anymore. Ever since I read that comic, since I said shit I didn't mean. Every since I went by with the world. The life I once had, gone. Far beyond my grip. Far beyond anything I ever say. Skys hold no limits? Far beyond the fucking sky. More like Hell.
"Don't worry dearest Liz. I will take care of you" The voice sneared. I lost all touches. "I will take care of everything." That sentence.. didn't make me feel warm and fuzzy all over. Made me feel sick. I just wanted to go.
"Touch them and die!" The voice laughed at my attempt. Laugh, cruel, and yet familiar.
"Die! How marvious! Let's die! I am in control now bitch. I am boss, and you are to deal with your stupidity. I fucking hated your guts since you came into puberty. I hated you when you laughed, when you went to the mall. I even wanted to kill you when you kissed Aaron Carter. What makes this so different? Do you reconize me now?" A black haired girl came into veiw in front of me. Me, only, in all black. All, and everything. Blonde hair? Nope. Nothing. Shit.. I created this girl.
"Who the hell are you?" I asked me, or this girl. She smiled and licked her lips. Not at all what I wanted. This is frightening. I think I am going crazy.
Me, or rather Her cracked her neck and smirked a little. "Briste." She replied and laughed. "You know, you look like you're about to shit in your pants any minute."
I narrowed my eyes, and suddenly the glass dissapere. "You're nothing"
Briste laughed and had a knife in my phsyical self. Near my heart as my parents watched with fear in their eyes, and my little brother. "You are about to scream murder here soon. Let it go. Let it sleep." She started puntuating the skin, and I felt it all. She wasn't feeling shit! "Let it sleep" And shoved the knife in all the way. I gaspped and she took full control. "Dying hurts like hell doesn't it? This is what YOU did! You did this to me, and I do the same back. Fucking bitch." And somehow, I didn't hear it all. My mind went fuzzy, and I landed.. who knows where the fuck I am not. Nowhere, just enternal darkenss.
Owari/End
Crazygirlwithmagicwand - Yea, I know, but still it's pretty fucking funny. I love to read these hallrious reveiws. Viseik 's going all crazy, and wanting to released by reading some these pathatic reveiws. Oh well. As I said on my Bio. I might not know proper English, but boy is it fun! *crackles like a maniac, stops* yea.
Lain-Xauber- HOLY SHIT YOU CHANGED YOUR NAME! This has to be the most shity story I have ever written, so I thought I would abandon it. Apperntly I still owe a chapter so here. I had to change the ending dramasticly.BYE! (Hear hear on the maggots!)
I desided to go for a first person p-o-v. So deal with my rambles.
The Kiko Series
INL. (plain and simple)
Nothing was at all as it seemed with me. Nothing, no matter what I did, I was locked behind closed doors, banging endlessly on soundproof glass, while this new face, new voice, new thoughts took over. It was like, it wasn't me anymore. Ever since I read that comic, since I said shit I didn't mean. Every since I went by with the world. The life I once had, gone. Far beyond my grip. Far beyond anything I ever say. Skys hold no limits? Far beyond the fucking sky. More like Hell.
"Don't worry dearest Liz. I will take care of you" The voice sneared. I lost all touches. "I will take care of everything." That sentence.. didn't make me feel warm and fuzzy all over. Made me feel sick. I just wanted to go.
"Touch them and die!" The voice laughed at my attempt. Laugh, cruel, and yet familiar.
"Die! How marvious! Let's die! I am in control now bitch. I am boss, and you are to deal with your stupidity. I fucking hated your guts since you came into puberty. I hated you when you laughed, when you went to the mall. I even wanted to kill you when you kissed Aaron Carter. What makes this so different? Do you reconize me now?" A black haired girl came into veiw in front of me. Me, only, in all black. All, and everything. Blonde hair? Nope. Nothing. Shit.. I created this girl.
"Who the hell are you?" I asked me, or this girl. She smiled and licked her lips. Not at all what I wanted. This is frightening. I think I am going crazy.
Me, or rather Her cracked her neck and smirked a little. "Briste." She replied and laughed. "You know, you look like you're about to shit in your pants any minute."
I narrowed my eyes, and suddenly the glass dissapere. "You're nothing"
Briste laughed and had a knife in my phsyical self. Near my heart as my parents watched with fear in their eyes, and my little brother. "You are about to scream murder here soon. Let it go. Let it sleep." She started puntuating the skin, and I felt it all. She wasn't feeling shit! "Let it sleep" And shoved the knife in all the way. I gaspped and she took full control. "Dying hurts like hell doesn't it? This is what YOU did! You did this to me, and I do the same back. Fucking bitch." And somehow, I didn't hear it all. My mind went fuzzy, and I landed.. who knows where the fuck I am not. Nowhere, just enternal darkenss.
Owari/End