I'll answer my review. Sorry about not doing it before.
Urika: Thank you very much. I don't know if you still read my story but you are my first reviewer for this fic ever so you hold a special place in my heart.
Demon-Cat: I'm very glad to have made your fav. List. I hope you'll like this chapter.
Kat: I'm glad you like my stories this much lol ! Thank you for your support. Here's a new chapter.
Brujah: Thanks for the encouragement !
Shadow: You reviewed twice the same chapter lol ! But anyway, thanks a lot !
Younglink93: Don't worry I won't stop. I already emailed you but I wanted to mention you here too. I'm happy you like my story this much. I'll go check your stories...
Blahblahblah: I know that my stories may have grammar mistakes but I'm a French speaker. Instead of just complaining could you please, the next time, show me my mistakes and/ore give me tips. This way I will improve my writting.
The author: Oh right, that's me...
Now, let's begin the 2nd chapter...
It's been 3 weeks since May was kidnapped. During those 3 weeks, Brendan came back to his hometown and spent almost all his time locked in his room.
Damn those Magma, they took her away from me. I miss her so much. I got to find a way to find and save May.
-Flashback-
The sound of a truck made him came back to his senses. He quickly got up and ran toward the exit of the cave, where the sound came from. Outside the cave was a large red truck with a large 'M' on each side drving away from the forest on a narrow dirt road.
"You'll never see her again boy, she will become one of us soon enough !" the driver had noticed him running after the truck.
"No..." Brendan extended his arm. It was really a sad view. A young pokemon trainer covered with dust, mud and blood trying to reach his hopes that were quickly disappearing. Brendan then collapsed to the dirt road. He was suffering from both his previous "fight" with the grunt's Crobat but the principal cause of his weakness was his broken heart. It hurted so much...
-End Flashback-
Brendan still felt weak. The wound that May's kidnapping had not closed, not even a bit. Littleroot Town had organised some 'search party' to find May but to no avail. The police had stopped searching for her because the hopes of finding her were too little. Of course, Brendan's and May's family hadn't given up hope yet. Each day, they would release pokemon to try to find her. For now, not even a trace was found, even by the pokemon.
Brendan just couldn't understand why Team Magma had kidnapped her. She probably is, by now, a member of Team Magma or still being brainwashed by their idiotic ideas. But why didn't they captured me ? After all, I am a pokemon master and my pokemon are much stronger than May's.
His thoughts were interrupted by a knock on the front door of the house. Remembering that he was alone in the house, he left his cozy room to answer the door.
"Are you Brendan ?" the man who asked the question was wearing a large black cloak. Only his mouth could be seen.
"Yeah that's me. What do you want ?" Brendan was trying to keep his human relations to a minimum level since May's kidnapping.
"I've a rather...let's say...interresting offer for you..."
"Go on" the man had caught the boy attention. Maybe this man was from Team Magma and wanted to ask for something in exchange of May...
"You want to see May again right ?
"YOU'RE ONE OF THEM, I'M GONNA !" rage was now overflowing in Brendan's veins. He was ready to hit to guy and to release his mighty Aggron to crush every single bone in that man's body.
"Woah, calm domn, I'm not from Magma, I came here to make a proposition to you. If you want to follow me, everything will be explained to you. You have my words."
"Ok, let's go" Brendan followed the man inside a large blue truck and sat on the passenger seat.
"Ok, next stop, HQ !"
Soon, Brendan arrived to the HQ the man was talking about.
"Finnaly, I can remove my cloak and intruduce myself. My name is John, I'm a member of Team Aqua, Team Magma worst ennemy. I entered this Team for the same reason as you Brendan, my girlfriend was kidnapped by those Magma. I'll be your partener for the time you will be in Team Aqua."
John was a teenager, like Brendan. He was tall and muscular. He had blue eyes with blue hair that came down on his face. One thing was strange; some parts of one of his arm were covered with metal. Overall, he seemed like a good person so Brendan began to let his shield down and to accept him.
"Nice to meet you" both of the teenagers shook hand.
"Brendan, let's go, the boss is waiting for us and ,believe me, you don't want to keep him waiting"
Both of the teenagers ran toward the boss office, John leading the way. What they didn't know was that the boss had a very special assignment in store for them...
TBC
Thank you everyone for reviewing. I need a name for John's girlfriend (John isn't my real name). While you review, could you give me your ideas please. I would really need them because I'm a French speaker and I'm not used to English names.
