AN: WOW! What a weird chapter that chpt.3 was. Sorry for the confusion. Ok
ok here is what has happened so far (in order):
Miaka and the Seishi are heading for Konan to a ceremony (no one knows what kind of ceremony.^_^'')
Tamahome thinks he sees Miaka with Hotohori so he runs away to a nearby village where he meets his long time friend, Aishi. Aishi has been in love with Tamahome all these years and now when they are reunited Tamahome thinks he might be falling in love with Aishi. He is not sure about his feelings for Miaka.
The Seishi leave for Konan without Tamahome thinking he will catch up.
Miaka meets Nakago and is put under a strange spell that will make her serve Nakago in his presence.
Hotohori attacks Nakago's hologram in an attempt to save Miaka.
Miaka falls unconscious.
Ok clear yet? So Sorry for all the weirdness. My friends criteria are have to be exact so It's going to be strange. I have decided to use different character's point of views from now on so it will be a different character each chapter (sort of like a dairy. but not really) . You guys can vote on who comes next. This chapter it's.drum roll. TASUKI!!! Just to warn you Tasuki talks to himself a lot so when it seems that he is talking to someone and it is not in "" it means he is just thinking to himself. This is a really messed up fic and I keep experimenting with different techniques of writing. sorry. Oh well different is good right? There are going to be a lot of side stories so you got to make sure that you read over the summaries I will post of what happened so far. I'm sorry again for making such a confusing fic.
He he he, ENJOY!
CHAPTER 4
Disclaimer: I do not own anything or anyone. I'm too young to die. so don't sue please!
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Yesterday's commotions left me up all night damn it. I wonder what that bastard Nakago wanted. Well whatever it was it must have been pretty lame. everything involving women in lame.
It's morning now. Its very nice. the sun is shining, the birds are singing, all that's missing is some fire here and there. Miaka is still out cold and Hotohori volunteered to carry her while we head for Konan. He's been up all night; I even feel sorry for that fool, love. HA those who fall under the spell of love will not last long.
I'm getting a bit hungry now and I am still tired from the night before.
"Oi! I'm going to go freshen up in the stream, I'll catch up later!"
"Yea, Yea! Hurry back!" Nuriko shouts in return.
Nuriko is probably the sanest out of the whole crew. It's funny how I don't include myself in their activities. Oh well, I have my own plans, and this little bunch are like cheese pieces...mmmm, cheese...no wait, where was I again? Oh yes, I meant chess pieces that I will move in ways that are suitable for me!
~ Note to self: must buy more cheese bits when I get to Konan. ~
For now the best move is to stick to everyone's plan and continue on with the trip to Konan. Then I will figure out what to do next.
I'm walking though the thick forest now, following the sound of the stream. I think that taking a dip will get the drowsiness out of me in a snap.
"AAAHH!" SHIMATTA! There are ants. ants.. EVERYWTHERE!!!
"LEKKA SHIEN!" Die you bastards! BURN.BURN IN HELL!!!
Oh no! I think I set some trees on fire. What's that crackling sound? I look up and right there, right above my head is a flaming branch. It is too late to run so I try to get down low. Well I guess it is too late for that too; the branch cracks and falls down straight onto my head!!
"AAGGHH" I give out a yell and try to throw the branch off of me. I fail. Ohh, I have been burnt many times before, but this hurts the most! On my third attempt I finally manage to get out from underneath the branch.
I break into a run and don't look back. I can feel my hair is still on fire, so I sprint toward the pond as fast as I can. There! I see it! It's right in between those trees. I can see the azure of the stream, it looks so beautiful. I break through the last row of trees and jump straight into the stream, only remembering that I cannot swim. The stream seems surprisingly deep. I swing my arms and legs like a maniac and struggle to get out of the freezing deep water. Well this is it. This is how I'm going to die. Hmmm. I wonder why my life is not flashing by. WHAT THE HELL AM I THINKING!? I can't die NOW! I have a great goal to achieve! My great plan. cheese.fire.. canned peaches. There are lots of great things to live for!! NO! I will NOT give up!
I straighten my legs and realize that I can touch the bottom of the stream! I straighten my whole body and am now standing, water - shoulder height, right in the middle of the stream -_-;;
Oh thank god no one saw that. That would have been embarrassing. I Check my wet hair and can feel the harsh, burnt ends of my beautiful flaming red hair. Oh great! Now I have created a new hair style! I carefully get out of the water, onto the shore, and examine my clothes. They seem to be tinted with black. Well this is just great! I feel so filthy, now would be a perfect time to bathe. I slip out of my clothes and quickly run into the refreshing water, leaving my burnt belongings on the shore.
The water is great. But I make sure to stay close to the shore just in case the stream suddenly gets deep. I close my eyes and breathe in the scent of the surroundings. It smells wonderful. The smell of trees, flowers and fresh water fills my lungs. The cool mountain air plays with my wet hair. Suddenly I shiver and feel something is wrong. I open my eyes and look up. The sky is clear and the sun is still shining. Oh it's probably nothing. I decide that it is time to get out. I don't want to get too far behind the rest of the seishi. Just as I was about to put my wet clothes back on I notice something behind me, on the opposite shore of the stream. I spin around and am horrified to see Nakago standing right across from me on the other side of the stream, grinning. I struggle to cover myself, failing I hopelessly jump back into the stream.
