Disclaimer: You know how it goes...I DO NOT POKEMON!!!
Wow! Thanks for those reviews! I really appreciate them!! To Shadow, thanks for letting me borrow your story! To all those who reviewed: I never though I'd get a review that was good...so thanks (I hope I can keep it up!!)In this chapter there is a bit of violence (Which is why I rated it R!) so tell me if I hit the mark in describing the violent bits!
".... OR YOU GET IT!!" Butch screamed
"What secret? THE HELL TO WHAT SECRET!!" Ash demanded.
Butch elaborated, knowing he'll get the 'secret' the hard way. " Well, for one thing you can talk to Pokemon, ever wondered why the helicopter crashed, the one at Shamoutee, the one with your mother in... apart from the reason of the storm... WE did it, tried to shoot down the 'copter. We were following you so we want to know why you were the chosen one, why you survive the most dangerous of stunts! Any more questions? No? Well let's get on with it."
"You won't do this!" Shouted Misty
"Raticate...tie the two excess people up-they're annoying me, Pokeball Go! Quilava stop the boy from interfering ... and keep the rat busy, after that into your Pokeball..."
"RATICATE!!"
"QUIL!!"
Soon, Brock and Misty, even though they struggled were soon tied up and sitting on the grass and Pikachu panting, half worn out on the ground next to them.
"Now we've got them all 'tied up'," Butch continued "We don't need those other brats...Meganium...solar beam."
"WAIT!!" Shouted Ash as Meganium charged for the attack, "You wouldn't attack Misty, Brock and Pikachu without a battle..."
Butch thought for a second " No." but then he continued "Attack them anyway! RATICATE HYPERFANG!!"
Ash ran as fast as he could to Brock and Misty. As his back was to Butch and Cassidy, Butch used this to his advantage. "Good distraction Raticate. MEGANIUM, RAZOR LEAF!"
Ash screamed in pain as three double-edged razor leafs sliced across his back that left three deep gouge marks. Angrily, Ash turned round to face Butch and Cassidy. Their faces smirking at their small victory against Ash. "Want some more?" Cassidy gloated. Three more razor leafs headed for Ash and left deep cut marks along his arms causing him to fall over in pain. Blood trickled down from his arms and back, staining his T-shirt, jeans and grass as he lay there in shock.
Misty couldn't take this anymore, Ash couldn't hold up to this type of torture! He couldn't! Misty watched in dismay as Ash collapsed to the ground after the second round of razor leafs. His back was a bloody mess and it looked like he was having trouble standing up. Misty had tried to call Butch; to make him stop but her voice wasn't working! Brock had been the one shouting encouragement to Ash and harsh words to Butch.
"Come on...give us your secret!" Butch demanded getting angrier by the minute. Ash, lying on the ground didn't answer just lay there and glared in frustration at Butch. " MEGANIUM, USE YOUR VINE WHIP!" Meganium complied by furiously whipping Ash leaving red raw slash marks across his back and arms. Ash jerked and shouted in pain at every whip until Butch commanded his grass-type to hold him in the air with his vines... tight.
Meganium held Ash tight in the air, about 9 feet up squeezing harder every second.
Misty watched in utter horror at her friend being hauled into the air by that...that Pokemon. Ash was having trouble breathing very quickly as the Meganium squeezed the life from him.
Helplessly, Brock watched as Ash stopped the weak struggling that he was causing and just hung there, limp. How could they do this? I couldn't even save him! Now he's gone... Brock thought as he looked at Ash, Pikachu looked in as much dismay as Brock and Misty.
The silence was dreadful as Misty, Brock and Pikachu watched the limp Ash hang by...Suddenly his body tensed and his eyes abruptly flickered open. Purple sparks started to fly off in different directions from where the Meganium was holding Ash with her vine whip. Team Rocket was speechless "How...how..?" The purple sparks increased as the Meganium started to shake violently, more and more. The purple sparks were practically everywhere before Butch's Meganium fell to the ground twitching and purple sparks emitting from along it's body while Ash crashed to the ground before painfully getting up again.
