TITLE: "The Mariano Effect"
NAME -Sandra aka Lukerules
E-MAIL -baumann1@yahoo.com
SPOILERS - Up to the scene in "Goodnight Gracie" where Jimmy runs out of the diner to avoid Luke (except he doesn't leave his wallet behind this time)
SUMMARY - Gilmore Girls Adult Fan fiction challenge. Bear with me, I'm not used to doing point-of-view stories. So if you have any **constructive** criticism, please share it with me. Thanks!
RATING - R
CONTENT -For mature adults. If you aren't a mature adult, then for Pete's sake, don't read it!
PAIRING OR CHARACTER - Lorelai/Jimmy Mariano - and anyone who knows ME, knows that I can't write anything without Luke in it!!!!
DISCLAIMER -I don't own the characters (pout) -the WB, Amy Sherman- Palladino, everyone else does. And yes, Jimmy is definitely yummy (DILF), but I would never choose him over LUKE, my love!
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Chapter Three
There was a knock at the door. Jimmy jumped, and looked at Lorelai questionably. She returned the quizzical look, as if to say, 'how should I know who it is?'
"Room service!" a woman's voice called out. Lorelai recognized the voice and laughed, squirming out from under Jimmy to go to the door. She opened it, to reveal Sookie, smiling brightly, holding a tray of chocolates.
"Sookie! Great timing, nothing like spoiling the mood," she whispered. Sookie peeked around Lorelai to see a half-undressed Jimmy trying to compose himself, his arousal evident through his khakis, which was all he was wearing. He was barefoot, having kicked his shoes off when Lorelai had gone to the door, and his hair had a mussed, bed-head look. He was distracted from Lorelai's conversation with Sookie as he poured two glasses of the wine they had brought upstairs.
"Oops, sorry, Lor, I just wanted to drop these off for you. Well, and see how things were going. Michel said that you guys came up here not that long ago, so I thought it would be safe, but obviously it's not, and I'm going to shut up now and leave you guys to have fun, um, okay, here you go, sorry, call me tomorrow!" she said quickly, handing off the tray and disappearing down the hall. Lorelai laughed. She brought the tray back to the bed, setting it on the nightstand, popping a chocolate into her mouth. Jimmy joined her, handing her a glass. She kicked her shoes off, thinking to herself that she was glad she wasn't wearing pantyhose or boots today, anything that would make undressing awkward.
"So, where were we?" he said, quickly leaning in, anxious to taste her lips again. Her free hand caressed his face, guiding her lips to his. They kissed, deepening as she opened her mouth to accept his tongue. He could taste the lingering sensation of the chocolate she had just eaten, and broke the kiss. "Yum!" he said licking his lips, reaching around her to grab one of the chocolates off the tray.
"Hey!" she teased, taking a sip of her wine, trying to look hurt that he would choose chocolate over her. He took another chocolate and held it out towards her. She leaned forward and ate it out of his hand, sucking on his thumb and forefinger in the process. Lorelai set her glass on the nightstand and took a chocolate, Jimmy taking the cue and eating it out of her hand, licking her fingers just as she had done. She then took his glass out of his hand and set it on the nightstand. When she turned back to him, his lips were on hers, his hands around her back, lowering her down onto the bed. A moan escaped from the back of his throat as she ran her nails up his back.
He kissed down along her neck, his hands now undoing the buttons on her blouse. He pushed the shirt to either side, exposing a black lace bra with a front close on it. **Damn, she's making this way too easy** Jimmy thought to himself. He continued to kiss along her neck and collarbone, unclasping the bra and pushing that aside also. His hands readily found one breast to caress and his mouth found the other, causing Lorelai to gasp as he bit the hard nipple gently. He moved back up to her lips, pulling her a little upright so that he could get her blouse and bra off completely. She broke the kiss and turned slightly away from him to take her blouse off. He threw it on the floor and brushed her hair aside, kissing her shoulder blade and running his hands around her to cup her breasts. He teased both nipples with his thumbs. She sucked in her breath and leaned back to him, enjoying the sensation.
He turned her and laid her back completely on the bed. Her eyes were dark and she reached her hands out for him, wanting his touch.
He found the side zipper on her skirt and unzipped it. He stood up and pulled the skirt off of her, casting it onto the floor with the rest of the clothes. He admired her for a moment, lying there in just her black panties. He quickly undid his khakis and they joined the burgeoning pile of clothes on the floor. He climbed on top of her, the material of his boxers and her panties the only barriers between them. He leaned in for a deep kiss, while Lorelai reached her hand along the waistband of his boxers, plunging it in to stroke his hardness. Jimmy moaned as she made contact.
He knew that he wouldn't be able to hold back much longer and would need to be inside of her. His mind was foggy as to where he put his 'just-in-case' condom. **Geez, I hope it's in the nightstand** he thought to himself. He hated it when there had to be a long break, it just ruins the mood. **Damn all of the diseases out there, it must have been great in the 60's with all that great free love**.