Urika: Thank you very much. I don't know if you still read my story but you are my first reviewer for this fic ever so you hold a special place in my heart.
Demon-Cat: I'm very glad to have made your fav. List. I hope you'll like this chapter.
Kat: I'm glad you like my stories this much lol ! Thank you for your support. Here's a new chapter.
Brujah: Thanks for the encouragement !
Shadow: You reviewed twice the same chapter lol ! But anyway, thanks a lot !
Younglink93: Don't worry I won't stop. I already emailed you but I wanted to mention you here too. I'm happy you like my story this much. I'll go check your stories...
Blahblahblah: I know that my stories may have grammar mistakes but I'm a French speaker. Instead of just complaining could you please, the next time, show me my mistakes and/ore give me tips. This way I will improve my writting.
The author: Oh right, that's me...
Now, let's begin the 2nd chapter...
It's been 3 weeks since May was kidnapped. During those 3 weeks, Brendan came back to his hometown and spent almost all his time locked in his room.
Damn those Magma, they took her away from me. I miss her so much. I got to find a way to find and save May.
-Flashback-
The sound of a truck made him came back to his senses. He quickly got up and ran toward the exit of the cave, where the sound came from. Outside the cave was a large red truck with a large 'M' on each side drving away from the forest on a narrow dirt road.
"You'll never see her again boy, she will become one of us soon enough !" the driver had noticed him running after the truck.
"No..." Brendan extended his arm. It was really a sad view. A young pokemon trainer covered with dust, mud and blood trying to reach his hopes that were quickly disappearing. Brendan then collapsed to the dirt road. He was suffering from both his previous "fight" with the grunt's Crobat but the principal cause of his weakness was his broken heart. It hurted so much...
-End Flashback-
Brendan still felt weak. The wound that May's kidnapping had not closed, not even a bit. Littleroot Town had organised some 'search party' to find May but to no avail. The police had stopped searching for her because the hopes of finding her were too little. Of course, Brendan's and May's family hadn't given up hope yet. Each day, they would release pokemon to try to find her. For now, not even a trace was found, even by the pokemon.
Brendan just couldn't understand why Team Magma had kidnapped her. She probably is, by now, a member of Team Magma or still being brainwashed by their idiotic ideas. But why didn't they captured me ? After all, I am a pokemon master and my pokemon are much stronger than May's.
His thoughts were interrupted by a knock on the front door of the house. Remembering that he was alone in the house, he left his cozy room to answer the door.
"Are you Brendan ?" the man who asked the question was wearing a large black cloak. Only his mouth could be seen.
"Yeah that's me. What do you want ?" Brendan was trying to keep his human relations to a minimum level since May's kidnapping.
"I've a rather...let's say...interresting offer for you..."
"Go on" the man had caught the boy attention. Maybe this man was from Team Magma and wanted to ask for something in exchange of May...
"You want to see May again right ?
"YOU'RE ONE OF THEM, I'M GONNA !" rage was now overflowing in Brendan's veins. He was ready to hit to guy and to release his mighty Aggron to crush every single bone in that man's body.
"Woah, calm domn, I'm not from Magma, I came here to make a proposition to you. If you want to follow me, everything will be explained to you. You have my words."
"Ok, let's go" Brendan followed the man inside a large blue truck and sat on the passenger seat.
"Ok, next stop, HQ !"
Soon, Brendan arrived to the HQ the man was talking about.
"Finnaly, I can remove my cloak and intruduce myself. My name is John, I'm a member of Team Aqua, Team Magma worst ennemy. I entered this Team for the same reason as you Brendan, my girlfriend was kidnapped by those Magma. I'll be your partener for the time you will be in Team Aqua."
John was a teenager, like Brendan. He was tall and muscular. He had blue eyes with blue hair that came down on his face. One thing was strange; some parts of one of his arm were covered with metal. Overall, he seemed like a good person so Brendan began to let his shield down and to accept him.
"Nice to meet you" both of the teenagers shook hand.
"Brendan, let's go, the boss is waiting for us and ,believe me, you don't want to keep him waiting"
Both of the teenagers ran toward the boss office, John leading the way. What they didn't know was that the boss had a very special assignment in store for them...
TBC
Thank you everyone for reviewing. I need a name for John's girlfriend (John isn't my real name). While you review, could you give me your ideas please. I would really need them because I'm a French speaker and I'm not used to English names.