Ash looked at the twitching Meganium, before Butch recalled it, he couldn't understand it, Did I do this? All I felt was energy...and I needed to get rid of so I pushed it out...to the Meganium? No..? Could it have been me? Maybe Butch was right about that 'secret' he was accusing me of but...I don't remember any secret...
"Impossible!" Butch exclaimed, in awe but also in sheer frustration, "How did you do that? I KNEW YOU HAD A SECRET... THAT POWER...TELL ME ABOUT IT!!"
"Even if I knew, why would I tell you?"
"Aaargh!! Houndoom! GO AND DO SOMETHING TO HIM!"
Butch threw the Pokeball at Ash from which came Butch's Houndoom. As soon as Houndoom was out of his Pokeball he immediately started charging at his target.
Ash shouted in pain as the Pokemon hit full force in his stomach, which then sent him flying into the ground. The cracking of bones echoed through the area as he broke two ribs.
"ASH!"
"PIKAPI!!"
Ash struggled to fight the blackness that was overcoming him and the excruciating pain that he was experiencing, before the blackness won...
"How could you?" Misty said fearfully.
"He'd done NOTHING to hurt YOU!" Brock exploded.
"Pika pi Chaaa, Pikapi ka pi Chu pikapi..." Pikachu cried softly through tears.
"Pity, the brat could've translated what the rat was saying." Cassidy said uncaringly.
"Oh well, GO! Tyranitar" Misty, Brock and Pikachu stared terrified at the dark-type Pokemon as it got ready for Butch's orders. "Pika...CHUUUU!!!" Pikachu's Zap cannon attack didn't even phase the Pokemon. "Pika...CHUU...CHUU...CHUUUUUU!!"
"Pikachu, don't do that, you don't want to lose your energy...Ash wouldn't want that..." Misty said softly
"Pikapi..."
"Enough fooling around!" Cassidy shouted "Tyranitar, body slam..."
The ground shook as the enormous Pokemon charged towards them...
HA! Aren't I evil! Sorry to the person who sent me an e-mail saying they wanted Ash's secret revealed in this chapter. And did that same person ask what gender I am? I'm a 13-year-old-girl!
New hints in the next chapter. Reviews are much appreciated!
Wow! Thanks for those reviews! I really appreciate them!! To Shadow, thanks for letting me borrow your story! To all those who reviewed: I never though I'd get a review that was good...so thanks (I hope I can keep it up!!)In this chapter there is a bit of violence (Which is why I rated it R!) so tell me if I hit the mark in describing the violent bits!
".... OR YOU GET IT!!" Butch screamed
"What secret? THE HELL TO WHAT SECRET!!" Ash demanded.
Butch elaborated, knowing he'll get the 'secret' the hard way. " Well, for one thing you can talk to Pokemon, ever wondered why the helicopter crashed, the one at Shamoutee, the one with your mother in... apart from the reason of the storm... WE did it, tried to shoot down the 'copter. We were following you so we want to know why you were the chosen one, why you survive the most dangerous of stunts! Any more questions? No? Well let's get on with it."
"You won't do this!" Shouted Misty
"Raticate...tie the two excess people up-they're annoying me, Pokeball Go! Quilava stop the boy from interfering ... and keep the rat busy, after that into your Pokeball..."
"RATICATE!!"
"QUIL!!"
Soon, Brock and Misty, even though they struggled were soon tied up and sitting on the grass and Pikachu panting, half worn out on the ground next to them.
"Now we've got them all 'tied up'," Butch continued "We don't need those other brats...Meganium...solar beam."
"WAIT!!" Shouted Ash as Meganium charged for the attack, "You wouldn't attack Misty, Brock and Pikachu without a battle..."
Butch thought for a second " No." but then he continued "Attack them anyway! RATICATE HYPERFANG!!"
Ash ran as fast as he could to Brock and Misty. As his back was to Butch and Cassidy, Butch used this to his advantage. "Good distraction Raticate. MEGANIUM, RAZOR LEAF!"
Ash screamed in pain as three double-edged razor leafs sliced across his back that left three deep gouge marks. Angrily, Ash turned round to face Butch and Cassidy. Their faces smirking at their small victory against Ash. "Want some more?" Cassidy gloated. Three more razor leafs headed for Ash and left deep cut marks along his arms causing him to fall over in pain. Blood trickled down from his arms and back, staining his T-shirt, jeans and grass as he lay there in shock.