Again he kissed his way down along her neck, intending to pull down her panties and go down on her. Jimmy was pretty proud of his prowess in that area. He'd been told by a lot of the women he had been with that he was able to bring a woman to orgasm quicker than anyone else. He hesitated for a moment on a nipple but his hands were already gliding along her soft skin, reaching to pull her panties off. Lorelai moaned his name while her hands ran through his hair. He loved hearing a woman call his name.
But that's when he heard something that sounded like a bomb went off in the room.
A bomb called Luke.
Luke burst through the door into the room, practically knocking it off its hinges. "Get the hell off of her!!" Luke bellowed. He couldn't believe the scene in front of him, it was like his worst nightmare. Their clothes were strewn around the room. Jimmy was laying on top of Lorelai, both almost naked, his mouth covering her breast, her head thrown back and her hands tangled in his hair. They both gasped, wide-eyed, completely startled, Jimmy's only noise was whispering, "Oh, shit," only loud enough for Lorelai to hear. Jimmy immediately jumped off the bed and backed up against the far wall, trying to get as much space between he and Luke as possible. He searched the floor for his pants, not taking his eyes off of Luke.
Lorelai sat up on the bed, covering her naked breasts, shaking her head, trying to diffuse the lust she was feeling and figure out what was going on.
"Luke! What the hell are you doing?!" Lorelai hissed. Then thought for a moment.
"I'm keeping you from making the same mistake my sister made with this guy," he growled, completely oblivious to her state of undress. His face was red and he was ready to kill Jimmy.
"I guess you decided to leave out that little piece of information before you fucked her, huh, Jimmy?" Luke's eyes burned into Jimmy's. "Yeah, this is Jimmy Mariano, you might want to get a last name from the guys that you're about to sleep with, Lor," he now turned his anger at Lorelai.
"Mariano?! What are you talking about? " she asked, looking from Luke to Jimmy. "As in Jess's FATHER?!" she said shocked, looking at Jimmy, who was frantically trying to put his pants back on.
**End of Chapter Three**
A/N: Okay, folks, so what happens now???
Does Luke beat the crap out of Jimmy? Does Lorelai angrily kick Luke out, then resume the lovefest with Jimmy? Does Jimmy run out of there, giving Luke the opportunity to take over where Jimmy left off? Will Lorelai get satisfied at all tonight?
NAME -Sandra aka Lukerules
E-MAIL -baumann1@yahoo.com
SPOILERS - Up to the scene in "Goodnight Gracie" where Jimmy runs out of the diner to avoid Luke (except he doesn't leave his wallet behind this time)
SUMMARY - Gilmore Girls Adult Fan fiction challenge. Bear with me, I'm not used to doing point-of-view stories. So if you have any **constructive** criticism, please share it with me. Thanks!
RATING - R
CONTENT -For mature adults. If you aren't a mature adult, then for Pete's sake, don't read it!
PAIRING OR CHARACTER - Lorelai/Jimmy Mariano - and anyone who knows ME, knows that I can't write anything without Luke in it!!!!
DISCLAIMER -I don't own the characters (pout) -the WB, Amy Sherman- Palladino, everyone else does. And yes, Jimmy is definitely yummy (DILF), but I would never choose him over LUKE, my love!
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Chapter Three
There was a knock at the door. Jimmy jumped, and looked at Lorelai questionably. She returned the quizzical look, as if to say, 'how should I know who it is?'
"Room service!" a woman's voice called out. Lorelai recognized the voice and laughed, squirming out from under Jimmy to go to the door. She opened it, to reveal Sookie, smiling brightly, holding a tray of chocolates.
"Sookie! Great timing, nothing like spoiling the mood," she whispered. Sookie peeked around Lorelai to see a half-undressed Jimmy trying to compose himself, his arousal evident through his khakis, which was all he was wearing. He was barefoot, having kicked his shoes off when Lorelai had gone to the door, and his hair had a mussed, bed-head look. He was distracted from Lorelai's conversation with Sookie as he poured two glasses of the wine they had brought upstairs.
"Oops, sorry, Lor, I just wanted to drop these off for you. Well, and see how things were going. Michel said that you guys came up here not that long ago, so I thought it would be safe, but obviously it's not, and I'm going to shut up now and leave you guys to have fun, um, okay, here you go, sorry, call me tomorrow!" she said quickly, handing off the tray and disappearing down the hall. Lorelai laughed. She brought the tray back to the bed, setting it on the nightstand, popping a chocolate into her mouth. Jimmy joined her, handing her a glass. She kicked her shoes off, thinking to herself that she was glad she wasn't wearing pantyhose or boots today, anything that would make undressing awkward.
