Dawn Of Fire and Spirits
Chapter One: One to wait
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A/N: If this has been done before, it was purely a coincidence.
Arigatou to ALL the reviews!!!!!!! I'd especially like to thank to Ruby-san for the tips on the italics, bolds and stuff, Mei Cera and chris for being long supporters, and to jashuang for correcting me. If I forget anything, can't help it because I'm a little muddled up during this short period of time. Something's was up.
I'm trying out new borders for creativity. The HH's are for separating the titles, the ='s are for separating the A/N and the AFN from the story, the zx's are for going to a different scene in the story, and the usual xx's is used for the ending part.
Disclaimer: Do you want Saiyuki? I don't own it. It's Minekura Kazuya's. *punches fist so hard into the wall that a smoking hole appears*
By: Yamamoto Kou
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It's now been around two years since the Sanzo-Ikkou and the Kou-Ikkou have come to Heaven. But there were mysteries that were never solved. And this sequel will answer some of those old questions and make more questions appear. And this sequel will also make events that weren't there before, become events that will happen.
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The impostor of Li Touten was now in the mountains in the South. It wasn't as cold as the North though. Komyo Sanzo kept following, wondering what was its next move.
Komyo soon found out. It was making some sort of outer casing for itself. A cocoon.
Impostor Li Touten: *admired his handy work* [It's no use to attack him now. I will have to wait for the rise of the great Emperor. Until then, I must wait. In order to be forgotten, I mustn't strike. The Queen will have to be chosen before I can get close to hoping for the Emperors coming. And judging by these unusual waves of enchantments, that will soon be solved.] *retreated into its shell to sleep and will only be awaken when the Queen has found her seal*
Komyo: *knows that he's not going to bring anymore trouble until the Queen is revealed so he goes to find Haku*
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Yosuki was up early. The skies were still dark but some rays can now be seen over the mountains. She was down in Under Heaven again. She trudged along a deserted part of a city where even hobos, stray dogs and thieves dare not wander. It has something to do with this feeling. It was evil. That's all she knows.
She was walking past one of those grey and boarded up buildings. Some torn bits of paper fluttered by her feet as the wind stoops down to blow. It was a little cold and her breaths came in mists but she didn't mind at all. The buildings seem to watch her as she slowly paced down the sidewalk. There were no streetlights but thanks to those few golden strands of the sun, she managed to see well enough to journey down this deserted place.
That's when she heard it. It was soft at first, but it slowly grew a little louder. She looked around and tried to find its source. She found it. She tried the door to one of the nearby buildings. It was surprisingly open even when it was boarded up. She went inside. Clouds of dust formed under her as she steps in. The music was still playing. It came from above. She quickly ran up the worn and broken stairs as a sense of urgency suddenly filled her heart. She reached the door to the rooftop and had pushed it open as the hinges were rusted. The dust behind her was blown back into the house thanks to the wind. She was right. It was piano music after all.
There, on the rooftop, was a girl wearing a blue frock and had her hair in a blue bow to match. She was the one playing the piano. She and the piano happened to be transparent. She looked like she was playing in a concert. At first, the music was so soft and gentle and her expression was that of pride, joy and concentration. But soon, something was not right.
Yosuki felt that feeling again. The feeling of evil that she had felt just a few minutes ago when she was walking down the pavements grey. She saw a change coming over the girl and her playing. It was slow but it showed. The music became faster and the expression on the girls face was straining. Her fingers hit each key with desperation. The girl was now looking at Yosuki with desperateness and helplessness in her eyes. The girl then started to cry. Her fingers played on faster as if it was possessed.
A sudden strong gust of wind blew by. The fluttering of papers can be heard even up here. As the girl struck the final note, the piano burst into flames. The girl herself caught on fire. Yosuki stepped back a little.
The piano was by now gone and only the girl was left. Her hands grew long fingernail and he hair grew longer and it hid her face. The frock burned away and was replaced by a torn red dress. When she looked up, her face was pale. It now looked no different than a porcelain dolls face. Those pale blue eyes were now like those that were put into sockets a bit too big for it. Her face is now completely emotionless. Soon veins were sprouting from the smooth, pale porcelain face.
Suddenly, the face seems to be ripped off from below, leaving a grey skull like face. It cackled and its jaw seemed to hang open. The skin was no longer smooth with covered with scars and scales. Vein were winding around her neck as her arms and legs started to bend. The fire seemed to spread over the rooftop.
Yosuki was truly frightened. She backed away but ended up falling backwards down the stairs. She forgot about them. She stopped herself from hitting her head against the bottom of the stairs by grabbing on to the rotten railing. She quickly got herself upright again. That's when she felt the quiver in the house. She hurriedly jumped down the stairs and rushed through the door. She rolled on to the streets. Right before the entire building collapsed.
Yosuki stood up and brushed herself and went back to Heaven. She never expected this. Ever.
Yosuki: [What is going on?]
As She walked away, the wind blew a singed page from a manuscript away. Nobody had realised that the sun was beginning to climb into the sky, starting another day.
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Haku woke up with a jolt.
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AFN: Enjoyed it? This is really short. Should be a prologue but it isn't. I'm trying to make one really scary but this one doesn't exist to my expectations. Since it's almost New Year, still no review limit. Happy New Year!
