AUTHORS NOTE
BASED ON WHETER OR NOT I CONTINUE
VERY IMPORTANT
I NEED YOUR REVIEWS ON THIS!
PLEASE READ BOTH PARTS!
LESS IMPORTANT PART
To one of my reviewers, again I'm bad with names, which said they understood about Parvati cursing, which she actually didn't, lol, but not about Malfoy.but when has a Malfoy not cursed in a book?
For those who keep commenting on how they don't get why Hermione with Draco, please read the whole story, for I plainly state in a chapter, I forget which, why she went with Draco, I will explain it one more time because, not to be rude or anything, I'm getting tired of it:
Hermione went with Draco because, quite frankly, she thought Ron wasn't going to ask her.and I also thought for myself, about a plot, and if I'd really like to go to my last ball at Hogwarts alone, and the answer is no. Well anyways it is part of a plot!
VERY IMPORTANT PART
Which I don't think my plot worked out very well.neither did my story. It brings tears to my eyes of some of your VERY nice reviews, but I was SERIOUSLY disappointed with my story, and my very unfinished plot. The fact is I had STARTED out with a plot line, but never got to the point of finishing it, a BIG mistake on my behalf, and as other writers know, creating a big problem with your story. See I had planned it out like so:
Ron and Hermione liked each other, but they didn't know. Voldemort was quickly re-gaining power, along with the help of the Malfoys. The plan was to warm up with Muggles and Mudbloods, therefore finding their weakness, and cores.etc. The Fall Ball was an opportunity for Draco to warm up to whom he thought the top of all Mudbloods, Hermione. (I hadn't realized when I when I wrote Chapter 11 that I hadn't meant for them to realize their feelings for each other at the ball and kiss..etc) I actually meant for Ron to save Hermione by risking his life and then I forgot to think of the rest of the plot, therefore creating a HUGE plot ending. What I hadn't thought of was what EXACTLY Moldy Voldie and the Malfoys were going to do after they warmed up to them, and what situation Hermione would find herself in. The ONLY thing I thought of for the ending, which I was supremely excited about was the epilogue, and how the trio end up killing Moldy Voldie, and how Draco turns to the light side. (Sorry, I didn't agree with the viewer who said all Malfoys should die, because Draco is my favorite character after Ron. Then comes Ginny!) And all I ever thought about writing was the epilogue, which I still want to write. Another thing for myself to think about is my lack of enthusiasm for this story because of its weak plot. I also write my chapters the day that I post them up, which I don't look over, checking to make sure it go along with the rest of the story, or to allow the next chapter to also agree with the whole story.
So now it is time for the readers to help me out, please do, I need to improve. Please review on this chapter and tell me what I should do or choose some of the choices I came up with:
Delete the story (and all my reviews :0( bah humbug) and rewrite a completely whole new one, with a thought out plot, and a pre-written story before I post it.
Give you the epilogue, and then write another story, pre-written before posted, new thought out plot.
Rewrite the chapters with the Malfoy/Voldie part so that it is: Malfoy (being Draco) is just going to the ball with Hermione as a prank, and then plans to humiliate her (I don't know how but in some way, if you have suggestions if you like this choice please add them), Ron finds out, and saves her just in time
Rewrite the whole story, keeping the same thing Fall Ball, but do it Harry/Ginny.
Delete the story.
Any other choices or suggestions you may have please include in your review, PLEASE AND THANK YOU!
--
WeasleyGal AND OR The Bold and the Brave (Gryffindor!)
ALSO:
Please check out my Harry/Ginny story! And review so I can continue writing with that! And please check out my other pen name: The Bold and the Brave for a selection of song parodies.
LESS IMPORTANT PART
To one of my reviewers, again I'm bad with names, which said they understood about Parvati cursing, which she actually didn't, lol, but not about Malfoy.but when has a Malfoy not cursed in a book?
For those who keep commenting on how they don't get why Hermione with Draco, please read the whole story, for I plainly state in a chapter, I forget which, why she went with Draco, I will explain it one more time because, not to be rude or anything, I'm getting tired of it:
Hermione went with Draco because, quite frankly, she thought Ron wasn't going to ask her.and I also thought for myself, about a plot, and if I'd really like to go to my last ball at Hogwarts alone, and the answer is no. Well anyways it is part of a plot!
VERY IMPORTANT PART
Which I don't think my plot worked out very well.neither did my story. It brings tears to my eyes of some of your VERY nice reviews, but I was SERIOUSLY disappointed with my story, and my very unfinished plot. The fact is I had STARTED out with a plot line, but never got to the point of finishing it, a BIG mistake on my behalf, and as other writers know, creating a big problem with your story. See I had planned it out like so:
Ron and Hermione liked each other, but they didn't know. Voldemort was quickly re-gaining power, along with the help of the Malfoys. The plan was to warm up with Muggles and Mudbloods, therefore finding their weakness, and cores.etc. The Fall Ball was an opportunity for Draco to warm up to whom he thought the top of all Mudbloods, Hermione. (I hadn't realized when I when I wrote Chapter 11 that I hadn't meant for them to realize their feelings for each other at the ball and kiss..etc) I actually meant for Ron to save Hermione by risking his life and then I forgot to think of the rest of the plot, therefore creating a HUGE plot ending. What I hadn't thought of was what EXACTLY Moldy Voldie and the Malfoys were going to do after they warmed up to them, and what situation Hermione would find herself in. The ONLY thing I thought of for the ending, which I was supremely excited about was the epilogue, and how the trio end up killing Moldy Voldie, and how Draco turns to the light side. (Sorry, I didn't agree with the viewer who said all Malfoys should die, because Draco is my favorite character after Ron. Then comes Ginny!) And all I ever thought about writing was the epilogue, which I still want to write. Another thing for myself to think about is my lack of enthusiasm for this story because of its weak plot. I also write my chapters the day that I post them up, which I don't look over, checking to make sure it go along with the rest of the story, or to allow the next chapter to also agree with the whole story.
So now it is time for the readers to help me out, please do, I need to improve. Please review on this chapter and tell me what I should do or choose some of the choices I came up with:
Delete the story (and all my reviews :0( bah humbug) and rewrite a completely whole new one, with a thought out plot, and a pre-written story before I post it.
Give you the epilogue, and then write another story, pre-written before posted, new thought out plot.
Rewrite the chapters with the Malfoy/Voldie part so that it is: Malfoy (being Draco) is just going to the ball with Hermione as a prank, and then plans to humiliate her (I don't know how but in some way, if you have suggestions if you like this choice please add them), Ron finds out, and saves her just in time
Rewrite the whole story, keeping the same thing Fall Ball, but do it Harry/Ginny.
Delete the story.
Any other choices or suggestions you may have please include in your review, PLEASE AND THANK YOU!
--
WeasleyGal AND OR The Bold and the Brave (Gryffindor!)
ALSO:
Please check out my Harry/Ginny story! And review so I can continue writing with that! And please check out my other pen name: The Bold and the Brave for a selection of song parodies.