Misty couldn't take this anymore, Ash couldn't hold up to this type of torture! He couldn't! Misty watched in dismay as Ash collapsed to the ground after the second round of razor leafs. His back was a bloody mess and it looked like he was having trouble standing up. Misty had tried to call Butch; to make him stop but her voice wasn't working! Brock had been the one shouting encouragement to Ash and harsh words to Butch.
"Come on...give us your secret!" Butch demanded getting angrier by the minute. Ash, lying on the ground didn't answer just lay there and glared in frustration at Butch. " MEGANIUM, USE YOUR VINE WHIP!" Meganium complied by furiously whipping Ash leaving red raw slash marks across his back and arms. Ash jerked and shouted in pain at every whip until Butch commanded his grass-type to hold him in the air with his vines... tight.
Meganium held Ash tight in the air, about 9 feet up squeezing harder every second.
Misty watched in utter horror at her friend being hauled into the air by that...that Pokemon. Ash was having trouble breathing very quickly as the Meganium squeezed the life from him.
Helplessly, Brock watched as Ash stopped the weak struggling that he was causing and just hung there, limp. How could they do this? I couldn't even save him! Now he's gone... Brock thought as he looked at Ash, Pikachu looked in as much dismay as Brock and Misty.
The silence was dreadful as Misty, Brock and Pikachu watched the limp Ash hang by...Suddenly his body tensed and his eyes abruptly flickered open. Purple sparks started to fly off in different directions from where the Meganium was holding Ash with her vine whip. Team Rocket was speechless "How...how..?" The purple sparks increased as the Meganium started to shake violently, more and more. The purple sparks were practically everywhere before Butch's Meganium fell to the ground twitching and purple sparks emitting from along it's body while Ash crashed to the ground before painfully getting up again.
Ash looked at the twitching Meganium, before Butch recalled it, he couldn't understand it, Did I do this? All I felt was energy...and I needed to get rid of so I pushed it out...to the Meganium? No..? Could it have been me? Maybe Butch was right about that 'secret' he was accusing me of but...I don't remember any secret...
"Impossible!" Butch exclaimed, in awe but also in sheer frustration, "How did you do that? I KNEW YOU HAD A SECRET... THAT POWER...TELL ME ABOUT IT!!"
"Even if I knew, why would I tell you?"
"Aaargh!! Houndoom! GO AND DO SOMETHING TO HIM!"
Butch threw the Pokeball at Ash from which came Butch's Houndoom. As soon as Houndoom was out of his Pokeball he immediately started charging at his target.
Ash shouted in pain as the Pokemon hit full force in his stomach, which then sent him flying into the ground. The cracking of bones echoed through the area as he broke two ribs.
"ASH!"
"PIKAPI!!"
Ash struggled to fight the blackness that was overcoming him and the excruciating pain that he was experiencing, before the blackness won...
"How could you?" Misty said fearfully.
"He'd done NOTHING to hurt YOU!" Brock exploded.
"Pika pi Chaaa, Pikapi ka pi Chu pikapi..." Pikachu cried softly through tears.
"Pity, the brat could've translated what the rat was saying." Cassidy said uncaringly.
"Oh well, GO! Tyranitar" Misty, Brock and Pikachu stared terrified at the dark-type Pokemon as it got ready for Butch's orders. "Pika...CHUUUU!!!" Pikachu's Zap cannon attack didn't even phase the Pokemon. "Pika...CHUU...CHUU...CHUUUUUU!!"
"Pikachu, don't do that, you don't want to lose your energy...Ash wouldn't want that..." Misty said softly
"Pikapi..."
"Enough fooling around!" Cassidy shouted "Tyranitar, body slam..."
The ground shook as the enormous Pokemon charged towards them...
HA! Aren't I evil! Sorry to the person who sent me an e-mail saying they wanted Ash's secret revealed in this chapter. And did that same person ask what gender I am? I'm a 13-year-old-girl!
New hints in the next chapter. Reviews are much appreciated!