I'm speechless. There he is standing there looking straight at me and acting like nothing is wrong. Oh god I feel like I have been violated, my privacy has been taken away from me. What the hell am I thinking?! Why would I care if he sees me naked? Of course, I don't care, yes, that's it, I'm just surprised to see him, that's all.
BUT I DO CARE!
"Nakago no bakayarou!" I said in disgust.
"Don't worry Tasuki, I didn't watch ALL of it." he smirks and walks closer to the shore.
That sick bastard!
"What the hell do you want?!" I force out the words.
What's wrong with me? Why is it so hard to talk to him right now?
Stop it, Tasuki, damn it! Why the hell are you acting like a fool? You are just surprised. It was unexpected that's all. What the hell is Nakago doing? Oh my gods WHAT IS HE DOING!?
Nakago slowly takes of the layers of clothing he is wearing until he is left with nothing but his pants. I suddenly realize I am staring. I quickly turn around and sink into the water up to my neck.
"What do you want DAMN IT!?" I yell out again and still get no answer. Instead I feel the rippled of the water. I know he is getting into the water now. Now the question is - is he naked?
NO! That's not the question Tasuki! Stop thinking about Nakago that way! You are so gross! The REAL question is: why is he here and what does he want from me?
All of a sudden I feel a cold hand on my shoulder. I shiver and I feel my body go very tense. I feel his second hand raise and he gently places it on my other shoulder. I come out of the water just a little, so that my shoulders are just above the surface of the water. Nakago's gentle touch soon turns into a massage. It is obvious he can feel how tense my body is. I relax a little, but am still on guard.
What's wrong with me? I keep asking myself that question because it is obvious that something really is wrong with me. Right now I should try and fight Nakago, but instead, I am standing here enjoying the moment like a weakling? Damn it Tasuki don't give into your desires!
I quickly turn around to avoid Nakago's touch. I find him standing less that a meter away from me, staring straight into my eyes. I looked back into his. They are not as cold and selfish as they usually are, but they looked so kind and caring. so . irresistible. TBC
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AN: Okok how was that? Good? Bad? Aaah please R&R!
Ok now, should I make a lemon out of this??
Or do people think that Nakago/Tasuki is a horrible pair??
Oh I can't wait to hear your thoughts. Personally I like this format better (the character's point of view thingy) but some people might like the paragraph type better. Well write what you think and thanks a lot!
Miaka and the Seishi are heading for Konan to a ceremony (no one knows what kind of ceremony.^_^'')
Tamahome thinks he sees Miaka with Hotohori so he runs away to a nearby village where he meets his long time friend, Aishi. Aishi has been in love with Tamahome all these years and now when they are reunited Tamahome thinks he might be falling in love with Aishi. He is not sure about his feelings for Miaka.
The Seishi leave for Konan without Tamahome thinking he will catch up.
Miaka meets Nakago and is put under a strange spell that will make her serve Nakago in his presence.
Hotohori attacks Nakago's hologram in an attempt to save Miaka.
Miaka falls unconscious.
Ok clear yet? So Sorry for all the weirdness. My friends criteria are have to be exact so It's going to be strange. I have decided to use different character's point of views from now on so it will be a different character each chapter (sort of like a dairy. but not really) . You guys can vote on who comes next. This chapter it's.drum roll. TASUKI!!! Just to warn you Tasuki talks to himself a lot so when it seems that he is talking to someone and it is not in "" it means he is just thinking to himself. This is a really messed up fic and I keep experimenting with different techniques of writing. sorry. Oh well different is good right? There are going to be a lot of side stories so you got to make sure that you read over the summaries I will post of what happened so far. I'm sorry again for making such a confusing fic.
He he he, ENJOY!
CHAPTER 4
Disclaimer: I do not own anything or anyone. I'm too young to die. so don't sue please!
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Yesterday's commotions left me up all night damn it. I wonder what that bastard Nakago wanted. Well whatever it was it must have been pretty lame. everything involving women in lame.
It's morning now. Its very nice. the sun is shining, the birds are singing, all that's missing is some fire here and there. Miaka is still out cold and Hotohori volunteered to carry her while we head for Konan. He's been up all night; I even feel sorry for that fool, love. HA those who fall under the spell of love will not last long.
I'm getting a bit hungry now and I am still tired from the night before.
"Oi! I'm going to go freshen up in the stream, I'll catch up later!"
"Yea, Yea! Hurry back!" Nuriko shouts in return.
Nuriko is probably the sanest out of the whole crew. It's funny how I don't include myself in their activities. Oh well, I have my own plans, and this little bunch are like cheese pieces...mmmm, cheese...no wait, where was I again? Oh yes, I meant chess pieces that I will move in ways that are suitable for me!
~ Note to self: must buy more cheese bits when I get to Konan. ~
For now the best move is to stick to everyone's plan and continue on with the trip to Konan. Then I will figure out what to do next.
