Hello people, this isn't a chapter, sad to say. But am getting very up set
with "Time and Again", I am almost thinking of taking it down. Schools
almost over and am rushing with finals, but I'd like to keep my story going
I just don't know how too. Any suggestions?
I am also working a story called, "The vampire King" which is a well- written story (for once). Its done I just have people reading it and catching all my mistakes. And I'd like that to happen for "Time and Again" for people to read it, and help me out on most of the parts I get stuck on. So here are my choices:
1.Get rid of it!
2. Rewrite it, but keep it up.
3. Rewrite it with a better reader to catch your mistakes.
So if you guys could be a "better" read for me that would be great, cause I want to keep up I just don't really like the way its going right now.
If you could E-mail me at Tod525@aol.com (NOTE: my name is NOT Tod its Trish "Tod" is my initials) or just review. Thanks guys that would mean a lot to me!
~Foxy_Tai~
P.S. make sure you check out "The Vampire King", I've seen vampire stories with Ken begging the vampire so I thought I would finally put my vampire story up (after is was running though my head for about a year now). Daisuke was seven years old when he was bitten by a vampire, and now hates his life as if he already didn't. Hearing a story from an elder he swore to get revenge on Onkó, the vampire king. He promised himself he would over thrown him (Onkó) and will be the greatest vampire king that had ever lived. It's a romance between Daisuke and Hikari plus more. Plus who would give up a story that has Taichi and Koushiro having fangs (Yamato too ^_~)
I am also working a story called, "The vampire King" which is a well- written story (for once). Its done I just have people reading it and catching all my mistakes. And I'd like that to happen for "Time and Again" for people to read it, and help me out on most of the parts I get stuck on. So here are my choices:
1.Get rid of it!
2. Rewrite it, but keep it up.
3. Rewrite it with a better reader to catch your mistakes.
So if you guys could be a "better" read for me that would be great, cause I want to keep up I just don't really like the way its going right now.
If you could E-mail me at Tod525@aol.com (NOTE: my name is NOT Tod its Trish "Tod" is my initials) or just review. Thanks guys that would mean a lot to me!
~Foxy_Tai~
P.S. make sure you check out "The Vampire King", I've seen vampire stories with Ken begging the vampire so I thought I would finally put my vampire story up (after is was running though my head for about a year now). Daisuke was seven years old when he was bitten by a vampire, and now hates his life as if he already didn't. Hearing a story from an elder he swore to get revenge on Onkó, the vampire king. He promised himself he would over thrown him (Onkó) and will be the greatest vampire king that had ever lived. It's a romance between Daisuke and Hikari plus more. Plus who would give up a story that has Taichi and Koushiro having fangs (Yamato too ^_~)
