Deep

By Sistine Chapel

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Wow, thanks for reviewing. I will be careful on my spelling and paragraphs. I thought I did the last chapter half- heartedly, how many of you want me to redo that one, show of hands! Ok, since I can't see your hands, you might as well review! Oh, and Deep is an Indian name, but an uncommon one. It means "Holy Light" or "Lamp" in Sanskrit, the language of ancient India. Cool, right? I don't know LOTR. Ok, here is Chapter 4. Enjoy!

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It was dark. That was all Deep could tell.

"Hello?" she asked meekly, "Is anyone there?"

In return, there was a laugh, a girlish laugh. Deep followed the laugh into a bleak forest. Soon, she ran into a girl.

"Hello, do you know where we are?" Deep asked.

The girl turned around. Deep gasped. This girl was tall and skinny and about Deep's age. She had beauty, flawless creamy white skin. The girl also had a head full of shinny blonde hair and crystal blue eyes. In other words, this girl was ridiculously good-looking. The girl gave Deep a pearly white teeth smile, but it was a wicked smile.

"Do you know where we are?" Deep asked again.

"Shut up and lets fight!" the girl said through her teeth and wielded out her sword that came out of no where.

"Wait! What?" Deep was confused, but she knew that this girl had some serious Moe-Joe going on. So, Deep run for her dear life. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH… (Stops to catch breath) AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!" 

Deep looked behind her and the girl was gone. She turned her head back to the front and what do you know! The girl was there in front of her with the painfully sharp looking sword. The girl walked slowly toward Deep.

"What? How? Who are you?" Deep stammered.

"No one messes with the great Mary Sue!" the girl said coolly.

"Mary Sue?"

Deep woke up from her nightmare to find herself on the giant eagle's back. She looked down to the ground and realized that she and the eagle were soaring a million feet above Middle Earth. "AHHHHHHHHHH!!!" Deep screamed. The eagle shook a little. "I see you are awake little one," said the eagle. "Yes, yes I am. I am sorry if I startled you," Deep said.

"Oh, not at all," replied the eagle.

"What is your name?"

"It is Landroval, brother of Gwaihir."

"Well, thank you Landroval for rescuing me. I know that you don't like fly with people on your back."

Landroval was surprised that Deep knew this.

"Yes I don't, but I can make an exception."

Deep smiled and a thought popped into her mind. "Where are you taking me?" she asked.

"To the Shire," replied Landroval.

"Oh" was all Deep said. The gentle breeze made Deep sleepy again. She could not remember any more.

Bilbo Baggins woke early in the morning. Since it was a beautiful morning, he decided to talk a walk. He walked out to the gate and gasped. There was a sleeping girl in front of it.

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The plot thickens. How is this Mary Sue? And why is she after Deep? What will Bilbo do with Deep? Find out in the next chapter of Deep.