The Amazing Mary Sue

By: Smushed Pea

Disclaimer: I only own my Mary Sue.

This is a story about a Mary Sue, so read at you own risk.

Note – I have revised this story a few times, so if you're reading it for the second time and it's different, then I've revised since the last time you read it.

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Sulwyn was the most beautiful girl in the world. She was just so pretty. Everyone loved her and swooned over her, but she hated everyone.

She had a terrible background. When Sulwyn was five years old her mother and father got divorced, when she was eleven they died. So she crawled into her shell and stayed there and was mean to everyone.

After her parents died she was sent to an terrible orphanage and had been in and out of several foster homes throughout several years, but no one adopted her for good because she was just too mean.

One day, as she was getting dressed up for some party, she was magically transported to middle Earth. She fell into this black hole that seemed to go on forever. When she finally landed, she found her self in the middle of a forest and blacked out.

When she awoke she found herself surrounded by a lot of elves. She knew they were elves because they had pointy ears, and had read the book "The Lord of the Rings" and knew the whole story. She also noticed that she had turned into an elf herself, but she wasn't surprised at all by any of this.

When the elves saw her beauty the just stared in awe and started stuttering, even the leader of the group, Legolas, the Prince of Mirkwood, could not get over her beauty. She remained cool throughout the whole time and shot a lot of insults at them, but they still continued to swoon over her.

Eventually they lead Sulwyn to a beautiful castle and gave her a marvelous room where she took a bath and changed into an elvish dress which only made her more beautiful. But she did not seem to notice her own beauty.

The same night she arrived the elves had a feast and dancing afterwards, to which she refused everyone except the prince. After the dance they went outside to a balcony somewhere in the palace and kissed in the moonlight.

Suddenly Orcs attacked the castle, and although she was told to say and remain in the castle she went out and fought, using her amazing archery and fencing skills. Eventually she was outnumbered and was wounded, but Legolas came to her rescue and carried her on his valiant steed back to the castle where she was safe.

He put her down and ordered some elves standing there to bring her to the healers place. They did, and eventually Sulwyn recovered.

A couple more days passed and Legolas and Sulwyn decided to get married even though they had only known each other for a week. Even so, they ignored the trivial fact and got married anyway. They lived happily for a time and had many adventures.

-(A Couple Years Later)-

Legolas and Sulwyn had been married for some time now and have had a couple children. One night they were standing on the same balcony where they had first kissed; when a horn sounded loud in the night; more orcs were attacking!

The orcs were much closer than the elves had at first believed, and before the couple had a chance to move, orc archers appeared from the trees and shot arrows directly at them.

Or more like at Sulwyn. Three arrows embedded themselves deep into her body.

She died.

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THE END