"So, where were we?" he said, quickly leaning in, anxious to taste her lips again. Her free hand caressed his face, guiding her lips to his. They kissed, deepening as she opened her mouth to accept his tongue. He could taste the lingering sensation of the chocolate she had just eaten, and broke the kiss. "Yum!" he said licking his lips, reaching around her to grab one of the chocolates off the tray.
"Hey!" she teased, taking a sip of her wine, trying to look hurt that he would choose chocolate over her. He took another chocolate and held it out towards her. She leaned forward and ate it out of his hand, sucking on his thumb and forefinger in the process. Lorelai set her glass on the nightstand and took a chocolate, Jimmy taking the cue and eating it out of her hand, licking her fingers just as she had done. She then took his glass out of his hand and set it on the nightstand. When she turned back to him, his lips were on hers, his hands around her back, lowering her down onto the bed. A moan escaped from the back of his throat as she ran her nails up his back.
He kissed down along her neck, his hands now undoing the buttons on her blouse. He pushed the shirt to either side, exposing a black lace bra with a front close on it. **Damn, she's making this way too easy** Jimmy thought to himself. He continued to kiss along her neck and collarbone, unclasping the bra and pushing that aside also. His hands readily found one breast to caress and his mouth found the other, causing Lorelai to gasp as he bit the hard nipple gently. He moved back up to her lips, pulling her a little upright so that he could get her blouse and bra off completely. She broke the kiss and turned slightly away from him to take her blouse off. He threw it on the floor and brushed her hair aside, kissing her shoulder blade and running his hands around her to cup her breasts. He teased both nipples with his thumbs. She sucked in her breath and leaned back to him, enjoying the sensation.
He turned her and laid her back completely on the bed. Her eyes were dark and she reached her hands out for him, wanting his touch.
He found the side zipper on her skirt and unzipped it. He stood up and pulled the skirt off of her, casting it onto the floor with the rest of the clothes. He admired her for a moment, lying there in just her black panties. He quickly undid his khakis and they joined the burgeoning pile of clothes on the floor. He climbed on top of her, the material of his boxers and her panties the only barriers between them. He leaned in for a deep kiss, while Lorelai reached her hand along the waistband of his boxers, plunging it in to stroke his hardness. Jimmy moaned as she made contact.
He knew that he wouldn't be able to hold back much longer and would need to be inside of her. His mind was foggy as to where he put his 'just-in-case' condom. **Geez, I hope it's in the nightstand** he thought to himself. He hated it when there had to be a long break, it just ruins the mood. **Damn all of the diseases out there, it must have been great in the 60's with all that great free love**.
Again he kissed his way down along her neck, intending to pull down her panties and go down on her. Jimmy was pretty proud of his prowess in that area. He'd been told by a lot of the women he had been with that he was able to bring a woman to orgasm quicker than anyone else. He hesitated for a moment on a nipple but his hands were already gliding along her soft skin, reaching to pull her panties off. Lorelai moaned his name while her hands ran through his hair. He loved hearing a woman call his name.
But that's when he heard something that sounded like a bomb went off in the room.
A bomb called Luke.
Luke burst through the door into the room, practically knocking it off its hinges. "Get the hell off of her!!" Luke bellowed. He couldn't believe the scene in front of him, it was like his worst nightmare. Their clothes were strewn around the room. Jimmy was laying on top of Lorelai, both almost naked, his mouth covering her breast, her head thrown back and her hands tangled in his hair. They both gasped, wide-eyed, completely startled, Jimmy's only noise was whispering, "Oh, shit," only loud enough for Lorelai to hear. Jimmy immediately jumped off the bed and backed up against the far wall, trying to get as much space between he and Luke as possible. He searched the floor for his pants, not taking his eyes off of Luke.
Lorelai sat up on the bed, covering her naked breasts, shaking her head, trying to diffuse the lust she was feeling and figure out what was going on.
"Luke! What the hell are you doing?!" Lorelai hissed. Then thought for a moment.
"I'm keeping you from making the same mistake my sister made with this guy," he growled, completely oblivious to her state of undress. His face was red and he was ready to kill Jimmy.
"I guess you decided to leave out that little piece of information before you fucked her, huh, Jimmy?" Luke's eyes burned into Jimmy's. "Yeah, this is Jimmy Mariano, you might want to get a last name from the guys that you're about to sleep with, Lor," he now turned his anger at Lorelai.
"Mariano?! What are you talking about? " she asked, looking from Luke to Jimmy. "As in Jess's FATHER?!" she said shocked, looking at Jimmy, who was frantically trying to put his pants back on.
**End of Chapter Three**
A/N: Okay, folks, so what happens now???
Does Luke beat the crap out of Jimmy? Does Lorelai angrily kick Luke out, then resume the lovefest with Jimmy? Does Jimmy run out of there, giving Luke the opportunity to take over where Jimmy left off? Will Lorelai get satisfied at all tonight?