Chapter One: One to wait
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
A/N: If this has been done before, it was purely a coincidence.
Arigatou to ALL the reviews!!!!!!! I'd especially like to thank to Ruby-san for the tips on the italics, bolds and stuff, Mei Cera and chris for being long supporters, and to jashuang for correcting me. If I forget anything, can't help it because I'm a little muddled up during this short period of time. Something's was up.
I'm trying out new borders for creativity. The HH's are for separating the titles, the ='s are for separating the A/N and the AFN from the story, the zx's are for going to a different scene in the story, and the usual xx's is used for the ending part.
Disclaimer: Do you want Saiyuki? I don't own it. It's Minekura Kazuya's. *punches fist so hard into the wall that a smoking hole appears*
By: Yamamoto Kou
===============================================================
It's now been around two years since the Sanzo-Ikkou and the Kou-Ikkou have come to Heaven. But there were mysteries that were never solved. And this sequel will answer some of those old questions and make more questions appear. And this sequel will also make events that weren't there before, become events that will happen.
xzxzzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzx
The impostor of Li Touten was now in the mountains in the South. It wasn't as cold as the North though. Komyo Sanzo kept following, wondering what was its next move.
Komyo soon found out. It was making some sort of outer casing for itself. A cocoon.
Impostor Li Touten: *admired his handy work* [It's no use to attack him now. I will have to wait for the rise of the great Emperor. Until then, I must wait. In order to be forgotten, I mustn't strike. The Queen will have to be chosen before I can get close to hoping for the Emperors coming. And judging by these unusual waves of enchantments, that will soon be solved.] *retreated into its shell to sleep and will only be awaken when the Queen has found her seal*
Komyo: *knows that he's not going to bring anymore trouble until the Queen is revealed so he goes to find Haku*
zxzxzzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxzxz
Yosuki was up early. The skies were still dark but some rays can now be seen over the mountains. She was down in Under Heaven again. She trudged along a deserted part of a city where even hobos, stray dogs and thieves dare not wander. It has something to do with this feeling. It was evil. That's all she knows.
She was walking past one of those grey and boarded up buildings. Some torn bits of paper fluttered by her feet as the wind stoops down to blow. It was a little cold and her breaths came in mists but she didn't mind at all. The buildings seem to watch her as she slowly paced down the sidewalk. There were no streetlights but thanks to those few golden strands of the sun, she managed to see well enough to journey down this deserted place.
That's when she heard it. It was soft at first, but it slowly grew a little louder. She looked around and tried to find its source. She found it. She tried the door to one of the nearby buildings. It was surprisingly open even when it was boarded up. She went inside. Clouds of dust formed under her as she steps in. The music was still playing. It came from above. She quickly ran up the worn and broken stairs as a sense of urgency suddenly filled her heart. She reached the door to the rooftop and had pushed it open as the hinges were rusted. The dust behind her was blown back into the house thanks to the wind. She was right. It was piano music after all.
There, on the rooftop, was a girl wearing a blue frock and had her hair in a blue bow to match. She was the one playing the piano. She and the piano happened to be transparent. She looked like she was playing in a concert. At first, the music was so soft and gentle and her expression was that of pride, joy and concentration. But soon, something was not right.
Yosuki felt that feeling again. The feeling of evil that she had felt just a few minutes ago when she was walking down the pavements grey. She saw a change coming over the girl and her playing. It was slow but it showed. The music became faster and the expression on the girls face was straining. Her fingers hit each key with desperation. The girl was now looking at Yosuki with desperateness and helplessness in her eyes. The girl then started to cry. Her fingers played on faster as if it was possessed.
A sudden strong gust of wind blew by. The fluttering of papers can be heard even up here. As the girl struck the final note, the piano burst into flames. The girl herself caught on fire. Yosuki stepped back a little.
The piano was by now gone and only the girl was left. Her hands grew long fingernail and he hair grew longer and it hid her face. The frock burned away and was replaced by a torn red dress. When she looked up, her face was pale. It now looked no different than a porcelain dolls face. Those pale blue eyes were now like those that were put into sockets a bit too big for it. Her face is now completely emotionless. Soon veins were sprouting from the smooth, pale porcelain face.
Suddenly, the face seems to be ripped off from below, leaving a grey skull like face. It cackled and its jaw seemed to hang open. The skin was no longer smooth with covered with scars and scales. Vein were winding around her neck as her arms and legs started to bend. The fire seemed to spread over the rooftop.
Yosuki was truly frightened. She backed away but ended up falling backwards down the stairs. She forgot about them. She stopped herself from hitting her head against the bottom of the stairs by grabbing on to the rotten railing. She quickly got herself upright again. That's when she felt the quiver in the house. She hurriedly jumped down the stairs and rushed through the door. She rolled on to the streets. Right before the entire building collapsed.
Yosuki stood up and brushed herself and went back to Heaven. She never expected this. Ever.
Yosuki: [What is going on?]
As She walked away, the wind blew a singed page from a manuscript away. Nobody had realised that the sun was beginning to climb into the sky, starting another day.
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Haku woke up with a jolt.
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AFN: Enjoyed it? This is really short. Should be a prologue but it isn't. I'm trying to make one really scary but this one doesn't exist to my expectations. Since it's almost New Year, still no review limit. Happy New Year!
