Well, the genre says its action adventure, and it is, but its not until I get to a certain chapter. This is a story about lily and James. Lily doesn't like James. At all because of some emotional damage he did to her in her in her first year. this takes p
Rated: Fiction T - English - Romance - James P., Lily Evans P. - Chapters: 6 - Words: 8,277 - Reviews: 34 - Follows: 1 - Updated: May 27, 2003 - Published: Jun 5, 2001 - id: 307323
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chapter three .htmLily looked as if she was thinking long
and hard, then as if remembering, her face unclouded and she said, "Yeah.
Yeah we were. Once." "Okay, so it was my first time at Hogwarts, I'm
a muggle born so I had no idea where the platform was.... Lily Evan's looked every where in Kings Cross to
find platform 9 and 3/4, but there was no such luck. She had thought about
asking this slimy haired boy who looked like it was his first year too.
She decided it was better than waiting there forever so she went up to
the boy, who had just finished saying his good byes to his father and mother,
who left shortly after. "Excuse me-" Lily said, tapping the boys shoulder
from behind. "Excuse me do you think you could help me find the platform?"
The boy had a long hooked nose, and he was quite hideous. But he just stared
at her, disgustedly. "Well, if you can't help me," Lily started impatiently. "No, no, no, I can help you," he sneered unkindly,
"Right this way." He steered her a broken down door at the end of the station.
"Right through there," he said. "There? Well surely this can't be-" "This IS the door, you want to catch the train
or not?" He sneered again. Uneasily, Lily opened the door, and cautiously
stepped in. At first it was dark, then a light came on. It was a closet.
A small closet. At this Lily became frustrated, and tried to open the door.
It was locked. "Let me out!" She demanded. "That's where mudbloods go, and that where they
should stay!" He shouted back. She heard the foot steps of him walking
away, and she started to cry. What was a mudblood any ways? She tried shouting
again, but it was useless. She sat down and hugged her knees as she cried.
She sat wondering if she would EVER get out. Then she heard talking outside
the door. She leaned against the door to hear what it was they, if there
was more than one, where talking about. "Hey i think I heard something from inside that,
door." said the voice, and then another voice was quick to agree, both
male voices. And then the door opened and standing infront of her were
two tall and handsome boys. One had glasses and untidy black hair. The
one next to him had lighter brown hair with brown eyes. They looked incrediously
at her for a moment, for there she was, her blazing green eyes with tears
in them, and her fiery red hair up in a messy half bun. "Geez, are you all right? By the way I'm James
and this is Sirius." The Glasses guy said, lending a hand and helping her
up. " I'm Lily Evan's. And I guess I'm all right, I
was forced in here by some greasy headed guy who called me a mudblood though." James' eyes went narrow as boy next to him, Sirius,
said angrily, "Some guy called you a mudblood?" "Yeah, but I don't even know what it means and-" "Will you show him to me," James asked. Lily pointed
to the hooked nose kid standing next a blonde guy who looked equally evil. "Snape, the bastard." Sirius muttered. "We'll get im later," James said. "Now we have
to get one the train, you wanna come Lily?" "Sure, i have no one else to sit with." They got on the train and found an empty compartment
at the back of the train. ** Lily skipped the part about the train and went straight
to the point. By now, Lily had met Ginny and Evette, and has
become great friends with them. And also a James Potter. During Defense
against Dark Arts, a not was sent her way. she didn't get to see who passed
it, so she just unfolded it, it read: Dear Lily, will you meet me
at the lake tonight at 12 midnight? there's something I have to tell you,
and its terrible important so please say you will, Love James p. Lily looked back at James, who was looking at her
expectantly, she nodded yes and he grinned. Lily sensed he was embarrassed,
so she just smiled a wide smile and turned back to her own desk. She was
filled with such a happiness it was hard to explain. It was 11:30 and the common rooms occupation was
decreasing too slowly, so Lily had Eve and Gin cover for her while she
snuck out to the lake. It was just about 12:00 when she got there. She
looked around and saw nobody. Her first thought was that she was set up,
when a whisper came from behind her. "You came," He said. Lily turned fast, her face
inches from his. "Yeah, well..." She breathed. She couldn't believe
she was this close to her one and only. And before she knew what was happening
James had pulled her into a deep kiss, leaving her breathless. Sure he
wa only 11, but, damn. He was good. There was no tongue, just a soft lip
touching, which actually felt better than you would think. Then Lily pulled away and asked, "So why did you
kiss me?" James looked at her. "Because your very pretty Lils." He said, his arms
around her waist, still close. Wrong move. Rule number one, don't give
a girl her first kiss, then tell her it was only because she was pretty. "What do you mean?" She asked frowning and backing
away slightly. "What I mean is your beautiful Lily." James was
uncertain, wasn't that what he was suppose to say? "Is that it?" She asked him incredulously. His
hands were no long on her hips, for she had backed away too far for his
arms. "Well... yeah." Lilly's eyes brimmed with tears.
She gave James a glare. ""You've just ruined my life James Potter, and
Ill never forgive you!" And with that, Lily ran, ran away from him, far
away, and he didn't see her till the next day, in which she avoided him
at all costs, and even gave him icy glares. And this began the eternal
hate between James H. Potter and Lily Ann Evan's. "So that's it, he broke you heart?" Mena Tickler
asked. Lily had a glazed look on her face. "Yeah, but he also taught me something: never trust
young adolescent boys who are going through puberty." Lily went to her trunk and pulled out a pair of
muggle clothes. It was okay to wear whatever you like when you weren't
in the classrooms. Or, you wouldn't get in trouble if you didn't get caught.
She lent Eve and Gin some clothes, since they were pureblooded and always
wore robes. She pulled out some dark blue jeans for them and a a few heavy
cotton sweaters. Christmas was a weekend away and it was cold on the Hogwarts
grounds. They were planning to hang in their hide out, right near the pond
under the Whomping Willow. Or kind of of under, there was a passage. It
had just been planted the first year Lily and her friends came in their
first year and it lead to the shrieking shack. They always went there to
find new things to do to torture James. It was just like a sanctuary to
them a sanctuary.
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