Ok, I have come out of hiding. This is the first chapter of Gone In 60
Seconds. These are some small changes to the character listings.
In the movie Kip is Memphis' brother, but I changed it to cousin.
Danny: Lee.
Tumbler: Steve.
Sphinx: Bryan.
Kip: Kyo.
He is an OC sent in by Linnian and Lime.
He has two toned brown in the same style as Kai's. he wears all black something similar to Kai's. he acts like Kip.
The carpenter (evil villain): Boris.[ I changed it from Tala.]
Short black dude is called Mirror Man.
The hackers name is Toby according to the script.
The guy who told Memphis about Kip is call Atley.
The guy who orders pizza is call Fped I think. Don't kill me if it's wrong.
Sway: Steph my OC.
She has cropped, short bleached blonde hair. She wears a tight grey top, faded jeans and a grey jacket.
GONE IN 60 SECONDS. Galux Phoenix.
Kevin strode up towards the mini race car circuit, his green hair sway slightly in the breeze.
"Kai Hiwatari. It has been a while." He said looking towards a man with two toned blue hair.
"What Kevin?" he snapped in his usual cold manor.
"It's about Kyo. He took a boost and screwed it." Kevin replied in a low voice.
"Shit!" Kai cursed. "What kind of boost?"
"50 ladies in two weeks."
Kai was silent for a little while. Standing there deep in thought.
"Where is he?" Kai asked finally.
"The car wreakers."
"Take me there."
"What!?"
"I said take me there." He replied just above a whisper.
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The car ride was in silence. Kevin not daring to break the silence.
"Is Kyo in danger?" Kai finally said.
"I don't know." Kevin replied slowly.
The black car pulled into a lot at a warehouse. The pair moved through the darkness swiftly.
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"Where is he?" asked Kai menacingly.
"Kyo? Well, he didn't do his job, made me look like an asshole and now has to pay the consequences." Boris smirked evilly.
"Where is he?" Kai asked again his patience stretched to the extreme.
"Out there." Boris stated simply indicating out the window to a car crusher.
Kai looked closer and saw his cousin trapped in a car that about to be crushed.
"Turn it off!" he yelled at Boris.
"You know, hw had street cred. Cousin to the notorious Kai Hiwatari, car boost legend." Boris went on oblivious to Kai.
In one swift movement Kai brought a gun out of his pocket. "Turn it off!" he yelled once more.
Simultaneously three guys around him drew out their guns and pointed them a Kai.
"You have three choices Kai. One, you kill me then they kill you. Two, you accept the job Kyo stuffed, run away, we hunt you down and kill your family. Three, you accept and follow through." Boris stated evenly.
Kai lowered his gun dropping it on the ground.
"Fine. I'll do your boost." Boris signalled for the crusher to be shut off.
He handed Kai a sheet of paper with a list of 50 cars on it. "Those cars at dock 23 be 8 am Friday morning or else." Boris sneered as Kai read over the list.
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I hoped you all liked it. It's a compressed version of the movie. If it wasn't there'd be a million chapters for me to write.
Please review for me. it means a lot to me.
Galux Phoenix.
V PRESS IT!! V
In the movie Kip is Memphis' brother, but I changed it to cousin.
Danny: Lee.
Tumbler: Steve.
Sphinx: Bryan.
Kip: Kyo.
He is an OC sent in by Linnian and Lime.
He has two toned brown in the same style as Kai's. he wears all black something similar to Kai's. he acts like Kip.
The carpenter (evil villain): Boris.[ I changed it from Tala.]
Short black dude is called Mirror Man.
The hackers name is Toby according to the script.
The guy who told Memphis about Kip is call Atley.
The guy who orders pizza is call Fped I think. Don't kill me if it's wrong.
Sway: Steph my OC.
She has cropped, short bleached blonde hair. She wears a tight grey top, faded jeans and a grey jacket.
GONE IN 60 SECONDS. Galux Phoenix.
Kevin strode up towards the mini race car circuit, his green hair sway slightly in the breeze.
"Kai Hiwatari. It has been a while." He said looking towards a man with two toned blue hair.
"What Kevin?" he snapped in his usual cold manor.
"It's about Kyo. He took a boost and screwed it." Kevin replied in a low voice.
"Shit!" Kai cursed. "What kind of boost?"
"50 ladies in two weeks."
Kai was silent for a little while. Standing there deep in thought.
"Where is he?" Kai asked finally.
"The car wreakers."
"Take me there."
"What!?"
"I said take me there." He replied just above a whisper.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
The car ride was in silence. Kevin not daring to break the silence.
"Is Kyo in danger?" Kai finally said.
"I don't know." Kevin replied slowly.
The black car pulled into a lot at a warehouse. The pair moved through the darkness swiftly.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
"Where is he?" asked Kai menacingly.
"Kyo? Well, he didn't do his job, made me look like an asshole and now has to pay the consequences." Boris smirked evilly.
"Where is he?" Kai asked again his patience stretched to the extreme.
"Out there." Boris stated simply indicating out the window to a car crusher.
Kai looked closer and saw his cousin trapped in a car that about to be crushed.
"Turn it off!" he yelled at Boris.
"You know, hw had street cred. Cousin to the notorious Kai Hiwatari, car boost legend." Boris went on oblivious to Kai.
In one swift movement Kai brought a gun out of his pocket. "Turn it off!" he yelled once more.
Simultaneously three guys around him drew out their guns and pointed them a Kai.
"You have three choices Kai. One, you kill me then they kill you. Two, you accept the job Kyo stuffed, run away, we hunt you down and kill your family. Three, you accept and follow through." Boris stated evenly.
Kai lowered his gun dropping it on the ground.
"Fine. I'll do your boost." Boris signalled for the crusher to be shut off.
He handed Kai a sheet of paper with a list of 50 cars on it. "Those cars at dock 23 be 8 am Friday morning or else." Boris sneered as Kai read over the list.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
I hoped you all liked it. It's a compressed version of the movie. If it wasn't there'd be a million chapters for me to write.
Please review for me. it means a lot to me.
Galux Phoenix.
V PRESS IT!! V