I'm walking though the thick forest now, following the sound of the stream. I think that taking a dip will get the drowsiness out of me in a snap.
"AAAHH!" SHIMATTA! There are ants. ants.. EVERYWTHERE!!!
"LEKKA SHIEN!" Die you bastards! BURN.BURN IN HELL!!!
Oh no! I think I set some trees on fire. What's that crackling sound? I look up and right there, right above my head is a flaming branch. It is too late to run so I try to get down low. Well I guess it is too late for that too; the branch cracks and falls down straight onto my head!!
"AAGGHH" I give out a yell and try to throw the branch off of me. I fail. Ohh, I have been burnt many times before, but this hurts the most! On my third attempt I finally manage to get out from underneath the branch.
I break into a run and don't look back. I can feel my hair is still on fire, so I sprint toward the pond as fast as I can. There! I see it! It's right in between those trees. I can see the azure of the stream, it looks so beautiful. I break through the last row of trees and jump straight into the stream, only remembering that I cannot swim. The stream seems surprisingly deep. I swing my arms and legs like a maniac and struggle to get out of the freezing deep water. Well this is it. This is how I'm going to die. Hmmm. I wonder why my life is not flashing by. WHAT THE HELL AM I THINKING!? I can't die NOW! I have a great goal to achieve! My great plan. cheese.fire.. canned peaches. There are lots of great things to live for!! NO! I will NOT give up!
I straighten my legs and realize that I can touch the bottom of the stream! I straighten my whole body and am now standing, water - shoulder height, right in the middle of the stream -_-;;
Oh thank god no one saw that. That would have been embarrassing. I Check my wet hair and can feel the harsh, burnt ends of my beautiful flaming red hair. Oh great! Now I have created a new hair style! I carefully get out of the water, onto the shore, and examine my clothes. They seem to be tinted with black. Well this is just great! I feel so filthy, now would be a perfect time to bathe. I slip out of my clothes and quickly run into the refreshing water, leaving my burnt belongings on the shore.
The water is great. But I make sure to stay close to the shore just in case the stream suddenly gets deep. I close my eyes and breathe in the scent of the surroundings. It smells wonderful. The smell of trees, flowers and fresh water fills my lungs. The cool mountain air plays with my wet hair. Suddenly I shiver and feel something is wrong. I open my eyes and look up. The sky is clear and the sun is still shining. Oh it's probably nothing. I decide that it is time to get out. I don't want to get too far behind the rest of the seishi. Just as I was about to put my wet clothes back on I notice something behind me, on the opposite shore of the stream. I spin around and am horrified to see Nakago standing right across from me on the other side of the stream, grinning. I struggle to cover myself, failing I hopelessly jump back into the stream.
I'm speechless. There he is standing there looking straight at me and acting like nothing is wrong. Oh god I feel like I have been violated, my privacy has been taken away from me. What the hell am I thinking?! Why would I care if he sees me naked? Of course, I don't care, yes, that's it, I'm just surprised to see him, that's all.
BUT I DO CARE!
"Nakago no bakayarou!" I said in disgust.
"Don't worry Tasuki, I didn't watch ALL of it." he smirks and walks closer to the shore.
That sick bastard!
"What the hell do you want?!" I force out the words.
What's wrong with me? Why is it so hard to talk to him right now?
Stop it, Tasuki, damn it! Why the hell are you acting like a fool? You are just surprised. It was unexpected that's all. What the hell is Nakago doing? Oh my gods WHAT IS HE DOING!?
Nakago slowly takes of the layers of clothing he is wearing until he is left with nothing but his pants. I suddenly realize I am staring. I quickly turn around and sink into the water up to my neck.
"What do you want DAMN IT!?" I yell out again and still get no answer. Instead I feel the rippled of the water. I know he is getting into the water now. Now the question is - is he naked?
NO! That's not the question Tasuki! Stop thinking about Nakago that way! You are so gross! The REAL question is: why is he here and what does he want from me?
All of a sudden I feel a cold hand on my shoulder. I shiver and I feel my body go very tense. I feel his second hand raise and he gently places it on my other shoulder. I come out of the water just a little, so that my shoulders are just above the surface of the water. Nakago's gentle touch soon turns into a massage. It is obvious he can feel how tense my body is. I relax a little, but am still on guard.
What's wrong with me? I keep asking myself that question because it is obvious that something really is wrong with me. Right now I should try and fight Nakago, but instead, I am standing here enjoying the moment like a weakling? Damn it Tasuki don't give into your desires!
I quickly turn around to avoid Nakago's touch. I find him standing less that a meter away from me, staring straight into my eyes. I looked back into his. They are not as cold and selfish as they usually are, but they looked so kind and caring. so . irresistible. TBC
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AN: Okok how was that? Good? Bad? Aaah please R&R!
Ok now, should I make a lemon out of this??
Or do people think that Nakago/Tasuki is a horrible pair??
Oh I can't wait to hear your thoughts. Personally I like this format better (the character's point of view thingy) but some people might like the paragraph type better. Well write what you think and thanks a lot!