Hi. This ficcy gets confusing with person-type view,so this is how it's going to look;
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Third Person(or Metal.or Sonic)
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Thanks to Ricki and my mom for being my beta-readers.If you would like to,review (signed)and I'll send it to you.
now.....um......on with the chapter.
I don't own anyone.
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Third Person.
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Sonic,who had just "come online" a few minutes ago after his first night in Robotropolis,was looking for the exit to this
"prison room".He decided to wait for Metal,(or Mecha if you want to call him that)the robot that hated him (but 'Botnik didn't know that
this was the real Sonic.you read the first chapter,right?)but was forced to be his guide.Metal woke up,but was very groggy,
as his hologram "eyelids"were half over his eyes."Hey,Mecha,"Sonic asked,"Where is the exit?"Metal,still groggy,said "Up your butt
and around the corner?" then he regained full awareness,and answered"Oh, It's over there,but you're not allowed anywhere without
me,remember?" after a few seconds of scilence Sonic said "Oh,yeah." And the two robots,one old and used to being like this,
one new to the whole thing,walked down the hall together,not talking,but just getting used to being around each other.
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Sonic
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Ya know, Metal can be kinda nice when he's not trying to rip your head off.I think I'm even starting to make friends with him.And I'm starting
to see his softer side too.Like one time he offered to clean up after 'Botnik then took the food scraps down to the prisoners!What a guy!
But,I'm starting to wonder if I'll ever see my organic body again........
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Metal
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Now I'm starting to think of the hedgehog as a friend.I'm the kinda guy that doesn't have a lot of friends,I spend too much time thinking about my enemies
It takes a lot to gain my trust.But when you do,I'd gladly risk life and limb for you. And........the hedgehog is........okay to be around.
the only reason it's only okay is that you'd be a little nervous around someone who destroyed you,too!
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Ya like?
Read
&
Review!
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Third Person(or Metal.or Sonic)
*******************************
Thanks to Ricki and my mom for being my beta-readers.If you would like to,review (signed)and I'll send it to you.
now.....um......on with the chapter.
I don't own anyone.
*********************************
Third Person.
*********************************
Sonic,who had just "come online" a few minutes ago after his first night in Robotropolis,was looking for the exit to this
"prison room".He decided to wait for Metal,(or Mecha if you want to call him that)the robot that hated him (but 'Botnik didn't know that
this was the real Sonic.you read the first chapter,right?)but was forced to be his guide.Metal woke up,but was very groggy,
as his hologram "eyelids"were half over his eyes."Hey,Mecha,"Sonic asked,"Where is the exit?"Metal,still groggy,said "Up your butt
and around the corner?" then he regained full awareness,and answered"Oh, It's over there,but you're not allowed anywhere without
me,remember?" after a few seconds of scilence Sonic said "Oh,yeah." And the two robots,one old and used to being like this,
one new to the whole thing,walked down the hall together,not talking,but just getting used to being around each other.
*********************
Sonic
**********************
Ya know, Metal can be kinda nice when he's not trying to rip your head off.I think I'm even starting to make friends with him.And I'm starting
to see his softer side too.Like one time he offered to clean up after 'Botnik then took the food scraps down to the prisoners!What a guy!
But,I'm starting to wonder if I'll ever see my organic body again........
***********************
Metal
***********************
Now I'm starting to think of the hedgehog as a friend.I'm the kinda guy that doesn't have a lot of friends,I spend too much time thinking about my enemies
It takes a lot to gain my trust.But when you do,I'd gladly risk life and limb for you. And........the hedgehog is........okay to be around.
the only reason it's only okay is that you'd be a little nervous around someone who destroyed you,too!
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Ya like?
Read
&
Review!
